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🚨 TITLEPALOOZA #1358 🚨
Our winner for CRINGE goes to... @vale wigeon! Will his heart be his moral compass? Congrats! 🏅 🎆
Come up with a logline for this title...
ANOTHER BORING YEAR
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ocean pilot
ANOTHER BORING YEAR: A mail worker’s failure to send out a crucial package to a secret client traps him in a chaotic time loop at his office New Year’s party, where each reset brings him closer to unraveling a secret of galactic importance
velvet python
Another Boring Year: When a brain injury causes a widowed cartoonist looking for love to see his creations, he must find love again before he loses grip on reality.
vale wigeon
ANOTHER BORING YEAR: When the astronauts undertaking the first manned mission to Mars receive an cryptic message from an unknown source two months into the journey, their commander must determine how to proceed while keeping them (and the rest of planet Earth) from panicking.
nimble yoke
ANOTHER BORING YEAR: A drunken time traveler goes to various points in history in search for adventure, but nothing seems to meet his lofty standards.
vale wigeon
ANOTHER BORING YEAR: A drunken time traveler goes to various points in history i...
I love this as a start, but if you'd ever be interested in updating it I would suggest an "until" moment. What changes over the course of the story?
(If you're not up for workshopping/critique let me know. I should have asked first. But this caught my eye.)
unborn tide
ANOTHER BORING YEAR: marking 365 days aboard an eccentric billionaire's expedition to bore to the center of the earth, the cabin fever-stricken crew begins to hatch a plan to escape back to the surface.
nimble yoke
I love this as a start, but if you'd ever be interested in updating it I would s...
Flattered by the attention, I was initially considering just making a "Peabody and Sherman-esque" anthology, but I never really thought about adding an "until" moment til I realized how interesting this could make it
vale wigeon
Flattered by the attention, I was initially considering just making a "Peabody a...
Fair. I tend to gravitate more toward feature-ish plots, so that's probably why I said what I did.
nimble yoke
Fair. I tend to gravitate more toward feature-ish plots, so that's probably why ...
An until moment could reroute the pacing of the story so that it's structured like a story arc rather than some anthology, giving the character concrete goals with stakes, adding depth.
Something like "until he finds the love of his life" would kind of be a hard pivot, so sticking with the comedy pretense I wonder how "until he is hunted by the people of the past" sounds
vale wigeon
An until moment could reroute the pacing of the story so that it's structured li...
Let's move this to another channel. Would you like to make a post in #1019647796321718302 ?
(Just don't want to clog up the channel.)