Loki's Charter Application

[undone delta]

(Small notes: the difficulties might be slightly off, EXTEND just means full song, all videos are unlisted, I plan to delete them later)

Song name: ビビデバ（秋奈のカバー）
Difficulty: EXTEND 29
Video: https://youtu.be/prOUXyVCrKE

Song name: RAD DOGS
Difficulty: EXTEND 32
Video: https://youtu.be/rKD5dAI3mYE

Song name: Self-Destructive Girl
Difficulty: EXTEND 28
Video: https://youtu.be/9CCXB2gwARQ
Note: this is the only one that's been uploaded to the Untitled Charts server, I also have a seamless loop on the preview

In all technical standpoints, EXTEND is a custom difficulty I came up with that is 2k full song, it's color ingame would be cyan, the same color as original Miku's hair

[undone delta]

If you're curious about my style, I don't necessarily put the notes down to just follow the song, I do them based on sound and use the hit sounds themselves to add to the song. The sound in the music determines the position of where I put the notes, and I add notes that don't exist not to add difficulty, but to keep flow and add extra flair to the song if you turn on hit sounds.

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bump (so it doesn't automatically close)

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Regarding your first chart:

 One noticeable thing that jumps out at me immediately is that your chart seems to lack structure in some sections, especially in the choruses. Notes seem to be placed rather randomly.
A main issue that I spotted in your chart is that your placement of gold notes doesn't really seem to follow rhyme or reason, but instead jarringly plays in your ear.
 Another issue is that your minijacks don't make sense and play uncomfortably. You also left in a 5 note minijack with gold flicks in there, which doesn't flow well (First image).
 There's a specific pattern you left throughout the chart that I take particular issue with. It doesn't feel good to play, and can be improved by simply removing one of the notes in the first jump (Second image).
 Interestingly, there is a lack of swing patterns in a song with swing rhythm as well.

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deny or approve

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i'm leaning towards deny but let me comment on the other two charts

Regarding your second chart:

 Your chart's offset is wrong.
 Your second chart seems to be more structured, but it still needs work. 
 Again, gold note placement needs work. Your gold note placement makes more sense than your first chart, but they still don't make sense. 
 (First image) If you want a pattern to keep your hands busy during a plain section, don't make the pattern a bunch of jumps/doubles. It feels awkward.
 (Second image) I fear that this pattern might be unsightreadable.
 (Third image) This pattern shouldn't be gold, to stay consistent with the other occurrence of this pattern in the same chorus. This applies to the other choruses. Same for (Fourth image). The issue is that you shouldn't just apply the gold toggle on a pattern after copy-pasting it within the same chorus. Be consistent.
 (Fifth image) This 3-minijack doesn't fit and so does the one after it.
 I have more things i could comment on but these are the main ones

Regarding your 3rd chart:

 Structure is getting better. Good.
 Gold note placements need improvements. They still don't fit well.
 (First image) Every occurrence of a hold in the middle of the play field, I can't immediantly tell which finger I need to place for the hold, causing issues where one would have to quickly correct their fingering. I suggest placing a note in a way that forces the player to put the correct finger on the hold, for sightreading.
 (Second image) For both times this pattern appears, please use a different pattern. This pattern isn't fun to play with 4k, let alone the nightmare it would be to play it with 2k or thumbs. The main issue is the flicks placed that you have to immediately press a note a 16th after. Adding with the fact that playing this pattern 2k requires minijacks that are up to 4 notes long make it not fun to play.
 (Third image) You can't really see the notes denoting where to swap. Make them larger, either with or without making the hold mid larger as well.
 (Fourth image) Refer to notes on second image, but minijacks are shorter.
 (Fifth image) This gold double/jump that you have everywhere in the choruses is really hard to tell that it's a gold double/jump. This is a big issue, especially for the first one, because of sightreading issues. Also, their goldedness doesn't fit.
 I could continue but yum wants me to be faster.

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verdict?

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deny

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