#Misdelivered - 29 Page Workplace Comedy Pilot
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Thanks, friend! I look forward to reading your notes if you decide to provide some.
Just read the opening and it got some audible laughs from me. Gonna read the rest tonight!
Great! I look forward to any notes you have!
I gave it a read, nice job! I can send you notes via DM or in this thread, just let me know which you prefer
Hey, thanks for reading and taking the time. You can post them here.
@crude walrus No problem, here you go! Hope you find them helpful. Please take with a grain of salt as I'm no expert myself 🙂
Hey, thanks again. I agree with a lot of what you said, especially about the resolution and the cursing. I say fuck a lot, so I think it just weasels it's way into my writing. Also, I do agree that several of the scenes/jokes could be shortened. Thank you for the notes. They're very helpful. On to the next draft!