#Kingfish - Crime/Romance

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wild grail
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  • This is just what I learned in film school, but try to get the logline down to 25 words or less. This will help you get the most important details to the reader in as concise a manner as possible.
  • That being said, what you have here is exciting. You have a cool idea for a movie and you explain the plot well. Cool title as well.
lone gorge
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THANKS FOR THE FEEDBACK

lone gorge
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WRITING IS GOING WELL

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ALSO NEW LOGLINE

wild grail
# lone gorge ALSO NEW LOGLINE

Good logline! Keep in mind you have three extra words shy of 25 if you decide ”she is” is cleaner than “she’s” or something like that. It is exciting that writing is going well!

lone gorge
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