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Title: The Garden Ep 1: The Anomaly
Format: 1 Hour Drama
Genre: Sci-Fi / Drama/ Existential Horror
Logline: A mysterious deep-space anomaly appears above Earth, defying all known physics. As a crew investigates, they begin to question whether they are uncovering reality’s true nature - or shaping it.
Pages: 63
Trade: Always!
This is my baby. My favorite story I've ever written (not just the pilot, but the limited series idea behind it).
The trouble is, I know it too well. And the things that I think are obvious are undoubtedly veiled by a subtlety I didn't know existed.
All that to say, if you do read, there's 2 concerns I have about it.
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Thematic consistency from the get go. I want to make sure the themes solid. ||Big one is perception vs reality, another is science vs religion||
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Pacing. I write some dense shit, not gonna lie. But I think it still reads well (particularly after this most recent revision). Definitely takes an engaged reader to get the most out of it, but I'm hoping it doesn't drag anywhere.
If you could give me notes on that, I'd appreciate it. If you just wanna give it a thumbs up or down, that's cool.
If you've even read this far -- I love you.
Thanks for all the help!
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