#Just made my first video and I need criticism

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cyan anchor
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Just like the title says, any feedback or criticism on my first video would be very helpful
I look forward to your replies, opinions and criticism

https://youtu.be/IqdQ_nc720w

Everyone wants to improve not everyone knows how, so in this video, we'll look at how one anime makes everything look easy

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raven sonnet
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You know, a bit more dept and richness

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No need for a new mic or anything even some Audacity magic should do

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you know just to get rid of that roboticness

cyan anchor
cyan anchor
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Thank you so much for the in-depth analysis
I'll work on that in my scripts
And thanks for the step-by-step tips as well, they were very helpful.
I'll apply what you said, and bring in something better in the future

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I have some more questions, and ideas
would it be okay if i sent you a dm?

white prism
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I haven't watched the video but just as an outsider I do not understand what "Blue lock" is or how the thumbnail ties into this. now maybe the two of these are very self explanatory to people who know about the topic, but you want to make the title and thumbnail in such a way that it can get people even outside of the group to be interested in it, thus widening your demographic

cyan anchor