#Custom Cards

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mental snow
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what could be a good stipulation

wintry juniper
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most decks just auto-lose to that card cuz they can't handle having 4 of their 6 zones locked

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i'd love to but frankly i actually cannot read those

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(i am on mobile which doesn't help)

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the text is too small even when zooming in

mental snow
mental snow
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Good card, good card, but

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What does it do against indestructible monsters?

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[Borrelend Dragon]

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Ah, the bot doesn't work here

crude pelican
mental snow
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You know, since the ATK boost effect doesn't activate until the Battle Phase

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I could activate Scarlight Red Dragon Archfiend and pop it

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What if you make the ATK boost permanent?

crude pelican
wintry juniper
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i'll look through it more closely in a bit cuz i'm at work but it seems decent enough while skimming

crude pelican
mental snow
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So I could get rid of your card with a generic pop

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or with Borrelsword

crude pelican
mental snow
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It's an ok card

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It's good

crude pelican
mental snow
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Ah, now this is a good one

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Mostly because it has no once per turn stipulation

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Also because it summons from DECK lmao

crude pelican
mental snow
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The problem is, these cards seem to work differently if going first or second

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If you go first, you can't activate the destroying effect, or the GY effect

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If you go second, your opponent will probably have a resistant field that can either prevent this card from activating it's effect

crude pelican
mental snow
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Add Once per turns to these cards bruv please

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Also some PSCT would be great

crude pelican
forest vortex
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Just curious how could I word this differently to minimize the Text lenght?

mental snow
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Here you go

crude pelican
forest vortex
mental snow
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The dots make the card look weird

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But it's basically Levianeer + Dark Ruler No More in terms of PSCT

crude pelican
mental snow
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This one's a little harder to read

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End your opponent's turn?!

forest vortex
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First one is a generic negate wtf

mental snow
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Also it has a couple typos and no once per turn

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In Bash Wolf, you gotta specify from where it's discarded

forest vortex
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Put atleast a condition on the negation Effect of the first one

mental snow
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Hand, field, GY?

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The problem with all these cards is that they're too low leveled but have absolutely insane effects

forest vortex
crude pelican
mental snow
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Usually omninegates need lots of materials

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But if you can summon a Level 3 monster and instantly end your opponent's game

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That's not a good card

forest vortex
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They need atleast a High Activation cost or a specific condition

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Just throwing them in the GY is nothing

crude pelican
mental snow
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Ya see, a good card is one that gives you an advantage but has at least one weakness that can allow your opponent to play the game

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Baronne has an omninegate but it can only be used once

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Griphon has an omninegate but it shuffles back after using it

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If you make a card that's just "I win lol", then it's not realistic

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It's not a good custom

crude pelican
# forest vortex Just throwing them in the GY is nothing

the cyberspace archetype playing style goes like this:

  • main deck monsters/spell cards have effects that swarm the field ASAP and have recycling/searching floating effects to recover fast
  • extra deck monsters: link beaters that have unique effects and some other links that have swarm effects to cheat boss monsters
crude pelican
mental snow
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Both cards are broken, in the sense that they're poorly designed

forest vortex
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Every single Deck can run that just for the first Effect

crude pelican
crude pelican
mental snow
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If they're sent to the GY, they have effects in the GY

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Also they have omni-immunity

forest vortex
crude pelican
forest vortex
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Are you kidding?KEKW

mental snow
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This cards CAN DO IT EVERY TURN

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They don't have once per turn stipulations

crude pelican
mental snow
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Nor they leave the field after activated

forest vortex
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Quaser is a Level 12 Synchro that needs 3 Synchro Monsters to even be made legit

crude pelican
forest vortex
crude pelican
forest vortex
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With what Card do you want to cheat Quaser out yes

crude pelican
forest vortex
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Cool. So you still need two Synchro Monsters (one of witch a Tuner) on the Field to even make it. Still not as broken as a Omninegate with no cost or condition

crude pelican
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ruby: a programming language used primarly in web development it associated with horses and steeds due to the relation between the elegance of horses and the beauty of rubies

forest vortex
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Where do I return the Monsters from for the first Effect?

crude pelican
lament bronze
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Noodle
[Level 5/Light/Fairy/Fusion/Tuner]
2 monsters Special Summoned from the hand, Deck, and/or GY. 
ATK 2000 / DEF 2000

Spicy Noodle
[Level 5/Fire/Fiend/Fusion/Effect]
"Noodle" + 1 monster Special Summoned from the Extra Deck. 
If this card is Fusion Summoned: You can add 1 "Instant Fusion" or "Ready Fusion" from your Deck or GY to your hand. You can only use this effect of "Spicy Noodle" once per turn. 
ATK 2100 / DEF 2100
crude pelican
boreal tendon
crude pelican
boreal tendon
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  1. It does not matter whether or not it is your thing or not, there are multiple ways to approach design, critizing someone just for not making cards to suit your exact playstyle is idiotic.
  2. The literal only thing it stops is effect looping, it's the closest thing yugioh has to a resource system, and ignoring it proved multiple times to make the game unsufferable to play and almost killed it, look no further than the wind up inzektor format, or gishkill/firewall for that matter
crude pelican
forest vortex
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In what Year of Yugioh are you playing where we need a Monster that can Shit out a Link 3 or lower from the Extra Deck on Normal Summon?

boreal tendon
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How else would i be able to out ariseheart if i can't summon unicorn by breathing?

forest vortex
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We do need something for that Sangan OTKclueless

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Can't belive they made 70 Cards just for Blue Eyes in the Year 2537

crude pelican
boreal tendon
forest vortex
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[ bad reaction to simochi]

viral tapirBOT
boreal tendon
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Also like

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You're making a cyberse archetype

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Surely you know that accesscode exists, right?

forest vortex
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It doesn't even lock you in to anything. It just lets you summon whatever

crude pelican
boreal tendon
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Then you know that even with the lp gain, you can still otk extremely easily

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So the "cost" might as not be a thing at all

crude pelican
boreal tendon
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Gonna be honest your card just does way too much

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It's a special summon that also summons any link for free that's also a reborn that also adds 2 cards from the deck by itself

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And not once per turn

crude pelican
boreal tendon
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Calling it "broken" is misleading in my opinion

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It's more a "very poorly designed" sort of thing

crude pelican
boreal tendon
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You are aware that instant fusion is on the banlist for a reason, right?

crude pelican
boreal tendon
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Wrong

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It's just free card advantage, specially in the context of stuff like [kitkalos], for example

viral tapirBOT
# boreal tendon It's just free card advantage, specially in the context of stuff like [kitkalos]...

level Level: 5
[ Aqua / Fusion / Effect ]

ATK 2300 / DEF 1200

Effect

1 "Tearlaments" monster + 1 Aqua monster
If this card is Special Summoned: You can take 1 "Tearlaments" card from your Deck, and either add it to your hand or send it to the GY. You can target 1 monster you control; Special Summon 1 "Tearlaments" monster from your hand or GY, and if you do, send the targeted monster to the GY. If this card is sent to the GY by card effect: You can send the top 5 cards of your Deck to the GY. You can only use each effect of "Tearlaments Kitkallos" once per turn.

crude pelican
boreal tendon
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And yours isn't?

crude pelican
boreal tendon
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Surely you don't need someone to tell you that in a game that most cards only have 2 effects, with the playmakers of the deck maybe having 3, a card with 5 effects and no restrictions stands out like a sore thumb

boreal tendon
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No one really talks about it because it's an obvious one, to be honest

crude pelican
boreal tendon
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Out of curiosity, how familiar are you with playing the game in general?

crude pelican
boreal tendon
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Maybe try looking at some recent archetypes to see how they are designed, preferably ones that don't have cards on the banlist

crude pelican
crude pelican
boreal tendon
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Wouldn't necessarely say so

boreal tendon
forest vortex
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There are a Labrynth for example who use a lot of Traps or Runics with their Quickplay Spells

boreal tendon
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Stuff like engage not being once per turn is balanced by both the fact it's on the banlist and the fact that the deck can only access it once

dire leaf
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Strikers aren't in the meta rn.

forest vortex
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If Big Beaters where still a huge Problem Blue Eyes would still get talked about outside of people being annoyed that they still get Support

dire leaf
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And Strikers have like 1-2 effects on all of them.

boreal tendon
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All of their link monsters only able to be summoned once, and the deck having only 2 main deck sky striker aces also help in that regard

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That as well

crude pelican
forest vortex
boreal tendon
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Learning from one's mistakes is apparently a myth

forest vortex
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I am actually impressed that you made these two and thought "Yeah these are not a Problem at all" considering that the previous one can shit out Links

crude pelican
crude pelican
boreal tendon
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I mean

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I never have much trouble with mine, if i'm being honest

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Most of the regulars here usually don't make egregious mistakes, either

crude pelican
boreal tendon
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Not exactly

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A lot of the people here haven't played the game competitively in years, let alone if they ever did in the first place

crude pelican
boreal tendon
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My guy

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No offense

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But how many excuses can you make?

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If you have the free time to create 50 custom cards you probably also have the free time to try and understand how the game works as well

crude pelican
golden lynx
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Luster Bleak Wyvern
Link 3 (Up, B. Left and B. Right arrows)
Wind Attribute
(Dragon/Link/Effect)
ATK - 3100

3 Normal Dragon monsters, including "Luster Dragon."

When this card is Link Summoned: You can take 1 Normal Dragon monster from your Deck, and either add it to your hand or put it on the top of your Deck. You can target 1 Dragon monster you control or in your hand, Special Summon 1 Normal Dragon monster from your hand or GY, and if you do, place the targeted monster on the bottom of the Deck. If this card is sent to the GY by card effect: draw 1 card for each copy of "Luster Dragon" used as material for this card's summon. You can only use each effect of "Luster Bleak Wyvern" once per turn.

crude pelican
forest vortex
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I revisited some Cards and I think they are ok? Maybe?

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The destruction on Ozen is probably too much though

crude pelican
crude pelican
boreal tendon
crude pelican
thick charm
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ok back reading these are indeed cards

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(reminder for myself to post floo 2 in here)

quiet spindle
crude pelican
lament bronze
crude pelican
crude pelican
lament bronze
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Fusion Recipe
[Normal Spell]
Reveal 1 non-Effect Fusion Monster in your Extra Deck, and if you do, add as many of the Fusion Materials listed on that card that are non-Effect Monsters, as possible, from your Deck to your hand, then, you can add 1 " Polymerization" from your Deck or GY to your hand. You cannot Special Summon Effect Monsters the turn you activate this card. 
crude pelican
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@lament bronze 1 fusion recipe + 1 dragon's mirror + 3 blue eyes = 2 blue eyes ultimate first turn

lament bronze
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yeh but that's not even good

crude pelican
dire leaf
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Blue-Eyes Ultimate is not a good card.

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Most of the cards needed for it aren't good either.

crude pelican
lament bronze
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cuz you just have 2 non-effect monsters that don't do shit for the cost of about 5 bricks ? and you can't summon effect monsters that turn ?

dire leaf
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Sure, but that's what it is, a big beatstick that does nothing else.

lament bronze
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unless you are summoning 2 on a clear field while still being able to attack, you ain't doing shit.

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you can't even otk if they have monsters.

crude pelican
crude pelican
dire leaf
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Another bad card to add more numbers isn't changing the fact that all of this is pretty bad to run/play.

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Plus a standard board has many ways to deal with it, either negate, pop, or float or any combination.

lament bronze
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how many bricks do u need lol

crude pelican
lament bronze
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engine my ass.

dire leaf
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Tell that to the 90% of hands you drew that did nothing because of all BEWDs clogging it.

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And even when you miraculously get to the spell, the end board is still BEUD, a beatstick and hope that enough into an established board.

lament bronze
crude pelican
forest vortex
crude pelican
forest vortex
viral tapirBOT
# forest vortex <:KEKW:622347587516628993> who cares about a Vanilla Beatstick? [Chaos Ancient G...

level Level: 10
[ Machine / Fusion / Effect ]

ATK 4500 / DEF 3000

Effect

4 "Ancient Gear" monsters
Must be Fusion Summoned and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. Unaffected by Spell/Trap effects. Your opponent's monsters cannot activate their effects during the Battle Phase. This card can attack all monsters your opponent controls, once each. If this card attacks a Defense Position monster, inflict piercing battle damage to your opponent.

crude pelican
red dust
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control

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????????????????????????????

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you summon this so you can win on that turn

forest vortex
red dust
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you don't use this for control

crude pelican
red dust
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what?????????????

forest vortex
red dust
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it's a fusion that needs 4 materials

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nobody uses this card

crude pelican
red dust
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you have to go -4 in card advantage to summon this

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it's not worth it

forest vortex
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I use it as a last reserve with [Overload Fusion]

viral tapirBOT
red dust
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your opponent can just negate the fusion spell

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and then you wasted your entire hand on nothing

crude pelican
forest vortex
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I rather summon any other Borrel Dragon

crude pelican
forest vortex
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Because theye are better then this

crude pelican
lament bronze
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never good. just a funny card.

quiet spindle
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Although I have a feeling I might be wrong

dire leaf
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The wording is fine.

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Waking the Dragon can summon ED mons because it wouldn't make sense otherwise. It can't summon Rituals as well.

crude pelican
dire leaf
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No.

crude pelican
nimble iron
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I thought red reboot was a good counter to stupid shit like d barrier etc, but reboot was just broken af, so yeah,

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Deffo downgraded

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Its an upgraded 7 tools

quiet spindle
quiet spindle
nimble iron
dire leaf
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Waking can't summon Rits.

quiet spindle
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Bruh

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My whole life was a lie I am going to commit cs

nimble iron
quiet spindle
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I mean it IS too overpowered to exist tbf

nimble iron
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Or else you get flip Harpie feather storm dp gg go next?

quiet spindle
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So I dunno what form it shall take or not

nimble iron
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I'm a strong believer in everything should have a counter play, no matter how niche it is

quiet spindle
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Oh you mean yours...

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Yeah yours is fine imo

swift frost
crude pelican
forest vortex
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Did you make these in 1 Minute?
There are a lot of Errors in the Text.
Earth: I can barely make out what the first Effect even does.
Wind: First Effect needs a opt if not even a hopt. Second Effect is bad. Third Effect is too good cause you just Rip 3 Cards out of your Opponent's Hand without even banishing yours Face Down.

golden lynx
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Des Fractal
Level 5 - Dark
(Fiend/Flip/Effect)
2100/1950

FLIP: You can draw 1 card for every face-down "Des" monster you control, then Flip this card face-down. This card cannot be flipped face-up a second time the turn you activated this effect.

If you control a face-down monster, you can Special Summon this card (from your hand in face-down Defense Position) then you can Flip that monster face-up. Face-Down monsters you control cannot be targeted by monster effects. When this card is Normal or Special Summoned: You can add 1 "Des" Monster or 1 Flip Monster from your Deck to your hand, then you can Flip this card face-down. Each time a Flip Monster you control is Flipped face-up, you can draw 1 card. You can only use each effect of this card once per turn.

crude pelican
forest vortex
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Do your Cards need to be send from the Field to the GY? If not then it's wasted Card Text cause you could just send them there with a other Card Effect that Profits from sending Monsters to the GY like [Raigeki Break] as a example or just with [Foolish Burial]

viral tapirBOT
crude pelican
forest vortex
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A other Octhros version

forest vortex
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A Field Spell mostly for the Tour Guide-like Monsters i made recently
Is the 600 DEF necessary so Burning Abyss can't use it or could it go?
Or is it overall too weak or good enough?

thick charm
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the 600 def restriction isn't really needed in this scenario

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since you aren't really going to be using the burning abyss main deck monsters as beatsticks

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it looks fine balance wise (maybe a bit on the weaker end) but I'm also not sure how powerful you want the cards to be

sacred parrot
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Level 6 DARK Fairy/Effect
ATK 1400/DEF 1000
You can Special Summon this card (from your hand) by discard 1 other DARK monster from your hand. You can only Special Summon "Corrupt Choju of the Trillion Hands" once per turn this way. If this card is Summoned: You can add 1 DARK Ritual Monster and 1 "Contract with the Power of Darkness" from your Deck to your hand. You can only use this effect of "Corrupt Choju of the Trillion Hands" once per turn.```
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Ritual Spell
This card can be used to Ritual Summon any DARK Ritual Monster from your hand or GY. You must also Tribute monsters from your hand or field and/or banish DARK monsters from your GY, whose total Levels equal or exceed the Level of the Ritual Monster you Ritual Summon. During your Main Phase, except the turn this card was sent to your GY: You can shuffle 3 of your banished DARK monsters into the Deck; add this card to your hand. You can only use this effect of "Contract with the Power of Darkness" once per turn.```
sacred parrot
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Level 7 DARK Fish/Ritual/Effect
ATK 2350/DEF 2150
You can Ritual Summon this card with "Contract with the Power of Darkness". While you control a Field Spell, this card is unaffected by your opponent's card effects. You can only use each of the following effects of "Dark Fortress Whale" once per turn. If this card is Special Summoned: You can target 1 card on the field; send it to the GY, then if there is a Field Spell(s) on a Field Zone, draw 1 card. If this card is destroyed by battle or card effect and sent to your GY: You can banish 2 other DARK monsters from your GY; Special Summon this card.```
crude pelican
# forest vortex A other Octhros version
  1. Need more text improvement.
  2. Last effect can be useful for fiend decks that use swarming as a playmaking strategy you can literally make a beater asspull with that
crude pelican
crude pelican
nimble iron
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Opt?

dense matrix
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So I'm planning to make a custom card with some cool effects but before that I want to ask if you can put stuff like once per a match or for the rest of this match on a card?

lethal pecan
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Infernoid Monolith
Link-2, FIRE, Fiend, Link, Effect, 1500, ⬆️⬇️
2 “Infernoid” monsters with different Levels
For this card’s Link Summon, you can also use monsters in your hand as Link Material as if you controlled them. If this card is Link Summoned: You can send 1 “Infernoid” monster from your Deck to the GY; take 1 “Infernoid” monster from your Deck with a Level lower than the sent monster’s, and add it to your hand, or send it to the GY. You can only use this effect of “Infernoid Monolith” once per turn. Once per turn (Quick Effect): You can Tribute 1 monster; “Infernoid” monsters you control gain 500 ATK until the end of this turn. Cannot be used as Link Material during the turn this card is Link Summoned.

tulip kelp
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and its kinda questionable what kind of card you would want to make that would have one of those lines on it

forest vortex
quiet spindle
dense matrix
nimble iron
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No

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Victory dragon was banned for this reason
at least one of the reasons it's banned

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There should not be a card that has no counter play, least of all no way to side an out

quiet spindle
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I mean using it first duel and siding it cuz it would be a brick is probably all it will do if it were to exist, but dunno have fun after all who am I to judge

forest vortex
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Basicly another Lair of Darkness because I saw [Muckraker From the Underworld] doesn't use DARK Monsters for it's Effect

viral tapirBOT
# forest vortex Basicly another Lair of Darkness because I saw [Muckraker From the Underworld] d...

Rating: Link-2 (⬅⬇)
[ Fiend / Link / Effect ]

ATK 1000

Effect

2 Effect Monsters
Cannot be used as Link Material the turn it is Link Summoned. If a monster(s) you control would be destroyed by battle or card effect, you can Tribute 1 Fiend monster instead. You can target 1 Fiend monster in your GY, except "Muckraker From the Underworld"; discard 1 card, and if you do, Special Summon that monster, also you cannot Special Summon monsters for the rest of this turn, except Fiend monsters. You can only use this effect of "Muckraker From the Underworld" once per turn.

forest vortex
crude pelican
sacred parrot
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Quick-Play Spell
Negate the effects of as many opponent's monsters as possible equipped with "Flint", and if you do, inflict 300 damage to them for each. If a "Flint" card(s) you control would be destroyed or banished by an opponent's card effect, you can banish this card from your GY instead. You can only use each effect of "Flint Shocker" once per turn.```
long spruce
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ah yes, back to my favorite niche chat on a big server

long spruce
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time to make some cards i guess

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what "C" should i make today

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let's look at Ms.Guide cards and try to counter them

long spruce
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ok i got my idea, more general stuff tho

boreal tendon
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Quick-Play Spell
Apply these effects for the rest of this turn.
● Any card banished face-up is banished face-down instead.
● Banished cards cannot move to a different place.
● The amount of cards currently banished is always treated as 0.```
sudden palm
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thanks, i hate it

boreal tendon
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Love to hear it metaphys player

thick charm
long spruce
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wip

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wording problem as usual

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Choccy i require assistance ;-;

boreal tendon
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Lemme see

long spruce
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"When your opponent summons a monster: You can special summon this card to your opponent's side of the field in Attack Position and declare 1 Type of monster; banish all the face-up cards with the declared Type and negate their effects. If this card is summoned this way, this card becomes immune to card effects for 3 turns and cannot be Tributed or used as material for a Fusion, Xyz or Link Summon."

boreal tendon
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"When your opponent summons a monster: You can declare 1 Type of monster; Special Summon this card from your hand to your opponent's side of the field in Attack Position, and if you do, banish all the face-up cards with the declared Type. Cards banished by this effect cannot activate their effects. When Summoned this way: This card is unaffected by card effects for 3 turns and cannot be Tributed, or used as material for a Fusion, Xyz or Link Summon."

long spruce
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ty

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now, is it balanced?

boreal tendon
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No

long spruce
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maybe just have it as 1 turn

boreal tendon
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Not even that

long spruce
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lmao

boreal tendon
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It's just evenly matched as a handtrap

long spruce
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understandable

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then just not summon more monsters?

boreal tendon
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Maybe put on a 5 summon counter like nibiru does

long spruce
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mhhh

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alright i'll go read Nibiru

boreal tendon
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Wait

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Hold on

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I may have misread your card

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Does it have to be on the field to activate?

long spruce
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no

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...

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i only make handtraps

boreal tendon
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I mean

long spruce
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and one Link abberration

boreal tendon
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You didn't put in the text that says that it summons itself from the hand

long spruce
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WHICH IS AN EXTRA DECK TRAP

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because i always forget

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me dum

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this boy here

long spruce
# boreal tendon You didn't put in the text that says that it summons itself from the hand

"If your opponent Normal or Special summoned 4 or more monsters of the same Type this turn (Quick Effect): You can declare 1 Type of monster; Special Summon this card from your hand to your opponent's side of the field in Attack Position, and if you do, banish all the face-up cards with the declared Type. Cards banished by this effect cannot activate their effects. When Summoned this way: This card is unaffected by card effects for 3 turns and cannot be Tributed, or used as material for a Fusion, Xyz or Link Summon."

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how do i make it declare one of the types of the monsters banished only?

crude pelican
long spruce
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ok but i'll make a "C" card to counter it

long spruce
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like

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as of rn, even if they summon Dragon i COULD declare Fish

crude pelican
# long spruce like

it's called cyberspace
design: card designs are based on computer science concepts and information technology tools tools
strategy: swarming the field ASAP to bring out strong boss monsters

long spruce
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show

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anti-swarm is what i'm best at

crude pelican
boreal tendon
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Don't exactly see the issue tbh

long spruce
boreal tendon
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I guess you could put

long spruce
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i guess no need to add that tho

boreal tendon
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"You can declare 1 Type of monster that the opponent Summoned this turn."

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Do note there is no psct precedent for this tho

long spruce
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i'm good at finding those ig

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XD

crude pelican
long spruce
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i've made 4 cards and 3 of them have no precedents

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i don't have a problem ok???

boreal tendon
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Well

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It's certainly a interesting design space to say the least

long spruce
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@crude pelicantell me you have more than the boss monsters

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i mean, you've seen my cards

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dunno if you remember me but eh

crude pelican
long spruce
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i remember you helping ^w^

long spruce
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@crude pelican ya sure ya wanna make those monsters summonable with tokens? ;-;

crude pelican
long spruce
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use this card maker btw, better quality images

crude pelican
long spruce
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oh

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you don't save them as max quality?

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or is it discord being funny and compressing?

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@crude pelicanAngular dragon is uhm

crude pelican
long spruce
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you out it with removal and no other way

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and even then, it protects itself

crude pelican
crude pelican
crude pelican
long spruce
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WHAT THE ACTUAL FUCK IS HOOKCLAW

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"what does it do?"
"yes"

boreal tendon
#

Somehow not the most blatantly over the top card he made for the archetype

long spruce
#

i mean

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balance isn't a thing to him, we already know that XD

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lemme read the last card ya shared

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the last link i mean

crude pelican
boreal tendon
long spruce
#

ok so

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backbone does not work

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like, at all

crude pelican
long spruce
#

it doesn't say it can attack again

#

forgor XD

boreal tendon
long spruce
#

it doesn't say it gains one additional attack

boreal tendon
#

4th line

long spruce
#

and 1 additional attack

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does not say it gets one more

crude pelican
long spruce
#

wait wha

boreal tendon
#

1 additional means 1 more tho

long spruce
#

is it written correctly then?

boreal tendon
#

Yes

long spruce
#

damn

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well then, i take it back

long spruce
#

i see now

#

it screams advantage

forest vortex
#

You should really try to just rewrite your Cards after getting some critique instead of just making new ones AltairConcernedFroge

long spruce
#

@forest vortex look at my new baby NyanGun

crude pelican
crude pelican
long spruce
#

3 turns counts for the turn it's summoned, right?

#

if so, i should make it 2 to make it more balanced

#

...

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ok this card is a little too much

#

lemme go for the original idea

#

just have it not summon more monsters of the Type

#

banishing everything is not what i want from this card

forest vortex
long spruce
#

lemme fix stuff then

crude pelican
long spruce
#

OH FUCK

#

THE CARD ISN'T WORKING AS IT'S SUPPOSED TO

#

lmao

#

i completely forgot to write that part

#

ok so

#

If your opponent Normal or Special summoned 3 or more monsters of the same Type this turn (Quick Effect): You can declare 1 Type of monster; Special Summon this card from your hand to your opponent's side of the field in Attack Position. When Summoned this way: This card is unaffected by card effects for 2 turns and cannot be Tributed, or used as material for a Fusion, Xyz or Link Summon.

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from here i need to add the effect to

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the opponent cannot summon cards from that Type

#

i have no idea how this card ended up as another entirely XD

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guess i have 2 XD

crude pelican
long spruce
#

THIS IS A SEARCH 3

forest vortex
#

Jesus!peepoCross

boreal tendon
#

Ok so

long spruce
#

wait wha

#

it continues

#

WHY

crude pelican
long spruce
#

WHY IS THERE MORE

boreal tendon
#

Are you REALLY SURE that you're not making these on purpose?

forest vortex
crude pelican
crude pelican
forest vortex
#

They both have banishing effectscheems

long spruce
#

ok so that's a search 3 for any monster in your deck basically that you KNOW you'll play because you can choose

#

also it has ANOTHER EFFECT once used

#

bro

boreal tendon
#

This is not even a yugioh custom card anymore

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It's a fucking vanguard card

long spruce
#

lmao

crude pelican
#

here's a good nerf : you can only use it once per duel

boreal tendon
#

IT DOESNT SOLVE THE PROBLEM

forest vortex
crude pelican
boreal tendon
long spruce
boreal tendon
# crude pelican why

It's the yugioh equivalent of calling your opponent an ambulance that will arrive in 2 hours after you shoot them 78 times

forest vortex
#

It's a Archetypel Draw 3......that is reason enough to never be okDemiSasuga

boreal tendon
#

Not draw 3

#

Add 3

boreal tendon
#

It's engage on crack

crude pelican
forest vortex
long spruce
#

altair

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isn't your deck like

forest vortex
long spruce
#

MADE to use your cards in hand???

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also why does it have it's other effects???

#

pot of greed is BANNED

#

POT OF GREED IS A DRAW 2

forest vortex
#

That Carbo Crab you made is more then enough in terms of draw power allready tooAWAAAAAA

boreal tendon
#

Altair

#

Have you ever wondered

#

Why people put restrictions to their own cards?

crude pelican
long spruce
#

altair i have an idea

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rate this card

boreal tendon
#

This man

#

Is trying to justify

crude pelican
boreal tendon
#

That ishtear 2 but better is ok

crude pelican
#

what about now

boreal tendon
#

It's still a +2 by itself

forest vortex
#

Also what was that talk about your Cards don't have anything to do with banishing if they all have Effects relating to it?cheems

crude pelican
boreal tendon
#

"Just 5 or 6"

crude pelican
forest vortex
long spruce
#

@crude pelican

boreal tendon
#

Nah

#

It doesnt have a gy effect

crude pelican
long spruce
#

WAIT YOU CANNOT WIN IF YOU GO SECOND

#

LEMME FIX

#

wait no

#

still not enough

#

perfection

#

BEHOLD

#

BALANCE

crude pelican
boreal tendon
#

Make it unaffected by the banlist

long spruce
forest vortex
# long spruce

If this Card is in your Hand: You win the entire Tournament.

boreal tendon
#

Konami is also forced to pay you the hotel fees

forest vortex
#

Just do it! Nothing is sacred anymore!

crude pelican
boreal tendon
long spruce
#

i wanted to make it activate from the side deck but why restricting yourself to that

crude pelican
long spruce
crude pelican
long spruce
#

only way to balance it is to make you pay your LP

#

ALL

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how do i read that?

boreal tendon
#

You don't

long spruce
#

ok thanks

boreal tendon
#

That mechanic does not even exist in the game

long spruce
#

what does making 1+ means??

#

creating advantage??

crude pelican
boreal tendon
#

The only thing close to it is anime zarc

#

The anime version of the card, to be exact

long spruce
#

i swear i cannot read that card

#

what's the intended effect?

forest vortex
boreal tendon
#

Is "Except many times up to" even a coherent sentence in english

#

Not my first language so i can't exactly be sure

crude pelican
long spruce
boreal tendon
#

Something something miyamoto rushed game bad forever

forest vortex
long spruce
#

"SEND YOUR OPPONENT TO THE GY" LMAO

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i mean

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we like to joke and all but deep down we know that Altair just likes to make anime banned cards

forest vortex
#

I mean some of them look ok. But most of them are....you knowConcernedFroge
If they wouldn't all want to be the Playmaker of the Deck that would be really nicePeepoRain

long spruce
#

i should make a an archetype

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i like to make "C" cards tho

#

they funny

forest vortex
#

I thought about a C Archetype too at some pointpepeSmug

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Never had a Gameplan for them though except just being annoying as fuckk

long spruce
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i don't wanna make a "C" archetype because i KNOW i would just have in my hand all those juicy "C"s and maky my opponent just not play

#

remember my Kaiju? yea

#

that's already a bitch lmao

crude pelican
long spruce
forest vortex
long spruce
#

not yours

viral tapirBOT
forest vortex
long spruce
#

uhm

crude pelican
forest vortex
boreal tendon
#

Congratulations

long spruce
#

man

#

also like

forest vortex
crude pelican
long spruce
#

why is it a removal negation up to 3 per turn AND THEN a negation by itself OR a field wipe after a board effect negation

forest vortex
#

It's also on a generic Link 3.....

long spruce
#

i'm avoiding that part

#

1+ monsters

boreal tendon
crude pelican
long spruce
#

ok but

#

other cards exist

#

like

#

your cards

#

existing cards

#

you look at stuff in a bubble

forest vortex
#

I also just noticed it can come out of any Link 3 Monster cause it only needs 1 Monster

long spruce
#

you make cards that do everything by themselves

forest vortex
long spruce
#

uhm

boreal tendon
#

Thing is

#

Xyz and links are different mechanics

long spruce
#

completely unrelated question

boreal tendon
#

That are designed differently

crude pelican
#

i added these cards to ygopro by the way

#

i wrote the code of their effects all by myself

boreal tendon
#

You can't just slap one mechanic on top of the other one and expect it to work out

long spruce
#

if there was a card that said something like "the targeted card is considered a trap card for the rest of the duel" would that work?

boreal tendon
#

Uhhhhhhhhhh

#

Maybe?

forest vortex
#

I think?

long spruce
#

ok but

long spruce
#

uhm

#

what about "the card is considered a pendulum"

crude pelican
long spruce
#

would it go to the extra deck??

boreal tendon
#

No

forest vortex
#

Nah

long spruce
#

whyy

boreal tendon
#

The effect wears off when it leaves the field

long spruce
#

i see

forest vortex
#

It does need the extra bit on the Card

long spruce
#

i'm cooking

#

cooking ruling nightmares

boreal tendon
#

Can't be as bad as last turn, at least

crude pelican
long spruce
#

"the targeted card's effect is replaced by "Last Turn"'s effect for the rest of the duel"

forest vortex
long spruce
forest vortex
long spruce
forest vortex
#

But why would you want to?KEKW

long spruce
#

because lunch

boreal tendon
forest vortex
#

Winning by threatineng your Opponent to be broke if it hits lol

long spruce
#

OH OK I SEE

#

SPECIAL SUMMON FOR NO COST BUT A BENEFIT

forest vortex
#

Hopt is nowhere to be seen. As usualHahaa

long spruce
#

ALSO PROBABLY PROC A GY EFFECT OF THE CARD SENT THERE

#

oh

boreal tendon
long spruce
#

also

#

like

#

search a card

#

OH

#

there's more

#

why

#

why's there more

forest vortex
long spruce
#

as a lvl 3

boreal tendon
# long spruce why's there more

Balance is dead and it all started when a monster with 2100 atk decided to special summon itself if only the opponent controlled a monster

long spruce
#

ok but no

#

just no

#

Altair, how would you add a third pendulum scale? I'm curious

forest vortex
#

I will never forgive Cyber Dragon!

#

Angy Joseph Joestar

forest vortex
long spruce
#

no ok, let's really talk about that cheetah

long spruce
forest vortex
long spruce
#

how to use this card:

forest vortex
#

GuidPog Pascal

long spruce
#

discard a cyberspace card and special summon it

#

trigger the gy effect of said monster and do something ig

forest vortex
#

The first Effect is more then enough and even then it almost crosses the line

long spruce
#

summon if into the field and do something else with it

#

add 1 cyberscape CARD from your deck to your hand

forest vortex
#

Again with the "being send to the GY or Banished" stuff tooMeh

#

What is this? Goukis?

boreal tendon
#

No no

long spruce
#

use the cards on the field to make one of those funny link monsters of the archetype

boreal tendon
#

You can banish it from the gy so you can trigger it again

#

It's better gouki

long spruce
#

add another card like before

forest vortex
#

Gouki Season 2

long spruce
#

i just...

#

why...

boreal tendon
#

Gouki but on crack, the writers are the same ones that made pre errata firewall, it's post pote support, and go is a rush duel player"

#

All at once

forest vortex
#

You can only use the effect of "Pascal" once per turn. You can discard 1 Cyberspace monster; Special summon this card from your hand.

#

That's it

#

That's the Card

long spruce
#

yes

forest vortex
#

There is nothing else there

long spruce
#

and it would be good

boreal tendon
#

This reads like a salamangreat card

long spruce
#

it's pure advantage ffs

boreal tendon
#

A.k.a a good thing

long spruce
#

maybe limit it to 2

forest vortex
#

It should not roleplay as a Playmaker

long spruce
#

we shall play a game

forest vortex
#

Or Mariks Egyptian Ra for that matter

long spruce
#

"balance Altair cards"

boreal tendon
#

Aight

forest vortex
boreal tendon
#

Aight lemme see

long spruce
#

first 2 lines are ok

crude pelican
crude pelican
forest vortex
long spruce
#

You can reveal 1 'Cyberspace" Monster in your Hand except this Card to your Opponent and if you do Special Summon this Card If this Card is Special Special Summoned: You can Draw Cards equal to the number of "Cyberspace' Monsters you control or in your GY but Send all Cards in your Hand to the GY dunng the End Phase_ If this Card is Normal Summoned: You can Return i Banished 'Cyberspace' Card to your Hand. If this Card is Banished or Sent to the GY: Add i 'Cyberspace' Card from your GY or Deck to your Hand except "Cyberspace Rust Crab".

#

(to help)

boreal tendon
#

It really is the same solution to all of them huh

crude pelican
long spruce
#

WAIT

forest vortex
#

ApparentlyGoblol

long spruce
#

WHY CAN IT DRAW CARDS EQUAL TO THE MONSTERS IN THE GY

#

OMFG I DIDN'T READ THIS CARD

forest vortex
boreal tendon
#

This is the worst stand up comedy show i've ever seen

#

And it's not even one

crude pelican
long spruce
#

"You can reveal 1 'Cyberspace" Monster in your Hand except this Card to your Opponent and if you do Special Summon this Card"

fixed

boreal tendon
#

Drulers and tear got there first

crude pelican
forest vortex
#

YeahKEKW

long spruce
# crude pelican

why can i special summon a LINK 3 MONSTER FROM THE GY if i special summon this card for free?

#

wait

boreal tendon
#

I'll just start assuming this is just an attempt of baiting from now on

long spruce
#

it summons another one ignoring it's summoning conditions

#

WAIT OMG

crude pelican
long spruce
#

GUYS THIS EFFECT IS USELESS

#

OMG

boreal tendon
#

It's pretty clear you don't have any intent to improve

thick charm
#

i'm going to comment that almost every card i read in this archetype has been really fucking broken (cough link 3 that casually banishes 3 from hand cough)

long spruce
#

HIS LINKS HAVE NO SUMMON CONDITIONS ALREADY

boreal tendon
#

Pog!

crude pelican
forest vortex
# crude pelican

Holy shit @boreal tendon !
You are right these things can be balance if you remove all but the first SentenceKEKW

long spruce
boreal tendon
#

Yea

#

This is just a really elaborate attempt of trolling

long spruce
#

i'm loving it

crude pelican
long spruce
#

make something balanced

#

try less words

forest vortex
#

This feels like a "Card Design is my Hobby" Meme

long spruce
#

like

#

the shortest effect i can think of is "Draw 9 cards"

crude pelican
long spruce
thick charm
#

yeah i read design pattern

long spruce
thick charm
#

casually rota 4

#

or well 3

long spruce
#

and returns to deck :)

thick charm
#

he did edit it looking back

long spruce
#

OOOH you saw the lite version

#

lmao

thick charm
#

oh

long spruce
#

i'll just say it again

#

Pot of greed is banned.

#

"Draw 2 cards"

boreal tendon
#

And pot of desires got on the banlist too

#

And sekka's light

forest vortex
#

Did you guys read the Bahamut Cards too btw?
Cause 40+ high level Synchro Monsters for one Archetype is a thing apparently

thick charm
#

ok a few just general comments

  1. How powerful do your cards have to be? Currently this would almost immediately replace Tear and powercreep the game to hell and back due to just how much they do.
  2. You don't need to cram a ton of effects onto a card. Not every effect has to be Endymion.
#

wait i have a 3

#

well this ties into 1 but

thick charm
#
  1. Establish why you're making these cards; do you intend to play this relatively casually on DB customs?
#

or is it something else

boreal tendon
#

Mighty master is only wordy because spell counter wording is convoluted

thick charm
#

Custom card formats do exist but they tend to be lower powered

boreal tendon
#

Not because it has 5 effects

thick charm
#

true

#

but my initial point stands in that unless it's general PSCT fuckery (Spell Counters, Dark World) your text shouldn't be essays

boreal tendon
#

The worst part about the snoww incident is that there's no way to word it to be easier to read while also keeping the effects intact

long spruce
long spruce
#

make new ones if needed

boreal tendon
#

[Snoww]

viral tapirBOT
# boreal tendon [Snoww]

level Level: 4
[ Fiend / Effect ]

ATK 1700 / DEF 0

Effect

If this card is discarded to the Graveyard by a card effect: If it was discarded from your hand to your Graveyard by an opponent's card effect, you can target 1 monster in your opponent's Graveyard; add 1 "Dark World" card from your Deck to your hand, then Special Summon that target (if any) in face-up Defense Position.

crude pelican
thick charm
#

this card does a lot

forest vortex
#

Do you just ignore everything that gets talked about in here?myah

#

I don't even need to read more then the secons Sentence for it to be too good. Jesus

crude pelican
forest vortex
#

THEN WORK ON THEM BEFORE EVEN POSTING THEM HERE!
We write the whole time why these should be nerfed to hell and you still post them anyway without even thinking to rewrite them

boreal tendon
#

This channel shares a total of 2 braincells at any given time

forest vortex
#

I am going to sleep now

long spruce
long spruce
crude pelican
thick charm
#

ok now I’m morbidly curious

civic estuary
#

slitherion, the mecha emo snake of despair
level: 8
machine/effect
attribute: dark
effect: you can sacrifice 500 of your life points; give this card more 200 ATK and other monsters have to attack it.
cannot be summoned unless you have a "dark seraph" card

#

what is psct

civic estuary
#

btw you did get why its called slitherion? its a layered reference

#

"slither" as in a snake moving and "slitting" as in cutting something

#

its supposed to be like a gx era card

long spruce
long spruce
#

First of all, you don't sacrifice life buy pay it

#

You sacrifice monsters

civic estuary
#

and secondo desu?

long spruce
#

I am bad at writing but allow me to try

civic estuary
#

"slither" as in a snake moving and "slitting" as in cutting something

quiet spindle
long spruce
#

This card can only be summoned while having a "Dark Seraph" on the field. During your opponent's turn (Quick effect): You can pay 500 Life Points; this card gains 200 ATK until the end of the turn. Monsters your opponent controls must attack this card if able.

quiet spindle
#

I mean 200 isn't really that much tbf

long spruce
#

Wanna see how to fix this card?

civic estuary
quiet spindle
#

It seems I don't...

civic estuary
#

"slither" as in a snake moving and "slitting" as in cutting something
its a giant mecha snake with two blades fused together and with hair bangs

quiet spindle
#

I don't get where the joke is, the name is just appropriate for the image as you explain it

civic estuary
quiet spindle
#

Ok it seems I ain't smart enough to get this and will not get it soon, but the fact ramains that 200 is not much...

long spruce
#

This card can only be summoned while having a "Dark Seraph" on the field. During your opponent's turn (Quick effect): You can pay 500 Life Points; this card gains 200 ATK until the end of the turn. Monsters your opponent controls must attack this card if able. Instead of you, your opponent takes the Battle Damage you would have taken from battles involving this card.

#

Pay 500 to deal I dunno, 6k?

quiet spindle
#

You just made it's quick effect worthless

long spruce
#

Conditional ofc

#

Yes but you see

#

I didn't wanted to touch it

quiet spindle
#

Yeah joke so on I dunno

long spruce
#

I'll just

quiet spindle
#

I got that part

long spruce
#

This card can only be summoned while having a "Dark Seraph" on the field. During your opponent's turn (Quick effect) pay 500 Life Points; this card gains 200 ATK until the end of the turn. Monsters your opponent controls must attack this card if able. Instead of you, your opponent takes the Battle Damage you would have taken from battles involving this card.

#

Here, now it's mandatory

civic estuary
long spruce
#

A... Level 6...

#

Mhh..

#

Anyway ya forgetting stats

civic estuary
#

attack: 2313
def: 2313

long spruce
civic estuary
#

also youre missing another inside joke
the dark seraph is supposed to be the main character of despair metamorphosis, aka the story im writing
kazuma neverchange dusk nameless, aka the dark seraph of despair

long spruce
#

Why

#

those stats are absurd

civic estuary
#

aka another inside joke

long spruce
#

Inside joke for yourself only

#

Personal joke

#

Either way, suit yourself

#

Trying to make a full deck...?

civic estuary
#

basically, in the story people play a card game called card slasherz
slitherion is supposed to be kazumas arc card there

long spruce
#

So it's not Yu-Gi-Oh?

#

Btw what are the stats on Slytherion?

civic estuary
#

attack - 3000
defence - 2500

long spruce
#

Ok it cannot be used then

#

Too high attack for the effect

#

Not that it doesn't work, just that it wouldn't be useful

#

3200 is too high to have your opponent be burned

#

Could still destroy some small monsters but mhe

civic estuary
#

thats the point

long spruce
#

->

#

Make a field spell now

#

Emo territory

#

Oh btw, the cost to summon the first card is too high to ever make it worth it

#

@civic estuary unless you make pendulum monsters ig

civic estuary
long spruce
#

I mean, I shouldn't take this seriously to begin with

#

Ignore my suggestion XD

#

You can make an emo deck and make it work

#

Cards that pay LP for good effects

#

Just try to balance LP and effects

#

Oh and

#

Why not basing your boss monsters around rituals?

#

So make mosnters that if used for a Tribute gain advantage

forest vortex
#

Or just Vampires

long spruce
#

Shush

forest vortex
#

Blood for the Blood God

long spruce
#

Emo vampires

#

I'm a masochist apparently

#

Wanna see more Altair's cards

civic estuary
long spruce
#

time to show more funny cards, buckos

long spruce
#

alright i'll make more cards myself

#

time to make an archetype

#

pendulum dragon deck

forest vortex
#

Made this a while back
Psct is garbo but you can make out what it can do

long spruce
#

uhm

#

you need 3 monsters at least to make this card

#

have an archetype in mind for it?

#

nhaaaa

#

UH

#

I SAW A MESSAGE

#

@forest vortexNyanGun

forest vortex
#

My Internet is Shit right now so it can take a while until the other two show upHahaa

forest vortex
long spruce
#

anyway make it so IF it's destroyed by a card effect while being equipped to a monster it gets on the field once per turn

forest vortex
#

Maybe I get back to them after I look through some Fire Monsters

long spruce
#

nvm

#

anyway, i'm now reading Pendulum rulings to make the cards lmao

#

OH NO

#

OH NO I GOT AN IDEA

#

new "C" card incoming

forest vortex
#

Good luckemoji_18
Only Pendelum Card I ever made was a Shitty Summoned Skull version

long spruce
#

i'm about to fuck pendulums

#

and not only!

forest vortex
#

Not only what?

long spruce
#

this probably doesn't work but

#

funny

long spruce
#

would be too restrictive

forest vortex
#

I don't think that's too bad/good honestly

#

But maybe it should banish the Face up Cards in the Extra Deck instead

long spruce
#

but i wanna be funny!

#

also Ishizu exist

#

i want those cards to NEVER be interacted with

forest vortex
#

Me and my 30 Card Extra Deck lmao

long spruce
#

Altair?

forest vortex
#

Nah I meant that it would look like you have a 30 Card extra Deck because the Pendulums are face down

long spruce
#

oh yes

#

very funny

#

i mean, you can already achieve that without this card

long spruce
#

ok i'll be changing my cards

#

i cannot just have blank artworks because "C" cards require the sparkly eyes and all

forest vortex
#

Royal "C"?

long spruce
#

but the other cards TwT

#

also the deck i wanna make isn't "C" support and i cannot see Royal "C" effect atm

#

maybe later

#

anyway

#

i'll fucking use only mimikyus lmao

#

this guy, the one that inspired Disguised "C"

#

because eyes

#

@forest vortexi require assitance

#

what letter would fit?

#

CC?

#

...M?

#

mhe, i would like to keep "C"

#

but don't wanna go in conflict with the real cards

#

fuck it, i'll make it a Fiend type and DARK

#

"M" it is

forest vortex
#

Why would you not want to use C? It's not like they have a Card that makes them a Archetype or anything

long spruce
#

but MHEEE

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the eyes thingy

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i'll just do my thing

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damn you compression

forest vortex
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It just blocks off the Extra Zone?KEKW

long spruce
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Upgraded Kaiju

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Also gives YOU a Link zone

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viral tapirBOT
# forest vortex This is the Pendel Skull btw. Its 5 because I wanted it to be played with [Archf...

level Level: 3 | pendscale Pendulum Scale: 7
[ Fiend / Pendulum / Effect ]

ATK 800 / DEF 1000

Pendulum Effect

You can target 1 other Spell/Trap Card on the field; destroy both it and this card. You can only use this effect of "Archfiend Eccentrick" once per turn.

Effect

You can Tribute this card, then target 1 monster on the field; destroy it. You can only use this effect of "Archfiend Eccentrick" once per turn.

forest vortex
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It's not verry goodpeeposhrug

long spruce
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Give it a lower scale maybe?

forest vortex
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Maybe 3?

forest vortex
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Should a Summoned Skull Link Monster have 6 Link Arrows?

pure eagle
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“6 level/rank 6 monsters”

long spruce
crude pelican
long spruce
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I'm pretty sure that if you would attempt to summon tokens with different names you would have to mention their specifics for every one of them, even if they were to be the same

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Why ya need different names?

long spruce