#PHANTASMA - sasakure.UK MAS32 APD(idk what level apd could me)

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tawny thistle
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So, I'm planning on making a chart for every song in sasakure's MIRAI EVE album (except Future Eve, AMARA and Tondemo*Wonderz). I just finished Phantasma and I need general feedback on what I could change in these charts.

I'm quite confident about MASTER, but it may have too much jacks and due to its stamina, it maybe could be a 33.

About APPEND, I'm 'scared' about the ending, it might not be fitting to the rest of the chart, not as gimmicky, because I've just come back from a few-month long break from charting. I had no inspiration the most of APPEND's chart.

(IF THE OFFSET IS OFF, TRY SETTING IT TO AROUND +/- 17 MS IN THE SETTINGS. THE PACKING THING DOES NOT ACCEPT MILISECONDS. But it should be good nontheless without setting an offset.)

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dim cedar
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Was it not possible to upload them to unch?

tawny thistle
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Theyre not finished quite yet

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But I can try, never posted to unch before tho

dim cedar
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Hmm you could have them be unlisted, then unfinished wouldnt be a problem

tawny thistle
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mhm

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ican try (if i can remember my sonolus log-in---)

dim cedar
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It got stuck at level data

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I cant open either of them

tawny thistle
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huh

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weird

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Im uploading to unch

tawny thistle
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wait no wrong

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should be good now

dim cedar
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I like the gimmicks used in master like all notes going to one side

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I think because of all the jacks its a 33 master

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A lot of jacks seem to be longer than 2 for one hand which is quite tough

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And you need to make sure any crosshand is possible by un-crosshanding like in 16bit master

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I think most of the chorus you charted with one big note and one big flick? I think you should chart it differently because the chorus is by far the easiest part, chrus isnt always the gardest part but it should be harder than it is now

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And you probably should chart more of the instruments and whats going on in the background

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Youve mostely been charting vocals in master

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The highspeed in 1min is wrong, you used it on one part but the next part is the same to the first part basically

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If you do want to use highspeed to it in 1:17

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Untill that part finishes (compare how the part sounds to the next is it changing in volume, uses more instruments, different rhythm etc)

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Highspeed after 2:04 is correct but 0.9 is barely noticable

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And you dont un-highspeed after 2:20 which is where the part changes

tawny thistle
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bc for the choruses i was inspired by donut hole mas js so youknow

dim cedar
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Be it slider ticks, traces, flicks, gold notes, just notes

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But without me charting this song i cant tell you much

tawny thistle
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dim cedar
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Sure

tawny thistle
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i can update the chart on unch if you want

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the second chorus isnt updated yet but i want to know how you feel about it

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and for the second chorus id like to maybe add notes and stuff around the current one?

dim cedar
tawny thistle
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yeahh i will

tawny thistle
dim cedar
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I saw it your fast for sure

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I think its better than the one slide one tap

tawny thistle
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maybe

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think it turned out quite good except this part, since its quite techy and weird

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dim cedar
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hmm true

tawny thistle
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but i think its good enough, and it is a 33 after all now

dim cedar
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i saw that you changed the highspeed in 2mins

tawny thistle
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i did?

dim cedar
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it fits very well now

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when i first played it was 0.9

tawny thistle
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ah yeah

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its a .7 now

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also changed the second chorus

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its a lot better than the simple tap-flick-tap-flicks

dim cedar
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you chart so fastMikuFlower

tawny thistle
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no i dont 😭

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its just a simple paraparaparaparaparaparaparaparapam

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and then another paraparaparaparaparaparaparaparapam

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