pls rate/give feedback on my new chart its unfinshed right now

[torn urchin]

i want feed back on it so far and the title pretty much said everything the link to watch it is https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1gWP4WkqSa-ehwiA38uHOE2fnmyVb--69?usp=drive_link

[sudden blaze]

Feedback

[torn urchin]

i didnt wanna say "gimmie" or "give me" to be rude i didnt know wjat to say

[torn urchin]

@meager dirge

[torn urchin]

STOP 😭 I JUST WANT FEEDBACK ON MY CHART

[meager dirge]

Feedback.

[mossy vigil]

here's your feedback!
insert feedback in here

[torn urchin]

WHY

[desert vigil]

send a vid of it if possible

maybe a youtube link

but yeah, here's some feedback from me

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[torn urchin]

NOT YEW TEW 😭😭😭