Format: Feature
Genre: Western
Logline: A lone wanderer searches for purpose and meaning on a chaotic journey across the lawless American Frontier.
Pages: 99
Trade: Absolutely, DM Me!
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#Death Of A Wanderer
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frozen pawn
This sounds up my street. Will read and report back
Gonna carry on reading but first glance is that the action lines on page one are too dense and over-descriptive. The visuals are good but a lot is unnecessarily there in my opinion.
Dialogue in first scene is good and feels of the time but again could be cut and more impact full.
Full report in a week