Charter Application (1/3 approved)

[frosty bramble]

Chart: NewJeans - NewJeans (Expert 26): https://www.tiktok.com/@keyo_rinz/video/7555138807151054087?is_from_webapp=1&sender_device=pc&web_id=7536945107083691527
Chart: Pookie - Fifty Fifty (Master 28): https://youtu.be/DBHvgy1o1u4?si=GAO8PT0zsGJwPW6-

Both charts are available and are both made by keyo-rin (me) on UntitledCharts

[frosty bramble]

im waiting

no matter how long

i will wait

[stone elm]

lol gl pookie

[frosty bramble]

yeah prayin

[valid tusk]

Hey! I checked both charts and i honestly really liked them. They look like really fun experts and i love that

Both are on time with the song and dont have any issues from what im seeing. The charts also flows nicely with their songs so thats a bonus too.

Could you please link a full video of the first chart?

[frosty bramble]

oh let me see

[frosty bramble]

https://youtu.be/Bt4BrZTczxQ?si=km33zIUTGZ1ZgceV
first chart here you go

[valid tusk]

I dont know of its matched to like a part of a song or a beat im not hearing but i found a note that feels weird and off beat, but idk since the chart is entirely on beat before and after that

The left note

0:27

[frosty bramble]

At that part, the lyrics said "Who is this", so I was deciding to make a question mark back then

Now that I think about it, I would change it to a hold note with a question mark guide inside so it would match the beat

thanks for pointing that out

[valid tusk]

Oh okay understandable, id say since thats the only flaw id say the chart had and it was really really minor, i could approve this 👌🏻

Ill wait for what the other mods have to say.

[frosty bramble]

thank you !

Charter Application (1/3 approved)

[velvet sail]

Omg with first approve😛😛✌️✌️✌️

[frosty bramble]

mmhmm

[frosty bramble]

pi shi pi shi pi fusion

[calm bramble]

Uwa

[lucid pollen]

Patterns are a little dull imo

But the choices aren't bad

Don't take my word, I'm not a professional critique

I'd say, average

50/50

[frosty bramble]

hmmm so uhh approve or not yet ehh

[lucid pollen]

I'll think about it

The charts can use some work

[frosty bramble]

oh okay thanks

[tepid mesa]

Yeah there’s a lot of repeated patterns and some patterns that just are awkward to play (such as the hold being slightly longer than the tap, and the hold starting with a flick that doesn’t fit)