how to stop being doo-doo

[tropic basalt]

i want someone to review my dm match and point out my mistakes and things i need to work on
if wanted i can even record a vod of my ranked match
https://youtu.be/6g5jtSSb-lw?si=eEK8YySDvMbmts7l

[still leaf]

idk if s5 is harder than s3 but ur crosshair placement and movement is very off

[tropic basalt]

I see
What would u suggest me to do to fix them
I started val after a year and I am kinda washed now
Currently plat 3
Peak is diamond 2