#[DO NOT USE][ARCHIVED] SV OU Rates
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Also, ghold doesn’t even shut down gliscor or clod
granted building isn't necessarily done
Glisc without knock or uturn it does
the sets that are like
They just dump hazards on you and then SD gliscor beats you with knock
prot eq toxic and idr the last 1 can't do anything to it
well yeah they can set up hazards sure
like
I have a balloon and 2 boots mons, spikes are not the end of the world here, and I do have Tusk who can fire off ice spinners
I am listening and taking all this down, just I have responses to a lot of these threats
We’re not saying you don’t have a response to these threats
We’re saying ghold doesn’t offer your team much and would be better suited to be replaced
Just run fast lando t with taunt
me thinks gliscor is better since u also get knock
plus u load against raging bolt better-ish
I mean, Tusk can learn knock too
don't get me wrong, I know Glisc is great
so is Lando
Something I do want to ask though is with these 6, what set adjustments can be made?
We are saying “tusk doesn’t fit here as you don’t really need a spinner and you would be better off with the added bulk from mons like lando and gliscor”
And frankly, I don’t know why you came to us asking for help if you aren’t willing to listen
It’s insulting, and a waste of our time
I am listening
You have disregarded all our advice
I said I was taking notes. Maybe changes will be in order a bit down the line to team comp, first I'd rather fix the sets though since I just tossed on sets I had
Well that’s not what rates is for
And if the adjusted sets can't be fixed satisfactorally then someone will just need to be replaced assuming I have some glaring weakness
Tyson and I have offered you our advice
If you aren’t willing to listen, that is your choice
And if I go down that path, then I'll use glisc or lando
Replacing a mon does not mean you have a glaring weakness??
wouldn't be the worst change by any means
It just means “there is something better suited”
I want to see if these 6 can work together before I change anyone out, is the thing. No one seemed to even see my message in comp general, so i felt I'd ask here.
were I to change out tusk, what are sets for those 2?
(I legit don't know how to build Lando this gen like at all)
We do not help you build around arbitrary restrictions
fwiw
i always provide players paste with changes and explain why i did it in the first place
and I honestly want to know, what would a Lando or Glisc set look like on here?
I'll make a paste with their sets so I can swap around stuff in the builder as needed.
so RMT isn't the forum to come to then if I want to finetune moves and evs then? as a side note. Where would I ask then, general chat?
Rmt is the forum you come to if you wanted to get a team rating, where we judge the entire team and suggest improvements
oh
We have no place to help building around arbitrary restrictions, as that is against the rules of the server
as i stated great tusk is not as required here and going glisor maintains ur rocker and knock user, while also vastly improving ur teams mu vs annoying stuff like raging bolt and iron moth, gholdengo is also not important because whatever mon it "beats" here the rest of ur team either covers it or has their own way of handling it, your team is also vulnerable to stuff like ogerpon-w, opposing zama, and to some extent gouging fire
You think you could give me the sets for those two so i can have them around to mess around with?
I mean sending me the full paste would be fine if you want to
https://pokepast.es/3b844d2d8c1b29e5, https://pokepast.es/726048bbb7390140 these are two versions of the team one with boots spam while the other had banded pult and id zama which gives u a more cutting edge agaisnt booster spam hos
primarina gives u another momentum mon while providing useful bulk in checking stuff like gouging fire,weav, zama and can make fat annoying with psychic noise and encore
just to have a fairy?
oh
Primarina is the reason I play with Showdown completely muted.
Like no joke her cry physically hurts my ears
you could also be more ballsy with the cb pult and id one and do cinder > prima at the cost of being weaker vs zama, gougin, and to some extent fat
i like the boots spam one a bit more but feel free to use either or to see which one feels more suitable to u
you can honestly go lefties on gambit here but i understand why u would keep lum
I'll save the pastes for now
I do appreciate the help, even if I don't properly convey that through text
Got a Lando version?
since Clod brought it up
ehh gliscor is better since knock is important to have in ur teams, since lando dont got knock this gen
oh yeah these dumbass cuts
I mean Tyson you could feasibly swap out gliscor for fast taunt lando and call it a day
u load vs annoying special attackers that lando doesnt handle better
I could go on like an 11 hour rant about why the cuts are stupid, but i'll spare you that.
also who's Tyson?
you could but playing it safe is better me thinks, especially how volatile the team goes against the special attacker that can overwhelm glowking
Fair
mainly ep u turn rocks taunt / gknot
EVs on defensive Lando-T are never straightforward it feels like
but would advise to move this topic into #comp-general not to de-rail the thread
oh. Apologies. I think I understand what you're getting at though, and I saved both of your pastes. I'm sorry if I came off as dismissive @ruby crest @spiral fable
I guess I'll just be lurking for a bit
no worries
Thanks for your help
https://pokepast.es/8a8ccdc4d43974ed
hi balance
https://pokepast.es/39064a7873c4d605
Tried to make a balance team (and miserably failed)
https://pokepast.es/76bd80ec05625df1
Bulky offense
hmmm ig the biggest issue is hazards
also idk if deo speed reallt works on BO
don't quote me on that but its usually an HO lead for screens or hazards
Its the way i found to beat sticky web, and the suprise factor of Psycho boost can give me a early lead
But i do agree, just did't find a replacement
No it’s been seeing more use outside of HO as a mixed attacker
quick question: if there are no comments on a team, does that mean it's already good enough with little vulnerabilities?
fair nuff, is bumping an ignored team alright tho?
if it's been a day or more and there's been quite a bit of messages, yes
I don't ping cuz ik some of you guys may or may not be busy w smth else
alright, don't mind me then
i mean ive got some time now i can take a look at it
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I think hdb on crown is meant to be av there, I forgor to update the set
no, hdb might be better
you have no hazard removal
just 252/252 then?
boots prim with psychic noise?
your darkrai matchup isn't the best (it's just ting lu which can get worn down easily)
man I also just realized prima helps vs goug
against sun in general
I struggled specifically vs the ddance set
yeah definitely swap on primarina boots pivot set here
or maybe even calm mind if you're feeling a bit offensive
would recommend boots tho
should setup dragon skarm be fine vs waterpon
I mean I rarely had problems w it
despite the team looking like it's a free ivy cudgel
water should be kept in check by the combo of skarm and pult
if its encore pult beats it if its play rough skarm beats it if its play rough encore that player's insane
any other comments btw besides adding a boots prim set? what moves would you recommend btw
do I just copy paste a sample set from smogon dex
no they dont have a boots set
oh so it's from the sample teams
(we're going to add it this slate lol)
that psychic noise set w cm
o no calm mind? that's a set
if you want to run cm primarina yeah just copy paste
oh so it's just... an all-attack prima?
scald/surf, moonblast, psychic noise, then?
one sec im tryna get the set for boots primarina
oh there's no scald for prima this gen lmao
i would reccomend surf flip turn moonblast with encore
alternatively you can try liquid voice psychic noise if you're feeling funky
other than that, solid team
lmk if it runs into any issues
wait what are the EVs for this
sorry to ping
just run full bulk
oh sure lmao, 252 hp 252 spdef?
yes
thanks again
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this seems finiesh whats the problem?
there is no problem tbh
idk why i sent it
im trying to submit this as a sample team
rn
ahh
Sorry I was high as fuck when I sent that
Rate the choice band zama team I made https://pokepast.es/91754e76368370c9
Band zama is honestly a bit outdated set cause boots is so much better and effective breaker while also being free to click moves and also not prone to getting worn down by hazards making u check mons that zama wants reliably
Me like clicky big button tho
choice band tera fighting cc kills everything besides lando
Ehh doesn’t really matter as much when one of the best defensive offensive Mon is getting worn down that helps cover a lot of stuff for this team
Even then u already have kyurem for a breaker
tho I’m more concerned of the latter half of the team, no real way to deal dengo and pult (sash samu doesn’t count) no hazard control especially not even being boots spam hurts kyurem a bit, and dengo just honestly seems random here
Yeah I was thinking of replacing zama with tusk
or something
what do you recommend,
?
best course of action honestly would make this boots spam tbh, you can still maintain zama and kyurem as ur breakers with boots being able to come in a bit aggresively regardless if hazards is up or not, replace gouging with sd glisc for a volatile wincon and great answer against stuff like raging bolt and iron moth, make this botos h samu, and do garg > dengo for bulkier ghost answer and obligatory rocker
https://pokepast.es/be14df8d79125bbb alternativley if u want u can do id roar zama instead of 3 attacks roar as a great wincon also greatly helps against booster ho
if you do id zama i would advise use this set
Zamazenta @ Heavy-Duty Boots
Ability: Dauntless Shield
Tera Type: Fire
EVs: 8 HP / 112 Atk / 136 Def / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
Body Press
Crunch
Iron Defense
Roar
Yo thx
should I keep kuryem specs tho?
No
Na specs kyurem wants some time of hazard control otherwise boots it the same breaker at the cost of some power
Mixed is nice cause u can annoy stuff like bliss and glow king which goes well removing the latter for zama especially if it’s id
hi balance
https://pokepast.es/9322a01a28c1e6aa
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nvm thats bulky offense
This is definitely balance
ok im dumb
this looks mainly fine any problems ?
just mainly troubles with hazards and wallbreakers
This should be boots spam fwiw to begin with which wall breakers specifically
what is fwiw
for what it’s worth
so replace garg item with hdb
Na garg is fine with lefties, but just more context as what is giving problems would be ideal and see where to go from there
ill test a bit more and see if i can find any holes in the team
Bump
Generally don’t use temporary items like booster energy on balance
What should I use instead?
If your still using valiant, boots over booster energy but I think valiant could be replaced
I also think gliscor fits better over ting
Better synergy with clefable and garg
Without Ting i don't really have a switchin to psychics
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The tera types arent done
Ngl this needs a massive overhaul a lot of these sets are bad, u are flashing 3 different playstyrls with balance, sun, and screens, I advise you use sample teams for the time being
Second time this week, also how the hell am i supposed to know what the playstyles are if i just copy from a sample team (also yes i used one)
become familiar with them and also observe sets from waht mons use online as well in battle
The samples even explain what playstyle they are whether it’s offense, ho, Bo balance, etc
- Meowscarada is Physical, Protect is much worse in singles than doubles, single attack makes you get walled by Sap Sipper/Resists and Qattack is mediocre at best
- Valiant is used for its deadly mixed dual STAB. Why run band and then Aura Sphere, a special move. Also, Brick Break is terrible (you have taunt to stop screens) and you should have a mixed non-choiced set with dual stab (and knock)
- Grimmsnarl is the only normal set here
- Just run Lava Plume on Koal, its Spattack is much higher anyways and even with Flame Charge you aren't outspeeding anything. Also, again, why run 3 phys attacks and then SBeam? Another thing, having your only hazard remover be rocks weak without boots is just bad (also no berries in singles they offer little to no value)
- Tspikes are mediocre, I suggest Defog on Weez
- Ghold set is okay, but you should probably use Balloon to get rid of Treads/Tusk. Also, invest into speed.
Honestly just look at samples like Tyson said or at least use Smogondex sets instead of trying to cook and burning your entire house.
Thank yoy so much
Grimm is only normal cuz it comes straight from a sample, same with ghoudengo
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You have hstack and then defog corv? + av hydrapple is bad
This team is very split: you have two heavily defensive (and also unviable) mons in Chansey and Pecharunt, but then the rest of your team leans bulky/hyper offense with mons like scarf enamorus and bolt.
I would recommend dedicating fully to the offensive style: there’s a bulky offense sample team that utilizes Enamorus, Gambit, and Bolt, albeit using different sets
What item would you recommend over AV? Any other notable issues (besides defog)
Ghold spread is weird no good breakers your defensive core is questionable at best with valiant in particular being a major nuisance and hydrapple gets worn down real quick by play rough waterpon which solos the rest of your team
Not using hydrapple cuz frankly it’s mid at best
Don’t try to check Waterpon defensively beat it through hazard pressure and offensive threats
If you’re really desperate use amoonguss
🥲👍
https://pokepast.es/47220a0d0f0e0c22 getting back into sv ou after a while
/raters
bum
chat
where is the list of comp helpers
Make ghold psyshock over recover, drop Val for IDBP Zamazenta, and I would make Ribombee Tera steel
O yeah drop Gouging he’s mid af, slot on Waterpon
You can choose encore or play rough but I prefer encore
ohhh okay thanks
(If you want an explanation for the former changes lmk)
Yes please it'll help
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Psyshock forces Tera on Clodsire/Blissey which helps greatly in the stall matchup cuz then Waterpon can sweep
You don’t really need the speed of Val and the defensive utility of Zamazenta helps your team in the opposing HO matchup
Tera steel on Ribombee to void mortal spin from Glimmora
hi can i ask why all the zamas in sample teams have different ev spreads
In the future use comp general for these questions, but they are all evd differently to hit certain benchmarks or damage thresholds that their team would otherwise struggle against. However, I wouldn’t recommend doing this on your own teams unless you’re a great builder, as the standard spread is best for 90% of teams and it is hard to identify which benchmarks to hit on ev spreads
alr
my goal was to make a pecha team
frankly pecha just is not good in ou
the 7 dark types running around really give it a hard time
alright thanks tho
if you want to make a pecha team, why not uu?
maybe
Pecha is cool in ou, tho the only way to make it work is status spam
Pecha just feels disappointing
“Wow I let gambit in for free and now he’s claiming kills on the rest of my team, whoops”
“Gliscor set up 6 million spikes in front of me, o well”
Ehhh like I said I run status spam wit stuff like wisp rai or pult to burn gambit, and Gliscor hates coming in on np boosted hex forcing it to Tera normal
Another Bump
https://pokepast.es/66eea982e742d0e6 this is a team i made recently but haven’t played for a while is it good?
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Garg and ting Lu on the same team is a bit rebudant make than skarm > Garg, and do Id zama roar > tusk, make this normal lefties clef unaware is not worth it here tbh
I always advise testing teams before sending, tho punching gloves does nothing for lokix it doesn’t give it a boost in any of its move, also don’t like the fact u have two rock weak mons as ur main offensive breaker making this team get overwhelmed by hazard even if you have tusk
But no Hazard Removal is a big deal right?
Generally for boots spam Hstack balanced not really
does 2 boots count as boots spam? huh
let’s see skarm doesn’t care about hazards, clef has magic gaurd, ting Lu has lefties to sustain the damage, and if you really want you can make I Val boots
Then make iron Val boots as well if ur super concerned, not a fan of tusk here adding the weakness to ogerpon rain and kyurem is not ideal and the other hazard removals options can screw over hstack
ohhh ok thx
https://pokepast.es/5b83b883e2a5f9b1 just a rough team I made for gen 9 ou, thoughts?
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I really want to make dragmag work
dragmag as a whole is unviable
Why though? Can't you beat fairies as long as you have steel types?
If you want to use magnezone it would be best with something like kingambit+bulk up tusk
Or the right dragon kyurem but yeah I tried it it’s not worth it more or less
Magnezone isn't worth it to support an arbitrarily limited number of dragons that can't beat steels well
magnezone in general isn't worth but its better off with better partners if you want to use its trapping capabilities
Wait I thought the entire point of mag was to beat the steels so the drags didn't have to
Oh
So then besides fairies, what exactly changed between 5 and 9 that made dragmag bad?
its limited to roaring moon without tera and certain dragapult and dragonite sets and you open yourself up to awful matchups vs stuff like enamorus and iron valiant and weavile
Just the dragons being more self sufficient+magnezone not being able to trap common steels like gholdengo and kingambit very well
Oh ok
Makes sense
It lost hp fire
So then would simple drag spam be good?
As long as they have coverage
drag spam is cool tho that’s more for offensive teams not really balance or bo imo
And will struggle hard into other fairies/steels like Primarina Ghokdengo and Gambit
Well I won't have 6 dragons
I was thinking heatran and gholdengo to balance out
https://pokepast.es/756a1d65d6c5afbe I was thinking something like this
something like dd moon+dd kyurem works
any two of the physical attacking dragons is workable really
I thought base kyurem sucked
Its viable in every ou and got banned from gen 8, got suspected and is solid in gen 9
Oh nice
it has historically been uu/rubl because of kyurem black being legal and it lacking dd and freeze dry but its solidly ou now
Boots helped too
https://pokepast.es/e98a240d189e35ca very scary build just kinda unsure about the last mon
https://pokepast.es/37d2a0392dbe9db7 (alternative version)
Looks fine I prefer the first but what problems come to mind ?
nothing big, just general wogerpon mu
bolt/sinis and skarm are usually fine into it but anything with alo in it is begging to be destroyed by ogerpon so
Yeah tho I also do wonder how important alo is here helpful but also feels super passive in here
Something tells me you want another Mon here prob something tl help vs glisc
previous drafts had prim but alo feels really useful for raging bolt/ting/gapdos
maybe for the sinis version i could drop alo for prim?
I like bolt more just cause it gives u a solid win con that can just win once gapdos breaks stuff
That wish is nice but also not required me thinks
yeah true
in testing so far it has been useful many a time, but i can also try out a prim version and see which tests better
thanks for the advice!
Actually prim does load va zama better and u can potentially get something against fat
https://pokepast.es/0e78154641f3c2d3 can someone suggest some improvements for this iron crown balance?
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Seems good, but Future Sight on Crown is a bit weird, maybe PNoise over it? Also Heat Wave on Zapdos to hit Steels.
(Not a rater but this is what it looks like to me)
Hi.
Im quite new to Gen 9, stopped playing competitive in Gen 7 and im trying to get back into it.
Anybody got some recommendations for the final 3 for this team or any tweaks?
https://pokepast.es/80bb58bc989ad35b
i dont rlly know whats the meta or what I should watch out for.
we only rate full teams here
if you wanna finish the team ask in #comp-general or #comp-general-2
ohk ty
nw
https://pokepast.es/2d41d509e6063427 thoughts on my rain team?
CC is usually better than PFangs on Skewda, and min Speed Pelipper is common to have slow UTurn. Appletun seems odd, especially as a bulky Leech Mon that gets completely walled by other grasses with coverage. 4 Spa on Gambit is useless, Lefties is better than Orb on bulky sets and you should run SD and Supreme OLord on it, also what's TBlast Flying for? Brick Break is also a terrible Noobtrap that should always be replaced by CC and maybe switch the Apple for a Special Rain mon? All your sweepers are physical and Pelipper prefers Surf and Roost over HPump and IBeam.
Thanks, yeah idk why I put fangs on skewda
Appletun is to double resist grass and electric
At that point run a dragon
Raging bolt would probably still want some speed investment to outspeed threats like gambit
Your team looks like HO so heatran doesn’t seem good.
Yes, i might use bolt
But
Swift swim fell stinger overqwil is looking quite nice
Fake set brudda
This isn’t even a rain team
Rain isn’t even that good rn
Not with bolt and waterpon
And the thicc monke
But it’s true
Fell stinger is gimmicky asf
I’ve never said the team was shit, and it wasn’t your team either
Just checked stratdex, fell stinger is fake
I’m sure the clodsire enjoyer can agree
Were we even talking about the same thing?
ty
You don’t need double banded swift swimmers, drop Floatzel, Skewda is more than enough
You don’t need Appletun it doesn’t beat anything rain struggles with anyways, drop it
Dondozo is way too passive in a rain team and weighs your team down + you don’t need its defensive capabilities anyways as rain teams lean heavily offensive, drop it
Switch Skewda, Pelipper, and Gambit all to their OU sets on smogon (you can find them on the strategy pokedex)
Slot on Iron Treads (also use its set from the stratdex) it’s a good pivot with rocks and spin that can take on Bolt
Slot on Calm Mind Booster Energy Raging Bolt with Weather Ball, it’s a powerful spattacker that can put in work against sun as well
For your last mon, you need something to deal with Waterpon. There’s a few options for this (Swift Swim Overqwil, Moltres, Hisuian-Goodra, etc) and I would recommend Overqwil, with SD, Barb Barrage, Liquidation, and Crunch, with a life orb
Yeah unfortunately fell stinger isn’t a good move, the 2.5 attack boost sounds nice but the damage loss means you’re really going to struggle to get those kills in the first place + SD boosted by Life Orb is already enough to kill most threats
If you’re running Black Glasses Gambit run Tera Dark
I wouldn’t recommend running Bolt or Waterpon on Glimmora HO teams, they’re a bit too slow with no way to boost speed (unless you’re running Trailblaze but that’s a whole other list of issues)
Drop Heatran, it’s a defensive mon and you don’t want to run those on HO (hyper offense wants to be, well, offensive, with 5 setup sweepers and 1 utility lead)
Swap in Ddance Roaring Moon (you can run Taunt over Eq if you want to put pressure on stall and balance at the cost of the Gambit matchup)
Honestly from here you can really pick from a list of sweepers, but some I would recommend are Iron Defense Zamazenta for its defensive utility, and Darkrai for another special attacker, but you can also run picks like Calm Mind Hatterene, Ddance Dnite, etc
what if i go sd, stinger, aqua jet, and poison jab?
Like I said, stinger sucks
You will be losing out on Dark stab for a move you will likely never get a chance to click
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This sure is sun lol
I would suggest making hlliligant have an offensive Tera like Fighting
You could also give Rmoon a speed booster and swap wake to spattack booster to better out speed threats like Val (and if you really want you can make wake modest and have a chance to ohko Gking if you Tera water)
Over all, a very solid team though
I will keep this in mind, thanks
You’re normally not going to be running priority on swift swimmers because you’re either faster than them because you’re in rain or you need to force the tempo to reset in order to get rain back up anyways.
SD and Fell Stinger both basically accomplish the same thing, and as previously mentioned, there is a set of requirements you need for Fell Stinger to actually work so slotting it makes it kind of awkward
Only mons you’d really run Jet on for rain are mons like Daunt and Azu (may be past gen examples, but hopefully you get the point) that hit so hard anyways that using a weaker move is less harming to their ability to break
jet is viable on skewda and legion for opposing priority moves and outside of rain (basculegion is also outsped by a couple things even in rain)
I'll get rid of the priority and fell stinger
i've made most of the other changes that were suggested
https://replay.pokemonshowdown.com/gen9ou-2140981505-45wzd14wkemcessf44rska4iweqyr1gpw here's a battle i had with the improved team. I got crushed 😭
Watch a replay of a Pokémon battle between white noise fan and TheGrandGarchomp! Format: [Gen 9] OU; Date: Jun 11, 2024
i assume it's just a skill issue atp
but what was I doing wrong?
https://pokepast.es/1812be16da71bf7c Is anyone awake to check this out?
It's my first attempt at making a team for SV
I can make it to 1400 in showdown with it, and then I hit a wall
does anyone want to take a look at it?
That being said, I would recommend scrapping this team
You have Glimmora, which is a lead for hyper offense, yet you stack mons like Skeledirge (a slow, defensive mon, which should also only be running boots), 4 attack weavile, and similar mons with no setup moves
Hyper Offense is a structure based around exerting heavy offensive pressure: this is done through stacking multiple, powerful setup sweepers, which this team does not
Well I don't know the first thing about teambuilding
Which is why I would recommend using a sample team first
Look at the mons they use, the sets, and study the structures
Here is a classic HO team: https://pokepast.es/9703724f49be3b7a
The details behind each mon can be found here: https://www.smogon.com/forums/threads/dark-n-darker-top-5-peak-2000-elo.3740874/
You've probably seen this team once or twice on the ladder so far, I've been really spamming it because I think it's hard to counter and has great matchups all over the board.
You probably wouldn't expect it from a type-spam team, but I also find it to be very consistent.
First, I'll explain...
And if you want an overview of the general structures in comp pokemon you can read this message: #comp-general message
Looks pretty good for your first team, but here is what I found:
Dirge seems out of place here, looks like HO/Heavy but you have that one bulky mon, same for Pivot Waterpon, you should commit to either Balance or just go full on HO with SD Weavile and OPon. The Weavile set is also weird, Ice Shard doesn't seem necessary and Tusk should run Boots if it's going to be your only Hazard Removal, Headlong over EQ and maybe Knock Off instead of CC.
The problem is really just you have no synergy mostly
I already deleted the team
Honestly clemo's advice has a few flaws
I'm just going to take one of the sample teams and fail to use it, I guess
if you want tips on using it you can dm me replays/ask comp general for advice
This team is not close to balance: it stacks multiple offensive threats with a suicide lead
Weavile is not good on HO, no not even SD weavile, and Waterpon isn't very good on non webs HO either, due to its speed tier
Tusk also struggles to slot into HO (and HO doesn't need hazard removal anyways), only really seeing small usage as a BU mon with Booster Energy
We appreciate the effort to give rates if a rater can't get to it due to one reason or another (especially recently since we had a decent backlog we had to clear), but please refrain from giving advice if you are not experienced and knowledgable in the tier, as giving wrong advice is often worse than giving no advice
Well, guess it's back to the drawing board (or the forum board) for me
I would recommend giving smaller pieces of advice first
Or speciailizing in 1-2 styles, and only giving rates on those at first
Then, over time you can expand
(This is what I did, I started with only helping stall teams and pointing out some errors, then played the tier more and learned more about rates)
I currently play sun HO and Balance so that's gonna be my focus, ty for advice on my (bad) advice
np, if you want feedback just dm me
https://pokepast.es/ebf7266f6079b189 can someone suggest some improvements to this team
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i kind of lose to darkrai
so i want some improvements that help me deal with it
Double team is banned due to evasion clause, and these type of questions are better asked in #comp-general this thread focuses on rating teams not advising for sets
I had forgor
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a lot of the mons r weak to ground ik but thats what grassy terrain helps with
imma be frank there is no reason for this team to be rilla + luch + 4 ground weak mons, i get the appeal fo g terrain is to help weaken eq, but this isnt the way and is prob better to rework it since this just leaves the team to sturggle with so many threats, especially the average ground mons usually have moves that bypass terrain or ways to beat the mons without needing ground stab
have there been any successful teams with volcanion post dlc 2
This ain’t the place to ask, these type of questions are better in #comp-general
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https://pokepast.es/26e0b5d21dda88bd thoughts?
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Im going to be frank this is a bad stall team, stall without blissey is unviable + ting lu is not good on stall + you have no knock absorber + you get beat by hazard stack teams cuz you aren't stacking boots yourself
So swap blissed for ting lu?
tera grass dozo is also pretty bad cuz you already have a dedicated waterpon counter in amoonguss + now you lose to taunt rmoon
no, there's bigger problems with the team than just that
this team just seems like it was built by someone who doesn't have knowledge with how to build stall
That's right
Unfortunatley, stall this gen is very limited in the builds you can run
And it's by far the hardest team to build if you have no experience
You need to boots stack, you need a knock absorber, you need the big 4 + a few others, can't run toxic spike, you need certain movesets, etc
kyurem is a mon that exists
I would recommend running a stall sample and reading up on the stall bible: it's a compendium of the best stall sets, mons, and their roles on stall compiled by the best stall players and is an excellent resource for learning how to play and build stall
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dyxTn31r5Xg5hB3-3UE7CKWXHj07utOWT7vTBdBNQI8/edit?usp=sharing
Stall bible here
The Stall Bible Written and Organized by: knexhawk Assisted by: Quacc and SupaGmoney Join the Stall Empire! https://discord.com/invite/dhHjPm2M79 Some building advice Every stall team needs at least one of the following: A Nasty Plot Gholdengo counter, also capable of beating Psyshock vari...
https://pokepast.es/87265e403cbedfb9
Stall sample here
What are knock absorbers?
mons that can tank knock off without being affected much, like clefable, muk, or hydrapple
the former due to its magic guard allowing it to ignore hazards anyways, and the latter two due to sticky hold
im going to be honest, you probably need to scrap this
Idk why you're running vest rillaboom, idk what scarf ghold is doing here especially since you have speed control in lucha, all of your sweepers are physical attackers with no real way to break physical walls except maybe rillaboom wood hammer and that's just a tera, im really not a fan of air balloon spdef heatran especially since there's two viable fire types in the tier both of which will hit you with a ground type move anyways and both carry secondary stab to hit you on the tera grass, and this team doesn't really utilize gterrain enough as your only real abusers are lucha + heatran
Can you guys rate my team pls https://pokepast.es/73ca6db570e95687
https://pokepast.es/9adb3a32b85bc6ad alr I fixed my team, and I think it covers all commandments of the stall bible
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Is it good?
Unfortunately, no
I don’t know why you’re deviating from the sets in the stall bible
But don’t
Without calm mind Blissey gets overwhelmed, you cannot run non-boots unless you have heavy hazard removal (which you don’t), why is your gliscor offensive, why does mola have whirlpool, this team has no way to deal with psychic noise psyshock or stored power, or wellspring, no knock absorber (corv gets overwhelmed easily)
Once again, I would heavily recommend using a sample stall team: building stall in this generation is extremely hard, as you are extremely limited in terms of what you can experiment with or change from the top teams
Pls rate my team https://pokepast.es/73ca6db570e95687
Looks like HO to me
Glowking seems out of place, run a hazard mon like Glimmora over it, it's a good lead on HO
3 Choicers are almost too many, probably switch Cinderace to boots and give it Court Change
That should help a good bit to ease your matchup vs stuff like Gholdengo Hazard Stack or full stall
Since right now you have neither Hazards nor removal
What is ho?
Hyper Offense, as in you just stack a lot of Sweepers with either Choice Items, sometimes LOrb and Setup to quickly overwhelm your enemy
Oh ok ty
Also run Knock Off/Encore/Play Rough on Ogerpon over Spiky Shield, it doesn't really benefit from it
4 Spa on Lando is also useless, use HP or Spdef
Ty
Also Tera Fire Cinderace to get Stab Pyro Ball back and kill Defensive Dengo, Treads and 2HKO Clef and Hatterene
Ok
Ty for the advice
https://pokepast.es/0092dbe97fc3aff1 I fixed it. What do you think of this?
Glimm either Tera Flying or Ghost
Ok
ngl any amount of choicers are too many
choicers should not be on HO
I wanted to change as little as possible to make the team decent, but yeah you're right, Tusk/Treads is much better albeit not quite as strong on non-BU sets
the team needs a fair bit of tweaking
glim is fine
wellspring is also fine
everything else could use some changing
Didn't notice before, but Valiant Tera Steel/Ghost/Fairy, PShock or Shadow Ball over Aura Sphere and Encore instead of Psychic
^
Ok
encore is pretty good for finding valiant turns to set up
Also DPult uses Flamethrower rather than Fire Blast
With Tera Ghost or Dragon to boost Damage
You can go Timid or Modest, whichever you like best, but despite your base 142 Speed Timid helps you outspeed Zamazenta and not Speed Tie Weavile
Although the former is vastly more important than the latter
im going to be honest, 4/6 mons here don't fit on the ho and the 5th needs a set rework
Never run Cinderace on HO, Knock on Waterpon isn't a real set, you don't need removal on HO, you don't run any choice items on HO, Tera Flying glimm is trash
Clemo, once again I appreciate the effort, but giving poor advice is worse than giving no advice
I am once again baffled by my own stupidity
Anyways Gumball, choiced mons on HO aren't good due to their predictability and Dragapult isn't good on HO outside of that besides the rare Screens suicide lead (which doens't fit here), Cinderace is too weak for HO and you don't need a pivot or a hazard remover, Scarf lando is similarly easy to play around as well as being too weak to exert suitable offensive pressure on hyper offense teams + tera blast flying kinda sucks, Ogerpon is a fine mon on Webs HO but Glimmora Hyper Offense is generally faster paced and Ogerpon's inability to boost it's speed means it's more easily revenge killed and thus often better replaced by another threat
Iron Valiant's moveset also needs tweaking, you shouldn't run Aura Sphere as Shadow Ball is the much better coverage option to hit Slowking-Galar which otherwise walls Iron Valiant, and run either Psyshock in the last slot to threaten special walls Blissey and Clod or Encore to have easier setup on other mons
I'm not trying to build ho. I'm just trying to build a team:)
Well the team is looking like HO
Even if you pivot away from HO and go for another style you would still need to drop a large chunk of these mons
Ok
Frankly, I cannot rework this team without essentially building an entirely new one for you and at that point it's not your team anymore
The issue is you don't seem to have built with a team style in mind, so the mons you picked don't synergize well with each other and you end up torn between Bulky Offense and Hyper Offense, without dedicating to either and suffering for it
(if you want a good summary of the teamstyles check this message out: #comp-general message)
ew why does it link discord now
Ty
I would recommend running a sample team for now, and learning what these structures look like in OU: you can find them at this link
I rebuilt it https://pokepast.es/f31b118ad16bd443
Skelidirge doesn't work on HO
It's far too slow and not immediately threatening to be effective
Please refrain from sending the same team multiple times + you have no lead at all, power herb glimmora is not a lead it's a sweeper + you didn't listen to my advice about Waterpon on HO + Skeledirge on HO is EXTREMELY niche and only works on that one sample team and basically no others + raging bolt suffers from the same issues as waterpon
Once again, I would heavily recommend running a sample team for now
^
Ok
I thought gliscor was a knock absorber
you lose to all the knock off mons
And gliscor only has one attacking move
ok but you're 252 atk
Oh
and 252 speed
Lol I'll change that
i would heavily recommend just using a sample team
Also I have a question, why does it suggest heavy duty boots for everything?
Like I don't think dondozo is taking any significant hazard damage
i mean, it is
the issue is stall needs to switch in multiple times against dangerous offensive threats
and hazards not only limit the amount of times you can switch in by burning your healing resources, you also fall into dangerous 3hko/2hko thresholds that you wouldn't hit otherwise
ie falling into gambit kowtow cleave range, or bolt draco range, etc etc
hm, ill bring it up with them then but that set really isn't that good and you would much rather have flip
If I can't have whirlpool on Mola, I still would like to have some trapper
Any suggestions?
there's no good trappers besides mola lol
So why can't I have whirlpool then
because you would much rather have flip turn
https://pokepast.es/6ec1ecc7ec4db68f can someone please rate this team?
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Never built ho team before
Is it good
Forgot to change teras for some mons
Went with e killer
Might put manaphy
Alr I think I fixed it
Not pasting pokepaste link bc I don't want to ping everyone for the same team for a third time
ok 80% of my advice still applies
and frankly this is the 3rd time i have told you to just run a sample team
beacuse you still do not understand how to build stall
I posted first but. Checked his team
i will rate his team first because i already know it and have rated it twice
and if you're going to be demanding rates like that I'm not going to rate your team at all
That team is cooked by Ogerpon-Wellspring
Gliscor blocks knock off according to stall bible
You cannot run non-boots unless you have heavy hazard removal (which you don’t), this team has no way to deal with psychic noise psyshock or stored power, or wellspring, no knock absorber (corv gets overwhelmed easily)
And blissey is a stored power blocker
His knock absorber is gliscor
Gliscor is not a knock absorber: it loses to almost every knocker in the tier
How
The main prominent knockers are Weavile and Meowscarada
Yes I know the stall bible says that
I talk regularly with the people who made it
Yes but his team checks them
No it doesn't
Corv and don
But then my checkers get knocked up
Because anything else that switches into them, guess what, gets knocked
And that's the point
So who's a better knock offer
Tera water gliscor
But then I waste my tera
Muk suk
How
Not on stall
Triple axel
Tera Ice shenanigans
Waste Tera
It's a legitimate strategy that has seen success in tournament play, though generally muk is better
So why not gliscor tera ice shenanigans
It takes hazard
Tera gliscor and you lose 90% of its effeciency
I mean theoretically, yes, but in reality I don't think you know how to build Talonflame/Cyclizar stall
This is the last time I am telling you this: Run the sample team I sent you
Stall is the hardest playstyle to build for and needs extensive knowledge and practice, especially in this generation's metagame
Don’t
But fine
Death ur such a muk
I'd rather listen to God clod
Never run Choice attackers on Hyper Offense, once they get locked into a move they can be played around easily and it drags your team down, hex pult is bad on hyper offense as its too passive and pult in general really only works as a screens lead on ho(which doesn't fit here), you need ghold and im really iffy on moltres galar
I need manaphy
What switches in to wood hammer
Metal birds, Zapdos, Moltres
I have arcanine
Can I run infestation over pjab on the sample team toxapex?
No infestation is too weak and you need a way to status
Ok
That has to switch in, allowing the opponent to defog/iron defense/hit you hard with stab/pivot out into a breaker
But doesn't infestation trap and damage over time?
When I put ghold that wont be a problem
yes but pjab does it 20x better since its effect actually lasts past switch out
Still will
Ghold can't switch into Moltres doesn't like taking chip from Zapdos hates losing balloon
Also zap does r freely switch from rilla
It takes more than 50% so it roosts and i ko it
you do not want to be gambling against static procs + even then you still let in skarm/corv/moltres in
Like I said gold is there
heatran missing magma storm is killing me man
So moltres is the only problem
Look, Choiced breakers on webs has been a long tested idea
I can put Tera blast on my moltres and kill it
In theory, it's a very cool idea, you can use web's speed drop to allow these usually trash mons to sweep beacuse now they're faster
In practice, they're way too reliant on webs and boom without it, and even with webs up they often let in mons that can punish you for it
Idk why I’m even doing this, everything runs boots Im this gen
Sticky web is rubbish
You bring in Harc and Tusk comes in for the spin, you bring in Rillaboom and every dragon is ready to start dancing
Choiced mons just frankly suck on hyper offense
Tusk is killed by ghost ribombee
No smart player is staying in on ribombee with tusk
It happened while I was testing
Frankly, that's cuz you're in lower ladder
I’m at 1500
the gap between 1500 and 1700 is pretty big
and some of the plays i see in 1700 are questionable as well but that's a debate for a different time
Anyways this is way off topic
Choiced breakers don't work on Webs, you should drop them for sweepers
Manaphy
Manaphy is alright though it's a bit too reliant on webs and kinda booms into ogerpon-wellspring
U didn’t convince me but I will do it
Drop Harc drop Rillaboom drop Dragapult
frankly i would drop moltres galar as well but ig that's up to you
we don't rate multiple teams from the same person, if you want to get this rated wait a bit before posting it again
Ok
darkrai is already extremely fast i dont think you need scarf but that is my opinion i am not a professional giving advice
The sample team is just not working out for me
I definitely prefer clodsire over toxapex
Being able to come in on setup mons and because of unaware safely Haze is so much nicer than going in without unaware.
you can swap it on if you want, then
when i said wait a bit i meant a day
i would heavily discourage changing anything else, but in the end of the day its up to you
@spiral fable if u dont mind
you definitely need something to ogerpon
https://pokepast.es/16ff44ec7c542a5f
Any chance?
definite changes:
- make raging bolt tera fairy/steel (steel if you find yourself struggling into primarina, gives you one extra potential layer)
- treads should be eject button, and tera ghost/flying/water
- gambit without sd is crazy, drop iron head for sd (also you forgot 4 defense evs)
- make zap tera grass and give it some boots so you have an ogerpon check, also give it thunder over discharge
optional changes:
- surf over weather ball on pelipper, imo the 10% decrease in power is worth functioning outside of rain in emergencies but this is completely up to you
- make gambit slower and bulkier with lefties or lum berry, between bolt, zap, and skewda i think you have sufficient counterplay for opposing gambits
hope this helps, glhf
i use zapdos as a physical wall
and static + discharge to get para’s
right but
thunder just does more damage and has no drawbacks while rain is up
still has that 30% para chance
just also is significantly more offensively threatening as well
https://pokepast.es/d8f6fac6bae0d3d7
trying to make a decent balance
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Switch between Regen guys forever
But sample team doesn't have regen guys
https://pokepast.es/62cafe60fab1aba0
Been having success with this team but I wonder what you guys think.
What's the team?
what are the best checks for zamazenta/roaring moon? i keep getting wrecked by thoes two
Zapdos is pretty solid
Also sticky barb clefable
Landorus t with helmet can be a good check to both also
Doesnt jt get 2 hit by heavy slam
And tera fire/steel will destroy clefable
he said solid not perfect
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As soon as i sent it
thank you theduckchris!
Yeah you can scout for heavy slam
It's not super common right now though
More roar and crunch
Balance gets really hammered by ogerpon w in this meta, and since you don't have a really good switch in I would try to add something specifically to deal with it
Example could be toxic on gliscor for an early game trade and then protect stall, or maybe thunder wave on clefable, or brave bird Skarmory.
Otherwise ok
This is decent, I feel like Ironpress Garg kinda sucks, I'd rather use curse if you want setup
So like curse eq salt cure
Helps vs gholdengo with covert cloak and a few other things
Also not really sure you need energy ball on moth, sub would prob be better
Pretty sure all you hit is Garg and ting Lu and you should prob be saving moth if they're still around
Thank you!
iron press garg is fine imo but you wanna go tera fairy, you go tera ghost to beat other pressers but garg beats most of em anyways
also this team should not be using garg to deal w covert cloak gholdengo, youd just kill it w moth or sum
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there's a couple weird synergies here
also uhhh
drop sparkling Aria
strict downgrade in singles to surf
thats if you keep prim
https://pokepast.es/36a793022e9a7e45 ZAMAZENTA TEAM TELL ME HOW TO IMPROVE PLEASE
do you like zamazenta?
A little bit
Why does your OU team have 5 non-OU mons?
wrong forum
nothing realy stands out to me other than drill peck skarm (just run brave bird) and the lack of offensive pressure, maybe make weavile sd?
o yeah personally im not a fan of flamethrower gking and prefer twave but that's up to you
actually no just drop flamethrower what are you hitting with it
Randomly burning stuff feels good too
twave synergizes better with pult
Oh yeah I don't really need the speed drop but it helps Hex, I didn't think about that
I'll try TWave and Brave Bird but idk if I can drop Low Kick for SD on Weavile, I end up having to 1v1 Kingambit with it a lot
As my Skarm doesn't have BPress
Maybe I don't need ww on both Ting-Lu and Skarm?
yeah i dont think you need it on both
https://pokepast.es/326984387b0f781b so it's better like this?
I realised now that my Skarm had 0 Atk IVs and -Atk nature for some reason, Drill Peck was doing absolute shit damage
yeah, might want id over brave bird if you find that your waterpon matchup is fine already and you need a better matchup into other sweepers
Okay ty, I'll try that for now
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is there something i can change so that i can stop getting walled by mons such as glowking
not a fan of mystic water wake, just run specs
i dont think gouging is realy worth it on sun nowadays honestly, rmoon is the better speed control + comes with more utility
Mystic water is good
if you want to be a gking hater run modest specs wake with tera water max spattack to have a high chance to nuke gking
otherwise, you really just have to predict around it coming in
its banded set on stratdex
just run booster speed, then make wake booster spattack
(cuz rmoon would be your speed control anyways)
other than that im iffy about tusk on sun but there's no real problem with it, i would run an offensive tera like ground tho
rest of team is fine
what would you switch tusk with if you had to
gambit is always a solid anchor for any ho team + operates outside of weather
bolt can be fun to run + helps in the rain matchup
alright thanks
anybody got a fire slowbro-galar set?
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Howdy folks
I was messing around with SD Gliscor. Any thoughts on this team?
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I have been using this team for awhile now with solid results on lower ladder. However, I feel like I more often than not auto-lose into ogerpon-w and that not everyone is able to consistently pull their weight. Any advice on how to actively get the team stronger? https://pokepast.es/47ca4ea079fa224a
This is certainly a team
The main issue is negative synergy tbh
For instance iron treads is a fast pivot in this case, it's usually also the stealth rocker and used to generate momentum on more offensive teams
But then your momentum gets halted by dondozo and blissey who are much more passive and thus squander your pressure
What team structure is this anyway, balance?
Cause if it is I'm not sure if blissey or iron treads belong here
Also if wellspring is the thing giving you trouble your best bet is to threaten it offensively tbh
Someone better than me could help you out with that tho, treads and bliss shouldn't be here but who to replace them with I'm not too sure
Been 6 hours
They have lives yknow they'll get to it when they can
You shouldn't run webs with a non-ho team, vest Tusk is unviable and vest slowking galar doesn't run that set, same with NMI kyurem, and you should have facade on Gliscor
What kind of team were you going for here? What style?
What's the team style here? No hazard setter, a defensive wall in clodsire on a heavily offensive team, scarf darkrai and wash are both pretty bad, banded dnite is iffy
There's not a lot of synergy here
Clodsire slows the team down, you don't have enough offfensive pressure with Dnite being limited by rocks and Gambit being your only other offensive threat, but your defensive synergy is really bad since wash loses to most offensive attackers and clodsire can't carry on its own + too passive
honestly my idea was to create an offensive team that then i was like but loses to this and that
and now it kinda became messy
like at first i had gliscor and great tusk but that felt a bit too much of a ground type
so then i tried to use darkrai and kinggambit as offensive tools
and cinderace as my hazard control
so yeah basically i use rotom and cinderace as my pivots Dnite as my wallbreaker gambit as a just a decent pokemon i guess and clod /rotom as def
it was essentially just to use darkrai as a speed control and cinderace as my hazard control/pivot
like balance i would say
Unfortunately it just doesn’t work
Rotom isn’t a good defensive mon (or much of a mon at all honestly it fell off hard), Clodsire is too passive for this team
Dragonite isn’t a very good wall breaker and you don’t have the hazard control to pull it off anyways
yeah i am still trying to figure out the new meta i took a year break
I would recommend taking a look at the sample teams right now (or current World Cup teams, since that’s newer)
Yeah, just no real direction or synergy
ok thank you
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ok so i see you want to run veil ho, but then you shouldn't run any choiced mons since they're easy to play around, if you want to run lefties gambit run the bulky set
if you want to run setup hatterene drop nuzzle for mystical fire, and im really iffy about deo s and think another mon would be better here (zamazenta)
if you want to keep deo s though drop twave for superpower
https://pokepast.es/47cedb8d2057ffb8
Idk why but this team seemed cool, presenting 3 steels
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The idea was like
Corv is immune to ground, Tran is immune to fire and Dengo is immune to fighting
And
I’m going to be honest this does not look very good
I don’t know why you have boots ghold, really don’t like triple stacking steels
Offensive pressure seems kinda lacking especially since your only sweeper is ghold + your second offensive mon is heatran
Heatran in general seems like an odd pick here with that set as it’s definitely a set more suited to offensive teams, you really don’t want to run one-time use items on balance
Also like legitimately what fire types in OU care about heatran flash fire? Cuz both Gouging and Moth can blow through you with coverage and Torkoal isn’t an offensive mon anyways
Thanks for the feedback. After a few games I realized assault vest on gking and tusk wasn't working out. I was working for a bulky offensive team, with web support allowing them to outspeed pokemon they normally couldn't
so webs really only works on HO
because you can't really keep it up in a longer game
(and yes bulky offense can't do this)
and if you lessen your team's reliance on webs well at that point you might as well drop webs entirely cuz then you're just playing 5-6 most of the time
Cool, I'll workshop it again! So I should probably introduce some speed control through faster pokemon?
hi wanted to get my first team that i made rated https://pokepast.es/11f6bb5ba04b6ce0
lmk what yall think. im kinda new
first you should decide what style you want to play (ho, bo, balance, stlal, etc)
then, build around that
you have the start of a decent bulky offense team, but greninja, wash, and heatran really don't fit here
You alreay had a better rocker than heatran + you don't really need the wallbreaking capabilities as much and your team isn't fire weak (not that heatran would fix that)
Wash honestly is just kinda mid ngl but you already have a phys def pivot in lando and you would rather have Gking for a spdef pivot
Greninja just falls short and fails to the kills it needs a lot of times and really only fits on HO or rain
I would swap out Greninja for Banded Dragapult, gives your team a wallbreaker + some more speed control, and Heatran for Gambit to round the team out with a solid anchor that can also threaten the ghosts
Thanks! I'll read up on different styles and decide then.
phatom force on pult is kinda not real imma be honest
and also whats the point of magnezone
if its to trap kingambit then it should have body press
and ngl magnezone doesn't answer kingambit that well unless you blow tera
if its to trap other steels like ghold and corv then, well its also not doing that super well in the case of ghold, and corv does not really need to be trapped
it has pivoting anyway it won't be
this looks like balance of sorts but it just has some oddball choices
firstly, pult is just not the right set
give it the boots pivot set on smogon
secondly I'm not sure how much I like magnezone here
its generally not a good mon, its also your only decent answer to wellspring but if it goes down then the entire team folds
pivot pult should help prevent that since you could threaten a will-o-wisp against it, and instead of magnezone maaaaybe iron defence zamazenta could be an option
its not a stonewall answer but it does fairly well against kingambit as a sucker punch wouldn't kill it meanwhile body press threatens it severely
its an outright ko unless it teras
88 Def Zamazenta Body Press vs. 212 HP / 0 Def Kingambit: 364-432 (92.3 - 109.6%) -- 56.3% chance to OHKO ok not an outright ko but this is against bulky kingambit and you're still heavily favoured to
some other things would be there's better spikes setters than clod for a team like this, Ting Lu is pretty good generally
or skarmory
I prefer ting lu but thats just me
A right i was going for a body press but ig i forgot to change it
Well does a scarf 1 better for the magnezone though?
Right Its better to
use will o wisp pult
Body press ig better
And just for me though, i got a hard time dealing with some boosted spa mons so id preffer spd clod over spd tinglu spikes, + its an anti toxic spike
Thanks!
pls give feedbacks on items, mons i could change and moves
i'm really new into teammaking
also i just changed gholdengo for skarmory
you don't rly need anti tspikes with rapid spin boots tusk but if you really wanna keep a special wall for balance galarian slowking is pretty good but idk where I'd fit it onto this team
potentially instead of corv but I'm not too sure
Oh
slowking is really really good
I just thought it wouldve been an easy way if the opp would switch into ghost
Rapid spin...
And in predictions, idk maybe 5050 or sm shi
Well i gotta try it though
you could slot defog onto corv if you really want but I'm not the biggest fan of defog corv
you should be fine on the hazards front if you have enough boots tbh
I dont like defogs tbh
Corv just serves as a wall
Well at some cases some peep mistake corvi and wellsprings gets bairt over brave bird
incineroar sucks in singles, its slow, isnt immediately threatening, is weak to all forms of hazards and really lacks the same pressure it exerts in doubles with moves like fake out and parting shot. its bad, don't use it. no clue whats up with the set on rillaboom, deo speed or garganacl and azumarill is niche, its completely ruined by waterpon and has struggled to find its footing in this gen tbh, its deathly afraid of hazards and status and is sadly incredibly predictable, speaking of hazards you have no removal to speak of
tbh I'd scrap this
new team time
try out one of those samples first then build your own team
cause imma be fr this is whack
My first 20 teams gonna make everyone's eyes bleed for now
Hey anyway, would a scarf magnezone work? 🗿
https://pokepast.es/e3fdb9c719079d20 haven't put any items/moves yet, just wanna know what you think about the team itself
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mainly cuz i just don't know what items to use
Shi i gotta work on some new stuff then
🥲
this channel only reviews finished teams comp general is the place you would ask this kind of questions but honestly that team is mainly going for hazard stack smogon would show you the preffered items and sets
oh alright
https://pokepast.es/393ad124cc6fbda8 utility gyarados is something ı wanted to try for some time and ı think its pretty neat thunder wave + taunt hinders most of the DD+SD sweepers except NMI mixed kyurem / some mixed SD vals with thunderbolt coverage while it can slow down and annoy roaring moon taunt varinat can break through it after a dragon dance and some chip damage kingambit can just tera dark and force its way out and it doesnt really care about paralysis anyway HDB is more of a place holder item since ı have pretty strong hazard control ı was think about switching it with rocky helmet or leftovers open to any advice
not gonna comment on the gyarados since thats the thing you wanna experiment with but my concern is there's a lot of single use items on pokemon who would otherwise prefer something else
Mirror herb zamazenta is an idea I suppose but it is inherently inconsistent
tbf most boosting sets are physical so you're more likely to get some benefit if they boost then not
and a defence boost is cool too I suppose
not sure I fw grassy seed hatt
I’m going to comment on the gyarados I’m going to be honest it does nothing for you here
You want twave and hinder ddance sweepers? Hex Pult
Also you get out sped by most ddance sweepers anyways
So you won’t even be getting off a twave/taunt
Grassy seed hatt is fine but this team should lean more offensive if you want to use gterrain
Mirror Herb Zama is a bit funky I do think that should only be on HO and lefties would be better especially with gterrain
Drop Gyarados for Lucha, maybe swap tran to flame body (iffy about this one but moth crumples you anyways, decent mu into Gouging with Terrain tho), and I would recommend making Tusk BU booster speed
also another issue is that you don't really answer some sweepers like roaring moon too well, they boost past you and also ice fang won't hurt them for much cause no attack investment
tho you'd probably wanna click twave in that scenario
thx isnt dragapult a bit frail it cant really switch into most thing and most of the DD sweepers outspeed it after a dragon dance ı wanted to use gya cause it has a good defensive typing not bad bulk and intimidate
dragapult wants pivot support
but stuff like roaring moon without a boost doesn't wanna stare it down
its a fun idea but like
let's say you switch in on the roaring moon, intim it, now it's +1 speed with atk booster
what do you do?
Twave it? It's going to ddance again and nwo still be at base speed with +1 atk
Taunt it? It's faster and so it gets a free boost first
and ice fang isn't doing much
gyara does seem cool on first glance tho so it makes sense
fun concept, bad execution
tbh it did well against other sweepers but roaring moons acrobatics 3 hkos me
ok but what other sweepers tho
dnite is faster and doesn't care about being twaved since it clicks espeed anyways
Gouging is also faster so it's just the rmoon pt 2
Ig wellspring but there's tons of answers to sweeper wellspring
Gambit sds then suckers and you can't hurt it much
Ogerpon is faster
Weavile is faster + doesn't even care about intim
And you're not doing much in return
Not even ogerpon
You can't switch in
Intimidate might soften the blow but you're eating two hits, so yeah fair
also you dont even do any damage to it afterwards so it just starts smacking you around
Power creep is not kind, even to on paper really sound mons like gyarados
Things are just too fast and too strong nowadays
okay ı did take a look at the calcs and honestly with invesment it can actually tank hits pretty well but about the fighting back part you guys are definetly right it cant really do damage if its not supereffective
i got inspired by tera water land-t to be honest anyways so hawlucha its
Not only that ice fang is a very weak move
eh not having roost hurts it more imo and decent flying stab
So even with gyarados's good natural attack it's not gonna be hitting hard at all without stab, even with stab it's still laughable
Power whip would've been cool but it doesn't hit anything relevant
ice fang can 2 hko roaring after stealth rock but its physcal bulk is terrible anyways
https://pokepast.es/167187311ef26f6d does this team seem weak to gouging fire?
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tbh i dont think shuca berry is that good for this...
Terrain extender rillaboom is supposed to enable terrain abusers but you don't have any, I'm not the biggest fan of banded meow it hits fairly hard but locking into something can break your momentum, and while you hit hard, not hard enough tbh, speaking of momentum, treads lacks volt switch which tends to be a staple, shuca berry isn't very good, spiky shield on Ogerpon isn't great either, it kills your pace, this could defo use a bit of work
I don't have any terrain team sets on me tho
But they generally fit hawlucha there somewhere, its niche is an unburden sweeper
i feel like i'm lacking an unaware pokemon, getting stomped by shell smash etc
There aren't any relevant shell smash mons, also the major unaware mons are stallmons you don't need those on a team like this
the only offensive unaware mon is skeledirge and its a tera hog tbh
It can work on offence but ye it's a Tera hog and super specific
any other suggestions?
tbh, i think i might just drop this team
There's also a couple odd choices
isn't working out.
Use a sample if you're getting started
Ty.
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this gens offensive threats are too much and too varied so generally BO and stall are pretty limited in teambuilding so using a sample team is preffered
too late lmao
dw, ty anyway :)
aight bet. thanks
I also got Blaziken
Tyranitar
and Dragapult
I also changed my garchomp to have its HA
Rough skin
https://pokepast.es/3623ba239b5ec85e