#Feedback on my first thumbnail

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gusty sky
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Hi! I’m working on a thumbnail for my first ever video that I’m about to post to my channel and I would love some feedback on it! For context I’m making Madden and NCAA 14 (football) franchise content where you take control of a team and recruit players for them and play the games. In my first season our star QB got injured for most of the season which is a big deal and will likely hurt our season tremendously, so my title is most likely going to be along the lines of like “Our QB OUT For The WHOLE Season?!?” and I’ve made a mock up of a thumbnail idea I had and changed a few details to experiment and I would love to know if you think it’s a good start so far or if I should change it up entirely. And if it’s good so far, which one you think looks best or even if you have any advice for something to change to make it look better. Thanks a bunch!!

lilac roost
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I think they all look pretty good, the only thing I'd maybe change is A. From the thumbnail I cant tell this is Madden and B. The cross doesnt tell me (before i read the message) that the QB was hurt, it looked more like a patch

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also I would remove the logo from the top left

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Maybe take thumbnail 2, remove the logo, cross, and try to show its madden in the thumbnail, otherwise I'd think this is a commentary on the Maryland NCAA teams season not a madden playthrough

winter beacon
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what software did you use to make the thumbnail? @gusty sky

gusty sky
gusty sky