#[Update] KatagiriRekka - Answer

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neon wyvern
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https://ignition4.customsforge.com/cdlc/75636 Update.(Renewal)

It's been a while.
This is Purateado.

Due to illness, prolonged hospitalization and CDLC revision were not possible.
I will be hospitalized again, but I will slowly work through the revision requests that have piled up.
Also, the NAS containing the base file was broken, so rather than fixing it, it was essentially a new creation.

lilac ferry
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Brother

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Right off the bat, the phrases and sections are pretty much non-existent.

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So the camera doesn't change and makes most of the chart unplayable

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The chart is also very much off-sync. It's noticable just from playing

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Lets start with the lead path

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This pick scrape should be tremoloed, ignored, and unpitched

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You can use the handshape function here. The fingering position is also wrong. You can either barre it with index or do index middle

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This feels like it could just be a barre with the ring finger

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Handshapes again for this part

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This is the solo part. Sustains shorter than a beat can be removed

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Unpitched slides. Not pitched here

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End of the solo here. This sustain definitely has vibrato

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Onto the bass. This slides up then down. Looks like whatever you imported imported the slide wrong

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Again, use unpitched slides when it slides in. Change FHP so it matches the note too. You don't wanna slide using your pinky finger.

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When you do slap and pop notes, the FHP should always be on the root note. Also I don't need to tell you what to do for the slide ahead of that again.

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There are definitely notes played here and not a slide. Noticing a lot of wrong notes throughout the chart too.

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Slide in and out here

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Now for the alternate lead. Use handshape for this clean part.

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You don't need this unpitched slide. The fingerings are also wrong.

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Use a handshape for these 4 notes

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These notes too

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This entire part as well

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Use this font for the JP font

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With these settings

open oriole
open oriole
lilac ferry
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Yea that's why I said it feels like it

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but don't know if that is actually correct with the ring finger there too

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unless 1 334?

open oriole
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for that specific chord if I'm seeing it correctly 1 2 3 4 is correct

lilac ferry
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Huh... well ok

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guess i gotta stretch more

open oriole
lilac ferry
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I could open this up in EoF and spot more wrong things but I'm about to zzz soon

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and u are too

open oriole
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yeah it seems like it needs some work, good job on looking it over so far 🫡

lilac ferry
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Maybe you got some things I didn't see, Djbass

open oriole
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tough to do it with camera view as is 😵‍💫

lilac ferry
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The bass is definitely wrong in a lot of places

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Thinking this is an imported tab

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The guitars... not as bad from what I heard

neon wyvern
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Thank you for checking so quickly.

I set it up in accordance with the chart creation standards, but I'm at a loss because the previous way of creating it no longer works, probably because EOF has been updated to the latest version, and I'm also struggling with this because I've started using a different builder.

For the time being, I will correct the issues you reported, test it in my environment, and then upload it again.

neon wyvern
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This is the revised version.

FHP reassigned.
(There are some differences due to the length of the hand and fingers, but it should still be relatively easy to play.)
Unnecessary notes deleted.
Fixed parts that were not phase-separated for some reason.

I have tested it to make sure it works, so there are no phase issues or out-of-sync sounds.

For some reason, EOF didn't properly recognize COUNT and END, so I forced them in using XML.

(I'm not sure why...)

open oriole
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looks like the sync a little bit off. try to move everything from the beginning over to the left a little bit. you want it to align with the visual waveform spikes a little better

lilac ferry
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i was just about to say

open oriole
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that should be as easy as grabbing the first measure and scooting it to the left a little

lilac ferry
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i just finished playing the bass and noticed it was still off when the slap and pop parts played

open oriole
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couple more things I can see just looking at it, that first slide I think should be some sort of unpitched slide instead of a pitched linked one from what I hear

lilac ferry
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yea that was the first thing i mentioned for the bass

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still not fixed and a few other parts

open oriole
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possibly this?

lilac ferry
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also is it me or is the bpm halved

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this part feels like all 1/8 notes

open oriole
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yeah maybe, I'll consider that as I look through more of this

lilac ferry
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oh yeah its definitely half

open oriole
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I think you're right using the double bpm feature should make it better

lilac ferry
open oriole
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pickslides here are still done wrong, we want to remove the vibrato status, and add ignore and tap status

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I'd also start from a higher fret I think

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as well as put the FHP 2 frets below the starting fret so it's on the 3rd lane

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like this perhaps? I'd have to see in game to see if that looks how I want it to

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why not copy paste the rhythm guitar in this gap here on the lead?

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will make for a more fun arrangement

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you can do the sections/ phrases a little differently here in the beginning too, "COUNT" can last all the way until the first played note

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so like this

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but yeah there's a few spots of gaps in the lead I think that could benefit with copy pasting over some rhythm guitar to play during those parts

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and yes I used the "double BPM" feature ion the menu functions and I think that's a big improvement

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the bass on measure 13 as you have it now is incorrect as it's missing some movement/ fills

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let's shift to FHP6 on the 6A note there on measure 39 instead of the notes after it

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like that

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that 14A - 12A slide also seems like it should be unpitched instead

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something like that. I'm not convinced FHP2 after the slide is best there just yet either

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that 17A seems very out of place and doesnt have any slide to get to it so I don't think that's right

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maybe it's meant to be just a slide down

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lot of bass inaccuracies everywhere tbh. best thing would be to make an isolated bass stem if possible and replace the .ogg in EOF and compare the tabs to the iso stem

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anyway I'd say most important thing is sync Prayge but it's relatively easy to fix just by dragging the first measure back a little to the left

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then go ahead and try the double bpm menu function I think that's a way better way to format it for this particular song

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sections can and should be track specific as well... if you have a no guitar break for example, we want it not to be split any more until the next played note on that path.... let me make some edits and show you how this should look

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hopefully that makes sense

neon wyvern
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Thank you for pointing this out. It's a bit confusing because some confusing features have been added since I started creating it, so I'll fix the parts you pointed out as better and re-upload.

What kind of function is this "double BPM" that you're talking about here? I had never used that function before I was hospitalized, and I can't find any reference material, so I'm at a loss.

Also, regarding the bass audio, I'm having trouble figuring out how to separate it. By the way, I've brought the official sheet music over as is. (I've cut out the parts that I can't reproduce.)

open oriole
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hopefully you can find double bpm here in the menu in EOF

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pretty easy one click fix that will improve some things overall

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I can make a bass stem for you if you like, give me a moment

open oriole
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you can swap those .oggs in EOF with this menu function

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they should line up to your current project

neon wyvern
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Thank you for your detailed explanation and response.
Even when I open EOF and select "Double BPM," it just shows the exact measures and the BPM at double speed, so I was confused and didn't know how to use this, so a simple explanation would be very helpful.

For now, I've just started rehearsing the first song I've corrected since returning.
The EOF function has changed too much.
All my settings were lost and I can't remember what the settings were before.
The NAS containing the gp5 files was broken.

It's already difficult to hear certain sounds, and now it's even harder to hear them. This may just sound like an excuse, but as the condition has worsened, I was prepared for a mountain of things that needed to be fixed, but I'm now scratching my head at how much I can't hear and how out of sync it is.

open oriole
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before double BPM

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checking some things with the stem. I think this chord is wrong. let me send the correction one moment

neon wyvern
lilac ferry
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the bpm looks right now

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the notes are still wrong

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should just be two measures on 3A

open oriole
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It's looking more right to me BPM wise

neon wyvern
open oriole
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here's what I hear when listening to the isolated bass stem

lilac ferry
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thats almost what i hear from the original audio

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i just have an extra two notes at the start

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but basically the same

open oriole
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yeah there might be an extra pick or 2

neon wyvern
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I did the same thing in both places.
When I listened to it, these two parts sounded the same, so I fixed it.

open oriole
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Were you able to use the ogg files I sent and replace them to check the isolated instruments in EOF? It’s quite helpful for checking for accuracy.

lilac ferry
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there will be parts that have similar issues that previous parts had, so take your time in fixing things one by one

neon wyvern
neon wyvern
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I will be readmitted to the hospital.

The date of my discharge has not been decided yet, but it is expected to be around 3-4 months.

I will probably be left untreated during that time.

I'm sorry.

*Because I suffered a comminuted fracture of my spine in the traffic accident, after a certain point it will spontaneously develop a compression fracture and I will be unable to move.

I will be living in the hospital for approximately 3-4 years.

lilac ferry
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Take care