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eternal saddle Apr 9, 2023, 3:09 AM

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Is the audio good relative to the background music (do they both sound loud enough with intruding on eachother)
Would you continue to watch after this intro ? https://youtu.be/VdDrUSLHXCc

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AJ

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Chapters:

Have the best day of your life!
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crimson haven Apr 9, 2023, 8:05 AM

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So this explains why my channel is dying

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Also why edgy channels don't blow up anymore

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This is a good intro. Although the clip you posted cuts off in the middle of a sentence

fringe bronze Apr 10, 2023, 4:32 PM

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Your narration audio is good I can't hear any music really or if it's there it doesn't really register much that might be best because it's background music If I really think about it I can tell it's there but I don't think you need it your narration is good

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I don't know if you realize this but a lot of your clips they like blackout several times in the middle of each clip I don't know why

eternal saddle Apr 10, 2023, 4:33 PM

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fringe bronze Your narration audio is good I can't hear any music really or if it's there it d...

ya the transitions did not render - when I put up the final version they did

fringe bronze Apr 10, 2023, 4:34 PM

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After your first 30 or 40 seconds for some reason a lot of the humor I think is what you're trying to go forward didn't hit very well. If I was you because your narration and the information was interesting and I could hear it well I might avoid trying to use humor

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Or at least just focus on one big obvious humor piece

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I don't know if that's what you were going for when you're talking about terms of service and the guy looking at Jewish text or whatever but things like that weren't really hitting

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If you're enjoying it keep trying

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There's about the time that lady's hand was reaching out that you started to lose me on the video stuff

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I was kind of hooked on what you were saying though so I kind of washed it to the end but I was kind of weirded out by some of the clip choices if they dident exactly match the words comeing out of your mouth at that second

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I'd say try to match the clips to the literal words that are coming out of your mouth to emphasize your narration

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Otherwise My brain kind of goes like what the f***.

Yeah your script and narrations really good. I'd say lean into that that's your strongest

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I kind of enjoyed the clips where you were sitting there talking to that wasn't bad Lighting was a little dark but I like how it was one-sided It seems like that was a intentional thing If you could contrast that a little more sharply it seems like a nicer artistic

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