#Art and Writing
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you'd have to make the colony way bigger than you otherwise would in order for the tube to not cause serious motion sickness to anyone who goes in the tube
rotational gravity stuff needs the tube to be above a certain size because if its too small then the gravity at your head would be significantly less than the gravity at your feet, which would make you sick and possibly cause heart problems
so you'd need the tube to have a really large radius in order to avoid that
like it would need to be as thick as the length of a city block or something
and in order to contain that you'd probably also need to increase the radius of the entire colony
you'd probably also need pillars to hold up the tube so that it doesn't fall apart and collapse onto the actual colony
i think the easiest answer is to just have the colony vertical instead of horizontal and have it in the middle
that would do weird stuff to the lighting probably
its space i dont gotta explain shit
i assume the point of it being horizontal is so that there's always a window directly above each part of the colony
if it's all rings then the sky would be the ground

NGL it's gonna be real sadge if I can't give them a tower in the colony
Cause of gravity at the top floors of the tower being lesser than the gravity at the base
Even if the base is on the inner wall and goes across the diameter
In today’s episode of ‘Trying to Write’, I am trying to give the OG Kamen Riders a fighting chance in a Dragon Ball crossover.
@warm vale Do you have Monster Girl Encyclopedia?
One of my (long list) of commission included one where they want monster girl with integrated Duel Disk in their body
You don't need to force it much. Power levels getting equalized is like given a lot of times in crossover stuff.
It doesn't need to make much sense. Just that it's fun, usually you even have them pair up with similar~ish counterparts.
Stuff like these (spoilered some in case too much for the server, feel free to delete)
I do. Lemme know which you need
ah okay
Am thinking something something Merfolk, because reminds me of Tear
inbf4 I ended up just drawing Kitkallos
Just so yo know. They're gonna be pushing NSFW cause of the nature of the document I possess
I did plan to cause I don't want to be banned but wanted to just make sure
I forgot Piccolo existed for a bit…
And Vegeta. I’m not sure where they would go in the fic I’m trying to write…
So I remembered I have a drawing pad still. And for the first time actually tried to draw a version of the big bads logo from the idea I had of it
It looks like dog shit but the idea is there. The Fs back to back.
I think it should be the arms of the Fs closer togethwr
To make them actually look like wings
It doesn't help all I have is a pen
Marginally better
Raaaaay. Hurry up and clear your comm queue 
Why learn to draw when I can just pay someone else to do it for me. 
I've literally been waiting since 2023 here lmao
Damn how's my 2022 gonna beat that.
Silly
Anything beyond the first world martial arts tournament is beyond most kamen riders, I'd really not worry and try to make it fun
I can't tell if Poplar is looking for uppies or descending from the sky and this is the POV of diabellestar after she slept in and so did not feed them
I think it's descending
The shading doesnt make much sense if poplar is looking up
so I was thinking of writing an anti-regression story where it's like the MC is kinda forgetful, so it defeats the whole "I know what's going to happen" thing.
But it's not like he doesn't know completely, and he also tries writing a journal to remember properly.
So like. Inattentive kind of forgetful or like. Amnesic
Yeah probably need a bit more of an explanation like yuri asked
Cause innattentive is gonna get real old real quick
Amnesia as played out as it is could work if it doesn't follow the usual of "rediscover their identity and what caused the amnesia"
Or more like dementia. Where they have lucid moments but sometimes forget their friends
Do this one right and you could emotionally traumatise devoted readers in ways only Disney can.
Like the ending of Wall-E where he's fixed but doesn't recognise Eve
Actually that's kinda a banger idea
i think they mean that the person regressing has forgotten msot of what happened in the original timeline
oh its an isekai thing?
Fuck I like this
I tried giving one of my main characters dementia. Hope I did it right.
IKR it actually goes kinda hard.
I think more like those typical revenge stories
Person dies and wants to start over to get revenge, so they're sent back in time
Think uh
God unfortunately
Redo of Healer is like
The big example
Except that does it mechanically different
Because he doesn't die
He just somehow can use his healing magic on time
A Beautiful Minds did a great job to visualize schizophrenia
Granted, it was based on real story, so there's reference
The realization that one of your friend never aged up after decades as you getting older
Schizophrenia I have some sources to use, but that works
Also how the teacher keep asking his student if they see what he see to confirms it is real whenever new people greet him
Oooh
its time travel
ah
there are some people that consider time travel isekai but i do not so
Forgetful.
So it's like he kind of always has this nagging feeling that the person he just met is important in some way (they're actually a powerful figure in the future) etc.
He just doesn't remember how (at first)
This
I mean theres already a plethora of stories like that so im sure it can work
I think I've done a well and truly uh-oh
And let what was meant to be a quicker arc or so get too big
And now I'm in too deep cause I love the two it focuses on
It's going to be incredibly difficult for this to not seem like exposition and or plot convenience
I see.
Now it's clean brein
I decided to skim through some old stuff while I'm stuck on Shattered
And man one of these
If Heritage is a FT fanfic
This is not even subtly a gundam one
The fucking main one is just Exia but red and has wheels like a knightmare frame
i mean, im gonna be honest with you here
as long as you add your own spin to it, having very blatant inpsirations is totally fine
I don't think this one even had its own spin
Although I did remember this was where I pulled my flower weebery from
1 to 1 isnt exactly ok
Cause one had called theirs Chrysanthemum
but like for example, im watching kamen rider ryuki and almost every other plotbeat im like "wow, hello fate stay night and/or zero"
(as in, they ripped those straight from ryuki)
I'll finish this then submit it to Sunrise as the next series after Evangundam.
urobuchi isnt even subtle about it, he did it twice!
Speaking of subtlety. What's the best way to reference a specific song a character is singing but avoiding just using lyrics as non-dialogue text.
describe what the song is about and the feeling
Cause it's easy with one singing Hush Little Baby but when I want them to use fly me to the moon as a lullaby it gets significantly harder
ie, "and upbeat melody and text that deals with xy"
The more I read of this the worse it gets
One of the engineers lives in their office and has bowls of fucking instant noodles just on standby
Like they'd been left or forgotten about
And one who if i ever did a Mk II of this
Would be brainrot on legs
I'm gonna go back and strangle past Yuri
What convinced him and who allowed him to name a character "Joyce Jordan" who hates their 'old lady name' and calls herself Jojo instead
SHAMBOLIC BEHAVIOUR FROM PAST YURI
Bro I literally made a mushroom say "among us" in my book
It makes perfect sense in context (it is a part of a sentence) but I did so intentionally because the brainrot goblins told me to
At least in part of the sentence its just a double take moment.
This one is from top to bottom a bad idea because they’re pure shithousery
Who has a giant robot with actual guns and shit and decides to go "come catch these hands"
And just punches the other giant robot
Actually I know exactly who.
i cant exactly give you flak for this, on one of my google drives i have a file named "Story idees", which is more than a decade old at this point and i will never open again
I too have that for MB Mk 1
The cursed timeline.
Where the Future versions Lexi and Alex had a kid who came back in time to destroy everything in a way I accidentally completely stole from Fairy Tail
Although im my defence it was a filler arc so I'd never actually seen it
Hence accident
You ever let a plot point get so out of hand
It actually ripples all the way to completely killing the ENTIRE SECOND HALF OF A STORY

I have actually
Fucked it
Fucking. I should've just made the doppelganger a normal person instead.
So… any of y’all ever try adapting a pre-existing work in written form?
Yes, many times. And that is when I whip out the 'delete' button and wipe out chunks of what I wrote to get back on track.
I would but that is 17,000 words
And I'd rather try and find a new path than also cut down one of my favourite parts.
On the bright side
Even in this new timeline it's caused
I still get to use Brave New World as a title chapter
I came to a compromise with that particular brain goblin. It got used but had to be properly not just cause it sounds cool
Tell me about it, I've had to cut down about as much, and even more, due to plot mistakes
Also mood. Had to erase a whole character I liked from existence gradually to fix the story.
Rip lesbian gas planet space noodle, and rip to space noodle species.
I did that actually with Heritage
Cause I've realised Heritage's main group with Lexi was kinda set up like the power rangers
You got the main five. Lexi, Alex, Kayla, Daniel and Joel.
And then the two extras. Blair and Cordelia
And I had so little for Joel to actually do I just fucking erased him from existence
Moved Kayla into the "mother of the group" role
And folded Cordie and Blair into the five

And it worked out well
Because Cordelia is woman in armour.
And so I made her cracked out of her mind
Yeah. Sometimes, erasing things you like winds up with results you like even more
Like she was putting hands on people she had no right to be boxing up.
I had to erase an entire fight with a giant golem made of 100 corpses, because its implications were inconsistent with established lore. Replaced it with a bit of character heart to heart and drawing more parallels between two different characters.
I then realised I also did it AGAIN with the secondary group. One of them did not speak the entire time she’s in a chapter.
So I made her deaf and know does sign language stuff with one of the group so they have a nice bond
And it worked out. Cause as well as those two having a thing.
Writing a chapter solely from her PoV where she's feeling the vibrations to know what's about to come round the corner at her is actually kinda fun.
Hell yeah
Yeah Heritage 2 has a buncha odd stuff in it
Including an absolutely generational crash out from Blake
Which honestly is a justified crash out cause the person they fuck up deliberately called them the wrong name and Blake just boxes them up.
Hits em with the two piece and chips combo
I've realised something else. I'm no longer able to name the 10th chapter "The Tenth World" when the full scale of the big bads base is revealed
That arguably pisses me off more than the other problem
Cause it's reminded me that the reference doesn't even exist now because I changed from sphere world to a side-3
Lady Labrynth of the Midnight Snack
So, I drew again. A Kamen Rider redesign.
Chain Link 1 Lo, the Prayers of the Voiceless Voice
Sky Striker Mobilize - Linkage! OTK
These are so good.
Lo Beatdown time
I think I have a pacing problem.
Should everything be fast 24/7, or do I have to slow down sometimes?
What do you think?
Pacing isn't everything, but moments to slow down help to digest the fast scenes and have things that can't happen in fast scenes
I see.
Question
The second part of Shattered primarily has worlds fucked up by various means. i.e. 953 got smashed in the face by another asteroid and wiped out most of the population
I need another idea thats out of the left field for what'd cause a "Broken World" as the arc calls them
I already have "total pandemic kills most life on planet including leading to dome cities"
Like that one power rangers series set in a dome city
Space kaiju go chomp
Bite a chunk out of earth
Just an incomprehensibly large threat taking a bite out of their world and moving on as if it does that all the time
bad idea: the animals of a world gain sentience and revolt
Animal Farm
I think that's a bit too out of left field
Like it still needs to be sellable to an audience
War is a classic, poisoned water, global warming, some sort of magical energy rebound, etc
War do be an ol' reliable
I do have idea similar with space kaiju, but reverse T-K extinction event where the kaiju/meteor bring space organism that soon would inherit the planet
It's basically borrow YGO Meteor idea like Worm Nebula Meteor, Jurrac Meteor, Nibiru, and Xeno meteorus
It's interesting how their meteor monsters are almost always nuke then float
I wonder why is that
Also I came up
With another banger title
When a bulk of the Broken Worlds get visited
To the Ends of the Worlds.
Cause it's got the various versions of the MC with their respective copies of their bestie besides the 953 version.
that sounds like a JoJo reference somehow.
Lmao
I've kept outside references to a minimum
Or tried to make them fit as naturally as possible
i see.
Like the usage of "Second Impact" was solely down to Evangelion
And it wasn't the most subtle but I feel it works
I need to fix the margins for that eventually
Doesn't look bad to me.
The most egregious
Is a placeholder
A chapter by the working title of "The Grand Blue World"
I guess you have to climb aboard with your hopes and dreams to find what you're looking for with friends.
I'm probably gonna drop "grand" from it
Ah
I remembered another egregious reference
The final chapter
Is called A Wonderful World
Lowkey
I think that actually cooks
Then again the big bads organisation is called the Avian Foundation so what do I know about good names
Nobody cares but my Danganronpa fanfic is 10 years old, so I updated its author’s notes right at the start to acknowledge the people who helped
Doing this publicly because I wanna make sure everyone knows it: @clever pecan does a lot of work as a beta reader and sounding board for my story, and even though I keep going like “hey I’ll pay you for your help” he keeps saying “nah we’re friends”
Genuinely an amazing friend and wonderful help, couldn’t do it without you. I’m sorry if this is a bit embarrassing but I really want the server to know how cool you are
Ovven is awesome, yeah
incredibly common ovven w
Aw, thanks Raz
Also I do recommend yall check out Razs DR fanfic if you like Danganronpa >:)
please do notttt
Youre in luck, as i do not like danganronpa
I don't know DR, but I'll drop by and leave a comment or two 😈
I'm not against reading stories for series I've never experienced
Good ol classic Dragonmaid strat
The FTK...
Kitkallos about to go gambling. 

Evil★twin's a lovely night🌃
Quoting winter snow (@winters81620644)
la la land!
KONAMIII
MAKE THEIR GAY CANON AND MY LIFE IS YOURS.
you people are so greedy
y*ri fans
I am not exclusively a yuri fan
and yet no one is begging for Clavkiys to be confirmed as a homosexual
so I wanted to 'redesign' a Power Ranger suit.
For who
For the gay boys we have aluber and albaz anyway
my point has been proven
I mean, I will say for all the ones that Konami has thrown "hints" of being queer have all been women
The Mayakashi & Shiranui duo
The entire Exosister archetype
Lovely/Lady Labrynth
There's no male ygo card that has any form of queer coding.
something something, fetishization of wlw for straight men
what's wlw?
It just isn't noticed as much
women loving women?
I believe so
I see.
pretty much the entire anime and manga industry is like this
so this isn't surprising
also, centur-ion
I'm gonna put Centur-ion on the "I see it, but not as overt"
Same for Sky Striker's Raye & Roze
It's more your typical "very close" type relationship that makes for easy ship bait
Whereas
- Labrynth has a strong love theme, we know she REALLY likes her rival (the unnamed female knight) - also the Labrys is literally a lesbian symbol since the 70's
- Mayakashi & Shiranui, the official lore description uses their meeting in a way where you can read the two hanging out as a romantic date based on how the Japanese language works
- Exosister... their symbol is the lily...The lily in Japanese is Yuri. Which is where we got the word yuri from. The lily is literally slang for sapphic.
I see. 百合, right?
it is honestly very exhausting to see my demographic shoved off into the endless abyss of AO3 and for people to pretend like actual homosexual men have representation and aren't just fetishized and turned into a vehicle of debauchery and unrealistic smut
fanfiction will never be true representation
Centurion is just women and their energy partner. Like it's on the same level as Clavkiys and his gun.
Raye/Roze are just enemies. Maybe sisters going pre manga. And if you go manga LORE, Roze is Raye's clone.
In contrast, Mayakashi Shiranui is super overt, because maybe for the Bakemonogatari "Gently walk her home" types.
Exosister, you could pretend is about actually sisters/sorority stuff
but it's clearly referencing a soeur system that is a staple of the genre, esp. Maria sama ga miteru.
On the other hand, for gay men, all we have is MBT memes about Libromancer fire guy fucking his stand he fuses with,
yeah
and the jokes are
really unfunny
especially because MBT thinks it's funny because he's bisexual
and also shipping Aluber and Albaz is weird
Everything regarding Albaz is weird.
Calling him a Twink when he is just a dude.
Same with calling Aluber as beautiful drama kid while Albaz as a rough boy with a soft heart type, when they quite literally have the same face.
unironically we need a bishounen archetype
I don't care if the fujos co-opt it anymore, just give me card art of two androgynous dudes being cute together
The tri in tribrigade stands for the trio of Bishounen, Bara, and Twink.
And Konami covered up all their faces instead.

Only time we see faces is on the girls and when Shuraig broke his helmet v Fleur.
I mean yeah I agree overall with what you've been saying David.
Also speaking of "weird but popular ships"
Just - Visas. All 5 of them are in a weird poly ship
Regardless of where you fall on the wlw rep side.
It's a fact that the mlm side gets dogshit since it can't be sexualized by het men. 
Which is such a weird angle for Yugioh.
Yes.
Huh.
But also cowards.
Since as much as people meme about Yugioh being horny it's like not even 10% of other games from jp.
Even RUSH which is made for like 4 year olds is more horny than base Yugioh.
Shuraig is very pretty though
Nothing comes close to RUSH being like We need a minor alt art that just removes the hood, and has tits and legs out instead.
God forbid a woman wants to change her style
So thinking about it
I'd let it be, if it was a complete diff pose or smthg.
Is @ignister tecnically mlm coded?
But, it's just a much rarer version in the same pack.
No.
Ai, the character is pretty gay coded.
But, that doesn't bleed into the archetype much.
A[love fusion]
Besides just being anime reference poses.

Same with crystal beasts
This is referencing the Earth one being in love with Water.
Hence being a Fusion Spell that summons the Earth Ignister.
Also, just a good pun on Ai and Love.
Jesse and Jaden would've been an awesome relationship if left open-ended but fucking Yubel needs to ruin it
I mean, Yubel x Jaden is also queer
Cool.
So for drawing mechs, I should try to make it all angular and jutting in general?
uni-zombie
we both know that doesn't count
zombies love matters smh
depends on what you're going for
I usually think of mechs as being less... Round, so to speak.
i just heavily reference my mechs to get a good feel for them
well, round mechs exist
Owo
Are they dating?
I like to think they are
🏳️🌈 ❤️ 🏳️🌈
I also have two Yu-Gi-Oh monsters I ship.
Depending on who, I will judge you
What do you think?
Fair enough I suppose.
Wait, what would that make Astrograph Sorceror?

The anime makes it a fusion of the two.
While IRL, we have it as a Stargazer evo with Timegazer getting Chrongraph, and Timestar being the fusion.
tried relighting the sonic animation test i posted a while ago
Evolutions?
Pokemon?
I had an absolute 'nother moment of genius.
While fixing this
The original plan I had which got rippled out of existence is now gonna be what actually happens INSIDE the story

Doing the timeline twister.
One version of MC remembers the original plan. And when the divergence happens get brain muddled by the sudden change in what happened. Leading to the current batch of bullshit the actual MC is up to
Silly way to celebrate the tenth anniversary of my fanfiction: a non-canon chapter where the cast (including dead characters) are interviewed about their “performances”
Nice nice
Posted the reddit version 
(I know Reddit ban Twitter link, so I'm using screenshot for context)
The brain worms
Are back at it
And this time they want me to pull the ol' Zeon classic
And colony drop the big bads base
And to be honest I am not opposed to that from an imagery standpoint
Brain: no. This is a bad idea just because you want to make another reference.
Me: If you'll consult the meme please.
This meme is my "I can do anything I want" pass
In the background to these brainworms I've realised the entire finale simply does not work
And hinges on the MC being basically a petulant child which they haven't been the entire time and never showed any propensity to being so.
So maybe it's back to Heritage and solving the tournament arc problem until I figure that one out
Also consider yogurt takatou
A character created by a Vs wiki enthusiast out of sheer spite to create the strongest character ever
He wrote an entire story to support him so that he can bullshit out feats for this character
Question
Are tournament arcs really as bad as I'm thinking it will turn out to be in Heritage 2.
Cause I didn't have anything else planned even from the first version
And idk if I'm just in my own head again or if I should look for something else
And that's why I have an OC where unless you could somehow actually scale above fiction (and none of that bullshit of people acting like a character can), bullshit hax don't work 
Depends on execution
If you are confident in your ability to write interesting fights specifically, and if the story is already fight focused, it could work
You could also do a subversive tournament arc where the tournament is merely the backdrop to some other things going on, and the fights are barely focused on at all.
A tournament arc doesn't fit in every piece. It works in, say, dragon ball because the focus is combat and power comparisons.
my oc ultimate guy can has the power to defeat any character with a page on the vs wiki and if you argue about it he can defeat you too
Anyway God, I'm stuck on my normal writing because I need to figure out powers for 2 supporting cast members.
And at the same time I'm working on scripting a comic
Ah, the age-old problem
What kind of setting is it, and what context do these powers have?
Powers for low-impact characters could simply be a statement about their personality to make them feel more alive
Bro you have just as much right to post your art as anyone else. Don't ask, just post.
To the southeast of China lies the sunny country of warriors, Labanan — a land of passion, honesty, and hospitality. It is a wild, playful dog unaware of the tick that hides within its fur.
In the Labanese capital of Balai, along a stony bayside walkway dotted with palms and coconut trees, stood a tall but otherwise inconspicuous mansion that towered over the walkway's restaurants, business centers, and hotels.
The building's penthouse, shrouded in shadow, provided a widespread overhead view of the rest of the capital. A figure, barely discernible in the darkness, stood with arms folded behind their back.
"Soon, the tournament shall open." It uttered in a deep, distorted drone.
It stretched out one hand into the fierce, bright sunlight, revealing an arm covered in metal, wiring, and circuitry. The fingers clenched into a fist with a scraping, creaking sound, and the hand withdrew, returning to the shadows.
"And with it," the mechanical thing continued, slowly releasing its clenched fist, "my revenge on my creators. *I* will have the last laugh." It raised its head to look out over the city.
A pair of eyes, each a different shape and color, glowed in the darkness - a yellow, empty, shield-shaped eye and a dark red, triangular eye with a snake-like slit for a pupil.
"Pitiful, hateful, evil humans!" Its voice rose in octaves. "Perish, for the hour of your destruction is at hand!"
As manic, warped laughter filled the building's rooftop, only the calls of gulls answered this unheard prophecy of doom.```
The first 3 rounds are basically just elimination games. And I'm using them mostly to let side characters spread their wings a bit
Like the king of the hill has Blake being an utter gremlin and shooting anything that moves.
Because Magical Gunslingers are cool
Wait, do you guys have advice on writing tournaments?
Thinking about it there's only like 2 actual fights I need to write
Kasumi vs Lexi
Erika and Allison'a tag team
Cause the finale is an utter one sided thrashing
And honestly is the most anti-climax thing possible
I see.
My battle shonen story is basically a whole tournament... so I think it might feel wrong to any readers.
I'll reply on it later, work and also still dm-ing primal on and off about the comic because we've kinda got different ideas on what to do so we need to find a good direction for the story lmao
Honestly? Pretty good
My honest overall opinion is, have a big cast of characters that stand out
I see.
I have a big cast of like 7 normal(?)
And then Blake, Blair and Remy
Blake exists just to be a contrarian shit. And I love them for it
My cast is... A Ryu ripoff, a Johnny Cage/Sanji ripoff, an android girl, a Kenshi ripoff, a buff monk, and a buff mechanic.
Looking back, just realized that the Nova drawing has similar vibe to my old Griff commission
Both related to YGO, having same expressions and all
Must have done it subconsciously
All surviving old cast members die of old age by the time a new chapter begins. Each chapter being at least 1,000 years after the last one does that.
Sort of, yeah
It's a trillogy of seemingly unrelated long stories with a single overarching plot
Each part is its own thing, with its own unique personality. One's standard grimdark fantasy, one's even darker bloodborne/lovecraft style, and one is a dark comedy space opera on acid and magic mushrooms
I may or may not have been writing about ygo fanfiction 

I've mostly been focusing on my second book now
Well, I've mostly been sick, but when I DO write it's my second book
Someone typing up a storm here owo
There's not really any duels though, it's set after the ending of the Diabell lore.
so i have several head canons that turned into a story but i'm not allowed to post a thread for my Au(sort of)time travel fic yet. Here are the headcanons: 1 Kisara and Seto married in secret at the Temple of Bastet so... 2 9 months later, Kisara **was **pregnant when she met Seto at the shrine. 3 this is more of a Seto HC: he **really **wants a girl bc she would be easier to keep safe. 4 before she gives birth, he **really **likes playing with Kisara's hair when they're alone. Kisara: 🙄 😆
White Forest's biggest fan I see
5 oh Seto, how little you know. since Kisara died in childbirth their baby(Cassandra) is the new bearer of the White Dragon Ka
6 Cassandra is raised in the 21 century(2006-2012)
Kisara "comes back" as the Maiden with eyes of blue
only a bit, it's not actually about WF 
It's about Primite! the main character is Sir Prim who can turn into a knight with stone armor and has an affinity for rocks. He's a nice lad, also a short king but his transformation makes him taller
Though yeah he does run into some of the popular monsters. Planning to include a couple of the meta ones as either cameos or like relevant chars. Brawling with Detonator sounds fun 
the timeline so far
SMH
To prevent someone posting sussy link behind comment, yes?
yea
Well while I solve the Multiverse Conundrum in Shattered I might as well shill Heritage again since I'm gonna pick at the second one until I solve said conundrum.
Heritage of the Dragon
- The myth, the legend that is Magical Bullshittery in it's first full "release"
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1n0wPvj6XBZDCc_cTbZuIjVMECwY7CfJMDg3RiwMpUPk
Side Quest vol 1: The girl with two shadows
- A bridge story between the first story and the second. (Still being refined)
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1zORWkbc0Us1LcmcKW14sZ7rbHN3OqgdUxzSTnAatXN0/edit?usp=sharing
there we go
google docs links are so fucking ugly
DW soon the link will be to amazon kindle store page for Heritage

my main problem is still a cover
I do not fucking know what to do for one
just throw ray a thousand gbp and ask him to figure it out
I'd also need someone who's read Heritage to help generate ideas tho
Cause I don't wanna fuck it up and it looks like those booktok smut fantasy covers
There are people who do that professionally
I don't got professional money though
I have "3 blokes in a shed building the greatest sniper in the world." money
Maybe
I should full send this
Heritage did start off FT inspired after all
Why not come full circle
And base it off of an old FT cover
This might just be my worst idea to date
So, to super briefly explain. It is a superhero setting, though most powers are magical in nature (blessings/curses, bloodlines, specifici items, etc.) though some are tech based.
The current setting at the least for the first arc, has 5.5 heroes (the .5 is for someone who doesn't fight, and plays more of a mentor role so I'm not developing his powers yet)
I have powers for the main duo (who have basic powers and an elemental affinity of light and dark)
As for the other 3
I've got another duo, who are slightly older and more experienced than the main duo. One of these I've got developed, but I need a good complimenting ability for his partner.
And for the final hero, he's the only current public (since the .5 isn't known) solo hero in the fictional city.
Hero 1: She and another hero, Spotlight are a duo in their early 20's who've been heroes for at the least 6 years
Spotlight and her have obtained their powers from the same source (still need to figure out what that is), but it's likely magical in nature again.
To give a super brief description of Spotlight's Powers. He can mark one of two symbols on an object or person. He can make things with symbol A repel from each other, while symbol B attracts. Originally he could only attract things/people towards him (aka pulling them into the spotlight), which he'd use for like say - pull an attack towards him, pull an enemy towards him and perform a clothesline, or pull a friend out of danger.
I'm thinking her ability would be something that benefits from him being able to pull things towards himself specifically, but there's more creative uses of how the two interact with their powers outside of that. I'm thinking either her ability places some kind of area of effect somewhere (like a static aura that lingers on a location) or is a highly up close melee ability.
As for Hero 2:
Hero 2 is the youngest of the hero characters, a 15 y/o closeted transmasc latino. (Only the older mentor hero knows about him being trans tho. He technically prefers he/they, but their hero persona goes he/him - while his civilian identity is still pretending to be a girl)
Because of how I'm doing the story, I want to avoid abilities that are considered too gendered, (certain powers just are more associated with men or women unfortunately)
What I do know is that because he's trying his hardest to "prove" himself, I know that whatever ability I do give him, I want him to have something with a clear but not too obvious defensive utility that can be used for protecting people, but he only ever uses its full offensive capability.
As for how he got his powers, it's via an old family heirloom, so him being latino (still haven't figured out what country exactly, but leaning mexican) means I could take inspiration from something out of his culture
Buzzsaw energy shields
I have a character in the exact opposite situation: has phenomenal offensive utility in her ability, but refuses to use it for anything but pure defense.
Her shields can cut through enemies like butter, but she adamantly refuses to draw blood for cultural/religious reasons and freaks out if she ever does.
As for hero 1, you can have her either be a berserker who gains power the more those she cares about get hurt, or have her be able to manipulate/empower someone
Like, she could cause the focal point of her power to radiate intense heat/electricity/spikes
She could puppet a willing subject to do impossible maneuvers and break the human limits
Could also be a really slow but devastating melee attack
Also, a name like "Showtime" works for a hero if she gained her ability at the same time as Spotlight
Showtime is really good yeah
Though unfortunately none of these powers ig click for me

Showtime is a good name
Maybe she creates zones that freeze people who enter them, based on the idea of stage fright?
Why is Laundry hitting the Freeza pose?
monkaTOS
this is a reference right
AYO lmao
‘The ones inside the mouth is more delicious’ 
I drew again.
Looks nice 
Spoiler alert: They'll eventually evolve into a more Sun Wukong style form.
I feel like Shou Tucker. Guess which 4 anime characters I forcefully merged for this abomination.
I had a terrible idea
Since Heritage's official title came from a yugioh card
It only makes sense that any cover should reference a card too
I just need to find the right one
I'm attempting to get back into drawing
Gotta resist the urge to just draw nonstop eyes
owo
Also I realised something
So lightning comes in various colours right
So I realised to differentiate between Lexi and Fayne's because they’re both Thunder Dragons
Lexi’s is yellow as must be for lightning
And Fayne's is white to make clear her level of power above Lexi
And also doesn't look like just a blur of yellow everywhere when they fight
Named it after Spright and their color variations lol
Upper-atmospheric lightning and ionospheric lightning are terms sometimes used by researchers to refer to a family of short-lived electrical-breakdown phenomena that occur well above the altitudes of normal lightning and storm clouds. Upper-atmospheric lightning is believed to be electrically induced forms of luminous plasma. The preferred usage...
Err, Sprites
Or just named the moves based on these TLEs terms owo
That reminds me of when I decided everyone's decks if they played yugioh
Allison and Erika as Mermail and Atlantean is such a shitpost
I need to change Charlotte
Since her thing is now potion throwing
Speaking of her did I tell yall
How I solved a problem involving her and how little I had of her talking
I'd realised in the entirity of the first book she didn't speak once
And to amend this I just her deaf and sign instead. And it strangely worked out
Because now she and Blake are besties because at least one had to speak sign to understand her
However it also worsened the look of their group as where I dump the diversity characters
Because their group now has disability, gays, an enbie and two of the only 3 non-white characters (AFAIR)
TERRIBLE
FUCKING
IDEA
My delusions of grandeur are still ever present and determined for an anime of heritage
But
When Lexi uses her roar
It'll be animated like Godzilla's atomic breath
*scribbles down a note to commission Ray to draw smol Lexi in a godzilla onesie*
I've had so many terrible commission ideas in my exile. Including the pride one
Of Lexi having the ace flag painted on her cheek by Erika
And I think there was uuh. There was definitely another meme one
The only thing stopping this from being a reality is yourself
Advertise, publish, maybe even learn to animate
It's going to take a LOT of work, but you can make it happen if you try. Or at least get closer.
Lmao
learn to animate
I want to publish
I just need genuine readers to go through and beta read it
And I'm basically done
Except for a FUCKING COVER

I hate covers
They’re so annoying
You do know the publisher handles the cover, right?
Yeah but I wanted to go self pub
Mainly because dealing with a hundred rejections
Would put my head on fucking mars
Because its the only place big enough to contain your ego?
Jokes aside
If you self-publish, that makes getting an adaptation even less likely
You joke about this
But with an adaptation
I would be unbearable
Like.
I'd have to have it how I envisioned it when I wrote it
Yuri
I'd fucking Stanley Kubrick that shit
They published Blood of Hercules and made a big deal out of it
You will face less rejections than you expect
I got no idea where I'll put my webcomic, probably webtoons if people still use that
Oh god you're right
If that can get published I definitely can
My bro and I read that site sometimes
Focus first on editing
You want your work to be as high-quality as possible before you approach a publisher
I have done almost nothing but edit
For like 2 years between working on multiverse and the 2nd of heritage
I literally just need readers to like feedback and shit.
Yeah
I had some people read and like it
But its the feedback part that's killing me
Wat
Says I got no access
Phoenix Academy?
I'm down to read it ngl, but I do have other friends I promised to proofread for beforehand
So it might take some time
Dw
That's the one.
Can't believe I used the wrong link
Ffs
I've been in the planning stages of a comic for a couple of years now, I'll have to get back to drawing before it can go any further but I'm pretty much done with everything in the story
the basic premise is a Victorian-era teenage blacksmith apprentice is sent to Japan at the tail end of the Meiji Restoration to seal all 72 demons (could be less, depends on how much I wanna cut down the length of the comic) of the Ars Goetia that have been unleashed by a corrupted manifestation of the Gnostic interpretation of Solomon, son of David and former King of Israel
a lot of the comedy stems from the fact that the protagonist was studying how to be a demon hunter under a veteran at a college in England who is also filthy rich so he was able to import Japanese literature
so the protagonist is a weeb or japanophile who is obsessed with this culture and when he finally touches down on the place he's read so much about it's during the literal Westernization period and it's completely unrecognizable from his expectations
he also has his own suit of armor made to look like (his expectation) of a samurai as an alter ego but it's a Cardcaptor Sakura deal where he has to manually put it on because it's an entire suit of armor
You could research Japonisme then
The craze about everything japanese around the end of the victorian era
The Mikado for example is a play that leans into that a little
Of course, thats assuming you want to be accurate to the era
as accurate as I can be
Yeah then thats worth checking out
Actually, hold on
Yeah lines up
There genuinely was a craze like that around the time, so you can look into inspiration there
I'm also basing the protagonist's armor design on the old kamishibai character Golden Bat because the time period can line up and it'd be funny to think that he was walking around doing hero things and some random guy was like "a Golden Bat? I'm liking the sound of that..."
but yeah I'll look into it
golden bat my beloved
👍
I forgot to say recently I actually had an idea for heritage
One commission is nearing done, time for another one
The list is long and yet I have 2 weeks left
I got distracted by having to work..but the idea was do it as Cordelia as PoV. And do it LN style.
Cause Cordie is a magicless knight and Kayla is magicless royalty and that's halfway to a LN title already
Cause Cordie is already Kayla’s armed guard. It's an absolute layup of a LN pitch
And gets dragged into Lexi and Fayne's bullshit
Like in the "rebuild" version
You can do it ray
Ganbaraaay
Wait
Was i exiled yet when I had the "isekai battle royale" idea
I know I was exiled for reverse beauty and the beast and homo monster musume
I can't remember which bad idea I left off with
you were not banned at that point, no
Okay
I'm trying to establish which terrible ideas you lot haven't heard from me yet
And i mentioned killer queen since my return

I was defo exiled for Three Laws
Which is one I want to revisit
It's a solid idea in theory
Oh. And "The End"
That one I was definitely exiled for
I need to splurg about that at some point. Cause I'm gonna need help with it
Critter that Possesses the Millennium Eye or some shit
Wip
So I'm making the setting for a story. This is it so far...
Meto'o Muge was the first king and founder of the kingdom of Muge. The Meto'o Muge Academy for Nobles was named in his memory.
The Muge dynasty is still highly respected to the present day by the common folk, and at least one of its members is always either on the throne or in the noble class.
The Muge dynasty was succeeded by the Adams dynasty, named after Prince Adam Muge, ancestor of current king Jacob Adams and current crown prince Abel Adams.
The Yakujou family hail from Tomaya-no-moto, a kingdom to the east of Muge. Due to the valiance displayed by a Yakujou in a Muge war, the Yakujou family was conferred ducal status. Their current family head is Yakujou Leighton, a key player in Muge politics, and the heiress to his station is his daughter, Yakujou Claire, the fiance of the crown prince.
Most people in Muge can use magic. However, the talent for its usage varies, with some being able to wield their magic proficiently, but others struggling to use it even briefly. There are two forms of disorders associated with magic - an inability to draw out magic, and an inability to control it - in short, a sort of magical incontinence.```
so my tablet gave me a free trial of clip studio
Time to unleash the horrors beyond horny comprehension
The Anti-thesis to Ray

Owo
Better not post them here if they're horny
Yuri are you tracing
.
mainly just so I can figure out how the pens work
these are not managable at all
that's not how that works
It is Clip Studio right? and you're using tablet? Then surely there's stabilization option
Yeet
ah okay I thought my shit was just being weird
Sometimes when I want to make looong lines I cranked that up
naruhodo ne
Because my jittery hand would makes them lines not straight, but stabilization helped smoothed them out
For shorter strokes, use lower stabilization
Generally I'm fine when someone new is tracing if it's clear it's for practice
(of course, artist are expected not to rely on it especially when it comes to commission)
I remember when a Brony commissioned to draw his changeling character, so I have finally able to whip out my anthro! changeling design in my sketch book
Them having a mask because they're shapeshifter, idk disguise and mask just go well together
If you need figure for reference, try looking for Lucky 13 dummy figure
It's cheap, easy to built, very poseable, has many accessories, come with its own stand as well
so it looked like this
Then I deleted somethin and the layer controls went all wojnky
and the second vertical tool set is missing
YIPPEE IT WORKED
I've realised I could now juat
Get good at drawing
And do the cover to heritage myself

Simply unstoppable
Good luck with that

Good luck on your endeavor
The good thing of having these figure is, not only they're function as reference image, but you can get sassy
Chat
Time to add Dragon form Lexi onto my list
Do i need something with touchscreen to draw digitally?
My mouse dexterity is atrocious
Drawing with a touchpad sounds like it belongs in a modern circle of Dante's Inferno
I mean, you're using a tablet, no?
I forgot the 2 mean different things 
Gabriel ass model
Indeed indeed
My variant come with multiple wings actually lol (just too lazy to build the other 4) so technically it can do V1 pose
Ray
Is there a setting in the app to mirror what I draw
So it draws whatever on both sides of the paper
There's Symmetrical Ruler in Ruler tool
The gopro...

I'm re-reading heritage and nitpicking some wordings
And I forgot the most insane thing I'd done
Where someone describes Dragon Mages to Lexi as "your kind"
Not in a malicious way though
But reading it again now 💀 shits insane
And it immediately tilts Lexi enough to pull her scarf down to ask what they meant. After she's basically refused to remove it in public so far.
IT GETS WORSE HOLY FUCK SHE SAYS "YOUR PEOPLE"
Nah
I gotta scrap that
really feeling the rwby influence on your writing here
rember weiß in the first season
ngl i misread that as weeb
The person saying it is also in like two scenes
And is purposefully insufferable
I'd say job achieved
Just remembered Heritage has a catgirl
In my defence she is based off my actual cat so there's no weird shit.
Just make sure it stays that way lol
is there is a Walmart Chak OC
Itd honestly be a lot worse if there is weird shit when its based on your actual cat
The only "weird" is her habit of getting anyone and everyone possible to pet her cat form
Which my cat does
She's clingy af and wants everyone to pet her
She's a little clingy gremlin
"the creation of Bella"

Ah, yes, the twins on stream but lesbians off stream
Lol
Coincidentally finished a commission on Valentine's day, so I treat it as valentine gift to my client (I love al my clients, they are so patient) 
Happy Valentine's Day!
드래곤메이드 라도리
ドラゴンメイド・ラドリー
Laundry Dragonmaid
캡시☆야미
カプシー☆ヤミー
Cupsie Yummy
#OCGファンアート #遊戯王OCG https://t.co/wxufimf49Q
LAUNDRY NO. THEY'RE FRIEND NOT FOOD
The 200,000 word barrier has been breached
Nice

So I tried recreating the art by hand.
I've hit a point in my nitpicking of Heritage
Where I got to something that has pissed me off so badly for years that I might finally have to scrap it
And redo Fayne’s part in the plot. Cause it was meant to be the starting incident where Fayne shows off her not quite antagonist but rogue party part in it all. And I've never liked how it goes.

If I'd known what was to come when I pulled that fucking cord i never would have
To this day it still is a strange fact of my life that the work I've wanted to write for a decade began because I was stupid enough to hit myself with a personal alarm
This is a problem change tho
Cause this needs to be where Fayne, even if by accident, makes Lexi believe she is bad news
I hate it heeeeeeere
I know what I have to do
I have to open a new doc and write the scene again from scratch without trying to keep what's already down and edit around that
Aluber with this expression
Besties
Is there a way I can get access to read fanfic
I need to find old stuff I never wrote down outside of it
And now it's a problem.
Try asking solemn scolding
Only mods can view that channel if it still exists, so only they can help you
I'm scared I've made a mistake in killing a character, I've gotten five messages all saying they're either crying or just sad that she's dying
It sounds like you did a good job writing a character people like
And that the death wasn’t poorly done
nah that's a good thing lmao. Break your audience.
I say planning on creating some gutwrenching moments in the comic I'm writing
Yeah that means that people genuinely care, thats a good thing
This is good, you've got your own style poking through the mimicry, keep trying different art styles and see what features you feel comfortable with
Cupsie☆Yummy is yummy
I have no fuckign idea how but my brain is simply shit at drawing a fucking honeycomb pattern
for scales
Ray how did you draw Lexi's scales without going insane
Or maybe I'm just tht dumb 
Experience
Ray's been doing this for years
LIL-LA NO!
lmao
Yeah I like to draw dinos and dragons since wee lad so naturally learning about scale pattern owo
naruhodo
Oh right, Monster Hunter help me learning it because they has the knack of putting reptile skin on every fauna, like bear, deer, and boar 
At least it's true in gen 1, always feels Bullfango and Kelbi has patch of reptile skin texture in their model
Kirin for sure is scaly horse
Which prolly tick all of your box, especialle when you see their armor costume
Later gens are more diverse but you still get animal with scales like lions (Teostra/Lunastra), wolf (Zinogre), among others
Let's run it back
try a different way this time
since it's meant to be just covered in dirt and rock
Wait, IIRC CSP has reptile brush?
wait what
Sorry, my layout are a bit different from yours, and in black
Best of luck 
Okay that's nat
*neat
Although I was gonna make the scales like Lexi's
her little pattern here

Cause I like her arm ones a lot too
God you did such a good job with her art.
I love her so much
yeah I definitely took creative liberty to make hexagonal pattern
Glad you love it

It works really well.
I still love this one in particular
It's just so good.

Angry dragon

That's energy I need to continue drawing today, thanks
Not the angry one, just supportive one lol
once all your drawing is finished you can draw another dragon in heritage 



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