#Art and Writing
fiery jungle
golden summit
Hmm, is it just me or does it look like the egg is sinking inwards?
warm vale
As it got wider I kinda fucked up the scales
And everything went to shit
We getting there though
I can tell you one thing for sure
I fucking need to figure out the best pen for drawing like asap
warm vale
Another thing I have just remembered about heritage.
Cordelia’s family and Tia both hate eachothers guts
And keeps calling Tia a graverobber.
Although its more Tia despises Cordie's family. Like a one sided thing 
warm vale
I did I think. I might have another look through it tomorrow
analog stone
This is it. This is the peak reader-author conversation after a character dies.
earnest flame
fiery jungle
Onyo she drank his brain juice
tribal thicket
Peko coded.
fiery jungle
Perhaps the real Peko is the Evil Twin we find along the way
warm vale
The artist draws a LOT of NSFW that's visible instantly if I linked it but the pixiv source is 127363412
radiant orchid
This is it. This is the peak reader-author conversation after a character dies.
They should've just read ur mind and known ahead of time smh
warm vale
This is it. This is the peak reader-author conversation after a character dies.
When I kill someone in Heritage this is the reaction I hope to achieve
warm vale
paleos
clever linden
those are clearly paleos
golden summit
MARELLA SPOTTED
Why'd they have to give them those eyes tho
Their actual eyes are so much cuter
Leancholia is adorable in their style at least
golden summit
Yes
Idk why olenoides over dinomischus, but sure
The usual paleo splash is marella leancholia dinomischus
Or just marella dinomischus with no leancholia
fringe fable
I honestly forgot about that archetype for a second there. 
She looks so happy there to have real pets too.
hard furnace
hard furnace
golden summit
Took me a moment to realize these were paintings. Legit looked like floaty sculptures for a moment. Well done.
The dragon's feet could have used a ground reference thing to help them be at even lengths, but it's still solid work
hard furnace
Took me a moment to realize these were paintings. Legit looked like floaty sculp...
I draw them on a white board lol
thick wigeon
Hello ender dragon
cedar socket
So I had some character ideas.
They're cliche af, but I still think I cooked.
Mouri Sousuke - the 'Hero'. Respects his best friend Ryo. Despite being down horrendous for pretty girls and a hopeless romantic, he wouldn't expel his best friend even if a pretty girl told him to. Uses lightning magic and thinks quickly. Very imaginative. He and May are tied for the fastest in terms of both movement and attack speed.
Ryou Lee - the 'Chef'. Sosuke's classmate. A genre-savvy young man with resourcefulness and tenacity. Despite his 'support' class, he is skilled at fire magic and his innovative cooking keeps the team together. He is capable of predicting outcomes with relative accuracy. The actual main character.
Shy - the party's 'Mage'. An elf otaku obsessed with human culture who ran away from the elven kingdom in the forest. Is actually the princess of the House Violett, the current rulers of the elven kingdom. More oriented for support, as she dislikes fighting up close and personal. Uses the advanced size and illusion magics, making her one of the most powerful magicians in the current generation. May or may not be in a love triangle with Sosuke and Ryo.
Hachisuke - the other 'Mage'. A magic octopus-like intelligent creature that uses water magic and its tentacles to fight. Snarky, but capable of translating for other intelligent magic creatures by latching onto their faces. Ryo's first companion who he met after attempting to cook him. Requires water to survive.```
Terrence - the 'Knight'. A tag-along guest member who appears as needed or whenever he's free. The captain of the royal guard has a lot on his plate after all. He serves as a sort of existence to surpass for Sosuke and Ryo to strive toward, as their mentor figure and mutual rival. He uses earth magic and a defensive fighting style, and is physically the strongest. Even with the boosts being sent to another world brings, Terrence keeps up with and even surpasses our heroes through hard work and sheer determination.```
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hard furnace
warm vale
You know what might be a good idea for me to draw instead of characters
When I was young I was a star wars freak and would draw the various ships in a battle
Maybe I should do non-human designs
For Heritage
Like Blair/Alei's staffs, Kasumi's Meteor Hammer, Blake's Rifle, etc.
And leave humans to people who understand anatomy beyond "mmm. Boi waist."
Cause God knows what hell would be unleashed if I could draw a femboy
warm vale
I had an idea walking to work today
Have literally any of the actual dragons that show up in Heritage be ridden.
And then when landing
Akira slide down a street
And just EVISCERATE IT
warm vale
I should double down on that idea. And just drift through the air too
modest oar
warm vale
I made it to Night of Thunder I in my revisioning again
And I might be biased
But I think it might actually be my favourite chapter
Maybe it can do without the Blake Kasumi sibling bickering but the entire back third of it is chefkiss with Allison and Jaye
radiant orchid
ngl writing in second person sucks why did i decide to do this
deep hatch
third person limited free indirect, my beloved
warm vale
Wtf even is second person
tribal thicket
You opened your phone as you always do, and then stared at the message. The words were simple yet together their meaning eluded you. You type "Wtf even is second person" and press send.
next cradle
warm vale
You opened your phone as you always do, and then stared at the message. The word...
Cease this. I hate it.
That's actually horrible
What the fuck
I thought first person was bad
tribal thicket
I thought first person was bad
???
viscid bobcat
?
tribal thicket
Bro hating on all in-universe narrators.
analog stone
...fuck
someone actually left a "your fic is better than canon" comment on my story
@clever pecan like fuck
analog stone
okay but this is fucking insanity right
clever pecan
I mean everyone has an order of their favourites, so why not one where yours is on top 
analog stone
because it’s a fanfic
analog stone
but it’s a fanfic
clever pecan
Dantes Inferno is a fanfic
clever pecan
Foolish is right, good writing is good writing, no matter the medium
analog stone
but it’s a danganronpa fanfic
clever linden
but it’s a *danganronpa* fanfic
If anything that explains it how you made it better than the canon
analog stone
yami i will consume your soul
golden summit
Hand it over, that thing, your dark soul.
copper stump
radiant orchid
You opened your phone as you always do, and then stared at the message. The word...
warm vale
I realised something
And its too early in the morning for this kind of mental toll
So Lexi has her scarf right. That her mum gave her to use to hide her scales.
And takes it everywhere she goes
Now I have just had it come to me
There is another Dragon related magic user
In the world of fiction
Obsessed with a scarf bequeathed from a parent
At this point I'm really fucking happy I moved Lexi away from her dragon jesus thing and stuck with lightning
The good news is the scarf was a Mk II addition so I'm safe from actually having it in mind in the OG version
fiery jungle
I love how artist used the more iconic manga/anime version of Multiply because the card version suck ass
fiery jungle
They apparently visualize madolche effect/attack by... feeding their opponent
gleaming quarry
hard furnace
DUDE THAT RAYQUAZA LOOKS AWESOME
gleaming quarry
thank you i spent 4 hours on it
modest oar
X
warm vale
I found this
In the depths of Heritage'a notes
Blair had a kraken (tentative name: Sucky McSuckface)
fiery jungle
Owo
warm vale
There is a lot of just
Terrible ideas
Locked in this folder
Like when Lexi had 0 control over her power output and was basically just on a timer until she just fucking died (not literally but just physically couldn't fight anymore)
Which got thrown out in Mk II
Also when the group gets isekai'd and Lexi is a crazed tyrant, Kayla has magic and gets trapped as a dragon, an alchemist literally named Alchie Mist, errr.
A boss rush of a illicit guild whose entire thing is Arcana related.
Damn there was some dog shit in here
Oh and what probably would be the single worst moment in the series
When Remy just fucking iron maidens a big bad.
That's uuh. That was an idea 
Which tbh I'm still not totally against
golden summit
Iirc the Iron Maiden wasn't actually used as a torture device, but rather built as a "look at what cool torture devices they had back then"
There are far, far naster torture devices you could use
fiery jungle
So it's more recent thing?
frozen shale
Since we can get to the cool stuff
Like boiling people in oil, thumbscrews and Spanish Donkeys
golden summit
The breaking wheel
golden summit
So it's more recent thing?
Yep
It's the mall ninja equivalent of a torture device
It's so incredibly popular nowadays that there is still a reason to use it in media, but it's not a historical torture device.
fiery jungle
Ahh I see
Yeah I even see it being used in Berserk
And Miura tends to historically accurate leaning when it comes to medieval stuff
Then again Conviction arc was 1998, twas the age when internet still hard to come by to debunk the misconception
golden summit
Information has been made more accessible yeah
And nobody is perfect. He put in a lot of effort, but mistakes are inevitable
analog stone
Is it weird that I have to write cruel and unusual methods of death for my story on a regular basis and yet I really don’t like torture scenes in things
viscid bobcat
no
analog stone
like i just had a teenager’s arms and legs ripped off by chains after she was forced to dance
yet somehow
actual “torture” fucks me up
hard furnace
like i just had a teenager’s arms and legs ripped off by chains after she was fo...
No visuals?
analog stone
No visuals?
No, I get uncomfortable reading even like The Pit and the Pendulum
hard furnace
No, I get uncomfortable reading even like The Pit and the Pendulum
Maybe it’s the fact you have control. A big part of torture is the victim being basically powerless so maybe you’re unconsciously feeling more control because you’re writing it
weak patrol
It's the mall ninja equivalent of a torture device
I like this sentence
warm vale
Iirc the Iron Maiden wasn't actually used as a torture device, but rather built ...
Yeah but it was more of just. She executes this man using it rather than torture
She uses her weird metal liquid thing to like trap him
And just stabs him all over at once using it
It was just Iron Maiden sounded like a cool name for the move
golden summit
It was just Iron Maiden sounded like a cool name for the move
That's cool then
warm vale
analog stone
One of my regular readers hasn’t commented on the new thing I posted a few days ago yet
I dunno
Just slightly worried I guess
clever pecan
They might just be busy
warm vale
Broke: Imagining OCs in an anime OP
Woke: Imagining OCs in an anime ED
I've started doing this. And its kinda
lunar storm
Quick sketch of vegerot
warm vale
I'm nitpicking the final fight in Heritage atm Fayne vs Lexi/Cordie/Alex
and I'm putting a lot of the starter stuff in this
Cause Fayne monologues and boasts shit too much
they had her YAPPING
warm vale
I think it's finally time to lay to rest the whole rampancy nonsense in Heritage too. It never genuinely comes up again and its like two scenes and the first is genuinely never actually shown and the other is just where I just need Lexi to run a fade against Fayne.
I can still at least let Lexi run the fade cause who isn't gonna want to put hands on the person who killed their parent. Just not actively try and kill Fayne.
We solve just. every problem
clever pecan
Why are you rewriting it?
warm vale
It always seemed like a mess. even by my own admission and someone who read it in another server it was hard to follow.
and just goes too overboard
and how badly Fayne gets fucked up
Like.
Cordelia
the canonically magically powerless but one of the physically strongest
just fucking stunts on her
clever pecan
Right
warm vale
So instead of it being like a boss fight where they all get a turn piecing Fayne up like they're phases
it's gonna be the boogie woogie
2v1 straight on and not forgetting Fayne is actually stronger than Lexi
clever pecan
I mean the key part of a fight is choreography
Who is and isnt strong doesnt really matter
warm vale
I think
I'm starting to realise a problem
Not with Heritage in particular but I'm tending to notice I'm usually really good with beginnings and the actual meat of the story
But at the endings
I kinda fall flat 
Like Shattered I was barrelling along. Good progression. Nice story forming. And then bang. I realise the ending I had for it
Just does not work
Even after the Fayne fight Heritage's final chapter is legitimately just wonky and undercooked kinda badly
Maybe after resolving this
I should work on Gods' Game.
It's hard to fuck up an ending to a Battle Royale. All I have to do is make sure the right person wins
clever pecan
It's hard to fuck up an ending to a Battle Royale. All I have to do is make sure...
Looks at basically every battle royale in recent times
You sure?
Hell most of the time a battle royale ends with the battle royale dismantled
warm vale
In Chrys we trust
warm vale
*Looks at basically every battle royale in recent times*
hard for me to fuck up
tropic brook
yo if you want to do some research into battle royales, i have a great show to recommend you
warm vale
I know exactly who wins. How the 2nd/3rd place die. Even the last line of the entire thing.
I cannot possibly fuck it up.
clever linden
yo if you want to do some research into battle royales, i have a great show to r...
idt Yuri is ready for peak
tbh
tropic brook
idt Yuri is ready for peak
you dont even know what i woulda reccomended
clever pecan
I think we all know that Yami did know
tropic brook
i could have said one of the urobutchi shows that were inspired by it
clever linden
tropic brook
yeah fate is a battle royale, inspired by the og, kamen rider ryuki
clever linden
And the Urobutcher did work on a fate...
warm vale
I can also watch Future Diary
tropic brook
fate zero, for example
clever pecan
Ryuki is like
warm vale
I do need to rewatch that at some point actually
clever pecan
The grandfather of good Battle Royales
warm vale
Also when I feel like rotting my own brain afterwards
I can do shitpost work on Killer Queen
tropic brook
clever pecan
You dont have to work on every idea
warm vale
The half decent ideas. The shitposts. They never end.
warm vale
You dont have to work on every idea
Honestly if I don't they just float around in my head like worms
It took me 3 days to finally stop thinking about KQ
And I only managed to because I thought about it enough to name it
And it was a banger title for a shitpost
And then realised I do not know enough to write that without it turning into the back half of fight club
clever pecan
Write them down and then just keep working on the same story
Because right now it feels to me like you dont focus enough on any of them
warm vale
Never ends. Never ends. Never ends.
Three Laws. The End. And. Maybe something I've not come up with yet could be just short stories
Since they're not very complex
warm vale
Because right now it feels to me like you dont focus enough on any of them
The only ones I focus on are Heritage and Multiverse
Although after I realised I have no genuine way to kill a specific character the entire ending became unravelled
And that needs fixing but instead I ran away to tinker with Heritage
Leading to this current nightmare of a final fight rewrite
Which tbh is going smoother than expected
Because it's not gonna end up with Fayne half dead missing more teeth than a prize fighter
Just a heavily bruised ego and a broken wing.
clever pecan
I mean Im just saying, your writing appears to be messier than mine
golden summit
Tbf that's not hard, your writing is clean
warm vale
It's not the writing per se
just the process
also I forgot it's gouge
not gauge
Professional english speaker
also I'm tryna work out cordie's sword movements
using one I have
and my new cat keeps wandering around my room getting in the way
golden summit
Give them PETS
warm vale
I'm busy
I'm tryna plot how Cordelia tears out Fayne's wing.
Which is technical terms for being able to swing a sword around my room without feeling like a weeb
golden summit
It's your room, look like whatever you want
clever pecan
Tbf that's not hard, your writing is clean
The writing might be, the process sure isnt lmao
warm vale
The process is never clean
cedar socket
can confirm sometimes.
warm vale
warm vale
I found another reason to miss access to fanfic
I want to go back and read the discussion in Mk II heritage about using "Second Generation" to describe the other Dragon Mages in this.
Time to submit the scolding ticket I guess
golden summit
Yeah do so
warm vale
Submits ticket
gets access
Forgets to ask for perms to actually read it
Also whoever did it originally spelt archived wrong 
shut sparrow
Oh it's cause you're part of everyone and everyone has view channel disabled
weak patrol
archievement unlocked
tropic brook
Oh it's cause you're part of everyone and everyone has view channel disabled
Should still work, no?
warm vale
Haven't you just missed me causing new and wonderful problems for mods to solve
tropic brook
Individually giving sight is how i did it for copper
shut sparrow
Try now?
warm vale
lemme reload discord
got it
Arigathanks
PAst me
was a true crackhead
although that idea is still kinda a banger
BUT IF YOU CLOSE YOUR EYES. DOES IT ALMOST FEEL LIKE NOTHING CHANGED AT ALL
warm vale
also I finally found this again
warm vale
So
I have playlist on, re-done fight finished, alls well ends well
Until
and I start thinking of the ending to part 2
and realise Heritage literally ends on the exact same note.
Like it literally ends with a letter from Erika to Lexi making contact again.
Although I really fucking love BTTF, even unintentional I need a new ending tho
This has just reminded me that's on my to do list.
warm vale
question
If a line is a character's internal thoughts. Should I put it in dialogue tags as well as italics or just italics no tags
I think I might do just italics. and do italic + dialogue tags for when Blake and Charlotte are signing to eachother.
golden summit
Up to you, but keep it consistent across the book
You can also use free indirect discourse or something
warm vale
deep hatch
if im not doing free indirect id do just italics, yeah
warm vale
I remembered something
and
I need to remove it
Because looking back it is borderline mental illness to have done this.
I forgot that I use names of my actual friends back in the day split up across different characters
but it was one specific friend with specific things.
And I've realised how fucking menhera it is to do this.
golden summit
I think I might do just italics. and do italic + dialogue tags for when Blake an...
For singing, you can go the Tolkein route
Which is separate
The song entirely
If it is a complete
Song worth reading
warm vale
Signing not singing.
golden summit
Ah
warm vale
lol
For singing I just go the route of trying to avoid as much of a copyright strike as possible.
Like in multiverse one variant sings their kid to sleep using fly me to the moon. and I absolutely horseshit it so badly it's funny.
This is like all there is to specifically tie it to Fly Me to the Moon
and the entire scene closes on this.
which is chefkiss of a closing
I also specifically picked fly me to the moon cause the variant's world is the one that got hit by the meteor again
in a "Second Impact of K–T-like asteroid"
modest oar
X
clever pecan
You might want to have someone look over your story Yuri, I think youre missing some commas
warm vale
I despise commas
I spit on them
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ew7C-Luw6kfpXkux5q3cSZU2qlEwzPBTI_xOJgMiXyg/edit?tab=t.0
But if anyone does want to read Multiverse. Here's the "completed chapters so far" draft
clever pecan
I mean I assumed as much, but Im like 3/4 there within just one year
warm vale
This is like. Start until quarter to mid-way(?) through the second act.
clever pecan
That means nothing without knowing the number of acts
warm vale
generally it's 3
1st act, 2nd act, 3rd act.
Except in this it's literally just called "Part One." "Part Two." "Part three."
Although Part 3 doesn't have a name yet
clever pecan
Hello World
clever pecan
Also I just took a quick look and you probably should get someone to look over it, or do a second pass yourself
The grammar is messy
I cant say anything about the actual writing, just that there really need to be more commas
And maybe split up sentences
golden summit
Bro, commas are a staple
nocturne karma
use semi-colons and em dashes
golden summit
You want to make reading as convenient as possible for your readers
You want them to enjoy your plot, not stumble over grammar.
Being adamant over your writing when asking for criticism will also limit how much others can help you (to a degree. It is your story and must remain YOUR story, so being adamant sometimes is good.)
clever pecan
Foolish is right
I would know it, he helps me with my story regularly
(Remind me to thank you in the book if it ever gets published)
golden summit
"Regularly" whenever my disorganized ass remembers how fucking good his writing is
clever pecan
Hey that is regular enough
golden summit
(Remind me to thank you in the book if it ever gets published)
Owo
I'm doing this because you're my friend, I like reviewing writing, I really enjoy your writing, not for recognition
nocturne karma
I don't use this channel much because I've realized I don't really like other people's ideas all that much, but it does have its uses sometimes
golden summit
Ain't that a mood
Sometimes my brain screams "This idea is WROOOOOOONG" when I see something being executed in X way instead of Y
nocturne karma
"hey this character should be like this" YOU ARE NOT ME, MY BRAIN IS MINE, DIE
clever pecan
I'm doing this because you're my friend, I like reviewing writing, I really enjo...
I mean true, but I can still give you recognition as well >:)
clever pecan
I don't use this channel much because I've realized I don't really like other pe...
Tbh if you ever want to bounce ideas, I check this channel regularly
golden summit
You can, and I won't lie, I do like it :3
clever pecan
Ironically I started asking Foolish when he wasnt active on this server and it just kinda stuck
golden summit
Tbh if you ever want to bounce ideas, I check this channel regularly
I think he just said he doesn't want to do that
But yeah, you're always welcome to do so
I could use this channel too
The problem is I barely touch my writing
I wanted to write a slow-burn romance but the pair is already having dinner together (admittedly purely for business reasons)
clever pecan
I mean, thats still a good start
warm vale
Bro, commas are a staple
I know but I have to have stupid hills to pretend to die on
nocturne karma
Tbh if you ever want to bounce ideas, I check this channel regularly
sure
warm vale
I know but I have to have stupid hills to pretend to die on
I think partly the way i talk and how I read back my shit has fucked up my ability to use commas
golden summit
Then it's a weak point you can work on
A CHANCE TO IMPROVE 
You gotta keep moving forward, improving one inch at a time, like a drill
cedar socket
Say… anyone down to read a draft?
golden summit
Ashing Laundry is wild
Like, okay man, grass good?
Or fucking Balance of Judgment draw 8?
Ashing laundry vs Paleo is just bruh
You veiler Laundry every time.
clever pecan
No no Im with him
Also man the White Forest art really makes me wish we got like
An actually written version of the story
Or an animated one
nocturne karma
Or an animated one
too bad
you will watch your YOUTUBE SHORTS and you will enjoy it
golden summit
Ray vtuber?
fiery jungle
Chance are I'm just gonna make legally distinct version of my son
warm vale
warm vale
Cursed note found from an earlier Heritage draft where the catgirl was also named after Bella.
I read that and took psychic damage to the point I got angry
hard furnace
Cursed note found from an earlier Heritage draft where the catgirl was also name...
Same here
cedar socket
I'm writing more.
The seventeen-year-old blond, thin and tall for his age, found himself locked up in a cell in a juvenile detention center on charges of property damage.```
charred flare
tropic brook
Gore of my comfort character on the tl 😔
https://x.com/sawan_cutman/status/1895720902157090934
X
charred flare
Approve my art.
golden summit
What?
warm vale
I'm really glad I have access to past fanfic now because I'm finding shit I genuinely forgot I even shitposted about
like this brings absolutely nothing to mind
Oh
it's a fucking, Gustav
LMAO WHAT THE FUCK WAS THIS
I really was just different in the head back then wasn't I
warm vale
BUT IF YOU CLOSE YOUR EYES. DOES IT ALMOST FEEL LIKE NOTHING CHANGED AT ALL
clever pecan
I really was just different in the head back then wasn't I
Thats arguably less insane than some of the stuff you say nowadays
deep hatch
so im redoing the nightclub chapters in the neo fanfic (largely removing the exposition chapter and just having it go from journal entry to mid-fight scene)
which means i wanna have neo do an actual fight against another semblance user, buuuuuut that means i need to figure out a semblance for the guy
he's a nightclub owner, and leader of a recently formed (by him) crime ring specializing in information brokering, blackmailing, that sorta stuff
the fight takes place on the dance floor of a fairly crowded nightclub, so it's one of those things where there's a lot of civilians just huddled in corners away from the action
first idea was the basic 'he gets stronger with every person looking at him' but a straight up buff isnt really all that interesting
now that i think of it, it could be some kind of like sound wave manipulation thing, that would be pretty thematic for a nightclub owner
could also just. steal a jjba stand ability and rework it a bit, but thats just plagiarism with more steps
clever pecan
I'd say a semblance that works both for his public and secret persona would work best
Invisibility maybe?
Or stealing someone's senses for a period of time
Though probably not all at oncr
deep hatch
I'd say a semblance that works both for his public and secret persona would work...
diavolo
i like the idea of stealing someones senses
feel like invisibility would be too difficult to differentiate from neo's ability
cos they can just Do That Too
shapeshifting could actually work, especially if its on the level of like shapesmith or w/e
public n secret persona are just different forms
radiant orchid
I really was just different in the head back then wasn't I
understand where this is coming from LMAO, but like, compelling or emotional wouldve gone better than good here
warm vale
You know what I genuinely do not even remember the context of this question
It was 100% about Tia and Kayla in Heritage
But the actual prompt for it
Is lost to time
cedar socket
Sometimes, I get ideas that are unexpectedly rehashes of something else.
warm vale
There's arguably nothing truly unique and everything can be hit by "you got this from X"
Like Heritage and FT
Or whatshisnames superhero thing and the first thought in my head about it being The Boys
It's why Tropes are a thing
Because things appear so often they're just part of the genre.
Like you can say C.S. Lewis got the portal travel for Narnia
From Dante
Who is the biggest hack in all of history
The only problem is how obvious it is
Heritage has FT embedded basically in its DNA. But it's far removed from its original version that was more overtly FT inspired
A better example
Any fantasy work and Tolkein
Bro has had more stuff taken from his works than Israel has taken land.
nocturne karma
Who is the biggest hack in all of history
that would be Alan Moore
warm vale
Idk who that is
viscid bobcat
he wrote watchmen and many other things that are not as good as watchmen
he looks like a wizard and is famously kind of a jerk
hearty meteor
Oh yeah, I remember people being upset by him
nocturne karma
he looks like a wizard and is famously kind of a jerk
understating it, he's awful
hushed pelican
WIP of my new Yu-Gi-Fake, who's actually the boss of a whole new archetype
Make way for Classicastle Duke Dillon, who rules his Classicastle with an iron fist. Able to destroy an opponent's cards and hit them with scorching fireballs that deal 1000 LP a hit by Tributing his minions, he'll do anything in his power to stop heroes from conquering the Classicastle and rescuing the Duchess.
cedar socket
Any advice for drawing heads in profile?
warm vale
Pushing my burgeoning art skills to their absolute limit trying to draw Blake’s rifle
I fucked up the stock badly
golden summit
That looks like an old rifle
warm vale
It is meant to be since it's lever action
It's what Blake uses in Heritage.
It's pissing me off I can’t get the stock right
golden summit
Pushing my burgeoning art skills to their absolute limit trying to draw Blake’s ...
This one was better
warm vale
I've been on the train two hours and idk why I ever tried to draw while riding
This thing swings about like a roided bull
golden summit
Some of my best writing was done on public transport
warm vale
Same but drawing is a whole other breed of annoying on a rickety train
fiery jungle
clever pecan
My story now has 40000 words
warm vale
I feel like these consuming yummy arts warrant spoiling
X
Ogre not being front when she's the eldest is heresy
warm vale
Ash is responsible more than ogre
golden summit
No Ogre means no Ash
No Veiler means no Ogre
No Kuriboh means no Veiler
It's all the fault of that grimy hairball
warm vale
I love r/writing
frozen shale
All you need is Stephen’s old favourite powder
clever linden
I love r/writing
Yes. The limit is 1 Yuri
warm vale
Yes. The limit is 1 Yuri
Are you missing a comma there
clever pecan
No 
vague rover
my march daily animations so far
deep hatch
everyone i used to write with on tumblr has either gone indefinite hiatus or converted to a genshin impact/honkai star rail writer
this timeline sucks, man
hearty meteor
vague rover
For day 4 I wanted to see how many frames ahead I could put the trails before it looked bad. I ended up at 5 frames.
cedar socket
I drew again.
cedar socket
I meant this.
cedar socket
So... yeah.
hearty gazelle
I drew again.
Id say getting a figure you can pose to reinforce your anatomy understanding would be a good way to improve, it'll allow you to think about things in 3d space
deep hatch
ikea has a great one, if theres one near you
i need to get one myself just to have a lil guy
warm vale
So I've never solidified Lexi or Fayne's wingspan
and I was tryna think like
who in media would have canonical wingspans
ANGEL FROM X-MEN HAS A FUCKING SIXTEEN FOOT WINGSPAN
At least I know how large to make Fayne's now. Cause Bai's entire infatuation with her was for how big her wings were. I'd say 16 feet is pretty big
LMAO FUCK OFF
golden summit
You need massive wings to fly if you are going for realistic sizes
Or just magic in which case wingspan does not matter
warm vale
We have idiots spitting lightning at each other realism is off the table. This is just aura points.
Fayne uses hers as a dominance thing.
Like hers are wide and she uses it to make herself look big.
warm vale
Lexi's I want to be a more sensible size.
golden summit
Otherwise flying dragons are impossible
warm vale
Cause I know that by the time you scale wings up to support human flight they're simply too heavy to fly
"According to all known laws of aviation, there is no way that a bee dragon should be able to fly"
hard furnace
https://tenor.com/view/tucoemuitolegal-bee-movie-barry-b-benson-bee-gif-17956738
D did you
DID YOU POST THE ENTIRE BEE MOVIE AS A GIF
hard furnace
Kinda
golden summit
(these are two different gifs)
Two different people uploaded the entire bee movie at different qualities and speeds
cedar socket
Id say getting a figure you can pose to reinforce your anatomy understanding wou...
Noted.
I think I DO have one. Just that... i broke one of its arms.
hearty gazelle
LMAO FUCK OFF
Easiest thing you can do to make this feasible in universe without just saying the word magic: there's low level anti gravity magic initially intended for slow falling but when used in combination with wings allows for flight amongst species with smaller wing span due to the reduced thrust needed to launch and maintain altitude, originally those species used wings in order to glide due to mountainous terrain
It has a reasoning for the biology that makes sense, a reason why they're able to fly, and a restriction (requires magic) in case the plot needs one
golden summit
That's what I did in my book
Dragons use anti-gravity magic to fly, and originate from the most magic-dense planet in the galaxy.
deep hatch
had a massive surge of writing inspiration, so i kinda plotted out neo's entire course through vol 7 and 8
like, a full, solid timeline sorta deal
and i think ive decided; in vol 9 neo does end up just Leaving the ever after instead of sticking behind and going through state-mandated therapy
because just fuck the canon, tbh
fiery jungle
What it is?
modest oar
What it is?
Someone's oc
But it looks so much like an aluber dragon lol
It evdn got dem bystial chains
fiery jungle
I see, guess the commissioner is Branded Bystial player
tribal thicket
a[albion sanctifire]
dusk parcelBOT
a[albion sanctifire]
fiery jungle
Owo they got Albion in Rush?
fiery jungle
tribal thicket
Also, there are other HOPTs, but they have diff wording.
fiery jungle
Man Rush got better card layout than normal card is not even funny
Stars originally used to marks card rarity (in manga), but after battle city turned it into mechanic, feels like they should drop putting multiple stars and just have number a top of it like Rush example
It's not genshin anymore, Konami
Level 1 card more likely to be rarer than level 12 ones nowaday
misty ocean
JRPG with the traditional Roman Catholic-coded evil churchman main villain
call that Cardinal Sin
tropic brook
cardinal sin is such a sick name tho
misty ocean
no, “Dysentery McInfluenza” is a sick name
golden summit
+2
vague rover
Saturday: less hyper, but 25fps too. Sunday: 101 Spears
warm vale
I need to get a brainworm out of my head.
But IDK which I should shitpost it for. Heritage or Multiverse.
Cause I been thinking a lot recently about like. Automaton girls.
Like the hololive girl
and my brain is just like. "Add one in. doesn't matter where just add one."
warm vale
I mean in multiverse it's easy to slip in some kind of android cause of high tech the final world is with a whole ass space colony tech going.
So that one would be like the synthetics from alien films. or maybe the S5 from iRobot film
but without the uncanny valley face
golden summit
Lemme rephrase. Where does one benefit the plot or fit in with the theme?
warm vale
Oh
IDK
Heritage it'd be closer to something akin to Galatea but more crude and basic.
golden summit
I wanted to put an automaton character in my futuristic story, but it went against the theme
Even though the technology exists and there is an entire empire governed by an AI, the world did not allow an automaton character to simply slide in
warm vale
I did have a slight idea of where to put it in Heritage if I wanted to.
Cause in the third there's a group who are all criminals having done shit both breaking laws and just borderline immoral. Like one learned necromancy and went down that path, another uses summoning but uses it to create abominations/chimeras.
And the summoning one had other experiments getting her branded a criminal. and I'd put the automaton in as one of them which she considered her magnum opus. And wants it back rather than to just fight Elizabeth for being the one who shut her shit down originally.
I had all their shit written out somewhere. I can't find it now
golden summit
That could work then
warm vale
Found it.
She was an employed 'magical scientist' by the council that governs magic use in Aclade. And also ended up messing with shit she shouldn't. So I could maybe come up with some idea as to why she would look into an idea like an automaton but also would need to figure out why it'd be looked down upon in Aclade.
Although Aclade is fairly backwards in some aspect. I can't imagine it'd take much thinking.
golden summit
The classic "don't create life don't play god"
Especially not sentient life
Especially not sentient life with a built-in programming that can easily let you enslave them
warm vale
Although Aclade is fairly backwards in some aspect. I can't imagine it'd take mu...
Honestly my favourite part of Aclade being backwards compard to other countries is that magic learning is an aspect of class division.
warm vale
Especially not sentient life with a built-in programming that can easily let you...
I have this tweet bookmarked in my browser as "Call of Magic: Class Warfare"
golden summit
Creating sentient life is taboo in most fictional settings
golden summit
I have this tweet bookmarked in my browser as "Call of Magic: Class Warfare"
Magic requires learning. If there is a monopoly on knowledge then yeah, you'd wind up like that.
warm vale
The automaton is built but she can never get it to actually work.
and concoct a reason for it to require a human soul. One a necromancer could likely wrangle into such a contraption
warm vale
Magic requires learning. If there is a monopoly on knowledge then yeah, you'd wi...
Yeah there's basically 2 ways to get it.
One is hereditary like Lexi or Cordelia's family who inherit it as part of their bloodline. the other is learning
warm vale
Although my favourite is still Charlotte from the breakfast club group up north
Who basically is just this. Throwing potions around rather than use actual magic
Why learn to throw fire when you can create a backgarden firebomb you can strap to your wrist.
warm vale
Cause in the third there's a group who are all criminals having done shit both b...
Also I rewatched Batman Begins yesterday. and I've also realised another member of this group is basically just Scarecrow
So I probably need to adjust that.
I could probably get away with it if it wasn't for the fact it was literally gas.
warm vale
Also I have to work on a final line of Heritage cause I have re-written the last chapter.
I fear I have to invoke the dark arts.
And return to Mk I
It's still kind of weird to look at Mk I and think this was how long it as 'complete'
Less than a third of Heritage is.
and entirely different story and Lexi
Who was an absolute smoke demon.
green compass
Also, is this the first HOPT in RUSH?
Its like, the 4th one we have
(Pinged by mistake, my bad)
deep hatch
after the latest neo biography/description revamp, the full version has hit 3.2k words
in other news im working on an abridged one because fuck
modest oar
@tribal thicket do we have cubic concept art ?
hushed pelican
Hello, players! Last issue, we covered some tips and tricks to help you beat the Generaiders of Runick, so now here's some tips to help you conquer Kingmera's Classicastle.
- Classicastle Myrmidunce are Kingmera's disposable troops, so they're a pushover. One poke of Blitzerophon's spear and they go down instantly.
- Classicastle Birdinance may seem small, but this burning birdie packs a real boom. Careful that it doesn't blow up in your face!
- Occasionally, you might find holes in the walls, which are host to Classicastle Jaculaunchers. These razor-sharp reptiles fly out at high speeds, spearing any unfortunate heroes.
- Look out above! It's the Classicastle Columasher, and it'll easily crush Blitzerophon and even his Pegassist flat if you're not careful.
WIP monsters for a new fake archetype I'm making, Greek mythology meets a 90's platformer
fiery jungle
fiery jungle
Dem Monarchs always likes to confabulate
fiery jungle
Man early 2010's DeviantArt was something else
It was much more lively too as ommunity
Nowaday seeing comments on a piece no matter how good rarely get pass first page (or in this case, load more...), let alone having one at all...
stoic spear
30 second doodle of yugi. nothing more. damn my bf is doing a good job getting me into the franchise
warm vale
who wants to help me rename Heritage's big bad.
nocturne karma
just do it yourself
warm vale
Cause I've got to address it eventually that I stole his name from the scientist lady in Horizon.
weak patrol
Joe
clever linden
who wants to help me rename Heritage's big bad.
Okay, so what kind of name are you thinking?
warm vale
DW. I might have just found what I was looking for
I used the forbidden notes.
Of Heritage Mk I
Cause it's for the big bad who's leader of the Sanctuary where all the Dragon Mages live.
So it'd have to be a dragon sounding name.
and in Mk I, there was someone named Alberic.
And IDK why but I like it
Something along this line
warm vale
Of Heritage Mk I
NGL reading Mk I again. is starting to physically pain me
At least if I was young I could excuse this but I was 16/17 at this point.
golden summit
That is still pretty young
warm vale
and in Mk I, there was someone named Alberic.
Time to do what I do best.
And abuse languages I don't understand
by finding something to swap out alb for then
that'd mean dragon
The voices are speaking again.
They want the funny.
warm vale
I've realised a problem with the naming idea behind going this path.
If I go with something meaning ruler it sounds weird cause they already use the term "Master" as his title.
So it sounds weird in my head
vague rover
Oh uh, forgot to post again. Day 10: Teleporting in a lavalamp with no lava. Day 11: applying criticism from Day 7
fiery jungle
warm vale
I just realised
How was I struggling to make Blake’s rifle have a decent stock
When I literally own one I can use as reference
radiant orchid
lmfaooo
warm vale
my mums friend collects war stuff
And this was her christmas present from him
He's got a uuuh.
A fairly large collection
And brings various bits of it to our house for either me or my mum
golden summit
warm vale
We even have this
and a mace
I've done
an uh oh
I think
so all this time while trying to find a new big bad name I've been looking at lists of first names
and it just dawned on me. If they only address him by "(title) ___" surely it'd need to be a second name
not a first name.
warm vale
Update: I've learned the original name of the big bad is not only also a Star Wars Character. But also a way of spelling an Egyptian deity's name
hearty meteor
Well, that means you have plausible deniability at least!
warm vale
True
hushed pelican
Had an idea for a Yu-Gi-Oh duelist OC so I'm drawing her (WIP)
An actress using a Danger! deck, she was famous for being a damsel in distress in monster movies starring her Dangers (think King Kong or Dracula), but irl she and her Dangers are best buddies
This was her in her prime, she's an old woman now but still a real danger in a game of Duel Monsters
knotty ibex
Oh that's a neat Idea
cedar socket
Is it a dumb idea to have the main villain of the second part of my story possess the body of the first part's main villain?
golden summit
As with most things in writing, it depends on context and execution
warm vale
I think I've solved the problem of Heritage's ending.
IDK if it ever was a problem
but now I have a choice of the final chapter's order
cause its split between Lexi and Fayne's ending. One is literally flies off over yonder and the other is depression ending.
hard furnace
Is it a dumb idea to have the main villain of the second part of my story posses...
Lego monkie kid
warm vale
Is it a dumb idea to have the main villain of the second part of my story posses...
Maybe I'm just brain rotted but this reminds me of DIO
X
cedar socket
Is it a dumb idea to have the main villain of the second part of my story posses...
So I was thinking the first part's villain is a servant to the second part's villain. And when the heroes defeated the first villain, the second villain basically turned them into their puppet.
hard furnace
So I was thinking the first part's villain is a servant to the second part's vil...
Watch Lego monkie kid’ it does this idea well
hushed pelican
My Yu-Gi-Oh duelist OC, Rina Queene
Once a famous actress, she now lives out her retirement playing Duel Monsters against the local youngsters with her Danger! deck
warm vale
I still have like, specific revisions to go, e.g. removing Lexi's rampancy but I have Heritage's ending redone and it's all below 100,00 finally
vague rover
Day 13: had to restart at 2am, finished in 47 mins
Day 14: what i started on day "13" after 12.
Day 12: 80 frames isn't enough
warm vale
Welp my drive has fucked up and its not letting me edit heritage from mobile
Also it has this weird little bump at the bottom that brings up the document tabs
But won't even show the separate chapter title headings
Well done google. Another quality update
green compass
Why is it so expensive nooooooooooooooo
fiery jungle
That goddamn dummy
It's everywhere, and it's not even good for practice
If you want good doll for pose drawing/reference, I suggest you getting Dummy 13 (design by Soozafone)
It's hella cheap and their articulation are good for their price, has lotsa accessories too
Am just saying, it is the best $1 I ever spent
(some joints needs some works tho since it depend on 3D printing, so prepare superglue & sandpaper to fix it)
fringe fable
ONE?!
No god damn way that's one dollar lol
The print material can't be that cheap lol.
fiery jungle
tbh the price may have been localized since the 3D model is open source, anyone could've printed it themselves
Perhaps it is more costly in another country
thick wigeon
Random recommend, ended up loving everything this creator had made, this was made SO well https://youtu.be/KcBtvGtB-88?si=8S71wApkgDfQegKr
Wait should Ive send this in food chat 
cedar socket
So, I'm trying to write yet another story.
After making a clockwork-smooth yet hasty evasive maneuver into a dark alley, the dark-haired gynoid slumped down in a daze, gazing at her slender hands.
None of the data in her drive explained it. She had seen her target’s photo. He was a tall, blond Caucasian male, of average looks compared to the public registry downloaded in her database. And after observing his routine, Ava concluded it would be an easy job.
But when she saw him in person… she short-circuited. It was a damned disarming smile he had flashed at her, and she retreated.
She couldn’t determine why she had done that, only that she had detected an unnatural increase in her system temperature. Her head was feeling hot too.
Garbled words tumbled out of her sputtering sound output device.
Error. Error. Obey programmed directive. Assassinate target.
Yet her twitching frame would not budge any further.
Reluctance was not a word Ava Turing, the seasoned android assassin, would use to describe herself - though she did know its definition. But why did this word emerge in her thought generation?```I like that her last name is Turing and she's an android, and I like how you describe her short-circuiting
I wonder if she used to be human and her target was her old boyfriend or husband
hushed pelican
An old doodle, monsters with drip
Now the question is, who's got the best drip
warm vale
I solved my Heritage editing problem. And in the midst I checked Multiverse bullshittery
And forgot I'd included Jess sending Juno out to California to beat the gold rush a few centuries early
Absolute shithousery moment.
hard furnace
Why is it so expensive nooooooooooooooo
What’s that in American??? I have one but it was a gift
lunar storm
X
green compass
What’s that in American??? I have one but it was a gift
It's basically a guide to help you draw accurate proportions and visualize posing
hard furnace
It's basically a guide to help you draw accurate proportions and visualize posin...
I have one I just didn’t buy it myself so I’m curious
fiery jungle
My problem with that wooden doll is despite well carved, it is anatomically innaccurate
Like your waist is triangle shaped, not trapezoid
hard furnace
Isn't that surface from JJBA?
That’s what it’s based on
fiery jungle
You can get one of these for approximately same price but offer more realistic proportion and joints
This one even has guide lines for your reference owo
cedar socket
cool. noted.
fiery jungle
Just getting CSP 4.0 while still on beeg sale 
cedar socket
After making a clockwork-smooth yet hasty evasive maneuver into a dark alley, the dark-haired gynoid slumped down in a daze, gazing at her slender hands, covered in a polymer that mimicked human skin.
None of the data in her database explained it. She had seen her target’s photo. Mark ‘Marco’ Cooper was a tall, blond Caucasian male, of average looks compared to the rest of the public registry downloaded in her database. Statistically unremarkable. And after observing his routine, Ava concluded it would be an easy job.
But when she saw him in person… she short-circuited and froze up. When he noticed her, he had flashed a damned, disarming smile at her, and she had retreated.
None of her targets had ever noticed her. The deed should have already been done…! But she just retreated …
She couldn’t determine why she had done that, only that she had detected an unnatural increase in her system temperature. Her core processor was feeling hot too, and some unidentified data was being generated.
Garbled words tumbled from her sputtering sound output device, located where a human mouth would be.
Error. Error. Obey programmed directive. Assassinate target.
Yet her twitching frame would not budge any further.
Reluctance was not a word Ava Turing, the seasoned android assassin, would use to describe herself - though she did know its definition. But why did this word emerge in her neural thought generation?
She had never questioned her directives, her program. So why now?```
X
cedar socket
In today's episode of "trying to write", I tried a genre I'm not used to.
spark oasis
Yo, anyone have a folder or something with dinamic poses that could handle me?
cedar socket
So, do y'all use the Loomis method for heads or nah?
warm vale
The what method?
cedar socket
vague rover
Some "Help, I'm dying but I still need to animate" days, followed by a "I forgot how to animate, but I can still throw hands" day.
warm vale
The voices are talking to me again.
To have a background Dragon Mage in Heritage. And name her Selen
Which is worse than the last idea for a selen reference I had.
golden summit
Doesn't that break your worldbuilding
If Dragon Mages are rare and supposed to be a big thing, having random-ass ones would diminish the impact of each one
warm vale
They're rare to the outside world
But they have a whole ass uuh
Idk what the word is
golden summit
Community?
warm vale
Ye that's it basically
golden summit
Oki
warm vale
It's called the Sanctuary. And it's like. Shit tons of them
golden summit
What is a Selen refference?
warm vale
My favourite Vtuber
golden summit
Ah
golden summit
Nyaruhodo
golden summit
The voices are talking to me again.
See when the voices talk to me and influence my writing it usually winds up in me writing unspeakable acts of violence in detail. Which makes it so I can't share my writing on this server 
warm vale
It was just gonna be a pub called The Laughing Dragon and the art sign outside was a purple dragon
golden summit
Ooooooh I love laughing dragons
warm vale
Simple. Neat. Done. Chefkiss
golden summit
They just make me happy and feel warm and fuzzy
warm vale
I needed non-regular playlist for something
and searching "villain classical" is my ol' reliable
for it
warm vale
That's actually just reminded me. of an idea I had for a joke in a work
Take the trope of villains blasting classical music throughout their lair but make it Holst's The Planets - Mars
One of the protagonists asks "Isn't this the empire music from Star Wars"
and someone else goes "No it's something far more pretentious"
warm vale
I just got hit in the face by a lampost
Because I reread
And I already had a fucking Selen reference
I named one of the units Cordelia’s family runs "Dragoons"
Cause I remember this fight between myself now
It was either Hussars or Dragoons
And then I made up a whole ass lore reason why they're called Dragoons
lunar storm
X
hearty meteor
Is that... Kamille Bidan?
viscid bobcat
kamille biden
golden summit
Its joever...
lunar storm
||they both suffer major dementia and trouble speaking so close enough|| zeta
viscid bobcat
the first ever catboy mecha pilot president...
fiery jungle
Reminder Joe was signing something on Hollywood when they announced Live Action Gundam in the makinh
lunar storm
yup
vague rover
Reminder Joe was signing something on Hollywood when they announced Live Action ...
Is that a good or bad thing
lunar storm
X
warm vale
X
deep hatch
love when writing starts to feel like the '*hits u with a pipe* sorry *hits u with a pipe* sorrgy,,, accident' meme but for the scrimblo
fiery jungle
warm vale
fallen sundial
https://x.com/ttanjit_craft/status/1903640316890288554?s=19
Now this is a throwback
warm vale
heh. I found something else of Heritage i'd forgotten I'd done
I gave Tia a bloody catchphrase
And it's honestly cringey but it works so well with how she is I hate this.
I gave her it cause I thought "She's 90% child at heart and literally dresses as her own OC, of course she'd have a catchphrase." and it drives Remy mad cause she shouts "onto adventure." like an actual cartoon character would.
clever pecan
Word
warm vale
lol
clever pecan
Im writing a not!Kamen Rider story, of course I have catchphrases
clever linden
Im writing a not!Kamen Rider story, of course I have catchphrases
you used it 3 times so far
smh
I still don't have a catchphrase for my mcs
clever pecan
you used it 3 times so far
He doesnt get to use his finisher that often >:[
warm vale
Besides Cordelia screaming the family motto at Fayne I don't think I have much use for catchphrases
Which I did just shamelessly steal from Sabaton songs. But at least they kinda work with how each family uses it.
open bridge
Finally hit 2K words on the newest chapter for my Symphogear fic last night
It’ll be a year since the last update sometime in April/may/june
I took a lot of the fall off for internship
vague rover
Three days means three more animations.
Day 20: An Acrological Birthday Day 21: unintentional shrinking Day 22: Return to DSi Day 23: mandatory kicking practice.
fiery jungle
Looking good owo
warm vale
I realised something about Heritage. Fayne's first appearance is like a third of the way through at about 33,000 words in.
And it's not till almost 40,000 words later where I actually say what kind of Dragon Mage she is.
But she already knows Lexi's a Thunder Dragon and Lexi knows absolutely jack shit about what she can do.
The only thing she learns in their meeting is Fayne has wings but that's just normal for Dragon Mages. and their colour which is green but doesn't give away much to anyone
clever linden
god I'm almost done with developing my cast for the first arc, I just need to figure out the powers for the last remaining relevant hero >_>
warm vale
I have rediscovered yet another terrible thing in Heritage
In the second one Fayne hallucinates Lexi’s mum and cause Lexi’s mum is regarded as a "Sun Dragon" because of her flames being insanely strong
I actually used the line "holding the power of the sun in her palm."
It wouldn't be so bad if it wasn't so horribly unsubtle
golden summit
me looking at my lightning wielder talking about unlimited power
warm vale
I plan to keep the general idea of it.
But cut it down cause I think the palm is what would give it away
Maybe I'm just overthinking how obvious it'll stick out but I feel that's the line between "okay we're establishing the kind of power her mum had." And "hold on that's from spiderman"
modest oar
fiery jungle
warm vale
I embraced the cringe of "imagining your OCs in an anime op" and actually had a shot idea that honestly I do kinda like.
Lexi sat on either one of the balcony's at Kayla’s home. Or on a roof at the schools dorms. Watching a shooting star.
Zooms in on the star and it's actually Fayne. Who whips around in the air and unleashes an attack and visuals break into her and Lexi fighting.
Why is there always some kind of shooting star in OP/ED shots if there's a night time section
warm vale
Also someone remind me in uuuh
About 9 hours to redo Fayne's final monologue.
I don't like it atm and I feel like I need to cut it down. Make it a bit snappier
I also rather like the other nickname Fayne gives her whole like. Group as a whole. "Children of the Sanctuary" rather than exclusively using "Second Generation"
spark oasis
About 9 hours to redo Fayne's final monologue.
Redo the monologue 
warm vale
Redo the monologue <:angerydognoises:562491300197433346>
Danke schon
spark oasis
Danke schon
cedar socket
I sometimes imagine my characters in anime songs too.
warm vale
I regret already wanting to redo Fayne's monologue
This is pissing me off
Maybe I should just cut the yap entirely
and just end on her calling Lexi Dragon Slayer
spark oasis
I regret already wanting to redo Fayne's monologue
Dont burn yer brain mate, you can try another day if you feel stressed, or just simplify it
warm vale
What is bro about to cook
spark oasis
What is bro about to cook
He can and he probably will
tired crystal
Made a chaos version of Lion Heart