Song 1:
Name: BANG BANG (IVE)
Difficulty: Master 29
Video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7mkD-CoxB9g
Song 2:
Name: Looping The Rooms (ruisino)
Difficulty: Master 28
Video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dAGqbaCTJNE
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silver elm
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proper horizon
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loud hill
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Oh good luck 
silver elm
holy
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elfin terrace
both chart look ok-ish but im really not sure about the usage of gimmicks in either of them, i get that the time-stop thing is supposed to be this cool thing or whatever but most of the time they end up looking out of place and not quite fitting for the song
howver you do have a sense of charting and you know how to differentiate between sounds and add variety to your charts so thats a very good quality to have in charting
idk what else to say for now, give me more time
at best both charts are a 6/10 for me
🤔
broken light
its very meh charting so idk whether to approve or not 😭
elfin terrace
no but it isnt bad
and it isnt linear
except for llooping the rooms where some parts are just plain copied
elfin terrace
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elfin terrace
no
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In the process of being written
This one is very hard to judge
My feedback is mostly done I just can’t decide whether I should pass it or not
It’s like on the border
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@silver elm
Comments
Bang Bang: Decent charts with some cool elements. This would be a 27-28 without the gimmicks. The gimmick at 2:34 is very well executed, but other than that, this chart is unfortunately being held back by bad gimmick usage (impossible to sight read and very hard to react to) and not enough master chart elements to make it past the bar for OurStage. A lot of the patterns in this chart would fit better in an expert chart rather than a master chart, as master charts are often charted to more elements of the song at once. The calm section of the chart could use 2 lane notes and more 4 lane notes can be used in chorus and such. There are just way too many 3 lane note, making it resemble an expert chart more than a master chart.
Looping The Rooms: The patterns are decently well executed but are quite repetitive. Even if the song itself doesn't allow for too much variety, it is still possible to vary the patterns to make it look fresh every time. Other than than, there is inconsistency with when you use hold ends or trace ends for hold notes. This issue can be avoided by reducing the amount of hold end timings in the chart (more commonly seen in hard and expert) as well as removing some of the stop gimmicks as they don't add anything to the chart. Another thing I would like to add is the flick note direction. A lot of the time, directional flicks that go inward are bad unless they lead to a pattern that would make sense to have the flicks executed that way.
Final verdict: Rejected
Despite all of the great elements that the chart provides, I will unfortunately have to reject the application due to the excessive use of confusing gimmicks. The charts themselves play fine without the gimmicks, but there is just not enough creativity when it comes to patterns in the two charts. You can achieve much greater results if you charted more to the instrumental in some sections instead of the vocals, especially in master charts, as it generally offers more interesting rhythms to chart to. Try to implement more general note size changes in the charts (small notes for calm parts without much instrumental, bigger notes for louder and more exciting parts, etc). Be consistent with what notes you decide to use trace notes on and what notes to use flicks on. A lot of this will come both with experience, but also with studying good charts from experienced charters as every decision you make in a chart has to be carefully evaluated to make the visual and gameplay good. Good luck!
-Tpulse
silver elm
okay
i think
i am the first one
who get like
3 rejected
the opposite of 3 accepted
uncut cargo
nah, it's fine
you'll get accepted with just some changes to your charts.
Use less gimmicks and focus more on the gameplay itself.
If you're not sure if the gimmick is too difficult to read, always assume it's a no first, ask later.
Take a look at other applicant's/ officials chart and take inspirations from their patterns to create your own. Every charter's charting style starts from an inspiration
-# doesnt matter if it's bad, you'll polish it over time.
you got this
silver elm
thank you
spark gorge
i am the first one
nah ur not the only one
burnt leaf
Yo 