Sacrifice

[thorny oasis]

Something feels off about it
Can someone please give me feedback?

[heady saddle]

Feels extremely learny to me, gimmicks are way too unpredictable imo

[thorny oasis]

Thanks for the feedback

I tried making a return chart like those ones from Chunithm

[thorny oasis]

I'll add less gimmicks and remove some but I wanna keep that silly long note reversing

[thorny oasis]

@heady saddle

sorry for the ping

is this better

[heady saddle]

Crossing patterns on video 3 feels way more confortable to play than the one on video 2 (notably since they do not revolve)

About the gimmicks of video 2, they still feels very learny imo, at sight, I don't even know how to hit them
Yet they are more predictable than before I guess

Vidéo 1 looks fine

[heady saddle]

That's fine that's fine dw abt that

[thorny oasis]

Thank you so much menn!! I will keep these in mind

here's how I do that gimmick part

it's easier if you have one hand to hold the slider and use your other to press the normal notes on beat

[heady saddle]

Oh so basically it's alternating taps would've never figured out without that replay I think ty ty

[thorny oasis]

yehhh but you kinda hold a bit after tapping so you don't miss because of slider ticks

[thorny oasis]

this method fixes the slider tick problem

[thorny oasis]

https://untitledcharts.com/levels/UnCh-c90ef57683044688b16008a66c443e8d

@heady saddle I forgot to send the link ,I also changed some parts too

I wasn't sure which crossing pattern you were referring to in video 3 ( ,so I decided to change the one that I couldn't do lol

[thorny oasis]

I see what you mean now

[thorny oasis]

In your opinion, what rating would this bee so far?

[heady saddle]

30-31 without gimmicks
31-32 with them

[thorny oasis]

ohhh okay thanks

I always did this so I didn't think you'd need to crossover 😭

Thought I did intend them to be hit like this

[thorny oasis]

I will change the patterns tomorrow🤙

[thorny oasis]

https://untitledcharts.com/levels/UnCh-c90ef57683044688b16008a66c443e8d

Is this better? @heady saddle

[heady saddle]

I feel like the first stop gimmick and the main gimmick are still learny
First one because it’s unpredictable

Second one because it’s hard to understand what to do
And even when u understand it, gameplay here isn’t that intuitive

It’s better about crossing patterns since u removed them

[thorny oasis]

What stop gimmick? Also, you think I should just replace that weird gimmick with the pattern I used in the last chorus?

I could just make 2 seperate ones

One with the gimmick and the other without?

[thorny oasis]

I ended up just removing the gimmick

[heady saddle]

Oh okay okay works too
I tried it out and it feels like a 31 more than a 30 to me
it's more playable than b4

[heady saddle]

Oh I didn't saw that sorry

[thorny oasis]

So I'll make it 31 tomorrow

[thorny oasis]

I wanted to publish it today but I accidentally removed one gold trace somewhere

it's bothering me a lot

[thorny oasis]

Thank you for all the help