#Kano - Stella-rium
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mainly looking for a sanity check on chords especially in chorus
dunno if the 689 octave chord is that or 10 8 9
no bass yet until i get my bass back
otherwise please rip and tear my chart apart with feedback. thanks
oh right heres the song if u dont wanna open a surprise package https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GNkPJvVEm0s
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Not sure about these chords, it also moves at the end to a higher chord too (I defo hear it go from Bb to C at least on the higher end of the chord (11b - 13b)
Not sure about these chord either, it might just be a regular D#6 (x35343)?
This chord is wrong (and when it repeats further in the song) it should be a D shape (xxx343)
This part clearly plays 3 different chords
I think it goes (xxx898) > (xxx8,11x) > (xxx89x)
maybe add some handshapes in the little bridge? part
I think I'd have that slide be played with the ring finger (so move to fhp6) > then move that 13b-11b section to be fhp11
This chord is wrong, it should go back to the D#
Maybe fhp4 here, then move down to fhp3 for the 3A and 4E
Then move up to fhp6 here and maybe adjust the fingering for the chord so you can play it at fhp6 too? (would change to be 34, instead of 12)
I also felt like there was a little something missing in the chorus sections too? 
like when you do this run for the 2nd time, it sounds like theres some variation going on. (could also just be a layered guitar part)
I feel like it's missing a little (xxx88x) > (xxx89x) > (xxx8,11x) run
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Pqorjfbwkaoqnq aaaa feedback yay
But its almost 5 am so ill respond to these when i wake up
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all good
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Not sure about these chords, it also moves at the end to a higher chord too (I d...
I think instead of this octave it's something sort of funky/dissonant sounding still but maybe 11A-11G ?
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snipe that little sustain tail on the green note there 👁️
the 10E is one half step too high here so change it to 9E or something
there's actually an audible slide into the next note which is 11E at this point
so not sure about overall hand position/ string choice for the solo in general, maybe some notes should actually be on lower strings
this 6-9 (nice) octave should be moved down one fret to 5-8:
kinda feel like these octaves right at the end are actually double stops
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im awake
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This part clearly plays 3 different chords
i did hear the three chords but also the rhythm part which didnt change. had that part instead but i can change it to the lead chords since it was more clear
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Not sure about these chord either, it might just be a regular D#6 (x35343)?
think i might just do this since the high e wasnt part of the arp during that part
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snipe that little sustain tail on the green note there 👁️
i need a new mouse
right click keeps either double clicking or stops holding (for aiming)
and scroll wheel is funky which is where that random sustain came from
luckily i already caught that after i sent the test file
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I also recently had to buy a new mouse and keyboard because it was affecting my sustain lengths 
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I’m actually so used to using the [ ] keys though from my Mac days
So that’s usually what I use for sustain lengths
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dang 
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Plus I like knowing exactly how many times I press it so I’ve just kinda kept using those usually
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They didn’t stick out to me on my first play at least
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yeah, they didn't seem off to me either 
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cool
ill just change the one with 10D back to a 6 then
suddenly changing would prolly throw people off
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Ah I see
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unless this part actually doesnt need it considering context before and after
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Yeah consistency is good usually
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Then move up to fhp6 here and maybe adjust the fingering for the chord so you ca...
this one i wanna keep the chord at fhp 8 cuz of whats coming up
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This chord is wrong, it should go back to the D#
im not hearing D# o-o
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im not hearing D# o-o
there's defo an A#7sus4 in there that's wrong
lemme open up the EOF file and pin point it
measure 140
it sounds more like the previous chord to me
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I mean, listen to the chords at 140, and then the ones at 141
it's a pretty clear difference to me that they're not the same
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when was the last time you douched your ears? 
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lmao
i really wanna trust the person with more exp than me in everything but i just cant hear it no offense
but
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nah, you're fine
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it does make sense for measure 142 and the 2 after
damn
ok ill work on another part for now
and maybe my ears will reset by then
ok yea its D#
opened the stem in my DAW
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so then these are fine?
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Yeah, those sounded fine to me
well, the one at 144 is hard to make out. I think I hear that high G# coming through though
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it was hard yea but can confirm its same as 8 8 9
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I'm not deaf
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😭
for this part, the last chord overlaps with the next section
wondering if i should just cut the notes to have the last chord
hmm nvm
just moved the 8 9 to the start of the section
ik D shape chords use 1 3 2 fingering but would it be better to have 1 2 1 for it?
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This chord is wrong (and when it repeats further in the song) it should be a D s...
for this one?
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ahh, yeah for that one I would opt to go 121
it makes the 8-11 transition a lot smoother
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mayhaps something like this? 
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that last chord is played for like a milisecond lmao
i hear it tho
this works
wait is this not the same as xxx87x?
thats played in the chorus
bleh ill figure it out later need to go out
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hmmm
note wise, I defo hear the F# (7b or 11g), I'm not sure about that Eb though (8g)
Yeah, to me it sounds like the chord is built up of C, F# and A# for the first few, and then that A# switches to a higher C?
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I also felt like there was a little something missing in the chorus sections too...
chat, what do we think about this
this is what im hearing
from the stem too
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I know this is not what you're asking but you should move your beat map back just a smidge - it should be right before those waveform peaks rather than right after them 
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once i get my bass back im also gonna try the bass for this
it sounds fun
either that or a terraria mod ost
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as for the part, I'd have to pull it back up in game or something to see if it's right in context
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i wonder how big the stem is
i could share it here if discord lets me
oh i can
hmm maybe the first bar isnt that
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trying to find the spot for the first screenshot can you give me timestamp
I guess its somewhere about a minute in idk
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yeah don't hear it clear on the stem but it's not completely off from the song
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meh same issue 🤷♂️ Id be more useful if I could pull it up in game or extract eof from a psarc
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hmm
well im going to do a v3 test now
and maybe drop it here for another maybe final check
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no promises I can get to it tonight as I am moseying towards bed ❤️ but we'll see
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right right
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unless i feel lazy and just upload lead only and update with bass but ehh we'll see
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