Feedback on The Island Sandbox

[rocky sandal]

Hi

I have created a number of free dnd5e adventures published in Foundry VTT and I am looking for feedback on what I can do to improve them. Any ideas welcome!

Feedback on The Island Sandbox

[meager thistle]

as in https://foundryvtt.com/packages/the-island-adventure/ ? if so then the page has no information on what it is, who its for, who would use it or why ..

here are some good examples which you could use as a template - https://foundryvtt.com/packages/dnd-phandelver-below/
or
https://foundryvtt.com/packages/pf2e-abomination-vaults

[rocky sandal]

Thanks for the feedback, i'll look at expanding the splash page with some images and text