#Can You Give Me A Honest Review Of This Video And Thumbnail?

13 messages · Page 1 of 1 (latest)

earnest rune
#

Can you tell me what you think of this thumbnail?
Its a short documentary style video about the day the dinosaurs died
Does this fit the theme for the video?

https://youtu.be/euxJbAbx14k

Dive into the captivating world of the dinosaurs and uncover the mysteries of their extinction in "Shadows of Giants: The Enigmatic Demise of the Dinosaur Kingdom." Explore the cosmic collision that forever changed Earth, transforming it from a thriving utopia to a frozen wasteland. Discover the enduring legacy of these colossal creatures throug...

▶ Play video
floral sandal
#

okay so far i think the intro could be a bit shorter, you’re mentioning some facts that i think everyone knows like that the tyrannosaurus was quite the predator and that the dinosaurs were on land, sky and the water

#

but i like the “a utopia that seemingly could have lasted forever”

#

around 2-3 minutes the music defo fits the theme but seems a bit distracting, maybe it could be a bit more quiet

#

yes it’s definitely the volume

#

the inspiring music for the mammal part is also a bit loud compared to your voice

#

otherwise it’s nice i like the tone of it the narration but if you have any more info on whar it was like after the impact it would be cool to add, that part could have been a bit longer maybe

#

compared to the mammal part specifically

#

at 6:17 ish where you say that this event shaped the erth maybe you could show yucatan but thats just a small thing

#

it was a nice video^^ but some more in depth details would have been a treat

#

for the thumbnail i think the text on the bottom is a bit small maybe

#

ans also covered up by tbe timestamp right?

earnest rune
# floral sandal ans also covered up by tbe timestamp right?

Thanks a bunch. This is really really good feedback. Thanks for taking the time to watch, and write this!! I really appreciate it. Its so different making the content vs watching and im not good at judging my own work. I will make sure in the next video I get more into the details. I def struggled with the audio on this video, I used a noise reduction and it kind of muted my voice so next time im not doing any noise reduction and im gonna spend more time trying to balance the volumes individually