Interesting. How does the affair risk jeopardizing his future? Assuming they're both adults. I think the CEO would be in much more trouble than the student
#Business Casual - Erotic/Thriller
frank pike
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Interesting. How does the affair risk jeopardizing his future? Assuming they're ...
So, part of why the CEO and the law student enter the affair is because the CEO is still reeling from a pretty bad divorce with another, more egotistical CEO-- that CEO begins to target the law student to make his life miserable and thats kind of how his life begins to unravel
Should I include part of that in the logline?
frank pike
Ya I think having the revenge aspect would make it a lot clearer. I guess it's as much about breaking things off with the CEO as the affair
"When a young law student tries to break things off with his CEO sugarmomma (sugardaddy?), she's determined to destroy his career before it even begins." clunky, but more where my head's at
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"When a young law student tries to break things off with his CEO sugarmomma (sug...
I should clarify - the bitter ex is trying to ruin the law student's life
frank pike
"A law student finds himself at the barrel end of a love triangle, as the bitter ex of his sugar-momma is determined to end his career before it even begins."
still a bit clunk i.e. "is determined" but something like that maybe?
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When a young law student begins to exchange favors with the CEO of a lifestyle and wellness brand, he attracts the resentments of her egotistical ex-husband - an influential tech executive - who becomes determined to crush his ambitions.