Custom Cards

[crude pelican]

because their names refer to the components found in MVCSH pattern

[long spruce]

Ok, just call them MVCSH Token ig

Now for the second effect

Why can you special summon 5 Link Monster for free?

Your cards should really be cut

[crude pelican]

• that ware previously link summoned during this duel

[long spruce]

Card has 2 effects? Probably make it 2 cards

[long spruce]

Ok, your point being?

[crude pelican]

that means it's quite impossible to pull it out on the first turn

[long spruce]

You need to get to that point, which is fucking easy with your monsters since they're generic and required 1+ monsters as material

[crude pelican]

but their link rating is 3 minimum

[long spruce]

You have no Link 1 monsters...?

[crude pelican]

no

[long spruce]

I mean, with your cards you can easily put 6 Link monsters on the field turn 1 with like 2 cards effects full resolving combos

Now, for MVI...

Why can you like... Summon 4 monsters during your opponent's turn or summon 3 and draw a card? At least you have the restriction to only summon one of them with ATK equal or lower of your opponent's summoned monster :)

Wait

You can also just... Summon a Link afterwards...

Do you do this on purpose?

[crude pelican]

it's one action either draw a card or summon a monster

[long spruce]

Ok and after you do so you banish the card

I read correctly

Didn't you read what we suggested you yesterday?

And now don't tell me this cards aren't freshly made

[crude pelican]

i tried to make the effect as balanced as possible

[long spruce]

You're the creator of Tearlaments

And now are just trolling

We unmasked you

Jokes aside

[crude pelican]

im not trolling

[long spruce]

How to balance MVCSH: make it summon only the 5 tokens and only if your opponent has monsters on their side of the field. Also, you can only special summon once for the turn

ONLY THAT

[crude pelican]

the second effect is inspired by "Speed Spell - Synchro Panic"

[long spruce]

But you only kept the "they have no effect" part

How to Balance MVI:
get rid of the banish effect

You add too much to your cards

I appreciate your enthusiasm in making cards and I'm sure you'll be able to make nice stuff once you learn to balance your cards

I'll give you a task

Make a LVL 4 monster that has 1 effect. Not multiple parts of an effect, just one

@crude pelican

For your archetype

[crude pelican]

bahamut bloodclaw

[long spruce]

I'll gun you

[crude pelican]

it has only 1 effect

[long spruce]

Ok but make it usable XD

[crude pelican]

me when i make a balanced card
everyone: it's bad
me when i make a strong card
everyone: dude that's broken

[long spruce]

If it was a boss monster that had that effect and banished some Bahamut cards it may be good

[quick turret]

all of your cards look like payoffs but I'm not seeing any enablers

[long spruce]

On a LVL 4 monster that effect is borderline worthless

[quick turret]

how are you getting enough cards banished for any of these effects to be genuinly threatening or relavent

[crude pelican]

check the cyberspace archetype then that i made

[long spruce]

Alphine

Just

[crude pelican]

other monsters have effects that banish monsters as cost

[boreal tendon]

Bak don't even bother

It's bait

[long spruce]

This is balance for him

@boreal tendon I made a new funzy!

[boreal tendon]

Do not ping me

[long spruce]

Oh

Sorry; - ;

[boreal tendon]

No problem

But it's kinda redundant when i'm already here

[long spruce]

I'm that kind of people that loves to be pinged do I forget most don't like it

[long spruce]

This might not work but it's funny

[crude pelican]

@long spruce don't tell me this one is bad design too

[quick turret]

Counter Trap

If you control a "Elemental Hero Neos," or a Fusion Monster which specifically lists "Elemental Hero Neos," you can activate this card from your hand. When a Spell/Trap Card, or monster effect, is activated while you control a "Elemental Hero" monster: Negate the activation, and if you do, banish that card, and if you do, your opponent cannot activate cards, or effects of cards, with the same original name as that card that was banished, until the end of the next turn. ```

[long spruce]

Gimme me a sec I need to put my phone in charge

[quick turret]

Cynet Codex but for Heros

[crude pelican]

useless card

[quick turret]

the first line is so its searchable by Spirit which then can tag out into OG Neos

while also not being irrelevant

[long spruce]

It's supposed to be against pendulums and yes, it's borderline useless

I may be getting the pendulum mechanic wrong

[crude pelican]

nice effect but nobody is going to use it since neo-spacians are garbage

[crude pelican]

you can still special summon pendulums nonetheless

[boreal tendon]

Pretty sure that by some miracle that card would be printed, it wouldn't be able to flip pends that started the duel in the main deck

[quick turret]

Okay you're literally trolling I refuse to believe someone can be like this

[boreal tendon]

Not how that works

[long spruce]

Why so?

[crude pelican]

everyone knows neo spacians are very bad

[boreal tendon]

Same reasoning of why an extra deck monster can't be in your hand

[long spruce]

Mhhh

Alright, I'll think about how to make it useful by rewriting it's effect someway

[quick turret]

you wouldn't play it in Spacians, you'd play it in Heros

You'd do Wake Up lines pop Wake Up with DPE, summon Spirit of Neos from deck, Spirit search this trap, Spirit activate other effect to shuffle back into deck and summon OG Neos from deck

[long spruce]

Oh btw, my "C" cards are gonna be changed to "M"

[quick turret]

[Spirit of Neos]

[long spruce]

So I can have artworks

[viral tapir]

Elemental HERO Spirit of Neos

Level: 7
[ Warrior / Effect ]

ATK 2500 / DEF 2000

Effect

When an opponent's monster declares an attack: You can Special Summon this card from your hand in Defense Position, and if you do, it cannot be destroyed by battle. If this card is Special Summoned: You can add from your Deck to your hand 1 "Polymerization" or 1 Spell/Trap that mentions an "Elemental HERO" monster's card name. During your Main Phase: You can shuffle this card into the Deck, and if you do, Special Summon 1 "Elemental HERO" Normal Monster from your Deck. You can only use each effect of "Elemental HERO Spirit of Neos" once per turn.

F/L Status: Unlimited (TCG/OCG)

[long spruce]

Like this fella

[crude pelican]

keep it to c

[long spruce]

Nhaaaa

[crude pelican]

you can use pinterest for better artworks

[long spruce]

But I want that one!

[crude pelican]

i can code this card for yugioh tho

[boreal tendon]

Stop_Having_Fun.jpeg

[long spruce]

A Kaiju for extra zone locking

[long spruce]

Ya have custom cards , Souji?

Also what happened to the Pokémon scientist PFP???

TwT

[long spruce]

Lemme see...

[boreal tendon]

I do make them occasionally, yes

[long spruce]

Altair, cards that gain the effect of other cards are banned

Most of them

[crude pelican]

draco-equiste is banned?

[boreal tendon]

This is the one i made recently

[long spruce]

Also like, couldn't you just target your killed boss monsters and give their effects to any monster?

[boreal tendon]

No, because that is hard to make

[long spruce]

I said most of them

[crude pelican]

"cyberspace" monster

[long spruce]

"your monsters"

Oh no, you managed to kill my big buy with 20 effects

[crude pelican]

well that's true but it's 1 turn only

[long spruce]

gives them to another card at no cost

Wait, OR DECK??

So you can just like, probably reborn them with another monster's effect of yours

Or do other stuff

For more special summons into link plays

I would love to see you talk with a GOAT format player

[long spruce]

Alright, understand this

It does not matter if it's one turn

It's a thing

[crude pelican]

2005 i was a kid at the time

[long spruce]

Souji, can we save him?

Waaait

That card is

->

That card is...

That card is good

Remove the banish tho

[crude pelican]

wait ... what

[long spruce]

But great!!

It's a general searcher that triggers on monster leaving the field

I would add a clause that specified "by an opponent's effect"

Like

[crude pelican]

for more restriction?

[long spruce]

Yes, balance

General searchers are super good

But that card is ok, lemme just rewrite it for ya

Be mindful: it's a good card!

[crude pelican]

that's the first time i ever heard that

[boreal tendon]

Doubt it

[long spruce]

no look

he's learning

If a "Cyberspace" Monster you Control leaves the Field by an opponent's effect: You can Special Summon a LVL 4 or lower "Cyberspace" Monster from your Deck.

this

this is a good card

generic searcher and summon

[boreal tendon]

Huh

[long spruce]

WAIT

WAIT A SEC

here

sorry

[boreal tendon]

Ok so

[long spruce]

mh... should it not be usable for link summoning the same turn?

[boreal tendon]

If we ignore every other card he posted until now, and analyse this in a vaccum

This is balanced

[long spruce]

yes, vaccum

[boreal tendon]

Nah

Would go against the gimmick

[long spruce]

yea, tought so

this card is GOOD like this

[boreal tendon]

Gimmick in quotation marks because the gimmick is just link spam, but hey

[long spruce]

pendulums did it first lmao

[boreal tendon]

Yea, just slap a hopt on this and it's good to go

[long spruce]

If a "Cyberspace" Monster you control leaves the Field by an opponent's effect: You can Special Summon a LVL 4 or lower "Cyberspace" monster from your Deck. You can only activate the effect of "Design Pattern - Delegation" once per turn.

[long spruce]

@crude pelican

here we go

your card

[forest vortex]

[long spruce]

excuse me, rank 6??

oh ok, alternate summon

[boreal tendon]

Finally

A board to go beyond beatrice pass

[forest vortex]

This is why [Archfiend's Ascent]

[viral tapir]

Archfiend's Ascent

Rank: 6
[ Fiend / Xyz / Effect ]

ATK 2500 / DEF 1200

Effect

2 Level 6 monsters
This card's name becomes "Summoned Skull" on the field, but is still treated as an "Archfiend" card. If "Summoned Skull(s)" you control would be destroyed by battle or card effect, you can detach 1 material from this card instead. If this Xyz Summoned card you control is sent to your GY by an opponent's card: You can Special Summon 1 "Summoned Skull" from your hand, Deck, or GY.

F/L Status: Unlimited (TCG/OCG)

[long spruce]

what do you mean ya can only use Link monsters to take it out XD

[forest vortex]

It means I still take the damage from anything beyond 2500

[long spruce]

ok i like the card

[boreal tendon]

It really is just arcv all over again huh

[long spruce]

i'll still answer with Lazy "M"

waait, would it actually work?

yes ok it would

...uhm

[forest vortex]

I answer with normal summoning Red Resonator and Make the Synchro

I never had 3 Level 6 Fiends in my Hand anyway

[boreal tendon]

Gigantic spright

[forest vortex]

[long spruce]

the way you wrote it seems to me that it just cannot leave the field unless by battle with a link

[forest vortex]

It can just not be destroyed

Can still be returnd, send and so on

[long spruce]

ok so i just tribute it

[forest vortex]

Basicly

[long spruce]

lazy "M" my beloved

but you already know it

[forest vortex]

The Boy

[long spruce]

it's Fiend, ya could play it

[forest vortex]

Would be a Staple for my Deck just because of it lmao

[long spruce]

i mean

i think it's a good card yaknow

[crude pelican]

heavily nerfed

[long spruce]

yes, do that

we all agree that the rewritten card is balanced

so just

if you make a card, remove the second and third effect and add 2 restrictions

[crude pelican]

even with that nerf it still cannot escape the banlist

[long spruce]

oh it can

i'm sure it would be fine

good but fine

[forest vortex]

It does give you acces to a instand Yoshiro and Arch Call so there is that too. Basicly the 2 Cards you probably allways want in a Deck Populated by Level 5 or higher Fiends

[long spruce]

more like the fact that it locks your opponent's Link zone but yes

[crude pelican]

@long spruce i bet you can't fix MVC

[long spruce]

i did tho

wait

MVC?

[forest vortex]

Oh I thought you meant mine
My bad. M is really nice yeah

[long spruce]

ohhh lol

your card is nice

a link 3 that can be done with a monster in hand

[forest vortex]

Codetalker gave me the Idea

Well. More like the Monsters that support him

[long spruce]

@crude pelicanshow MVC

[crude pelican]

the broken or the nerfed?

[long spruce]

the broken nerfed

(most likely)

[crude pelican]

so the 2nd one?

[long spruce]

yes

[crude pelican]

@long spruce

[long spruce]

NOT THAT ONE

we talked about it yesterday lmao

lemme uhm

[quick turret]

(This card is always treated as a "Masked Hero" card.)
(Level 3/Warrior/Effect/Wind)
Attack: 1100 Def: 900

When your opponent activates a monster effect while you control no cards, you can: reveal this card in your hand, and if you do, Set 1 "Change" Quick-Play Spell directly from your Deck(it can be activated this turn), and if you do that, Special Summon this monster from your hand.

A "Masked Hero" monster summoned via a "Change" Quick-Play Spell which used this card gains the following effect:
• At the end of the turn, return this card to the Extra Deck, then, if all the materials that were used for its Special Summon through a "Change" Quick-Play Spell are in your GY, you can Special Summon all of them.```

[boreal tendon]

Still can't believe the sub archetype is called "Change"

[quick turret]

The idea is main deck Masked Heros which have half the stats of the extra deck ones but have handtrap esche effects and flavorfully jump onto the field and then leave when their job is done

this one is more for flavor than balance tbh

I imagine this is probably broken as shit since Blast is actually kinda relavent being summoned on your opps turn

[boreal tendon]

Btw

[long spruce]

Pay Half your LP: Banish face-down 1 "Cyberspace" Link -3 or lower monster in your Extra Deck to your opponent; Reveal a number of "Cyberspace" monsters from your Deck to your hand equal to the Link Rating of the banished monster; Your opponent chooses one of the revealed monsters to be added to your hand.

[boreal tendon]

What attribute is that?

[long spruce]

@crude pelican

[quick turret]

oops meant to put Wind down lmao

idea is these are like

the Heros BEFORE they put on the Mask

so they have half everything(level/attack/defense) but same name

[long spruce]

i guess???

[boreal tendon]

Interesting

[crude pelican]

this one needs to be only HOPT in this case

[long spruce]

souji, help

[boreal tendon]

?

[long spruce]

i made that abomination a +1/+2 if you don't consider the link

[boreal tendon]

Make it so that the card declared by the opponent is the one that gets added to your hand

[long spruce]

then no further restrictions needed

Pay Half your LP: Banish face-down 1 "Cyberspace" Link -3 or lower monster in your Extra Deck to your opponent; Reveal a number of "Cyberspace" monsters from your Deck to your hand equal to the Link Rating of the banished monster; Your opponent chooses one of the revealed monsters to be added to your hand.

i THINK this is balanced now

and would be consistently played

oh, right

with the previous effect a LINK-1 would have no effect if banished lmao

now works nice

[crude pelican]

this effect makes a lot of sense but i will add this instead of paying your LP:
reveal all 3 link or lower monsters in your extra deck to your opponent then he chooses one of them -> you reveal your cyberspace monsters that are in your deck to your opponent -> he chooses cyberspace monsters equal to the link rating of that monster for you to add them and 1 to be banished

[quick turret]

btw the PSCT here is super jank but that's cause I couldn't find any precident for a fusion monster being summoned via a non-standard method(say the 2 Chimeratechs where you don't use a fusion spell) being referenced as such and gaining effects through that

[long spruce]

so instead of LP your opponent chooses the link to banish?

[crude pelican]

probably

[long spruce]

ok this needs to be reworked a little

[quick turret]

This is probably the wording Konami would use if a card like this is printed but it still is pretty clunky

[long spruce]

actually, no?

uhm

Pay 2000 Life Points: Reveal all "Cyberspace" Link -3 or lower monster in your Extra Deck to your opponent; Your opponent chooses 1 of the revealed monsters to be banished face-down. Reveal a number of "Cyberspace" monsters from your Deck to your hand equal to the Link Rating of the banished monster; Your opponent chooses one of the revealed monsters to be added to your hand.

you need a cost lmao

[crude pelican]

still paying 2000 LP doesn't make sense

[long spruce]

mhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

well, remove that part ig

anyway yay, card "fixed"

[crude pelican]

@long spruce how can angular dragon be fixed

[long spruce]

share it again but i think i know what card it is

[dire leaf]

Sorry about the extreme delay, but results for contest should be out soonish.

A day or two, at most.

[quick turret]

(This card is always treated as a "Masked Hero" card.)
(Level 4/Warrior/Effect/Water)
Attack: 1300 Def: 1150

When your opponent activates a monster effect while you control no cards, you can: reveal this card in your hand, and if you do, Set 1 "Change" Quick-Play Spell directly from your Deck(it can be activated this turn), and if you do that, Special Summon this monster from your hand. 

if this card is Special Summoned from the GY, you can draw 1 card, then discard 1 card.

A "Masked Hero" monster summoned via a "Change" Quick-Play Spell which used this card gains the following effect:
• At the end of the turn, return this card to the Extra Deck, then, if all the materials that were used for its Special Summon through a "Change" Quick-Play Spell are in your GY, you can Special Summon all of them.```

same concept as the other one

[long spruce]

OK i fixed the card mechanic

[crude pelican]

artworks are very wacky

[long spruce]

add lore for your effect cards!

[long spruce]

love them

[crude pelican]

@long spruce this one

[long spruce]

please no TwT

let me do some stuff first with my cards

[long spruce]

fine, lemme look at your cards

ok so, first

split it into 2 cards

then

burn the latter card you get

[crude pelican]

this card have only 1 effect

[long spruce]

don't have the dual activation

either battle or effect

and burn the effect

you said you can code cards in YGO pro, right?

[crude pelican]

yes

[long spruce]

i would love you to code your cards without changes and have someone play against you with those and you with terlaments

i bet you wouldn't last more than one turn

[crude pelican]

not if i start first

[long spruce]

suuuure

escaping my point XD

[crude pelican]

like broken vs broken ?

[long spruce]

tier 0 vs tier -1

[forest vortex]

Is 2500 ATK gain but no Battle Damage too good?

[long spruce]

question

[crude pelican]

the artwork is for red warrior archfiend

[long spruce]

what if i have a removal spell that has me declare a name?

do i just out your board?

[forest vortex]

I uh...hmmm

I think? Since they are all treated as Summoned Skull on the Field

[long spruce]

[crude pelican]

good control mechanic to counter "cyberspace" monsters

[forest vortex]

The XYZ has a Destroy Effect Protection for Summoned Skulls though so if it is with them on the Field I guess not

[forest vortex]

But just to make sure

[lethal pecan]

You realise RDA locks you out of this right

[crude pelican]

out of what

[lethal pecan]

Summoning it

[crimson resonator]

[viral tapir]

Crimson Resonator

Level: 2
[ Fiend / Tuner / Effect ]

ATK 800 / DEF 300

Effect

If you control no monsters: You can Special Summon this card from your hand. If the only other monster you control is exactly 1 DARK Dragon Synchro Monster: You can Special Summon up to 2 "Resonator" monsters from your hand or Deck, except "Crimson Resonator". You can only use each effect of "Crimson Resonator" once per turn. You cannot Special Summon monsters from the Extra Deck, except DARK Dragon Synchro Monsters, the turn you activate either of this card's effects.

F/L Status: Unlimited (TCG/OCG)

[sudden palm]

red rising also locks

[crude pelican]

double summon can solve this heck even red resonator can get the job done

[lethal pecan]

What

Just

make it a dragon?

so it works with the deck’s best cards

[long spruce]

Rate my Kaiju

[lethal pecan]

This is both a ruling nightmare and ungodly broken

[long spruce]

I know

It's meant to be funny

[lethal pecan]

[long spruce]

And a ruling nightmare, yes

At least it's not Last Turn

[lethal pecan]

Why are you asking for advice on it

if you clearly don’t care about remotely balancing it

[long spruce]

Because I would like to make a balanced version

Suggestions?

The summoning should stay the same

Also, what about this one?

[lethal pecan]

There is no way to make this effect balanced

Without making it unplayable

[civic estuary]

hey

[crude pelican]

a good gimmick card to troll opponents. it can be used in rogue decks too

[lethal pecan]

Reworked my link to make it more on theme

Infernoid Monolith
Level 1, FIRE, Fiend, Fusion, Effect, 500
1 “Infernoid” monster + 1+ “Infernoid” monsters
Must first be Fusion Summoned, or Special Summoned (from your Extra Deck) by sending the above cards from your hand or field to the GY. If this card is Special Summoned: You can send 1 “Infernoid” monster from your Deck to the GY; take 1 “Infernoid” monster from your Deck with a Level lower than the sent monster’s, and add it to your hand, or send it to the GY. You can only use this effect of “Infernoid Monolith” once per turn. Once per turn (Quick Effect): You can Tribute 1 monster; “Infernoid” monsters you control gain 500 ATK until the end of this turn. You can only Special Summon “Infernoid Monolith” once per turn.

[crude pelican]

link monster level 1?

[pure eagle]

Its a contact fusion

[long spruce]

the link or the other one?

@crude pelican

make a trap card

[crude pelican]

traps are useless

@long spruce

[long spruce]

Infinite Impermanence would like to disagree

[forest vortex]

Eldlich
Labrynth

[long spruce]

also Solomn's

[crude pelican]

traps are slow and vulnerable unlike spell cards

[crude pelican]

trap cards are dead when it comes to swarming decks

[long spruce]

Paleozoic?

[long spruce]

aren't there traps that limit special summons...?

[crude pelican]

vanity's emptiness

[long spruce]

Altair

how could Singleton be legal ever?

[forest vortex]

You really hate opt/hopt Effects

[crude pelican]

if you use "cyberspace" for control instead of swarming

[long spruce]

if

no, just no

why do i even try

[crude pelican]

in computer science singleton is a software object oriented design pattern that makes a class have only 1 instance at a time during runtime.
hence the effect of why your opponent monster can only normal summon 1 monster during this turn

[long spruce]

vanity is banned and you add it as a spell on crack

because ofc you do

[crude pelican]

but only for one turn

[crude pelican]

@long spruce read this again

[long spruce]

that's how vanity was played, you popped it during your turn

you don't even need to do that, wtf

also it has more effects

i do not care about your inspiration, that card cannot exist

alright, i'll just stop

are you aiming to make balanced cards or just a banned deck?

[crude pelican]

some balanced some broken im really trying to make them balances but it's hard to make them strong at the same time

@long spruce i can either make an ally of justice-like worthless deck or a broken tearlmarts-like deck

[long spruce]

no, you can make useful stuff that's not broken

you only make broken cards and those 2 useless ones

we already addressed a good card

If a "Cyberspace" Monster you control leaves the Field by an opponent's effect: You can Special Summon a LVL 4 or lower "Cyberspace" monster from your Deck. You can only activate the effect of "Design Pattern - Delegation" once per turn.

Design Pattern - Delegation (fix)

[crude pelican]

yeah i fixed it

[long spruce]

that's a good card

now, question

[long spruce]

if vanity emptiness is banned, why did you thought was a good idea making Singleton

DO NOT use the "only for one turn" thing

because that's how it was played

and this is just 3 times better

[long spruce]

why do you have a board wipe (but Link) for free?

also please

stop

making

cards

with

banish

effects

[crude pelican]

cost

[long spruce]

it is

NOT

a suitable cost

wait wha

wait

[crude pelican]

it destroys all monsters your opponent controls that are not linked to any link monster it seems fair TBH

[long spruce]

sending cards to GY is most of the time an advantage

[long spruce]

for free?

and then floats into another one of your monsters?

[crude pelican]

yes

[long spruce]

tell me one card that does that

summoning from deck

milling 1

[crude pelican]

idk

[long spruce]

board wipe but link

[crude pelican]

metalmorph monsters

[long spruce]

tell me one card that does something similar then

[crude pelican]

idk

[long spruce]

that requires a trap card being used

what metalmorph monster are you referring to?

[crude pelican]

red-eyes and metalzoa

[long spruce]

oh nice

[crude pelican]

@long spruce all assault mode monsters too

[long spruce]

(dragon) so a card that requires a tribute and a trap card equipped to it

totally the same thing

[crude pelican]

there are too many card it's hard to remember which low level monster exactly can do this

[long spruce]

specific named monster that must already be on the field to upgrade itself

it does NOT just add another body

and here you have it as a lvl 4 monster

board wipe but links

mill 1 for GY advantage

and adds to your hand whatever monster you want once it's gone

archetype

[crude pelican]

that's the most broken thing about it

[atomic dew]

could use a hopt on... every effect

[forest vortex]

Could use balanced Effects...like in general

And once again with the fucking banish/gy bullshit without a hopt/opt

That's Gouki on Bathsalts

[crude pelican]

more like a gouki super saiyan

[forest vortex]

Second Effect does nothing and has unnececary wording.
A search on leaving the Field
Field Negate whenever

[crude pelican]

it doesn't have very broken effects it is still vulnerable to removal effects

[forest vortex]

Not even the first Effect is a good enough reason for it to have these since pretty much all your Cards give you plus 1 when they are in your GY/Banished

it should ve vulnerable by default anyway

[crude pelican]

you mean the normal summon/set restriction?

[long spruce]

Altair? nha

[long spruce]

ok

[crude pelican]

it's not that broken come on

[long spruce]

i think it needs to attack directly

[crude pelican]

it needs to have duel win condition when it's summoned

[crude pelican]

this card is very good

[sudden palm]

Lv3 WIND Psychic/Effect 1000/1500
When your opponent activates a card or effect while you control another "Ritual Beast" monster (Quick Effect): You can Tribute this card; banish that card. You can only use this effect of "Spiritual Beast Tamer Pilica" once per turn. You can only Special Summon "Spiritual Beast Tamer Pilica" once per turn.``````Spiritual Beast Falco
Lv2 WIND Winged Beast/Tuner/Effect 600/1400
You can discard this card; immediately after this effect resolves, Normal Summon 1 "Ritual Beast" monster. You can only Special Summon "Ritual Beast Falco" once per turn.``````Ritual Beast Ulti-Rampengu
Lv6 WIND Beast/Fusion/Effect 2000/1000
1 "Ritual Beast Tamer" monster + 1 "Spiritual Beast" monster
Must be Special Summoned (from your Extra Deck) by banishing the above cards you control, and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. Once per turn: You can shuffle 1 "Ritual Beast" card from your GY into the Deck; draw 1 card. (Quick Effect): You can return this card you control to the Extra Deck, then target 1 of your banished monsters (1 "Ritual Beast Tamer" monster and 1 "Spiritual Beast" monster); Special Summon them in Defense Position.``````Ritual Beast Summoning
Normal Spell
Discard 1 card; add 1 "Ritual Beast" monster from your Deck to your hand, also your opponent cannot activate cards or effects in response to the activation of your "Ritual Beast" Fusion Monster effects for the rest of this turn. You can only activate 1 "Ritual Beast Summoning" per turn.``````Ritual Beast Rampage
Normal Trap
When your opponent activates a card or effect: Target 1 "Ritual Beast" Fusion Monster you control; return it to the Extra Deck, also negate that activated effect. You can only activate 1 "Ritual Beast Rampage" per turn.```

[thick charm]

ok i'm going to be nitpicky but pilica's already a ritual beast tamer

granted a zefra one

but still

[sudden palm]

yea pilica and pengu are zefra

so i just decided it was easier to give them proper forms

than to go look for other characters

[thick charm]

i see

[coarse nest]

hey thoughts on a stir fry themed plant fusion deck?

you have a buncha plants that give effects when used in a fusion summon, along with maybe a few beasts which can be fused with a plant fusion for some boss monsters

[pure eagle]

it's probably a more appropriate gimmick for fusion than what konami tried (with ritual)

[red dust]

concept: burger themed xyz archetype

you stack the ingredients on top of each other

[dense matrix]

this is what the suships could have been

[red dust]

american suships

[long spruce]

Wouldn't fusions be better?

Either way would be funny to see

[long spruce]

[crude pelican]

Not again

[forest vortex]

There is a inherent problem with the destruction protection and the Card effect protection. The second one cancels the first one out so they can still be destroyed by battle

[forest vortex]

Link 3
2+ Cyberse monsters
Cyberse monsters that this card points to can not be destroyed by Battle. You can only activate 1 of the following effects of "Cyberspace Dragon" per Turn.
●You can target 1 monster your opponent controls, Special Summon 1 "Cyberspace Token"(Cyberse/LIGHT) with the same ATK, DEF and Level as the targeted monster.
●You can tribute 1 monster this card points to; Special Summon 1 "Cyberspace" monster from your Deck with the same Level as the tributed monster.```

[crude pelican]

HUUGE NERF

[ember drift]

Fusion Double
Quick Play Spell
When a Fusion Monster is Summoned through the effect of a "Polymerization"/"Fusion" card effect, and its materials are still in either player's GY: You can banish those materials, Fusion Summon 1 Fusion Monster from your Extra Deck that can be Summoned with those materials, with a different original name from that original Fusion Monster. For the rest of this turn you cannot Special Summon monsters from your Extra Deck.

[forest vortex]

You can only activate 1 effect of "Tempest" per turn.
●If a monster you control leaves the Field by a opponents card: You can target monsters your opponent controls up to the number of cards this card points to, banish them.
●Discard 1 "Cyberspace" card; draw 1 card.```

[crude pelican]

again heavily nerfed to the point of being worthless

[forest vortex]

Good

[forest vortex]

The last effect is the same thing we allready talked about. No going +3 while ripping your Opponent's Hand

[crude pelican]

also why it's not generic

[forest vortex]

They are generic as fuck. Every single Deck can make these things.
Both have also nothing to do with your Archetype anymore. Not a single mention of "Cyberspace" anywhere on these. They are generic Cyberse Link3 monsters that can summon eachother by only using themself to activate 1 Effect each.
And because of no hopt you can summon Dragon 3 Times in 1 Turn while activating the 3rd Effect to ripp your Opponent's entire Hand and giving you card advantage

[crude pelican]

Tier 0 as fuck i see

[storm pecan]

i'm making a grey goo themed archetype

aqua-type, machine-type, or cyberse-type?

i'm thinking of slapping a type restriction on them so they don't interact with spright

[crude pelican]

machine

[storm pecan]

machine is really common

[lament bronze]

Icejade Grotto Enion Depths
[Continuous Spell]
When this card is activated: You can Set 1 "Icejade Cenote Enion Cradle" directly from your Deck. You can  target 1 WATER monster control; send 1 "Icejade" monster from your Deck to the GY, then, destroy that target. During the End Phase: You can place 1 "Icejade"  Continuous Spell/Trap from your Deck face-up in your Spell & Trap Zone with a different name from the cards you control or in your GY, then, destroy this card. You can only use each effect of "Icejade Grotto Enion Depths" once per turn. 

[crude pelican]

more common = more support

[forest vortex]

Aqua like Grayliens

[atomic dew]

the third bullet point doesn't work since it's a quick effect. It would work if it was a trigger effect but as it stands now it can never meet the activation condition.

also 1+ material for the requirements is just a bad idea

[storm pecan]

yeah more support is more problems

[crude pelican]

it can be activated once it leaves the field

[forest vortex]

No

It would need to be worded differently then

[atomic dew]

it cannot. A quick effect would have to chain to the activation of the effect, but that effect has resolved by the time it is in the GY

[forest vortex]

Kind of like this I guess
If all monsters you control (including this card) leave the Field, *Effect*

[atomic dew]

all you'd really have to do to fix the effect is remove the (quick effect).

however that seems extremely abusable

I just realized how unbelievably busted it is

[forest vortex]

Like all of his Cards yeah

This goes on for Days now

[crude pelican]

it requires all your monsters to leave the field at the same time for the effect to resolve

[atomic dew]

I know

just use this and 3 other monsters to make appaloosa. then you get to search any 4 cards from your deck.

basically that effect alone is game winning

[storm pecan]

idk why you gave it the effect that got firewall banned after creating like 6 ftk loops but on a link 3 which takes 1 material

[crude pelican]

link 3 + 1 monster is 2 materials => 2 searches only

[atomic dew]

or

you could just use 4 material

since any link monster can be treated as either its own link rating OR 1 link rating for a link summon.

[crude pelican]

firewall does not search it just recycles

[storm pecan]

yeah i'm ignoring the third effect which adds the 5 pieces of exodia to your hand

i'm talking about the second effect now

[crude pelican]

that's the first time i heard something like that

[atomic dew]

so you're saying that firewall is worse, and it still managed to get banned?

[atomic dew]

clearly

[crude pelican]

are you sure that's an official rule?

[atomic dew]

....yes.

[crude pelican]

you can loop with firewall but you can't with svelte

[viscid nexus]

Trying to make a House of the Dragon inspired archetype. Can I get some opinions of the following concept?:
You use this "queen" to place 1 of various Pendulum Extra Deck monsters in your Extra Deck. The Pendulum monster she puts in the Pendulum Zone is like a sworn king's guard, and has effects like Special Summon this card, then destroy 1 card etc...
Basically summon synchro > synchro puts useful pendulum from ED into the Pendulum Zone > use that pendulum's toolbox effect as a supporting card

[storm pecan]

you didn't give it a hard once per turn so yes of course it can loop

[viscid nexus]

So, instead of having to draw a power card, you focus on synchroing, and the Synchro (kinda like Magistus equip stuff from the ED) instead puts a Pendulum on the field directly from the ed

[crude pelican]

if it's limited then no

[storm pecan]

let's move on

[forest vortex]

Not a single one of his Cards has a Hopt btw. He made a lot of these

[storm pecan]

i saw

[atomic dew]

saying that it needs to be limited is basically admitting that it is poorly designed...

[thick charm]

making cards with the intent that "oh yeah it's busted but it's balanced cause it's limited" just means your cards aren't balanced

[crude pelican]

then pre-errata firewall, nekroz, chaos monsters and the power 5 all are poorly designed

[atomic dew]

yeah

you're absolutely right

[viscid nexus]

lol, you haven't a clue ah?

[atomic dew]

I don't know why you thought this was some kinda gotcha moment but that's just correct

[viscid nexus]

hurray for this absolutely correct take

[atomic dew]

of course the power 5 are poorly designed, that's why they're banned

[crude pelican]

ok then it's poorly designed because when i make a card i just feel it's very weak if i don't add good effects to it

and BTW i played with these cards in EDOPRO

[atomic dew]

you're absolutely allowed to give cards good effects, but these effects are far beyond just good. They are banworthy. I never want to play in a format where that link 3 is legal, it would lead to a a couple dozen different degenerate instant win combos. The most obvious one being adding all 5 exodia pieces.

[storm pecan]

you know, there's nothing wrong with making some weak but interesting cards

try restricting the scope of your design like working with very specific archetype mechanics

[atomic dew]

but crying "HUGE NERF" when someone suggests a more reasonable power level for your card is not conductive to a good discussion nor does it make your cards any more balanced.

[crude pelican]

i actually did that with Svelte Native's effect by using a torrential tribute to nuke the field in EDOPRO

[atomic dew]

so you're admitting that these cards are problematic?

[red dust]

if they printed the link 3 after firewall ruined the meta for like a year, i would probably quit the game for a while because they should know by now that that effect is absurdly broken

[crude pelican]

there are good nerfs like firewall and bad nerfs like DMOC and chaos dragon

[viscid nexus]

Screw all that, how about you just don't make a link 3 that gives you mass advantage recovery and is soft opt?

like who thought of this

ah wait,

[atomic dew]

at this point it's very clear that you're not really listening to what I'm saying. So I'm just gonna move on and ignore these cards in the future.

[red dust]

this is a generic card that searches literally everything for an extremely low cost, there is no situation in which this card would be an okay thing to print

[storm pecan]

it's literally more broken than any card that's ever been printed

including painful choice and sixth sense

[crude pelican]

i think yes

[viscid nexus]

Do that by all means I really want feedback for myself loool

[storm pecan]

firewall wasn't a comparison, it was me being bewildered that you would take a banned effect off the banlist and make it stronger

[red dust]

if you know these cards are problematic then why did you post this?

[crude pelican]

so i can think of a good way to balance them without making them irrelevant

[atomic dew]

I'd give you helpful feedback if I could but pendulums are the one area I'm not really versed at, at all.

[crude pelican]

most nerfs make cards irrelevant

[storm pecan]

i can't really give feedback without more of an archetype

[dire leaf]

https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1xnIHeb2-_tJqXlKCf4Hg-ggCLYG0x6uwA9HY1GTGR-Q/edit?usp=sharing
<@&646186882236940288> Results for Round 33.
Congratulations to @steady badger for winning this round. Sorry about the extreme delay. Pretty interesting and apt combinations. Much higher PSCT and balance scores than usual. Keep it up. Overall, great job. I look forward to your next entries.
Ping me here or DM me for your feedback blocks.
Next contest will be up soon after we get the next theme.

[atomic dew]

I've also not watched anything game of thrones related so I've no comment on the thematic accuracy

[dire leaf]

[wind granite]

congrats @steady badger

[steady badger]

i won

[pure eagle]

I’d love my feedback

[crude pelican]

the last thing yugioh players think about is the theme the archetype is based on

[pure eagle]

I’m really happy with 4th also

[wind granite]

give feedback contest admin

[steady badger]

give feedback

[wind granite]

yo tied for fourth?

[atomic dew]

It's me. I think about that. So many people think about that. What are you talking about?

[wind granite]

let's go?

[mental snow]

Noooo I missed the contest

[viscid nexus]

yes but you're not making cards for top meta tier 1 shit
Nobody in their right mind designs cards to top tournaments
You aim for mid-tier and then make some cool interactions and naturally players capitalize on it all and it becomes good because finding exploits is what competitive players do

that's the order of things

The reason why Tearlaments are tier 0

is because Konami for once aimed at actually designing for tournament tops

and that's horrible

[storm pecan]

this isn't tier 1 though

[crude pelican]

i think about the potential synergy the card can have TBH instead of the trivial design

[storm pecan]

this is the entire banlist came out to play and then some

[atomic dew]

okay??? you're one person. You can't speak for everyone in that regard.

[crude pelican]

talk about yugitubers since there's a lot of them these days

[viscid nexus]

well you clearly call "synergy" what is just a busted game move

[atomic dew]

what are you even saying

[viscid nexus]

so recalibrate

aim lower

[storm pecan]

i'm pretty sure synergy doesn't exist if your card works with every other card in the game

[crude pelican]

i think instead of making a single card with busted effects i just make multiple cards with micro-effects that can give the same result?
is that still poor design

[storm pecan]

synergy is when you actually design an interaction

[viscid nexus]

that is much better

instead of packing stuff into 1 card, separate the things
And for god's sake, slap HOPTS

[crude pelican]

i always forget these

[storm pecan]

you're new. we all had to learn a lot at the beginning

[crude pelican]

the game in general: no, competitive play: beginner to intermediate

[swift frost]

congrats @steady badger , nice synergy

[steady badger]

me rn

[ember drift]

darn low ranking

[storm pecan]

i meant at custom cards but yes it also applies to yugioh in general

[pallid spindle]

I was wondering when this was going to happen

[pallid spindle]

Congrats

I am really happy with this one. lots and lots of ties

[forest vortex]

OMG! My Card is not complete Ass this Time around

[forest vortex]

I know no one who wouldn't think about atleast obvious interactions with certain Cards

[crude pelican]

talk about trivial things like name and artwork

[storm pecan]

i fucking love themes

high-key best part of yugioh

[wintry juniper]

MY BALANCE SCOOORE

well at least the card was otherwise well-received

[crude pelican]

my balance score is 0

[forest vortex]

I only play themed Decks too

[crude pelican]

don't tell me this is not balanced too

[sudden palm]

@dire leaf feeb back

[sudden palm]

congration, kiddo

[ember drift]

feedback

[cinder oar]

you know, normally i'd be polite in telling someone their cards need work, but with the 'don't tell me this is not balanced too' quip, i get the feeling you're not particularly receptive to constructive criticism

take your cards back to the drawing board, reread the psct articles and other resources for writing cards, and at least pretend to care about balance

bc these don't work

[nocturne sphinx]

I might make a card maker tip to be pinned

Would that be like, a good concept, just having a post dedicated to what makes a nice and easy-to-read card?

...Actually, wait, Licia already pinned something like that way at the bottom

[thick charm]

This brings me back to my initial question (or well a modified one): What makes you so scared that your cards are suddenly going to be useless if edited?

You're the custom card designer here.

We aren't telling you to write on all your cards "lose the duel once this effect resolves"

We're telling you "Hey these cards are ridiculously powerful, you could probably tone it down and still have your cards be relevant"

[nocturne sphinx]

For every gem of a card there will be some flops, and that's alright.

That's how design goes, even for official cards.

[thick charm]

For every [pot of greed] there's a [zone eater]

[viral tapir]

Pot of Greed

Effect

Draw 2 cards.

F/L Status: Forbidden (TCG/OCG)

Zone Eater

Level: 1
[ Aqua / Effect ]

ATK 250 / DEF 200

Effect

A monster attacked by this card will be destroyed during the End Phase of the 5th turn after the attack.

F/L Status: Unlimited (TCG/OCG)

[nocturne sphinx]

Oh jeez, Zone Eater

I remember this cucumber-thing so much due to the discrepency between the art and effect

And yes, that is supposed to be a sea cucumber, not a monstrous sea worm

[cinder oar]

ye, there are already some resources pinned

i'd personally add the table of contents for the psct articles instead of just psct 3, but that's just me

can still access the other psct articles from 3 with a few extra clicks

doesn't give me much hope that the ygopro resources are any good when right away it labels things before the semicolon strictly as costs tho

[atomic dew]

more useful pins are great but they mostly get ignored anyway

[nocturne sphinx]

I'll see what I can do!

[hidden abyss]

Don't have a Image for this but this one is called Mirror Repair
This card can only be play once per duel
Pay 2000 life points and add 1 mirror force card from your graveyard or deck to your hand then shuffle your deck.

[thick charm]

it's cute but also like you can totally just have this as a regular once per turn

trust me when i say that

[hidden abyss]

true but it kind of Op for MIrror force

and it can be quite easy to get mirror force instead of waiting to draw it

Red eyes Lava Dragon "The Griffin"
"Red Eyes Black Dragon + Lava Golem"
Once per turn: Discard a Red eye and search 2 red eye cards and add them into your hand
Once per turn: sent a red eye's fusion card from your extra deck into graveyard and this card gain its atk points until end of turn

[quick turret]

but... why would you want to do that

even Mirror Force Launcher doesn't telegram "HEY GUYS I HAVE A MIRROR FORCE HAHA ISN'T THAT COOKE AND WACKY IN 2020 HAHA" as badly as this

(also Mirror Force is just objectively a bad card so )

[storm pecan]

mirror force is no longer considered a strong card

like even a little bit

[quick turret]

it hasn't been a good card since like 2013, MAYBBEEE 2014

[tulip kelp]

what do you mean, mirror force is a great card that sees competitive play right now!
...in rush duel!

[pure eagle]

Discard a red-eye what

[nocturne sphinx]

I mean, I feel if you're gonna use a trap card that activates when an attack is declared, it might as well be Mirror Force

Outdated as it may be, it's just that one card that made people think about if they really wanna go all in for a victory or lose it all

[storm pecan]

i think quaking mirror force is just better

[cinder oar]

the whole thing needs to be reworked

i'd recommend going over the resources in the pins, especially the psct articles; articles 3, 4, and 7 are probably the most generally useful for writing customs specifically

from there, you need to work on clarity; for example, 'Discard a Red eye' is unclear

you probably mean "Red-Eyes" monster or something along those lines, and typically numbers are used as well, so "Discard 1 "Red-Eyes" monster..."

card text also doesn't use 'search' as a verb; you'd just say something like 'add 2 "Red-Eyes" cards from your Deck to your hand', but that probably causes balance concerns

i'm also confused why this randomly requires lava golem as material, since that has no relation to red-eyes as things stand

[storm pecan]

i would call searching 2 cards a sign of potentially problematic design considering it could easily lead to broken combos

on top of being a bit boring. any deck could be strong if it had a search 2 but that would feel same-y after a while

[pure eagle]

It’s 2 red eyes cards so like

It’s not that good

[quick turret]

most "search 2 archetypal thing" cards require you to discard something

so its not just a flat +1

[pure eagle]

Most red-eyes cards are also just terrible

[quick turret]

yee that too

[storm pecan]

potentially yes it doesn't matter if it's red-eyes but it's a bad design trend in any case

[jovial shale]

Once per turn: You can equip 1 "Inzektor" monster from your hand or GY to this card. While this card is equipped to a monster, that monster's Level is increased by 2, also, your opponent cannot target it for attacks. While this card is equipped to a monster, when a card or effect is activated that would destroy a monster you control: You can send this Equip Card to the GY; negate that effect, and if you do, draw 1 card.```

dumb inzektor card

[storm pecan]

i'm making a new pendulum synchro archetype based off grey goo. these are going to be the combo pieces. there are only 2 main deck monsters

Level 2, 500/1000, LIGHT, Aqua, Pendulum
<0/0>
<You can only use the 2) Pendulum Effect of cards with this name once per turn.
1) You cannot Pendulum Summon monsters, except "Metaspawn" monsters. This effect cannot be negated.
2) If you have Pendulum Summoned this turn: You can add 1 face-up Level 2 "Metaspawn" monster from your Extra Deck to your hand.
3) Once per turn: You can target 1 "Metaspawn" monster you control; it is treated as a Tuner this turn.>
-
1) You cannot Summon monsters, except "Metaspawn" monsters.
2) Once per turn: You can add 1 "Metaspawn" monster from your Deck to your hand.

Metaspawn Shapeless
Level 2, 0/2000, LIGHT, Aqua, Pendulum
<3/3>
<You can only use the 1) Pendulum Effect of cards with this name once per turn.

1. If you have Pendulum Summoned this turn: You can target 1 "Metaswarm" Pendulum Monster you control, except "Metaspawn Shapeless"; Special Summon this card from your Pendulum Zone, then place that target in your Pendulum Zone.
2. Once per turn: You can target 1 "Metaspawn" monster you control; it is treated as a Tuner this turn.>

1. You cannot Summon monsters, except "Metaspawn" monsters.
2. Once per turn: You can Special Summon 1 "Metaspawn" monster from your hand.

Metaspawn Carrier
Level 4, 1000/1000, LIGHT, Aqua, Synchro, Pendulum, Tuner
<5/5>
<You can only use the 1) and 2) Pendulum Effects of cards with this name once per turn.
1) During your opponent's turn, if a "Metaspawn" Synchro Monster you control leaves the field: You can Special Summon this card from your Pendulum Zone.
2) If a "Metaspawn" Synchro Monster is Special Summoned to your field: You can target 1 "Metaspawn" monster you control; immediately after this effect resolves, Synchro Summon using that monster, treating it as a Tuner.>
-
1 "Metaspawn" Tuner + 1 "Metaspawn" non-Tuner monster
You can only use the 2) effect of cards with this name once per turn.
1) You cannot Summon monsters, except "Metaspawn" monsters.
2) If this card is Special Summoned: You can add 1 "Metaspawn" monster from your Deck to your hand.
3) If this card in the Monster Zone is destroyed or used as Synchro Material: You can place it in your Pendulum Zone. (If occupied, destroy the occupying card.)
```

for now it's going to be focused around putting synchros in scales and synchro summoning during the opponent's turn as disruption. it's a heavy wip

[cinder oar]

the effects of spell cards can't be quick effects, as that's a monster effect classification

so you can omit 'quick effect' from that text

also, just in general, it's very rare for a spell card that isn't the activation of a quick-play spell card to have an effect that can be activated when a fast effect can be

the only example i can think of is rainbow ruins, and that card is very old at this point

you can do that with this card if you want, but it'd certainly be unusual

also also, if you still want this effect to chain to things directly, use when, not if

[pure eagle]

Beast Drive Giga Rhino
Level 9 Earth Beast Fusion
1900/3100
"Hammering Hippo" + "Beast Drive Mega Elephant"
Requirement: If you control only defense position Beast monsters.
Effect: Inflict 300 damage to your opponent for each monster you control.

Bunker Mole
level 7 Earth Beast Fusion
400/2600
"Barrier Armadillo" + "Barrier Armadillo"
Requirement: If you control "Beast Battlefield Barrier"
Continuous Effect: All face-up monsters lose 200 ATK, and all face-up Beast monsters gain 400 defense.

Beast Battlefield Trench Run
Normal Trap
Requirement: If your opponent summons a monster while you control a Defense Position Beast monster(s)
Effect: all monsters your opponent currently controls must attack this turn, if able.

I really wish they had made the “stop hitting yourself” deck more functional

Beast Battlefield Horse Mine
Normal Trap
Requirement: If a Beast normal monster you control is destroyed by battle:
Effect: Double the DEF of all Beast Normal monsters you control until the end of the turn.

[crude pelican]

Why did i receive a warning? I didn't do anything rude

[gray elk]

the warning has a reason given by the bot, but if you wish to discuss that further @tropic osprey is the place for that

[tulip kelp]

neat
these fusions are so not worth tho

[long spruce]

Challenge: make support for banned cards

[storm pecan]

This card is treated as "Butterfly Dagger - Elma"

[long spruce]

Didn't meant like that but works

Can't wait for "this card's effect becomes the one of "Last Turn" on the field"

[forest vortex]

Continious Spell
If "Pot of Greed" is activated: Draw 2 Cards. Once per turn: You can discard 1 card; add 1 "Pot of Greed" from your Deck or GY to your Hand"```

[long spruce]

Nha

Have it search the card too once per turn

[forest vortex]

Better?

Wait

[long spruce]

Seems fair

[forest vortex]

It needs to be "balanced"

[long spruce]

Would a card that lets you draw 2 but your opponent draws +2 in their next draw phase be any worth it?

It's a pot of greed if you win the game that turn

But if you can't...

[forest vortex]

Continious Spell
If "Pot of Greed" is activated: Draw 2 Cards. Once per turn: You can discard 1 card; add 1 "Pot of Greed from your Deck or GY to your Hand. If you draw a "forbidden one" card with the Effect of "Pot of Greed": Draw 1 Card for each "forbidden one" card you currently have in your Hand```

[long spruce]

Double Legacy support, I like it

[forest vortex]

[wild tinsel]

Change "Exodia" to "Forbidden One"

[long spruce]

Right, only the main body is called exodia

Still cannot believe that True Exodia exists

(unrelated but yea)

[forest vortex]

Oh yeah right. I forgor

[long spruce]

[True Exodia]

[viral tapir]

True Exodia

Level: 1
[ Spellcaster / Effect ]

ATK 0 / DEF 0

Effect

If the only monsters on the field are this card you control and 4 "Forbidden One" Normal Monsters with different names, your opponent wins the Duel.

F/L Status: Unreleased (TCG), Unlimited (OCG)

[forest vortex]

"Your Opponent wins the Duel"

[long spruce]

Yes

There are ways to win with this that are very funny lmao

[forest vortex]

Oh yeah for sure

It's a interesting Win con to say the least

[long spruce]

https://youtu.be/4EN2l5l281w

[nimble iron]

Idk, most of the underworld cards chill people that do normal jobs except in the underworld, head hunter, dullahan doom dog and arch fiend don't sit well

[long spruce]

Being a good boy is a real job

Time to get up from bed and work on my archetype

Still have no idea on how to make it

But I'll find something

Maybe I'll start with 40 boss monsters

[forest vortex]

Ah the Names and such are mostly just Placeholders that I made because I still need to commission Artwork for some of them. Stuff like Doomdog are more like References to Targets that Tourguide can combo with

[nimble iron]

Make hydradrives, but make them actually good

[nimble iron]

Fair fair

[long spruce]

Nha, wanted to make a fully custom archetype

Also have no idea what those are supposed to do

[nimble iron]

Exactly

Hydradrives don't actually exist

And they don't actually do anything

All you need to know is they're a link deck that has link 5s that turn into each other or something

[long spruce]

Why would you do that for link 5?

I need to see the cards now

[forest vortex]

I also noticed halfway through that the Art escelated at the Link Monsters lol
Goes from Summoned Skull on Vacation to "I will eat your Children"

[long spruce]

What would they do during vacation after all

[forest vortex]

Eating Hungry Hamburgers made by the Chef from the Underworld?

[long spruce]

Hungry burgers made from human flesh

[forest vortex]

Underworld Monsters are Level 3
Hamburger is 6
Meaning I can make atleast 2 Level 3 Underworld Monsters that support Hungry Hamburger or I make a Custom one and call him "Hangry Hamburger

I do have a Commission of Tourguide as a Waitress

[long spruce]

miniburgers

[crude pelican]

and you say my cards are broken?

[forest vortex]

You realise this Shit is unusable since Pot of Greed is banned right?

[crude pelican]

in traditional format it can be used

[forest vortex]

Yeah. In the unlikely scenerio that you would play in a Tournament with old ass Rules

Also that thing is a Joke Card in the first place lol

[crude pelican]

then what about this joke

[atomic dew]

constructive criticism: the last part of the effect needs to require you to reveal the forbidden one card you drew

also lmk if you stream I'll support it.

[atomic dew]

I'd also recommend combining the two effects into one as a "then, you can" effect

[forest vortex]

Is this Idea acceptable?

Level 6/Warrior/EARTH/Effect
2000ATK/DEF
You can only use each effect of "Kitchen Nightmare Gordon" once per turn. You can reveal 1 "Hungry Burger" or 1 "Hamburger Recipe" in your Hand, special summon this card from your Hand. If this card is special summoned: You can special summon 2 or more "Djinn" Fiend monsters that together have a combined Level of 6 from your Deck, but banish them if they leave the Field.```

[atomic dew]

yes.

[crude pelican]

remove the "together" word and replace it with "whose combined level is equal to 6"

[atomic dew]

Mostly because the only good "Djinn" main deck monster is banned

[crude pelican]

what about this one

[atomic dew]

first effect needs a colon, second effect should probably say "Special Summon any number of "Djinn" monsters from your Deck, whose combined levels equal exactly 6, but banish them when they leave the field."

[forest vortex]

Wich one was the banned one? I think I missed that

[atomic dew]

the one that says your opponent cannot special summon

[forest vortex]

I remember now

[atomic dew]

yeah the scary nekroz deck ptsd

[crude pelican]

nekroz is the GOAT of yugioh

[atomic dew]

you're a nekroz sympathizer?

I do like the idea that you can use the djinn monsters you summon as xyz material, that way you can double dip with them since you can then banish them for the ritual summon

[crude pelican]

im a tier 0 sympathizer

[atomic dew]

ew

I guess that explains your cards

[crude pelican]

im currently looking for ways to break the game using a rogue tellarknight deck

[atomic dew]

okay dude

[crude pelican]

this is less broken than the others as far as i think only if ....

[atomic dew]

I have no comment

[crude pelican]

link markers to opponent's field = he can summon 3 link monsters + removal effecct to get rid of dreamweaver => minimum 1 link gift to him

[forest vortex]

"Take control of it." No "until the End Phase" no "but it can not..."
And fuck the 3 Monsters in the fron Seat I guess

[crude pelican]

it's vulnerable to removal effects right?

[forest vortex]

As it should. Doesn't mean the Effects are not too much

[crude pelican]

and opponent monsters quick effects can still be activated

[atomic dew]

It's just. I know you weren't listening to feedback before, but damn you just completely ignored me even when I actively tried to not give feedback.

[forest vortex]

"I can make a Card that kicks your Opponents Teeth in with Piercing 10000 Atk but if it is removable it's ok"

[crude pelican]

the first effect must be until the end phase

[atomic dew]

I'll just block you and be done with it

[crude pelican]

most monsters have quick effects so i think the second effect can't do much right

[forest vortex]

If this Card is Link Summoned: Take control of 1 Monster your opponent controls and this Card points to until the End Phase but negate its effects.``` That's it. Nothing more is needed to make it good. Link Arrows are good as it is since it points to 3 of your opponents Zones so it has almost guaranteed a Target. Then you can link it away for something bigger like a Link 4

[crude pelican]

good nerf but if that's the case then the link markers must point to my field i think

oh wait no i think that's good

[crude pelican]

BTW is an effect that lets both players draw 2 cards considered broken?

[long spruce]

@atomic dewDon't mind Altair, he just has troll face blood cells

i kinda enjoy it

[forest vortex]

Tbh depends if it cripples you...a LOT

[long spruce]

depends

in a bubble would say no, it's very risky

but depends on the restrictions and playstyle

[forest vortex]

paying half your LP and banishing your Hand in the End Phase face down "could" be ok
And only yours

[long spruce]

and WHEN those cards are drawn

stupid idea in coming

"drawn 2 cards:your opponent draws half of their deck, rounded up"

would love to see this in deckout strats

mh

what if

"drawn 2 cards: your opponent draws half of their deck, rounded up. Neither player can drawn more cards this turn"

would...

would this even make sense?

@forest vortex

[forest vortex]

I know what it does but I don't know if I am ready for it

[long spruce]

basically win or lose i suppose

(this is a non-serious card)

[quiet spindle]

What does that thing in the beginning mean

[long spruce]

It's kinda complicated

[quiet spindle]

I have time

[long spruce]

You must be in a Yu-Gi-Oh match have have something called "cards" in a specific place on the field called the "Deck"

Then you grab the top one without letting your opponent see it

You repeat the process another time

Wish there were simpler words to explain it

[quiet spindle]

"Drawn 2 cards" what does that have to do with the explanation

[long spruce]

It's what people tell me it means but I also don't fully understand it

[quiet spindle]

Is it supposed to mean "draw"?

[long spruce]

OMFG i thought that you were joking about pot of greed being the most confusing card

Yes, i wrote the effect wrongly apparently

[quiet spindle]

Oh the card that let's me draw 2 when I activate it? No

I legit mean wtf is "drawn 2 cards" meaning

[long spruce]

Means nothing, I wrote the word wrongly

By mistake

[quiet spindle]

Oh makes sense

[long spruce]

Sorry for the confusion

[quiet spindle]

Lol np I ain't the smartest, but you know after a while here you beggin to see all kinds of strange wordings

[long spruce]

I understand

I've only been in this channel for a month and I'm starting to suffer too

[quiet spindle]

So it's basically draw 2, and if you do, your opponent draws half of their deck?

[long spruce]

Yes and neither player can draw more cards this turn

[quiet spindle]

Interesting

[long spruce]

Even if it's a joke card I was thinking about the possible interactions

The last effect prevents deckouts

[quiet spindle]

I mean this is pretty good imo

[long spruce]

But very risky

Wonder if would ever be played

Since the opponent could draw handtraps and in their next turn would most likely win

[quiet spindle]

I mean if tears draw half their deck there is the possibility of them drawing the things they need in GY more so

[long spruce]

Mhh

[quiet spindle]

And a lot of decks summon from the deck and not from hand (shagri-ira)

[long spruce]

Or in the deck itself

[quiet spindle]

So it seems like a really sharp double edged sword

[long spruce]

plot twist, your opponent is playing Exodia

But yes, I do see your point

[quiet spindle]

Or runick

[long spruce]

Runick isn't real

[forest vortex]

I didn't know what Runics are until I saw them in Master Duel.
Saw the Fusions First and was like "Oh these look interesting. Let's see how the Main Deck looks. sees that they are all Quickplay Spells that destroy your Opponents Deck Oh!"

[crude pelican]

i feel that master duel will be VR in 2040

[crude pelican]

nerfed yet still broken TBH even with this effect it can still break the game

cyberspace vs tearlamart who will win in a DEATH MATCH

[long spruce]

Tearlaments because your cards would be banned

[crude pelican]

makes sesne

how can i fix this terrible card

[long spruce]

Start by stopping to care about ATK value

[crude pelican]

well sure but isn't ATK irrelevant these days i remember you said that before?

[long spruce]

Yet you still care about it apparently

[crude pelican]

ok point 1 tick

[long spruce]

1 tick?

[crude pelican]

one and more to come apparently

oh yes HOPT must be everywhere

[long spruce]

For a Link-4 monster that I suppose would enter the field with around 5000 atk, to then add more on top of it...

You have a big beater that WILL destroy monsters by battle

[crude pelican]

well it depends. also didn't RA had this effect?

[long spruce]

To return used cards to the deck

Ah yes, the mighty Ra

[crude pelican]

oh yes i forgot goyo guardian was busted

[long spruce]

[Ra]

[viral tapir]

Ra's Disciple

Level: 4
[ Fairy / Effect ]

ATK 1100 / DEF 600

Effect

When this card is Summoned: You can Special Summon up to 2 "Ra's Disciple" from your hand and/or Deck. Cannot be Tributed, except for the Tribute Summon of "Slifer the Sky Dragon", "Obelisk the Tormentor", or "The Winged Dragon of Ra". You cannot Special Summon monsters, except by the effect of "Ra's Disciple".

F/L Status: Unlimited (TCG/OCG)

[long spruce]

[Winged Dragon of Ra]

[viral tapir]

The Winged Dragon of Ra

Level: 10
[ Divine-Beast / Effect ]

ATK ? / DEF ?

Effect

Cannot be Special Summoned. Requires 3 Tributes to Normal Summon (cannot be Normal Set). This card's Normal Summon cannot be negated. When Normal Summoned, other cards and effects cannot be activated. When this card is Normal Summoned: You can pay LP so that you only have 100 left; this card gains ATK/DEF equal to the amount of LP paid. You can pay 1000 LP, then target 1 monster on the field; destroy that target.

F/L Status: Unlimited (TCG/OCG)

[long spruce]

A card that cannot be special summoned and requires 3 tributes, you have to pay LP

[crude pelican]

there was another edition where its ATK is equal to the combined ATK of its tributes

[long spruce]

[Sphere mode]

[viral tapir]

The Winged Dragon of Ra - Sphere Mode

Level: 10
[ Divine-Beast / Effect ]

ATK ? / DEF ?

Effect

Cannot be Special Summoned. Requires 3 Tributes from either side of the field to Normal Summon to that side of the field (cannot be Normal Set), then shift control to this card's owner during the End Phase of the next turn. Cannot attack. Your opponent cannot target this card for attacks or by card effects. You can Tribute this card; Special Summon 1 "The Winged Dragon of Ra" from your hand or Deck, ignoring its Summoning conditions, and if you do, its ATK/DEF become 4000.

F/L Status: Unlimited (TCG/OCG)

[crude pelican]

wait Ra have the potential to be busted i think

[long spruce]

[goyo]

[viral tapir]

Goyo Guardian

Level: 6
[ Warrior / Synchro / Effect ]

ATK 2800 / DEF 2000

Effect

1 EARTH Tuner + 1+ non-Tuner monsters
When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle and sends it to the GY: You can Special Summon that monster to your field in Defense Position.

F/L Status: Unlimited (TCG/OCG)

[crude pelican]

this one is an absolute Tier 0

[long spruce]

2800 is a little less than 6000+

[crude pelican]

its effect tho is still busted and mine apparently is way more broken

[long spruce]

Goyo guardian has a good effect for it's time, yes

As a Link-4 it might be ok since it wil only proc once since it will surely be removed immediately by effects

[crude pelican]

so i think it goes like this:
1000 ATK for each link material
remove or replace the 2nd effect
last effect either need a SOPT or a HOPT

more nerf?

[long spruce]

Wha

[crude pelican]

is it still busted?

[long spruce]

Ok so you're making something interesting now

Lemme read properly

Minimum 2k, max 4k base... Last effect is can return the card to the deck (you have lots of searchers afterall). Give it a OPT effect negate on a card it points to (change the arrows)

This can be your top Link

So 3 top, 1 bottom arrow

[crude pelican]

omni-negate for such a card will be busted. what about a stardust-like effect that only protects monsters and without tributing?

[long spruce]

Ok, once per turn destruction protection on the pointed cards

[crude pelican]

fair enough then in that case link markers must stay the same right?

[long spruce]

Yes

[crude pelican]

ok that's the best nerf

i will say perfect.

not busted yet still not irrelevant

[long spruce]

See? It's possible

Now make traps

[crude pelican]

aren't they useless when it comes to beatdown strategy due to their slow nature?

[long spruce]

Have effects like infinite impermanence

So extra bonus if used as normal traps

[crude pelican]

yup especially the last bonus

[long spruce]

[infinite impermanence]

[viral tapir]

Infinite Impermanence

Effect

Target 1 face-up monster your opponent controls; negate its effects (until the end of this turn), then, if this card was Set before activation and is on the field at resolution, for the rest of this turn all other Spell/Trap effects in this column are negated. If you control no cards, you can activate this card from your hand.

F/L Status: Unlimited (TCG/OCG)

[long spruce]

I'm sorry but what's the second effect for??

Like, you're just going -1

[crude pelican]

reusability

[long spruce]

For no.benefit

Oh, from the graveyard

[crude pelican]

let me fix it

[long spruce]

It's a counter trap too uhm

Ok so, you could actually just make the second effect activate from the field

And it would be ok!

1 turn stalling

[crude pelican]

how about this is it busted?

[long spruce]

Why is it a counter trap?

[crude pelican]

for fast response also to avoid negation

[long spruce]

You added "or activate their effects" yes, that would be busted

[crude pelican]

ok ill remove it

[long spruce]

Go second and use this. Congrats you won

[crude pelican]

i removed it done

[long spruce]

Nice

This is a 3rd turn card btw

Which uhm

[crude pelican]

irrelevant?

[long spruce]

Clearly not the best

We need to rethink it

[crude pelican]

so add the effect negation again?

[long spruce]

No because going second would make it busted

Your opponent wouldn't be able to play

Just discard the card and let's think again

[forest vortex]

Dark World heavy breathing

[long spruce]

Look, ofc this card is good if you reach turn 3

But ya need to reach it

[crude pelican]

how about keeeping the same effect and instead of going to the GY it goes back to your hand

[long spruce]

As I said, the effect like this is good but ya need to reach turn 3

While going second

So uhmm

[crude pelican]

how about adding a 3rd effect to activate from the hand

[forest vortex]

No