I made a video on Charles Ponzi's scheme, I like the editing and thumbnail but I can't seem to figure out how to sound better in the video, can someone help me with this please?
Here is the video, thank you!
https://youtu.be/5ix4NP85Q5Y
#Feedback on voice acting
golden pollen
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Okay first thing's first, you have the voice for background voice actor.
now to the topic, i found two things you could improve in this vid -
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Editing : it'd look a lot better if captions and what you're saying is same. let me explain.
at 0.30 timestamp this text appears "very high returns in very short time" but you were saying " scheme that promised higher returns on investments in a short period of time"
i'd suggest you to do it like this - you can say "scheme that promised higher returns on investments in a short period of time, MEANING VERY HIGH RETURNS IN VERY SHORT TIME"
and then let the subtitles roll in
also try putting some soft instrumental music in background so the vid doesnt get boring. ofc bg will be a lil bit silent -
Voice - your voice is loud in the video BUT i like the pacing and its not flat. one thing you could do is to lower your voice in editing software and it'll fix it. or you can practice your voice so it doesnt sound loud but it doesnt sound flat either. IK putting emotion in your voice can cause your voice to go loud so this is something you have to practice.
For this, i'd suggest you to watch @veritasium on YT. He does this type of vids.
golden pollen
Okay first thing's first, you have the voice for background voice actor.
now t...
Ok, I will definitely implement that, thank you so much for the feedback, I feel like adding the subtitles is a great idea, I don't know why I didn't do that before, I will also try practicing more with my voice, thank you so much for the feedback! Hope you have a great day!