eternal plover
Hello! I've heard this video way too many times to have a clear sense of what's too loud or too quiet, especially if something is too quiet to understand the actual words being said.
Also I wonder if there's too much tech lingo? At some point the word "torrenting" is used and I feel like I should have just said "pirating"? If you're confused by any of the content (aside from the what the hell factor) please let me know!
Thank you. 🙂
rich reef
I think pirating is probably a better idea though its not that big of a difference
the volume is pretty good
I think also (this is not very helpful advice) that the script could be funnier (see i told you it's very unhelpful and also based a lot on my opinion) because right now its mainly just based on references to the presidents, so it won't be funny to people who don't really follow politics extensively
that not to say I don't think it should reference politics but you can change it to be funnier to people who only loosely follow american politics but still understand that us presidents generally do not engage in bank robbing
eternal plover
I’ll read this more closely tomorrow but in the meantime, thank you!
eternal plover
I think also (this is not very helpful advice) that the script could be funnier ...
Thanks for this comment actually it lead to some revisions that I think benefitted the video!
sacred thunder
nice editting btw ^^, all the best