Is there anything more you want to do with the plot
#Opal
clear lodge
Kind of seems like John wick without John wick
Yeah that’s basically it, idk what the plots gonna look like because I’m working on something else
I guess what I’m trying to say is, life is unpredictable both in good & bad ways, in this case I think it’s mostly good
sharp sigil
A couple suggestions:
-You need another character in here. A wife, son, daughter, brother, somebody else aiding him in his search. Missing person movies are extremely difficult to write when you don't have an additional character on the journey with them.
-Find a unique angle to approach this with. Dog Gone is a father and son searching for their missing dog through the Appalachian trail. Something like, "When they crash their jeep in the Arizona desert, a husband and wife must survive the elements while searching for their missing dog."
clear lodge
Thx for the advice, there will be characters added in later as the story progresses, the first part is mostly for my experience of being alone, he’ll have to talk to ppl in order to find his dog sooner, he doesn’t know how to talk to ppl, I’ll try to make it interesting as much as I can