Sultans of swing right path?

[kind coral]

I have a long way to go but is this like on the right path?

[kind coral]

I know timing is off and the first bend, but is the rythm right? And other than timing and the bends, how can I make it sound better? Am I fingering the chords badly?

I think it's when I hit the muted strums that I don't lift off finger fast enough or evenly

[queen sage]

You don't have to finger the whole chord. Just hit the notes you wanna ring out. And you don't sound smooth. So maybe just practice through it slowly at first

[kind coral]

Yes I don't sound smooth and on time, but I am wondering about if the right hand sounds right

[queen sage]

Right as in you have got the flow yes but rhythm not totally

[kind coral]

Alright nice so then I'll just keep practicing with the right hand technique to get rythm down thanks