#First youtube video, let me know what i can work on

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crystal heath
heady kindle
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I like the first 30 second intro in theory but in practice it was hard to hear you due to a combination of the volume of the sound effects and your tone of voice. Additionally the whole discussion portion could use some visuals, probably on the right third that your avatar doesn't occupy. However I will say the format and branding is on point and I could def see you going somewhere!

crystal heath
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Thanks @heady kindle ! As for the hard to hear part. Do you mean the section where I'm talking during the explaination or the skit in the beginning?

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As for adding more visuals I can definately do that

heady kindle