#Art and Writing

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radiant orchid
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if i own the tube colony im 100% having a tube that runs through the cityscape, and either its built towards the top or there is a mandate that nothing can be built above it

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theres 100% parts that are glass too so you can look down on the rest of it

viscid bobcat
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you'd have to make the colony way bigger than you otherwise would in order for the tube to not cause serious motion sickness to anyone who goes in the tube

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rotational gravity stuff needs the tube to be above a certain size because if its too small then the gravity at your head would be significantly less than the gravity at your feet, which would make you sick and possibly cause heart problems

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so you'd need the tube to have a really large radius in order to avoid that

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like it would need to be as thick as the length of a city block or something

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and in order to contain that you'd probably also need to increase the radius of the entire colony

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you'd probably also need pillars to hold up the tube so that it doesn't fall apart and collapse onto the actual colony

deep hatch
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i think the easiest answer is to just have the colony vertical instead of horizontal and have it in the middle

viscid bobcat
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that would do weird stuff to the lighting probably

deep hatch
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shrug its space i dont gotta explain shit

viscid bobcat
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i assume the point of it being horizontal is so that there's always a window directly above each part of the colony

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if it's all rings then the sky would be the ground

warm vale
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NGL it's gonna be real sadge if I can't give them a tower in the colony

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Cause of gravity at the top floors of the tower being lesser than the gravity at the base

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Even if the base is on the inner wall and goes across the diameter

cedar socket
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In today’s episode of ‘Trying to Write’, I am trying to give the OG Kamen Riders a fighting chance in a Dragon Ball crossover.

fiery jungle
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@warm vale Do you have Monster Girl Encyclopedia?
One of my (long list) of commission included one where they want monster girl with integrated Duel Disk in their body

tribal thicket
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You don't need to force it much. Power levels getting equalized is like given a lot of times in crossover stuff.

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It doesn't need to make much sense. Just that it's fun, usually you even have them pair up with similar~ish counterparts.

fiery jungle
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Stuff like these (spoilered some in case too much for the server, feel free to delete)

warm vale
fiery jungle
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Yeah generally just want to look at general anatomy to see what I can work with

warm vale
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ah okay

fiery jungle
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Am thinking something something Merfolk, because reminds me of Tear

warm vale
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Alright I'll have a look

fiery jungle
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inbf4 I ended up just drawing Kitkallos

warm vale
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Just so yo know. They're gonna be pushing NSFW cause of the nature of the document I possess

fiery jungle
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I think you can DM me instead

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I should've DM you instead

warm vale
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I did plan to cause I don't want to be banned but wanted to just make sure

cedar socket
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I forgot Piccolo existed for a bit…

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And Vegeta. I’m not sure where they would go in the fic I’m trying to write…

warm vale
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So I remembered I have a drawing pad still. And for the first time actually tried to draw a version of the big bads logo from the idea I had of it

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It looks like dog shit but the idea is there. The Fs back to back.

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I think it should be the arms of the Fs closer togethwr

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To make them actually look like wings

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It doesn't help all I have is a pen

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Marginally better

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Raaaaay. Hurry up and clear your comm queue orz

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Why learn to draw when I can just pay someone else to do it for me. SmugVanguard

fiery jungle
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I'm working on it

clever linden
warm vale
minor wraith
dense canyon
hearty gazelle
warm vale
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I can't tell if Poplar is looking for uppies or descending from the sky and this is the POV of diabellestar after she slept in and so did not feed them

green compass
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I think it's descending

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The shading doesnt make much sense if poplar is looking up

cedar socket
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so I was thinking of writing an anti-regression story where it's like the MC is kinda forgetful, so it defeats the whole "I know what's going to happen" thing.

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But it's not like he doesn't know completely, and he also tries writing a journal to remember properly.

warm vale
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So like. Inattentive kind of forgetful or like. Amnesic

clever linden
warm vale
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Cause innattentive is gonna get real old real quick

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Amnesia as played out as it is could work if it doesn't follow the usual of "rediscover their identity and what caused the amnesia"

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Or more like dementia. Where they have lucid moments but sometimes forget their friends

warm vale
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Like the ending of Wall-E where he's fixed but doesn't recognise Eve

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Actually that's kinda a banger idea

tropic brook
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i think they mean that the person regressing has forgotten msot of what happened in the original timeline

warm vale
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oh its an isekai thing?

golden summit
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I tried giving one of my main characters dementia. Hope I did it right.

warm vale
clever linden
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Think uh

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God unfortunately

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Redo of Healer is like

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The big example

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Except that does it mechanically different

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Because he doesn't die

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He just somehow can use his healing magic on time

fiery jungle
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A Beautiful Minds did a great job to visualize schizophrenia

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Granted, it was based on real story, so there's reference

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The realization that one of your friend never aged up after decades as you getting older

golden summit
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Schizophrenia I have some sources to use, but that works

fiery jungle
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Also how the teacher keep asking his student if they see what he see to confirms it is real whenever new people greet him

golden summit
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Oooh

tropic brook
warm vale
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ah

tropic brook
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there are some people that consider time travel isekai but i do not so

clever linden
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I say some should count

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Futurama

warm vale
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Back to the future

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1 and 2

cedar socket
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So it's like he kind of always has this nagging feeling that the person he just met is important in some way (they're actually a powerful figure in the future) etc.

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He just doesn't remember how (at first)

golden summit
tropic brook
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I mean theres already a plethora of stories like that so im sure it can work

warm vale
warm vale
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I think I've done a well and truly uh-oh

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And let what was meant to be a quicker arc or so get too big

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And now I'm in too deep cause I love the two it focuses on

hearty gazelle
cedar socket
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I see.

fringe fable
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Filthy brain. catnod

fiery jungle
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Now it's clean brein

clever linden
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you could say she's...

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brainwashing

fiery jungle
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So smooth it may no longer think

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RisuDoko💭
ToskaPeek

warm vale
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I decided to skim through some old stuff while I'm stuck on Shattered

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And man one of these

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If Heritage is a FT fanfic

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This is not even subtly a gundam one

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The fucking main one is just Exia but red and has wheels like a knightmare frame

tropic brook
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i mean, im gonna be honest with you here
as long as you add your own spin to it, having very blatant inpsirations is totally fine

warm vale
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I don't think this one even had its own spin

tropic brook
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ok yeah maybe work on that

warm vale
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Although I did remember this was where I pulled my flower weebery from

tropic brook
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1 to 1 isnt exactly ok

warm vale
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Cause one had called theirs Chrysanthemum

tropic brook
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but like for example, im watching kamen rider ryuki and almost every other plotbeat im like "wow, hello fate stay night and/or zero"

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(as in, they ripped those straight from ryuki)

warm vale
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I'll finish this then submit it to Sunrise as the next series after Evangundam.

tropic brook
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urobuchi isnt even subtle about it, he did it twice!

warm vale
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Speaking of subtlety. What's the best way to reference a specific song a character is singing but avoiding just using lyrics as non-dialogue text.

tropic brook
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describe what the song is about and the feeling

warm vale
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Cause it's easy with one singing Hush Little Baby but when I want them to use fly me to the moon as a lullaby it gets significantly harder

tropic brook
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ie, "and upbeat melody and text that deals with xy"

warm vale
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One of the engineers lives in their office and has bowls of fucking instant noodles just on standby

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Like they'd been left or forgotten about

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And one who if i ever did a Mk II of this

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Would be brainrot on legs

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I'm gonna go back and strangle past Yuri

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What convinced him and who allowed him to name a character "Joyce Jordan" who hates their 'old lady name' and calls herself Jojo instead

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SHAMBOLIC BEHAVIOUR FROM PAST YURI

golden summit
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Bro I literally made a mushroom say "among us" in my book

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It makes perfect sense in context (it is a part of a sentence) but I did so intentionally because the brainrot goblins told me to

warm vale
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At least in part of the sentence its just a double take moment.

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This one is from top to bottom a bad idea because they’re pure shithousery

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Who has a giant robot with actual guns and shit and decides to go "come catch these hands"

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And just punches the other giant robot

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Actually I know exactly who.

tropic brook
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i cant exactly give you flak for this, on one of my google drives i have a file named "Story idees", which is more than a decade old at this point and i will never open again

warm vale
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I too have that for MB Mk 1

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The cursed timeline.

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Where the Future versions Lexi and Alex had a kid who came back in time to destroy everything in a way I accidentally completely stole from Fairy Tail

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Although im my defence it was a filler arc so I'd never actually seen it

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Hence accident

warm vale
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You ever let a plot point get so out of hand

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It actually ripples all the way to completely killing the ENTIRE SECOND HALF OF A STORY

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I have actually

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Fucked it

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Fucking. I should've just made the doppelganger a normal person instead.

cedar socket
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So… any of y’all ever try adapting a pre-existing work in written form?

golden summit
warm vale
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And I'd rather try and find a new path than also cut down one of my favourite parts.

warm vale
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On the bright side

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Even in this new timeline it's caused

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I still get to use Brave New World as a title chapter

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I came to a compromise with that particular brain goblin. It got used but had to be properly not just cause it sounds cool

golden summit
golden summit
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Rip lesbian gas planet space noodle, and rip to space noodle species.

warm vale
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Cause I've realised Heritage's main group with Lexi was kinda set up like the power rangers

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You got the main five. Lexi, Alex, Kayla, Daniel and Joel.

And then the two extras. Blair and Cordelia

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And I had so little for Joel to actually do I just fucking erased him from existence

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Moved Kayla into the "mother of the group" role

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And folded Cordie and Blair into the five

golden summit
warm vale
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And it worked out well

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Because Cordelia is woman in armour.

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And so I made her cracked out of her mind

golden summit
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Yeah. Sometimes, erasing things you like winds up with results you like even more

warm vale
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Like she was putting hands on people she had no right to be boxing up.

golden summit
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I had to erase an entire fight with a giant golem made of 100 corpses, because its implications were inconsistent with established lore. Replaced it with a bit of character heart to heart and drawing more parallels between two different characters.

warm vale
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I then realised I also did it AGAIN with the secondary group. One of them did not speak the entire time she’s in a chapter.

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So I made her deaf and know does sign language stuff with one of the group so they have a nice bond

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And it worked out. Cause as well as those two having a thing.

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Writing a chapter solely from her PoV where she's feeling the vibrations to know what's about to come round the corner at her is actually kinda fun.

golden summit
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Hell yeah

warm vale
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Yeah Heritage 2 has a buncha odd stuff in it

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Including an absolutely generational crash out from Blake

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Which honestly is a justified crash out cause the person they fuck up deliberately called them the wrong name and Blake just boxes them up.

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Hits em with the two piece and chips combo

warm vale
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I've realised something else. I'm no longer able to name the 10th chapter "The Tenth World" when the full scale of the big bads base is revealed

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That arguably pisses me off more than the other problem

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Cause it's reminded me that the reference doesn't even exist now because I changed from sphere world to a side-3

minor wraith
fringe fable
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Labrynth Fridgidier

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New support! ❤️

frozen shale
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Lady Labrynth of the Midnight Snack

cedar socket
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So, I drew again. A Kamen Rider redesign.

warm vale
golden summit
warm vale
cedar socket
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I think I have a pacing problem.

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Should everything be fast 24/7, or do I have to slow down sometimes?

golden summit
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What do you think?

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Pacing isn't everything, but moments to slow down help to digest the fast scenes and have things that can't happen in fast scenes

cedar socket
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I see.

minor wraith
warm vale
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Question

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The second part of Shattered primarily has worlds fucked up by various means. i.e. 953 got smashed in the face by another asteroid and wiped out most of the population

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I need another idea thats out of the left field for what'd cause a "Broken World" as the arc calls them

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I already have "total pandemic kills most life on planet including leading to dome cities"

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Like that one power rangers series set in a dome city

golden summit
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Space kaiju go chomp

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Bite a chunk out of earth

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Just an incomprehensibly large threat taking a bite out of their world and moving on as if it does that all the time

radiant orchid
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bad idea: the animals of a world gain sentience and revolt

clever linden
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Animal Farm

warm vale
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Like it still needs to be sellable to an audience

hearty gazelle
warm vale
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War do be an ol' reliable

fiery jungle
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I do have idea similar with space kaiju, but reverse T-K extinction event where the kaiju/meteor bring space organism that soon would inherit the planet

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It's basically borrow YGO Meteor idea like Worm Nebula Meteor, Jurrac Meteor, Nibiru, and Xeno meteorus

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It's interesting how their meteor monsters are almost always nuke then float

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I wonder why is that

warm vale
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Also I came up

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With another banger title

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When a bulk of the Broken Worlds get visited

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To the Ends of the Worlds.

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Cause it's got the various versions of the MC with their respective copies of their bestie besides the 953 version.

cedar socket
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that sounds like a JoJo reference somehow.

warm vale
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Lmao

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I've kept outside references to a minimum

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Or tried to make them fit as naturally as possible

cedar socket
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i see.

warm vale
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Like the usage of "Second Impact" was solely down to Evangelion

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And it wasn't the most subtle but I feel it works

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I need to fix the margins for that eventually

cedar socket
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Doesn't look bad to me.

warm vale
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The most egregious

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Is a placeholder

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A chapter by the working title of "The Grand Blue World"

cedar socket
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I guess you have to climb aboard with your hopes and dreams to find what you're looking for with friends.

warm vale
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I'm probably gonna drop "grand" from it

warm vale
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Ah

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I remembered another egregious reference

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The final chapter

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Is called A Wonderful World

warm vale
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Lowkey

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I think that actually cooks

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Then again the big bads organisation is called the Avian Foundation so what do I know about good names

analog stone
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Nobody cares but my Danganronpa fanfic is 10 years old, so I updated its author’s notes right at the start to acknowledge the people who helped

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Doing this publicly because I wanna make sure everyone knows it: @clever pecan does a lot of work as a beta reader and sounding board for my story, and even though I keep going like “hey I’ll pay you for your help” he keeps saying “nah we’re friends”

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Genuinely an amazing friend and wonderful help, couldn’t do it without you. I’m sorry if this is a bit embarrassing but I really want the server to know how cool you are

golden summit
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Ovven is awesome, yeah

clever linden
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Ovven is based as fuck

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I am also liking his story so far

viscid bobcat
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incredibly common ovven w

clever pecan
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Aw, thanks Raz

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Also I do recommend yall check out Razs DR fanfic if you like Danganronpa >:)

analog stone
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please do notttt

tropic brook
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Youre in luck, as i do not like danganronpa

hearty meteor
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I don't know DR, but I'll drop by and leave a comment or two 😈

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I'm not against reading stories for series I've never experienced

warm vale
fiery jungle
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Good ol classic Dragonmaid strat

clever linden
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The FTK...

warm vale
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Even the great and powerful laundry

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must seals pass

fringe fable
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Kitkallos about to go gambling. Kirbylmao

warm vale
warm vale
deep hatch
nocturne karma
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you people are so greedy

nocturne karma
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y*ri fans

warm vale
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I am not exclusively a yuri fan

nocturne karma
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and yet no one is begging for Clavkiys to be confirmed as a homosexual

cedar socket
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so I wanted to 'redesign' a Power Ranger suit.

warm vale
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For the gay boys we have aluber and albaz anyway

nocturne karma
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my point has been proven

clever linden
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I mean, I will say for all the ones that Konami has thrown "hints" of being queer have all been women

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The Mayakashi & Shiranui duo
The entire Exosister archetype
Lovely/Lady Labrynth

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There's no male ygo card that has any form of queer coding.

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something something, fetishization of wlw for straight men

radiant orchid
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^

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But men are sexualized in ygo

cedar socket
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what's wlw?

radiant orchid
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It just isn't noticed as much

cedar socket
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women loving women?

radiant orchid
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I believe so

cedar socket
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I see.

nocturne karma
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so this isn't surprising

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also, centur-ion

clever linden
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I'm gonna put Centur-ion on the "I see it, but not as overt"

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Same for Sky Striker's Raye & Roze

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It's more your typical "very close" type relationship that makes for easy ship bait

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Whereas

  • Labrynth has a strong love theme, we know she REALLY likes her rival (the unnamed female knight) - also the Labrys is literally a lesbian symbol since the 70's
  • Mayakashi & Shiranui, the official lore description uses their meeting in a way where you can read the two hanging out as a romantic date based on how the Japanese language works
  • Exosister... their symbol is the lily...The lily in Japanese is Yuri. Which is where we got the word yuri from. The lily is literally slang for sapphic.
cedar socket
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I see. 百合, right?

nocturne karma
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it is honestly very exhausting to see my demographic shoved off into the endless abyss of AO3 and for people to pretend like actual homosexual men have representation and aren't just fetishized and turned into a vehicle of debauchery and unrealistic smut

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fanfiction will never be true representation

tribal thicket
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Centurion is just women and their energy partner. Like it's on the same level as Clavkiys and his gun.

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Raye/Roze are just enemies. Maybe sisters going pre manga. And if you go manga LORE, Roze is Raye's clone.

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In contrast, Mayakashi Shiranui is super overt, because maybe for the Bakemonogatari "Gently walk her home" types.

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Exosister, you could pretend is about actually sisters/sorority stuff Hypnocopium but it's clearly referencing a soeur system that is a staple of the genre, esp. Maria sama ga miteru.

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On the other hand, for gay men, all we have is MBT memes about Libromancer fire guy fucking his stand he fuses with,

nocturne karma
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yeah

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and the jokes are

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really unfunny

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especially because MBT thinks it's funny because he's bisexual

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and also shipping Aluber and Albaz is weird

tribal thicket
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Everything regarding Albaz is weird.

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Calling him a Twink when he is just a dude.

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Same with calling Aluber as beautiful drama kid while Albaz as a rough boy with a soft heart type, when they quite literally have the same face.

nocturne karma
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unironically we need a bishounen archetype

nocturne karma
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I don't care if the fujos co-opt it anymore, just give me card art of two androgynous dudes being cute together

tribal thicket
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The tri in tribrigade stands for the trio of Bishounen, Bara, and Twink.

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And Konami covered up all their faces instead.

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Only time we see faces is on the girls and when Shuraig broke his helmet v Fleur.

clever linden
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Also speaking of "weird but popular ships"

Just - Visas. All 5 of them are in a weird poly ship

tribal thicket
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Regardless of where you fall on the wlw rep side.

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It's a fact that the mlm side gets dogshit since it can't be sexualized by het men. pensiveengine

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Which is such a weird angle for Yugioh.

clever linden
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Yes.

cedar socket
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Huh.

clever linden
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But also cowards.

tribal thicket
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Since as much as people meme about Yugioh being horny it's like not even 10% of other games from jp.

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Even RUSH which is made for like 4 year olds is more horny than base Yugioh.

clever linden
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Yeah Rush is wayyyy too horny

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when it targets an even younger demographic

nocturne karma
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Shuraig is very pretty though

tribal thicket
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Nothing comes close to RUSH being like We need a minor alt art that just removes the hood, and has tits and legs out instead.

tropic brook
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God forbid a woman wants to change her style

green compass
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So thinking about it

tribal thicket
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I'd let it be, if it was a complete diff pose or smthg.

green compass
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Is @ignister tecnically mlm coded?

tribal thicket
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But, it's just a much rarer version in the same pack.

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No.

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Ai, the character is pretty gay coded.

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But, that doesn't bleed into the archetype much.

green compass
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A[love fusion]

dusk parcelBOT
tribal thicket
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Besides just being anime reference poses.

green compass
tropic brook
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Same with crystal beasts

tribal thicket
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This is referencing the Earth one being in love with Water.

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Hence being a Fusion Spell that summons the Earth Ignister.

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Also, just a good pun on Ai and Love.

nocturne karma
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Jesse and Jaden would've been an awesome relationship if left open-ended but fucking Yubel needs to ruin it

clever linden
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I mean, Yubel x Jaden is also queer

nocturne karma
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yeah but I don't like Yubel

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or the last season of GX for that matter

gleaming quarry
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drew a mech

cedar socket
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Cool.

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So for drawing mechs, I should try to make it all angular and jutting in general?

clever linden
lunar storm
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zombies love matters smh

gleaming quarry
cedar socket
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I usually think of mechs as being less... Round, so to speak.

gleaming quarry
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i just heavily reference my mechs to get a good feel for them

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well, round mechs exist

lunar storm
fiery jungle
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Owo

signal pumice
lunar storm
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I like to think they are

signal pumice
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🏳️‍🌈 ❤️ 🏳️‍🌈

signal pumice
clever linden
signal pumice
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I'm an Arc-V fanboy.

signal pumice
clever linden
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Fair enough I suppose.

signal pumice
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Wait, what would that make Astrograph Sorceror?

tribal thicket
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The anime makes it a fusion of the two.

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While IRL, we have it as a Stargazer evo with Timegazer getting Chrongraph, and Timestar being the fusion.

warm vale
warm vale
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While fixing this

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The original plan I had which got rippled out of existence is now gonna be what actually happens INSIDE the story

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Doing the timeline twister.

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One version of MC remembers the original plan. And when the divergence happens get brain muddled by the sudden change in what happened. Leading to the current batch of bullshit the actual MC is up to

analog stone
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Silly way to celebrate the tenth anniversary of my fanfiction: a non-canon chapter where the cast (including dead characters) are interviewed about their “performances”

fiery jungle
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Nice nice

cedar socket
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Do y’all think I can show my work on FF.net?

warm vale
fiery jungle
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Posted the reddit version fluff

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(I know Reddit ban Twitter link, so I'm using screenshot for context)

golden summit
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He never misses

warm vale
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The brain worms

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Are back at it

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And this time they want me to pull the ol' Zeon classic

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And colony drop the big bads base

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And to be honest I am not opposed to that from an imagery standpoint

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Brain: no. This is a bad idea just because you want to make another reference.
Me: If you'll consult the meme please.

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This meme is my "I can do anything I want" pass

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In the background to these brainworms I've realised the entire finale simply does not work

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And hinges on the MC being basically a petulant child which they haven't been the entire time and never showed any propensity to being so.

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So maybe it's back to Heritage and solving the tournament arc problem until I figure that one out

fiery jungle
hearty gazelle
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A character created by a Vs wiki enthusiast out of sheer spite to create the strongest character ever

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He wrote an entire story to support him so that he can bullshit out feats for this character

warm vale
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Question

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Are tournament arcs really as bad as I'm thinking it will turn out to be in Heritage 2.

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Cause I didn't have anything else planned even from the first version

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And idk if I'm just in my own head again or if I should look for something else

warm vale
clever linden
golden summit
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If you are confident in your ability to write interesting fights specifically, and if the story is already fight focused, it could work

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You could also do a subversive tournament arc where the tournament is merely the backdrop to some other things going on, and the fights are barely focused on at all.

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A tournament arc doesn't fit in every piece. It works in, say, dragon ball because the focus is combat and power comparisons.

viscid bobcat
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my oc ultimate guy can has the power to defeat any character with a page on the vs wiki and if you argue about it he can defeat you too

clever linden
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Anyway God, I'm stuck on my normal writing because I need to figure out powers for 2 supporting cast members.

And at the same time I'm working on scripting a comic

golden summit
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Ah, the age-old problem

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What kind of setting is it, and what context do these powers have?

lunar storm
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the red and blue suiseis

golden summit
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Powers for low-impact characters could simply be a statement about their personality to make them feel more alive

cedar socket
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So I wanted to write a battle shonen.

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mind if I drop the intro here real quick?

golden summit
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Bro you have just as much right to post your art as anyone else. Don't ask, just post.

cedar socket
#

    To the southeast of China lies the sunny country of warriors, Labanan — a land of passion, honesty, and hospitality. It is a wild, playful dog unaware of the tick that hides within its fur.

    In the Labanese capital of Balai, along a stony bayside walkway dotted with palms and coconut trees, stood a tall but otherwise inconspicuous mansion that towered over the walkway's restaurants, business centers, and hotels.

    The building's penthouse, shrouded in shadow, provided a widespread overhead view of the rest of the capital. A figure, barely discernible in the darkness, stood with arms folded behind their back.

    "Soon, the tournament shall open." It uttered in a deep, distorted drone. 

    It stretched out one hand into the fierce, bright sunlight, revealing an arm covered in metal, wiring, and circuitry. The fingers clenched into a fist with a scraping, creaking sound, and the hand withdrew, returning to the shadows.

    "And with it," the mechanical thing continued, slowly releasing its clenched fist, "my revenge on my creators. *I* will have the last laugh." It raised its head to look out over the city.

    A pair of eyes, each a different shape and color, glowed in the darkness - a yellow, empty, shield-shaped eye and a dark red, triangular eye with a snake-like slit for a pupil.  

    "Pitiful, hateful, evil humans!" Its voice rose in octaves. "Perish, for the hour of your destruction is at hand!"

    As manic, warped laughter filled the building's rooftop, only the calls of gulls answered this unheard prophecy of doom.```
warm vale
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Like the king of the hill has Blake being an utter gremlin and shooting anything that moves.

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Because Magical Gunslingers are cool

cedar socket
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Wait, do you guys have advice on writing tournaments?

warm vale
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Thinking about it there's only like 2 actual fights I need to write

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Kasumi vs Lexi
Erika and Allison'a tag team

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Cause the finale is an utter one sided thrashing

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And honestly is the most anti-climax thing possible

cedar socket
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I see.

warm vale
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Ayo this is calm

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Nevermind we good

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Fuck tournament arcs. Glad I'm only doing one

cedar socket
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My battle shonen story is basically a whole tournament... so I think it might feel wrong to any readers.

clever linden
clever linden
cedar socket
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I see.

warm vale
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I have a big cast of like 7 normal(?)

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And then Blake, Blair and Remy

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Blake exists just to be a contrarian shit. And I love them for it

fiery jungle
cedar socket
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My cast is... A Ryu ripoff, a Johnny Cage/Sanji ripoff, an android girl, a Kenshi ripoff, a buff monk, and a buff mechanic.

golden summit
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I got a biiig fucking cast because I need to swap cast every chapter

fiery jungle
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Cast rotation like MtG

fiery jungle
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Both related to YGO, having same expressions and all

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Must have done it subconsciously

golden summit
fiery jungle
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owo!

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So it's like anthology?

golden summit
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Sort of, yeah

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It's a trillogy of seemingly unrelated long stories with a single overarching plot

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Each part is its own thing, with its own unique personality. One's standard grimdark fantasy, one's even darker bloodborne/lovecraft style, and one is a dark comedy space opera on acid and magic mushrooms

mortal wolf
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I may or may not have been writing about ygo fanfiction frierun

fiery jungle
golden summit
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I've mostly been focusing on my second book now

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Well, I've mostly been sick, but when I DO write it's my second book

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Someone typing up a storm here owo

mortal wolf
fallow coral
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so i have several head canons that turned into a story but i'm not allowed to post a thread for my Au(sort of)time travel fic yet. Here are the headcanons: 1 Kisara and Seto married in secret at the Temple of Bastet so... 2 9 months later, Kisara **was **pregnant when she met Seto at the shrine. 3 this is more of a Seto HC: he **really **wants a girl bc she would be easier to keep safe. 4 before she gives birth, he **really **likes playing with Kisara's hair when they're alone. Kisara: 🙄 😆

golden summit
fallow coral
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5 oh Seto, how little you know. since Kisara died in childbirth their baby(Cassandra) is the new bearer of the White Dragon Ka

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6 Cassandra is raised in the 21 century(2006-2012)

fallow coral
mortal wolf
# golden summit White Forest's biggest fan I see

only a bit, it's not actually about WF moomingiggle
It's about Primite! the main character is Sir Prim who can turn into a knight with stone armor and has an affinity for rocks. He's a nice lad, also a short king but his transformation makes him taller

Though yeah he does run into some of the popular monsters. Planning to include a couple of the meta ones as either cameos or like relevant chars. Brawling with Detonator sounds fun BlobSweat

warm vale
fallow coral
warm vale
warm vale
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Have you lot finally had enough of me talking about heritage

tropic brook
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no links in messages

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hyperlinks rather

warm vale
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SMH

fiery jungle
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To prevent someone posting sussy link behind comment, yes?

tropic brook
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yea

warm vale
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Well while I solve the Multiverse Conundrum in Shattered I might as well shill Heritage again since I'm gonna pick at the second one until I solve said conundrum.

Heritage of the Dragon

Side Quest vol 1: The girl with two shadows

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there we go

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google docs links are so fucking ugly

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DW soon the link will be to amazon kindle store page for Heritage

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my main problem is still a cover

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I do not fucking know what to do for one

clever linden
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just throw ray a thousand gbp and ask him to figure it out

warm vale
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RAAAAY

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RAAAAAAAAAAY

warm vale
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Cause I don't wanna fuck it up and it looks like those booktok smut fantasy covers

golden summit
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There are people who do that professionally

warm vale
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I don't got professional money though

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I have "3 blokes in a shed building the greatest sniper in the world." money

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Maybe

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I should full send this

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Heritage did start off FT inspired after all

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Why not come full circle

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And base it off of an old FT cover

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This might just be my worst idea to date

clever linden
# golden summit What kind of setting is it, and what context do these powers have?

So, to super briefly explain. It is a superhero setting, though most powers are magical in nature (blessings/curses, bloodlines, specifici items, etc.) though some are tech based.

The current setting at the least for the first arc, has 5.5 heroes (the .5 is for someone who doesn't fight, and plays more of a mentor role so I'm not developing his powers yet)

I have powers for the main duo (who have basic powers and an elemental affinity of light and dark)

As for the other 3

I've got another duo, who are slightly older and more experienced than the main duo. One of these I've got developed, but I need a good complimenting ability for his partner.

And for the final hero, he's the only current public (since the .5 isn't known) solo hero in the fictional city.

Hero 1: She and another hero, Spotlight are a duo in their early 20's who've been heroes for at the least 6 years

Spotlight and her have obtained their powers from the same source (still need to figure out what that is), but it's likely magical in nature again.

To give a super brief description of Spotlight's Powers. He can mark one of two symbols on an object or person. He can make things with symbol A repel from each other, while symbol B attracts. Originally he could only attract things/people towards him (aka pulling them into the spotlight), which he'd use for like say - pull an attack towards him, pull an enemy towards him and perform a clothesline, or pull a friend out of danger.

I'm thinking her ability would be something that benefits from him being able to pull things towards himself specifically, but there's more creative uses of how the two interact with their powers outside of that. I'm thinking either her ability places some kind of area of effect somewhere (like a static aura that lingers on a location) or is a highly up close melee ability.

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As for Hero 2:

Hero 2 is the youngest of the hero characters, a 15 y/o closeted transmasc latino. (Only the older mentor hero knows about him being trans tho. He technically prefers he/they, but their hero persona goes he/him - while his civilian identity is still pretending to be a girl)

Because of how I'm doing the story, I want to avoid abilities that are considered too gendered, (certain powers just are more associated with men or women unfortunately)

What I do know is that because he's trying his hardest to "prove" himself, I know that whatever ability I do give him, I want him to have something with a clear but not too obvious defensive utility that can be used for protecting people, but he only ever uses its full offensive capability.

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As for how he got his powers, it's via an old family heirloom, so him being latino (still haven't figured out what country exactly, but leaning mexican) means I could take inspiration from something out of his culture

golden summit
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Buzzsaw energy shields

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I have a character in the exact opposite situation: has phenomenal offensive utility in her ability, but refuses to use it for anything but pure defense.

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Her shields can cut through enemies like butter, but she adamantly refuses to draw blood for cultural/religious reasons and freaks out if she ever does.

fiery jungle
golden summit
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As for hero 1, you can have her either be a berserker who gains power the more those she cares about get hurt, or have her be able to manipulate/empower someone

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Like, she could cause the focal point of her power to radiate intense heat/electricity/spikes

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She could puppet a willing subject to do impossible maneuvers and break the human limits

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Could also be a really slow but devastating melee attack

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Also, a name like "Showtime" works for a hero if she gained her ability at the same time as Spotlight

clever linden
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Though unfortunately none of these powers ig click for me

golden summit
clever pecan
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Showtime is a good name

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Maybe she creates zones that freeze people who enter them, based on the idea of stage fright?

warm vale
tribal thicket
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Why is Laundry hitting the Freeza pose?

warm vale
analog stone
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updated fanic

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is 2:40 now

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i slep

warm vale
radiant orchid
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this is a reference right

thick wigeon
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‘The ones inside the mouth is more delicious’ KEKW

cedar socket
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I drew again.

thick wigeon
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Looks nice thmile

cedar socket
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Spoiler alert: They'll eventually evolve into a more Sun Wukong style form.

cedar socket
#

I feel like Shou Tucker. Guess which 4 anime characters I forcefully merged for this abomination.

warm vale
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I had a terrible idea

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Since Heritage's official title came from a yugioh card

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It only makes sense that any cover should reference a card too

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I just need to find the right one

gleaming quarry
warm vale
modest oar
fringe fable
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Dancey

kind timber
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I'm attempting to get back into drawing

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Gotta resist the urge to just draw nonstop eyes

warm vale
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General cover idea sketch

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A dragon. Lexi the Dragon Mage and the dragon egg

fiery jungle
#

owo

warm vale
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Also I realised something

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So lightning comes in various colours right

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So I realised to differentiate between Lexi and Fayne's because they’re both Thunder Dragons

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Lexi’s is yellow as must be for lightning

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And Fayne's is white to make clear her level of power above Lexi

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And also doesn't look like just a blur of yellow everywhere when they fight

fiery jungle
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Named it after Spright and their color variations lol

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Upper-atmospheric lightning and ionospheric lightning are terms sometimes used by researchers to refer to a family of short-lived electrical-breakdown phenomena that occur well above the altitudes of normal lightning and storm clouds. Upper-atmospheric lightning is believed to be electrically induced forms of luminous plasma. The preferred usage...

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Err, Sprites

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Or just named the moves based on these TLEs terms owo

warm vale
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Allison and Erika as Mermail and Atlantean is such a shitpost

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I need to change Charlotte

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Since her thing is now potion throwing

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Speaking of her did I tell yall

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How I solved a problem involving her and how little I had of her talking

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I'd realised in the entirity of the first book she didn't speak once

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And to amend this I just her deaf and sign instead. And it strangely worked out

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Because now she and Blake are besties because at least one had to speak sign to understand her

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However it also worsened the look of their group as where I dump the diversity characters

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Because their group now has disability, gays, an enbie and two of the only 3 non-white characters (AFAIR)

fiery jungle
warm vale
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TERRIBLE

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FUCKING

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IDEA

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My delusions of grandeur are still ever present and determined for an anime of heritage

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But

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When Lexi uses her roar

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It'll be animated like Godzilla's atomic breath

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*scribbles down a note to commission Ray to draw smol Lexi in a godzilla onesie*

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I've had so many terrible commission ideas in my exile. Including the pride one

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Of Lexi having the ace flag painted on her cheek by Erika

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And I think there was uuh. There was definitely another meme one

golden summit
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Advertise, publish, maybe even learn to animate

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It's going to take a LOT of work, but you can make it happen if you try. Or at least get closer.

clever pecan
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Dont encourage Yuri

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Actually that came out meaner than intended

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My bad

warm vale
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Lmao

warm vale
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I want to publish

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I just need genuine readers to go through and beta read it

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And I'm basically done

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Except for a FUCKING COVER

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I hate covers

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They’re so annoying

clever pecan
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You do know the publisher handles the cover, right?

warm vale
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Yeah but I wanted to go self pub

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Mainly because dealing with a hundred rejections

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Would put my head on fucking mars

clever pecan
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Because its the only place big enough to contain your ego?

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Jokes aside

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If you self-publish, that makes getting an adaptation even less likely

warm vale
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But with an adaptation

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I would be unbearable

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Like.

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I'd have to have it how I envisioned it when I wrote it

golden summit
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Yuri

warm vale
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I'd fucking Stanley Kubrick that shit

golden summit
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They published Blood of Hercules and made a big deal out of it

golden summit
nocturne karma
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I got no idea where I'll put my webcomic, probably webtoons if people still use that

warm vale
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If that can get published I definitely can

golden summit
warm vale
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I also need to work on my pitch then

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For heritage

golden summit
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Focus first on editing

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You want your work to be as high-quality as possible before you approach a publisher

warm vale
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I have done almost nothing but edit

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For like 2 years between working on multiverse and the 2nd of heritage

golden summit
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Well then

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Now you need readers

warm vale
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I literally just need readers to like feedback and shit.

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Yeah

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I had some people read and like it

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But its the feedback part that's killing me

golden summit
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Bro, there is no access to the file

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Can't read it

warm vale
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Wat

warm vale
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I posted

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The wrong fucking link

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I'm gonna off myself

golden summit
warm vale
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Fixed

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Let us never speak of that again

golden summit
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Phoenix Academy?

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I'm down to read it ngl, but I do have other friends I promised to proofread for beforehand

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So it might take some time

warm vale
#

Dw

warm vale
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Can't believe I used the wrong link

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Ffs

nocturne karma
#

I've been in the planning stages of a comic for a couple of years now, I'll have to get back to drawing before it can go any further but I'm pretty much done with everything in the story

clever pecan
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Im still just writing

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I keep getting new ideas though VERYSADCAT

nocturne karma
#

the basic premise is a Victorian-era teenage blacksmith apprentice is sent to Japan at the tail end of the Meiji Restoration to seal all 72 demons (could be less, depends on how much I wanna cut down the length of the comic) of the Ars Goetia that have been unleashed by a corrupted manifestation of the Gnostic interpretation of Solomon, son of David and former King of Israel

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a lot of the comedy stems from the fact that the protagonist was studying how to be a demon hunter under a veteran at a college in England who is also filthy rich so he was able to import Japanese literature

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so the protagonist is a weeb or japanophile who is obsessed with this culture and when he finally touches down on the place he's read so much about it's during the literal Westernization period and it's completely unrecognizable from his expectations

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he also has his own suit of armor made to look like (his expectation) of a samurai as an alter ego but it's a Cardcaptor Sakura deal where he has to manually put it on because it's an entire suit of armor

clever pecan
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You could research Japonisme then

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The craze about everything japanese around the end of the victorian era

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The Mikado for example is a play that leans into that a little

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Of course, thats assuming you want to be accurate to the era

nocturne karma
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as accurate as I can be

clever pecan
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Yeah then thats worth checking out

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Actually, hold on

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Yeah lines up

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There genuinely was a craze like that around the time, so you can look into inspiration there

nocturne karma
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I'm also basing the protagonist's armor design on the old kamishibai character Golden Bat because the time period can line up and it'd be funny to think that he was walking around doing hero things and some random guy was like "a Golden Bat? I'm liking the sound of that..."

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but yeah I'll look into it

clever linden
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golden bat my beloved

clever pecan
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👍

warm vale
#

I forgot to say recently I actually had an idea for heritage

fiery jungle
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One commission is nearing done, time for another one

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The list is long and yet I have 2 weeks left

warm vale
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I got distracted by having to work..but the idea was do it as Cordelia as PoV. And do it LN style.

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Cause Cordie is a magicless knight and Kayla is magicless royalty and that's halfway to a LN title already

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Cause Cordie is already Kayla’s armed guard. It's an absolute layup of a LN pitch

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And gets dragged into Lexi and Fayne's bullshit

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Like in the "rebuild" version

warm vale
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Ganbaraaay

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Wait

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Was i exiled yet when I had the "isekai battle royale" idea

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I know I was exiled for reverse beauty and the beast and homo monster musume

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I can't remember which bad idea I left off with

tropic brook
warm vale
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Okay

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I'm trying to establish which terrible ideas you lot haven't heard from me yet

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And i mentioned killer queen since my return

fiery jungle
warm vale
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I was defo exiled for Three Laws

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Which is one I want to revisit

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It's a solid idea in theory

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Oh. And "The End"

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That one I was definitely exiled for

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I need to splurg about that at some point. Cause I'm gonna need help with it

modest oar
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Critter that Possesses the Millennium Eye or some shit
Wip

warm vale
cedar socket
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So I'm making the setting for a story. This is it so far...


Meto'o Muge was the first king and founder of the kingdom of Muge. The Meto'o Muge Academy for Nobles was named in his memory.

The Muge dynasty is still highly respected to the present day by the common folk, and at least one of its members is always either on the throne or in the noble class.

The Muge dynasty was succeeded by the Adams dynasty, named after Prince Adam Muge, ancestor of current king Jacob Adams and current crown prince Abel Adams.

The Yakujou family hail from Tomaya-no-moto, a kingdom to the east of Muge. Due to the valiance displayed by a Yakujou in a Muge war, the Yakujou family was conferred ducal status. Their current family head is Yakujou Leighton, a key player in Muge politics, and the heiress to his station is his daughter, Yakujou Claire, the fiance of the crown prince. 

Most people in Muge can use magic. However, the talent for its usage varies, with some being able to wield their magic proficiently, but others struggling to use it even briefly. There are two forms of disorders associated with magic - an inability to draw out magic, and an inability to control it - in short, a sort of magical incontinence.```
modest oar
warm vale
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so my tablet gave me a free trial of clip studio

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Time to unleash the horrors beyond horny comprehension

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The Anti-thesis to Ray

golden summit
fiery jungle
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Owo

warm vale
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This is how I'm gonna learn

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I've drawn on the wrong layer

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like 4 times already

golden summit
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Better not post them here if they're horny

clever pecan
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Yuri are you tracing

warm vale
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mainly just so I can figure out how the pens work

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these are not managable at all

nocturne karma
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that's not how that works

warm vale
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how what works

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I'm literally just trying to figure out the pens

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Ray back me up here

fiery jungle
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It is Clip Studio right? and you're using tablet? Then surely there's stabilization option

warm vale
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yeah there's stabilization

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is it meant to make the line lag behind the pen

fiery jungle
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Yeet

warm vale
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ah okay I thought my shit was just being weird

fiery jungle
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Sometimes when I want to make looong lines I cranked that up

warm vale
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naruhodo ne

fiery jungle
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Because my jittery hand would makes them lines not straight, but stabilization helped smoothed them out

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For shorter strokes, use lower stabilization

warm vale
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It is entirely traced over your angry lexi art

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but I'm getting the hang of it

fiery jungle
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Generally I'm fine when someone new is tracing if it's clear it's for practice

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(of course, artist are expected not to rely on it especially when it comes to commission)

warm vale
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Also since I commissioned this Lexi art I get a free pass anyway

fiery jungle
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I remember when a Brony commissioned to draw his changeling character, so I have finally able to whip out my anthro! changeling design in my sketch book

warm vale
#

I SHOULD DRAW A PONY

fiery jungle
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Them having a mask because they're shapeshifter, idk disguise and mask just go well together

warm vale
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I feel like I need to get a case

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that can double as a stand

fiery jungle
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If you need figure for reference, try looking for Lucky 13 dummy figure

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It's cheap, easy to built, very poseable, has many accessories, come with its own stand as well

warm vale
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I love this program

warm vale
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I have figured the pens out

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Ray I broke my side bar

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help

fiery jungle
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Owo!?

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what do you meant?

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Can you drag that back?

warm vale
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so it looked like this

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Then I deleted somethin and the layer controls went all wojnky

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and the second vertical tool set is missing

fiery jungle
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Huh

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Try restoring to default?

warm vale
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I think I fixed it

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but I can't get the transparency controls to pop

warm vale
fiery jungle
warm vale
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Now I just have to find transparency controls

warm vale
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I've realised I could now juat

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Get good at drawing

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And do the cover to heritage myself

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Simply unstoppable

clever pecan
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Good luck with that

fiery jungle
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Good luck on your endeavor

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The good thing of having these figure is, not only they're function as reference image, but you can get sassy

warm vale
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It comes with wings

green compass
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Chat

warm vale
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Time to add Dragon form Lexi onto my list

green compass
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Do i need something with touchscreen to draw digitally?

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My mouse dexterity is atrocious

warm vale
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Drawing with a touchpad sounds like it belongs in a modern circle of Dante's Inferno

green compass
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I mean, you're using a tablet, no?

warm vale
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Oh you edited it

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Yeah SCREEN is good

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Touchpad I'd rather chop my fingers off

green compass
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I forgot the 2 mean different things nukgar

fiery jungle
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Indeed indeed

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My variant come with multiple wings actually lol (just too lazy to build the other 4) so technically it can do V1 pose

warm vale
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Ray

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Is there a setting in the app to mirror what I draw

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So it draws whatever on both sides of the paper

fiery jungle
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There's Symmetrical Ruler in Ruler tool

warm vale
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Lovely jubbly

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Good to know

warm vale
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SHE FUCKING KILLED HIM

viscid bobcat
warm vale
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I'm re-reading heritage and nitpicking some wordings

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And I forgot the most insane thing I'd done

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Where someone describes Dragon Mages to Lexi as "your kind"

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Not in a malicious way though

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But reading it again now 💀 shits insane

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And it immediately tilts Lexi enough to pull her scarf down to ask what they meant. After she's basically refused to remove it in public so far.

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IT GETS WORSE HOLY FUCK SHE SAYS "YOUR PEOPLE"

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Nah

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I gotta scrap that

tropic brook
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really feeling the rwby influence on your writing here

warm vale
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Explain yourself

tropic brook
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rember weiß in the first season

warm vale
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BOMBACLAT

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I was gonna say

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Which volume

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Monty volumes or post-monty

viscid bobcat
warm vale
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The person saying it is also in like two scenes

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And is purposefully insufferable

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I'd say job achieved

warm vale
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Just remembered Heritage has a catgirl

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In my defence she is based off my actual cat so there's no weird shit.

hearty meteor
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Just make sure it stays that way lol

fallen sundial
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is there is a Walmart Chak OC

tropic brook
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Itd honestly be a lot worse if there is weird shit when its based on your actual cat

warm vale
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The only "weird" is her habit of getting anyone and everyone possible to pet her cat form

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Which my cat does

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She's clingy af and wants everyone to pet her

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She's a little clingy gremlin

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"the creation of Bella"

fiery jungle
warm vale
fiery jungle
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Ah, yes, the twins on stream but lesbians off stream

fiery jungle
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Drawn so much even I'm drawing on my dream

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The grind never stop

warm vale
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Lol

fiery jungle
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Coincidentally finished a commission on Valentine's day, so I treat it as valentine gift to my client (I love al my clients, they are so patient) sadthumbsup

warm vale
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LAUNDRY NO. THEY'RE FRIEND NOT FOOD

tribal thicket
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If they weren't food, they wouldn't be so tasty.

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analog stone
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The 200,000 word barrier has been breached

clever pecan
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Nice

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cedar socket
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So I tried recreating the art by hand.

modest oar
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I've hit a point in my nitpicking of Heritage

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Where I got to something that has pissed me off so badly for years that I might finally have to scrap it

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And redo Fayne’s part in the plot. Cause it was meant to be the starting incident where Fayne shows off her not quite antagonist but rogue party part in it all. And I've never liked how it goes.

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If I'd known what was to come when I pulled that fucking cord i never would have

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To this day it still is a strange fact of my life that the work I've wanted to write for a decade began because I was stupid enough to hit myself with a personal alarm

golden summit
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That's the thing about writing a book, it will always change

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Even large changes

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This is a problem change tho

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Cause this needs to be where Fayne, even if by accident, makes Lexi believe she is bad news

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I hate it heeeeeeere

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I know what I have to do

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I have to open a new doc and write the scene again from scratch without trying to keep what's already down and edit around that

golden summit
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Yup

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Been there, it sucks

clever linden
fiery jungle
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Aluber with this expression

warm vale
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Catboy Aluber

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Besties

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Is there a way I can get access to read fanfic

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I need to find old stuff I never wrote down outside of it

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And now it's a problem.

golden summit
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Try asking solemn scolding

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Only mods can view that channel if it still exists, so only they can help you

analog stone
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I'm scared I've made a mistake in killing a character, I've gotten five messages all saying they're either crying or just sad that she's dying

open bridge
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It sounds like you did a good job writing a character people like

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And that the death wasn’t poorly done

clever linden
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I say planning on creating some gutwrenching moments in the comic I'm writing

clever pecan
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Yeah that means that people genuinely care, thats a good thing

charred flare
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I created my first comic.

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You're welcome.

hearty gazelle
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I have no fuckign idea how but my brain is simply shit at drawing a fucking honeycomb pattern

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for scales

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Ray how did you draw Lexi's scales without going insane

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Or maybe I'm just tht dumb RL_thonk

golden summit
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Ray's been doing this for years

frozen shale
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egg

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it occured to me

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like 20 minutes ago

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It looks like a creme egg

warm vale
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lmao

fiery jungle
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Yeah I like to draw dinos and dragons since wee lad so naturally learning about scale pattern owo

warm vale
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naruhodo

fiery jungle
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Oh right, Monster Hunter help me learning it because they has the knack of putting reptile skin on every fauna, like bear, deer, and boar Nyanhehe

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At least it's true in gen 1, always feels Bullfango and Kelbi has patch of reptile skin texture in their model

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Kirin for sure is scaly horse

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Which prolly tick all of your box, especialle when you see their armor costume

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Later gens are more diverse but you still get animal with scales like lions (Teostra/Lunastra), wolf (Zinogre), among others

warm vale
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Let's run it back

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try a different way this time

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since it's meant to be just covered in dirt and rock

fiery jungle
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Wait, IIRC CSP has reptile brush?

warm vale
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wait what

nocturne karma
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I will get my tablet back from my sister

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drawing begins again

fiery jungle
fiery jungle
warm vale
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Okay that's nat

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*neat

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Although I was gonna make the scales like Lexi's

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her little pattern here

fiery jungle
warm vale
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Cause I like her arm ones a lot too

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God you did such a good job with her art.

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I love her so much

fiery jungle
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yeah I definitely took creative liberty to make hexagonal pattern

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Glad you love it

warm vale
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It works really well.

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I still love this one in particular

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It's just so good.

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Angry dragon

fiery jungle
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That's energy I need to continue drawing today, thanks

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Not the angry one, just supportive one lol

warm vale
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once all your drawing is finished you can draw another dragon in heritage whale

fiery jungle
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🐉 fluff

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Dang I forgor to repost my Raiden art for valentine yesterday

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...White day it is

warm vale
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egg 2.0

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i am coming to grips with this program

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I hate it

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but I'm getting to grips with it