feedback for a short film

[somber night]

hey guys im working on a short film in ue5 and this what i have so far I would really like some feedback :) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aKmK_Buxn6I&ab_channel=ProAsu

[thorn pebble]

I sort of get what you're doing with the trailer. Is it to showcase different areas you made?

I think the last two clips are my favorite. I like how you tracked the bird while it flew to the hut and how the camera eventually stopped moving and stayed in a fixed location. I really enjoyed when you panned up from the forest to the bird. Great work there. I also liked the "to be continued" part. Interesting scene and the camera movement was smooth.

There is a super harsh cut about 11 seconds in that is very unpleasant. The music was starting to set the mood up until that point. I think you change music three times. It's quite jarring.

I think this can be fixed by rearranging the clips. Maybe have the hut first, then the ruins and the "To be continued" last. Consider using one piece of music since it's only about 52 seconds of scenic shots.

Also, there is almost 30 seconds of black screen at the end you should definitely cut. I'm not sure why it's there.

[somber night]

okay thank you so much i appreciate it i’ll make these changes soon ❤️

[north plaza]

in my opinion the bird ruined the realism of the entire clip, the birds are like 50 vertices while everything else looks like nanite.

i love the way everything looks except those birds

[somber night]

ya i do agree i’ll make sure to change that as well the bird definitely doesn’t look real

[errant frigate]

Cool video the camera moves feel a bit odd imo