Concept of Show: The All Holiday Assassin Squad

[humble moth]

The All Holiday Assassin squad
Bio: the AHAS is a military group group funded by MAAM as MAAms sort of backup group for spiral knights, where MAAM were able to find the whereabouts of people who seem like real life holiday figures who aren’t actually them but come off as them, who went rogue and banished from public eye and transform them into amazing skilled mercenaries, fighting crime undercover, they are a black ops unit who work as assassins to shut people up, which they only do sometimes, working as a covert black ops team that privately protect countries who the UAK seem as the countries friend, and carries out assassination attempts of the countries enemy’s.

[copper gorge]

Why is a museum non profit funding a military group?

and which of these is UAK referring to

[humble moth]

It’s a fictional country I made up

It stands for United American kingdom

[copper gorge]

Ah, got it. the explanation of AHAS with no explanation for the other acronyms is confusing. I would at least explain what each of these organizations are

[humble moth]

This goes with my interconnected shared universe, remember my spiral corps? And Hellsinger? Their connected to this as well

[humble moth]

What about the concept in general? The idea of holiday figures and more

[copper gorge]

It's really going to depend on the tone and genre. What are you shooting for?

[humble moth]

what genre seems to fit is hard cus I’m having a confusion of what genre I should sim for

[copper gorge]

Gonna be honest, the way it's written up there is somewhat confusing. But I've only ever seen evil holiday characters done either as B-horror or comedy/dark comedy.

[humble moth]

They are necessarily evil, I’m intending morally grey

But while im this conversation I’m thinking like

Neo-noir, Dark Comedy

[copper gorge]

If you think it would work, go for it!

[humble moth]

Thank you! But yeah I’m thinking of this to be a show

[copper gorge]

Yeah, all honesty, I just can't picture this as anything super serious and exploring serious moral themes

my mind immediately goes to robot Santa from Futurama and the Leprechaun series

[humble moth]

It’s a mixture of both, I want it to be a goofy funny concept, but I want it to be unexpectedly have serious dramatic moments and themes

Sorta like animal farm

[copper gorge]

I would at minimum drop the shared universe stuff

[humble moth]

I feel bad for not understanding but what do you mean

[copper gorge]

You said this was a shared universe/interconnected spin off story to something else you wrote, right?

[humble moth]

Yup, most of my stuff is

[copper gorge]

Is this just for fun? Or what's your goal?