oak sun
The video is about some fangames of an iconic horror video game franchise.
I would like feedback on:
My voice and my English; Are they understandable?
Background Music: Is it too loud or too quiet? Does it fit?
The thumbnail: Is it good enough? What can I change?
Feedback on anything else is alright! The more, the better!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RNKJF99WQ4E
upper sage
My voice and my English; Are they understandable?
Your pronunciation and grammar is good and clear
Background Music: Is it too loud or too quiet? Does it fit?
Background music fits and is a good volume. I think in my opinion it is slightly too loud but its a personal preference
The thumbnail: Is it good enough? What can I change?
To me the thumbnail feels a bit clustered and it also just repeats what the title is saying. I think you should try and make the title and thumbnail compliment eachother instead of copy eachother.
Overall it is a good video and even though I don't really watch FNAF I still felt hooked by it.
fossil sequoia
Nice video and editting, to add onto what was said, maybe no need to blur the video when you went on the outro talking.
oak sun
My voice and my English; Are they understandable?
Your pronunciation and grammar...
Thanks for the feedback, working on it right now!