#Art and Writing

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cedar socket
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Short and petite, Hiroko had chocolate brown hair tied into girlish pigtails. With big, dark brown eyes and a downcast expression, she was like a deer caught in a hunter’s sights, a lost puppy caught in the rain. Something about her and her sad gaze made Claire awkward and uncomfortable. Guilty, even.

river forge
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This was made by my friend, if you like it, please support her

knotty ibex
fringe fable
smoky quarry
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Hehehehehe

thick wigeon
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Whats that? also Why does it look like one of these lol

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hard furnace
charred flare
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My master disk is a combination of the standard duel disc the reality simulation that you see kaiba using in the beginning of dsod and the duel gazer from zexal to create an immersive mmo yugioh experience

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Whatever you have your accessories on on master duel is what displays on the master disc

smoky quarry
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Update

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Sanding is going well

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Im able to fit dragon shield sleevrs inside

nocturne karma
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BADASS

smoky quarry
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Thanks

open bridge
clever pecan
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Ah yes

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The Hussie, the Powerscaler and the Horny

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I swear theres a good version for the second on h

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Oh I got it

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The Hussie, the Horikoshi and the Horny

smoky quarry
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And then theres this Asshole

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Whos all 3

golden summit
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Does that make me a hussie?

clever pecan
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Andrew Hussie

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Creator of Homestuck

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Its because he is known for exactly that nyaruhodo

hearty meteor
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petition to replace Horikoshi with Gege in this analogy

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Horikoshi has thought "this would be cool", this would be hot", and "this would be touching" at different points

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Gege's only thought is "cool"

clever pecan
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Yeah but Horikoshi starts with H nyaruhodo

weak patrol
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hgege

fiery jungle
hard furnace
real hearth
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Wip for some custom Buster Blader / Destruction Sword cards.

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hard furnace
real hearth
charred flare
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so i was trying to make a yugi pixel art sprite

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specifically yami yugi

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but like

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his design is hard

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like i try making it even number of pixels and the hair looks too fat

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and the odd number of pixels the face looks weird

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also i feel like the sprite is too big lol

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if i'm going for a 16x16 tile size

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yugi is smol

molten arrow
bold urchin
clever pecan
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Very pretty

hard furnace
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Hey I want to make some summing chants for my custom Yugioh monsters, and since this is the Yugioh subreddit and this is kinda writing, I want some help

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Elemental ArchDragon Of Fire Blaze Burner

Elemental ArchDragon Of Water Deep Sea Leviathan

Elemental ArchDragon Of Wind Eye Of The Storm

Elemental ArchDragon Of Earth Primordial Titan

Elemental ArchDragon Of Light Pulsar judgement (already has one)

Elemental ArchDragon Of Dark Ruthless Wrecker

Elemental ArchDragon Of Clear Nonexistent Nightmare

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Here’s the arts

hard furnace
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Ruthless wreckers can’t be to long because it’s gimmick is bringing it back over and over and over to get its on summon effect

Maybe something like how Yuya says “burn bright odd-eyes pendulum dragon”

fallen sundial
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I think I'll do a writing spring tonight
Get back into the swing of things

golden summit
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but it's not spring, it's autumn

modest oar
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Speedroid Kokeshibell

formal igloo
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Paint on wall that i'm currently working

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Takes a lot of time. I'm trying to make it as detailed and possible and trying to not miss anything

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It's 2.20 x 2 meters

charred flare
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What do you think should happen to sayer

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Should marko actually kill him

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Dark signer sayer sounds like a good concept

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Oooooooh

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I know a good one

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Before the duel against sayer

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What if mokuba couldn’t handle the weight of the fact he’s setos brother and markos friend and marko is slipping into darkness and he doesn’t want seto to be heartbroken

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What if all that causes mokuba to be a dark signer with the hundred eyes dragon

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And a pure earthbound deck with all the earthbound immortals

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and the shadow realm corrupted his mind

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And the signs show up early on

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He starts going a little crazy after marko’s was brought back into the light

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Nah

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Let’s do dark signer marko but he’s known as the black dragon

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Mokuba just struggles with how much weight is on his shoulders

molten arrow
left ermine
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a friend of mine made this, would be awesome if you guys show support 🤍

modest oar
fallen sundial
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Got 1300 words down. I'll edit them later tonight.

smoky quarry
modest oar
fringe fable
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That's what you get for abandoning Fish bro, Carrie.

thick wigeon
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One week before Inktober yall

fringe fable
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You reminded me that I didn't finish last year's inktober. 🤣

hearty meteor
crude slate
clever linden
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Neat

spring belfry
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Hello all

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I have a project I would like to share for anyone who is interested. I'm currently working on an achievement set for Capsule Monster Coliseum, and for this set I thought it would be cool if the badges were created by the fans. Each piece given I will give credit in the comment section of the achievement.

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send me a ping if you're interested.
I created the following spreadsheet with monstered listed. If you would like to create a small image for the monsters, just put your user name in the column next to the monster that you would like to create a piece for. https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1E7qzRvjbYljxUWdxk0sugmb_JpS8OEwYyuSWKIEBLPU/edit?gid=0#gid=0
The size of the badges will be 96x96, so if they are larger, they will shrunken down and cropped if needed.
Thanks.

Google Docs
Yu-Gi-Oh Capsule Monster Coliseum Art List
cedar socket
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I want to do Inktober… but I don’t think I can. Ah well.

bleak scroll
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https://www.ppxiv.net/en/artworks/99687405

phixiv
平地
無題

Twitterに投稿してたやつです
#Yu-Gi-Oh! Trading Card Game, #Sky Striker Ace - Raye, #Red Cartesia, the Virtuous, #Dogmatika Ecclesia, the Virtuous, #白銀の城の召使いアリアーヌ, #Sky Striker Ace, #Twitterまとめ, #ごはんはたくさんたべるタイプ, #Swordsoul of Mo Ye, #Dragon Maid(Yu-Gi-Oh!)

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can anyone recognize the shoes?

thick wigeon
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Surprisingly this thread had more users than #1020783956184023070

green compass
# bleak scroll

Dogmatika ecclesia
Any xyz exosister
S:p little knight
Crystron citree

charred flare
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I’ll give you the rundown of my characters decks
Marko: Dark Dragons
Lora: witches
Louie: level 2 monsters
Lucy: birds
Nero: floodgate Stun
Zing: Food
Cassidy: Halloween

That’s all I know so far

hard furnace
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There is a reason for this though!

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They each have a different playstyle based around different levels

hard furnace
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A good example is yukai and yukishi

Same body different personality’s (kinda just Yuya and Yuto but it yuto has yuri’s personality)

Yukai plays level 4 elemental dragons while yukishi nearly exclusively summons level 12 elemental dragons with “once per duel” effects.

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charred flare
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The tattoo that marko has is controversial

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Because lora did it with a sauntering tool and colored chemicals

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As part of this so called “pact” as she calls it which marko considers a relationship

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AND THEYRE KIDS

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12 to 13

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Yea Lora’s mental state is always put into question but marko nono he loves her the way she is

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He thought about asking her out but lora made the move on him first

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But she is tame compared to Nero’s gang

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Ugh

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Lora does witchcraft just because she likes witches

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But that’s it

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And she doesn’t do it around everyone

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Nero’s group however reveres such practices as their religion

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And they are very good duelists

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Especially nero

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Oooooooooh

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Nero is a son of a bitch to duel against

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Because his deck is floodgate stun

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With grave keepers

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Yea

thick wigeon
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Paint now having layers is godsend

fallen sundial
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paint has layers now?

eager bronze
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only for win11

fallen sundial
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I need to get into a writing habit

lunar storm
thick wigeon
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Morpeko is harder to draw the body, the Helheim fruit is just hard-everything 💀

hearty meteor
fallen sundial
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I appreciate this

tired crystal
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Probably a long shot, but does anyone remember a person on Twitter who used to draw Z-Arc fan art, or even of Z-Arc’s cards, under the name of “Fish” something?

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I haven’t seen any art from them and it’s been quite some time

hard furnace
tired crystal
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I remember hehe bro is cracked

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There was another artist who used to draw Z-arc and other dragons (including Cyber Dragons as humanoids)

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Found it actually, it’s this artist, no joke they’re crazy good

stray raft
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Behold: Fiendsmith's Desirae, written with a pen

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thick wigeon
fringe fable
golden summit
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When you draw called by vs stun

hard furnace
smoky quarry
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The Duel Terminal rares need to make a comeback!

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tired crystal
hard furnace
tired crystal
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But ye I know in the original Lore Z-ARC and Zarc are one in the same haha

hard furnace
tired crystal
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Absolutely, it’s actually one of my favourite cards haha

ancient bough
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rex and weevil

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tired crystal
outer schooner
golden summit
fringe fable
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"With love. Heart."

tired crystal
smoky quarry
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Made 2 jet shark proxies

tired crystal
tired crystal
cedar socket
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So I’m doing Sketchtober.

fringe fable
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Chamber's Dragon form revealed. catbless

fiery jungle
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And issa banned already

formal igloo
hard furnace
formal igloo
turbid finch
charred flare
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Sayer’s deck is getting interesting

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I just don’t have a high enough psychic tuner for pep

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Psychic end punisher

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But I have tuners for lv8 and 9

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And he’s having diablosis with shangri ira

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He has two numbers

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Yes there’s multiple objectives in my story

charred flare
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Reobtain the numbers find the pieces of the millennium puzzle as well as the other millennium items stop the Arcadia movement and undo the convergence

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While enjoying the card game to the fullest

modest oar
tired crystal
tired crystal
modest oar
tired crystal
tired crystal
knotty ibex
nocturne karma
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nice

knotty ibex
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Concept for a Character for a Card Video Game a Friend and I tinker on right now

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fiery jungle
tired crystal
cosmic shell
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Have this Yuri fanart for celebrating the event

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hard furnace
modest oar
viscid bobcat
tired crystal
fallen sundial
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Shit
Tomorrow NaNo starts
Gotta settle on an idea tonight

clever pecan
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What are the options?

fallen sundial
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gonna copy what I wrote in #anime_and_manga since they're all fanfic ideas

clever pecan
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Hmm

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Tbh Im not a big enough fan of any of those to really give a good suggestion I feel

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The series I mean

knotty ibex
hearty meteor
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GDI it’s already November

fiery jungle
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2024 is almost over

modest oar
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She's literally defrosting as we speak

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Thank God we still have Thanksgiving to hold her back

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😭

knotty ibex
tired crystal
tribal thicket
fiery jungle
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Emilia owo!

tribal thicket
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Hello fellow art connoisseurs, does the face on this art feel off to any of you? Smthg about gives me the same vibes as AI anime girl art.

thick wigeon
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Seems okay

fiery jungle
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It is conventional YGO art

tribal thicket
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Idk, smthg about that face/eyes has that plastic feel to it.

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That's not the case with the other two monsters.

fiery jungle
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I understand your concern tho, especially since lotsa Deviantart artist tends to upscale YGO card art image to higher resolution, and as result, some of the detail kinda become unspoken mess, which can give you that AI feeling

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(As someone that has been looking for reference image but yugipedia just doesnt give big enough image in their gallery, I know this all too well)

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YGO art is just at unfortunate place where you often notice weird anatomy here and there, like how Lovely Labrynth waist works

thick wigeon
viscid bobcat
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this is a real yugioh card

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it just got revealed

thick wigeon
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Oh

fiery jungle
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I think what Dae means is if Konami artist has resorted to AI usage for their newer cards (which honestly would be in-character for Konami), so I try to cleared that just how YGO conventional artstyle looks

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Like comparing Reich-heart in concept art to actual card art is like night and day

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Concept art has more personality

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While actual art used in the card looks amateurish

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They got 4 pose and decided to pick the worst one

hearty gazelle
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God his silhouette is abysmal

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He's so crunched up and then there's the brightness of it all that just meshes it all together

fiery jungle
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Yeah it's very hard to read

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Background having same color doesnt help either

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Like, how do you make Eva 01 color scheme looks this bad

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Personally I like the B option, it looks dynamic while giving the most clear sillhouette

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But if they like the pose they give him, at the very least D option gives the most personality

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The one they pick is just bland

hearty gazelle
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It's also so much more readable

hearty gazelle
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Like what the hell is this

viscid bobcat
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power stance

fiery jungle
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Phobiamaxxing

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Dude just collected all the worst poses that his Funko Pop form unironically better version of him

viscid bobcat
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he'd look so much better if his face wasn't so weird

hearty gazelle
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I think the main thing that kills it for me is his right arm

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The hell is it doing

fiery jungle
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His face doesn't strike fear to the heart of men, how he ended up as phobia planet ruler is beyond me

hearty gazelle
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Something like this reads better to me

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His arm sort of like it's grasping something translates the cockiness of his pose to his upper body

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Alternatively you could fully commit to scrunching him up, have the perspective that he's standing above someone and taunting them with the right arm reaching towards them

fiery jungle
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Yeah it relly should be hang up in the air

viscid bobcat
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for me it's the contrast between the stupid face and the extreme amount of detail in everything else

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like his design is super complicated but then his face looks like "how to draw manga"

fiery jungle
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And just extend the left hand further

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oshit he do have "how to draw manga" face

thick wigeon
hearty gazelle
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It doesn't help that his colour palette is very... Vtuber like

thick wigeon
tribal thicket
hearty gazelle
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The arcs on 3 are beautiful

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His body leans in the right way, his hair flows with weight all following the one arc of the slash

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4 is absolutely the pose they should've gone for though, it conveys his cockiness perfectly, has that perspective to it like he's above you, and the right leg looks appropriately positioned in the back, like he's leaning forwards towards the viewer

tribal thicket
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I will bat for Scareclaw pre-transition to plush form tho.

hearty gazelle
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He is fumo coded

tribal thicket
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Even if I don't like the overdesigned aspect, I could see 14 year olds love the edgelord aesthetic.

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Shame he gets oneshot by random dude with no expression in the same set he is introduced.

hearty gazelle
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I think the key takeaway from this is that you can't overdesign something and not fan it out

tribal thicket
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They really did pick the worst one.

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I remember smthg similar happened with SwoSo Fleur.

hearty gazelle
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The pose itself isn't bad, it's the armour that betrays him so badly

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It's so bulky it makes the silhouette just completely bleed into eachother

tribal thicket
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Just imagine.

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hearty gazelle
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I'm not huge on this pose tbh, for either of them

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Out of them though this one is the better

hearty gazelle
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That is a good ass curve

fiery jungle
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I like the one we got, but yeah this has more personality

hearty gazelle
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My main issue with this one is the left arm

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But

hearty gazelle
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This is a good ass silhouette

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I feel like the way to fix the left arm issue is just to angle the arm past the elbow up/towards the body a little more

nocturne karma
hearty gazelle
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A little weightless but much better

nocturne karma
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now if you wanna talk about bad arts

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I love this heart but I also hate it

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art, too

hearty gazelle
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The actual armour is very cool

tribal thicket
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Did we ever get an explanation on the galaxy arms/body these guys have?

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Or is it just it be like that sometimes.

nocturne karma
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that's their JO crystal hand

tribal thicket
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Feels so wack that Riseheart is the weakest of them all. Like he needs someone else to beat Reino to get to him. Same with previous invasions failing in Scareclaw world.

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Like a couple of dogs and mermaids were able to fend off the invading Kash boys who look like this.

hearty gazelle
tribal thicket
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a[kashtira ogre]

dusk parcelBOT
hearty gazelle
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It's the armour that absolutely fucks it, he looks way too heavy and scrunched up for that nimble positining

nocturne karma
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in my honest opinion

tribal thicket
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Ariseheart looks sick. Only change I'd do is make the left arm a bit forward and bit to the side, it kinda gets lost at that angle, but I guess they wanted as much as the spear in frame as possible.

nocturne karma
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I would've gone with a pose like this for ariseheart

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hearty gazelle
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I honestly can't tell what this pose is other than an attempt to be cool

hearty gazelle
nocturne karma
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it's a bandai pose to show off those wings

tribal thicket
# fiery jungle

The arm being like this one's 1/4 would have been great too.

nocturne karma
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ariseheart's art being so busy makes you forget for a sec that this guy has a whole wingspan

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just make it more dynamic is all

tribal thicket
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I want an artwork like this for a spear guy, man.

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Would go sicko mode.

nocturne karma
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this would also be acceptable

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tribal thicket
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Doesn't even have to be his mon form, just throw it on a S/T.

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Hmmm, not sure how to post that as a gif or smthg. Shame

hearty gazelle
# tribal thicket

I'm not huge on how scrunched this is, it looks more like he's being fired out of a canon or something rather than charging for a stab

tribal thicket
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It looks better in the cutscene.

fiery jungle
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Man Visas artwork do be hit or miss, no wonder I hardly care about them

tribal thicket
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A better frame/angle of this could work.

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Bad art is fine. Main issue is the story.

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Like Visas was the most sleeper big LORE we've got.

fiery jungle
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Like the only good looking archetype are Tear and they're just Water Kronii and her mermaid fellas

nocturne karma
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it's so unfair that the coolest looking visas archetype was the most undersupported

tribal thicket
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Tear also has cathedral glass aesthetic on the fusions, which is super sick.

nocturne karma
tribal thicket
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I'm not that huge on the main decks. I don't hate them, but I wouldn't call them great.

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The fusions are just mwah.

fiery jungle
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Yeah the fusion are gorgeous

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Mannadium looks stronger than they are in actual card game where they are just engine

tribal thicket
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Watching Rise and Rium randomly being just Red and White Visas is so funny because it clearly came midway. You could argue Reich is somewhat similar but Reino doesn't look the others so much.

fiery jungle
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Like this dude heckin rider kick evil Visas

tribal thicket
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Ye, these have the same face. Trust.

fiery jungle
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Yeah Reino and Reich looks like their own character

hearty gazelle
fiery jungle
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Rise and Riun are just them giving up midway

hearty gazelle
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That is beautiful

tribal thicket
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I would rotate the back arm a bit.

hearty gazelle
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I can see that yeah

hearty gazelle
# nocturne karma

With this id try and make the right arm outstretched again with it behind him as a bit of perspective but otherwise it does give that feeling of floatiness

tribal thicket
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I just noticed.

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Reich doesn't have his hand outstretched. That's just his knuckletip claws.

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LMAO..

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I always thought his arm looked so weird, but those bits aren't even his fingers.

fiery jungle
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Dude be trying looking like wolverine

tribal thicket
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Man really was cooked too much in the accessory oven.

hearty gazelle
fiery jungle
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But yeah it disturb the silllhouette

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Like how bad this little accessories change the vibe of entire thing

hearty gazelle
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Bro was created in the Vtuber factory and then got stuck on the accessory section of hot topic

fiery jungle
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That explains the Funko Pop

tribal thicket
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The worst part is deffo the open six pack.

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Like at that point, just close it up with more spiky armor bro.

fiery jungle
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Yeah the conxept art doesnt even put that much emphasize on the pecs

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They over detailed that part just makes it looks amateurish

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(Because I used to put sixpack in everything back in teenager years)

hearty gazelle
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Especially with how lean his legs are

fiery jungle
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The pecs doesnt even drawn good RisuSob

hearty gazelle
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They kinda just look like a pack of rolls at the store

fiery jungle
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Other sixpack made me want to grate cheese on them
Reich pack made me want to yoink one of them for munchies

next cradle
fiery jungle
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Yeah his sword bending too much in actual art it made it floppy

primal crag
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Let's not forget how Vampire Fraulein has more legs than God.

tribal thicket
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A worthy rival.

next cradle
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Not even that bad a spine snap for anime honestly and something something exaggerated proportions

modest oar
tired crystal
fringe fable
bleak scroll
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does anyone know of any good YGO centric artists who do cheap commissions? I don't want an elaborate artwork, just a simple sketch of a scene

bleak scroll
real hearth
visual mountain
cosmic shell
real hearth
green compass
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At the top right

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Is that towers?

real hearth
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yeah, its Towers.
As for the reason, Robot Buster was specifically meant to counter Qlis back in 2016, like how Wizard Buster was meant to counter Shaddol.

nocturne karma
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I love this art

fiery jungle
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It's criminal how the only time YGO got MH collab it wasnt with Buster Blader

real hearth
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Ikr, the Greatsword is right there, not to mention YGO Dragons, add in a Blue-eyes boss fight too.

tired crystal
fringe fable
knotty ibex
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Currently designing Gijinkas of the Earthbounds
They would all be monsters girls
Ccapac Apu is a Cyclops underneath that bag btw

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cedar socket
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Y'all ever read Kafka on the Shore?

charred flare
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Jonouchi and kaiba got real

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fringe fable
knotty ibex
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Cusillu

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Cusillu the Silly

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Quick redraw of smth I saw on my TL btw

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fringe fable
modest oar
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Why does this look like albaz lore concpet art

fiery jungle
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It's the horn isnt it?

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Got same white and red color as Albaz hair

modest oar
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It looks like albaz concpet doodle

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Reminds me of these

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Same artist?

modest oar
fiery jungle
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This is Bloodborne concept art more than anything

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Like the heavy usage of hair/fur to mask how janky the anatomy is, some with horn like this guy

modest oar
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Bro has his own dear dragon

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Albion is that you ?

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modest oar
fiery jungle
knotty ibex
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I see a resemblance

modest oar
fringe fable
knotty ibex
cosmic shell
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i am slowly beginning work on a rwby neo fanfic :)

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they REFUSE to cover what happened to neo during the period in vol 3-6 (at least as far as i care) so i am doing so

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also trying out different programs for planning it, and scapple really scratches that 'big corkboard with a lot of images/pieces of text and red string tied around thumbtacks' vibe that i desire

golden summit
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Good luck man!

deep hatch
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dunno if i'll need it, but appreciated

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all my years of being a neo one trick on tunglr are gonna be very helpful

fiery jungle
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Honestly I'm amazed how rooster teeth handles writing, it's reverse midas where all they touch turn to shit

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Their Netflix Transformers show is one of the most egregious writing in the whole franchise

deep hatch
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oh you mean uhhhh

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gen lock?

fiery jungle
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Like yeah everything after Prime has been mixed bag, but you gotta have speial talent to make it boringly bad

deep hatch
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or w/e it was called

fiery jungle
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War for Cybertron Trilogy

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They even had the audacity of sharing same name with the game (which actually good game)

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The same trilogy also doesn't just butcher G1 characters, but Beast Wars characters as well 💀

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I swear Beast Wars is cursed in that it has good story, but unfortunately released when show CGI was in their infancy so no new fans want to actually watch it, and the more modern version of them are paired with shitty writing

cosmic shell
hard furnace
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bold urchin
cosmic shell
cosmic shell
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Doodle

knotty ibex
fringe fable
hearty meteor
golden summit
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Love these two goobers

hearty meteor
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They're both such DORKS lol, this artist always draws great stuff with them

fringe fable
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My Gigantic Pal, Spright.

golden summit
fiery jungle
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Laundry just love to play with ancient shrimp

hard furnace
clever linden
fringe fable
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She's aware of the retcon.

deep hatch
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finally wrote one of the chapters for that fanfic

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im tackling the big meat of the story first, which is the nightclub section, so i did the journal entry going over the plan and recent events for neo first

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cos for some reason, in character stream of conciousness stuff is super easy for me

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on an semi-related note, looking up dark/hard techno mixes for the actual nightclub scenes has resulted in me learning i actually quite like dark/hard techno

cedar socket
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I’m finally writing again. Slowly.

clever linden
fiery jungle
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Sock of Greed is cursed

charred flare
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practice before I start working on my own manga later today Nyanhehe

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analog stone
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jesus christ i actually updated the fanic

cedar socket
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Congrata

fringe fable
tropic brook
golden summit
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And they were extra deck mates...

fiery jungle
tropic brook
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Oh, they be mating alright

fringe fable
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Gimme the I:P Masquerena and S:P Little Knight MD mates. 😭

tropic brook
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One of my favourite fanfics just updated after a 2 and a half year hiatus

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Also announced that there will only be sporadic updates if any but you take what you can get

fiery jungle
hearty meteor
viscid bobcat
green compass
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Dude put the malefic in but not maxiflare pensivecowboybread

warm vale
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Guess whose back.

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Me and Lexi are ready to solo this chat.

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EugenHeart Lexi #1

fallen sundial
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Holy shit the return

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post your chakawoos

warm vale
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I can't remember where I left off with my Magical Bullshittery ramblings

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I think I'd just renamed it to Heritage of the Dragon was where we left off

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And I have a new project I'm working on before I start the second book

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Previously known as Multiverse bullshittery it now has a functional WIP title.

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open bridge
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I’m sorry yuri but a new babygirl has taken the stage

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warm vale
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Ayo who dat

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Also who did the art

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That slaps

open bridge
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TTRPG character I made for Perfect draw (tabletop system designed to invoke the vibes of card game anime)

Their given name is 🔺-2 (delta 2), but she generally just goes by Del, Delia, etc.

Done by RianneDraws on Twitter

Took from like June to October to finish due to issues but worth it for the $60

warm vale
open bridge
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Although she’ll probably end up a major NPC when I inevitably run a campaign in it just to justify backing it on Kickstarter

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They did a whole “making of” thing with it too

Goes hard

https://vxtwitter.com/riannecomms/status/1851457748325593127?s=61&t=cBZvUrdAQBg9SBrQp2_2KA

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pog

warm vale
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Time to lexi-post all over again

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I love her

leaden ibex
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Wait time to use this chat as the unofficial fursona zone

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I won't, but the idea is funny

clever pecan
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I mean in Yuris case its scalesona surely

leaden ibex
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Yeah true

radiant orchid
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219 pages, damn

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impressive

tribal thicket
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Yuri is back.

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Nature is healing.

modest oar
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Doodle

warm vale
fiery jungle
warm vale
warm vale
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When I was here last

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Does anyone remember me mentioning anything about 'The End'

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I'm tryna figure out which projects I've not clued everyone in on. Including my brainrot ones

tropic brook
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quick discord search doesnt show anything

warm vale
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I think it might have been post-smiting I came up with it

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After watching Doctor Who recently I feel like River trying to figure out where in the timeline she's meeting the doctor. Comparing their diaries

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Killer Queen definitely I've not mentioned cause that's new and basically just a brainrot idea.

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Innsekai I definitely did. Cause it caused the squid incident

tropic brook
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i think youll fidn that killer queen was actually released 1974

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not exactly new

warm vale
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Lmao

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It's the unfortunate working title I came up with for an idea.

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Cause I remembered I once had a dream of a streamer gf who was also a part time terrorist and it became an idea I just toyed with when I was bored and wanted a break.

tropic brook
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oh, like live twins but without the twins

warm vale
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LMAO

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It came to me and my brain went "yes."

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And signed off on it

warm vale
warm vale
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Ooh. I can finally ask about that's been bugging me about multiverse but isn't something I can bring myself to remove

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I have this stupid gimmick where each chapter title has "world" in it.

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And idk if it'll get annoying or be kinda neat

tropic brook
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people love a theme in the titles

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feels connected

warm vale
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These are the current names.

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I've resisted the urge for "Brave New World" until later on

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I accidentally wrote "a whole new world" in a sentence

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And it gave me lorcana PTSD

clever pecan
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Thematic chapter titles are good, these might be a touch too repetitive though

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Maybe consider using synonyms?

tropic brook
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"the grand blue world"

warm vale
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Look

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It was a moment of weakness

radiant orchid
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i still remember it from when i read the first like 2 pages of multiverse bullshittery

warm vale
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P good innit

radiant orchid
warm vale
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The one I do love though

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Is Endless Night

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:chefkiss:

radiant orchid
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suggestion: Endless night for 7 and something about dawn for chap 9(i do not know the contents)

warm vale
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Hold on

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The "Broken World" is one that's basically been fucked up by a meteor.

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The official description of what happened is "Second Impact of K–T-like asteroid."

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And left the planet absolutely FUBAR. Sky is almost completely dark 24/7 because of the ash and fallout of impact.

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Cause Endless Night is the start of "part two"

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Part One - The New Worlds
Part Two - The Broken Worlds
Part Three - TBA/A Thousand Worlds

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Once I get back to computer. I can post the link to Endless Night

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Cause it's an isolated plot at the start

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Hopefully before I hit 70K I'll come up with a proper title

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Or accept that it will just end up as "Shattered Planes" forever

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💀

warm vale
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"We saw you from across the bar and dig your vibe" energy

warm vale
clever linden
warm vale
warm vale
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I found some Magical Bullshittery lore I'd only ever tweeted that i genuinely don't ever remember deciding on or tweeting

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I also accidentally created class issues in magical bullshittery.
Higher class get to learn unique magics and commoners/lower class only get basic elemental stuff.

clever pecan
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76 words off of doubling my previous longest stories wordcount

hard furnace
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Do that to your story to make it double

clever pecan
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Nah

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Ill do it the proper way

hard furnace
clever pecan
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Please turn off reply pings

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And nah, I take my story seriously

warm vale
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Dork

clever pecan
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And I have reached my milestone

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Twice the previous longest stories wordcount

golden summit
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LESGOOOOOO

rigid kettle
next cradle
warm vale
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Here's a piece of terrible lore from Multiverse Bullshittery

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How to demonstrate your character comes from a truly dark timeline. Pluto was never a planet to begin with...

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The Honchkrow enjoyer is very based

tribal thicket
tropic brook
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Im assuming the context is that people are talking about a 10th planet being discovered or whatever

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And the pov cheacter is like, wait 10th planent? Wouldnt there have to be a 9th one first?

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Alternarively, chrys is dumber than i thought and cannot count to 10

tribal thicket
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I now see it.

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Man, that is such an awkward reading/dialogue. Imagine just listing off all the planets just cuz.

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I would hit 'em with the nerdcat

tropic brook
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Thats clearly internal dialogue

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They are going through the planets in their head

warm vale
warm vale
tribal thicket
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Also they got the planet order wrong. It's Uranus then Neptune but I feel like getting those two in the wrong order feels natural.

warm vale
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Besties I think I might be going insane

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Over Heritage

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Like, everytime I look at the general summary idea of the first one I think "wow. If I read this summary on the back of a book I'd put it right the fuck back"

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IDK if its just a slump but part of me sometimes genuinely loses faith in it.

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IDEK if I want to finish multiverse because I want to or just feel like I have too cause I started it.

clever pecan
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Get someone to test read it?

warm vale
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I've had people read it and they enjoyed it. But the genericness when I try and view it without my bias keeps killing me.

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Like it literally starts with "new kid" and turns into "mcguffin" chase and fighting over it

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Kannasuicide what the fuck have I done

fringe fable
warm vale
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And it killed my imposter syndrome

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Ignore all of my previous spiralling. We are back.

deep hatch
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i think i might extend that neo fanfic out to the end of vol 6 so i can write a couple chapters of interactions w/ the rest of the group

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end it with them getting on the argus airship to atlas

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does mean that i, the neo onetrick, am gonna have to figure out how to write other characters, but that's manageable PoyoyoThumbsUp

viscid bobcat
knotty ibex
green compass
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I didnt check the date, that's fair

warm vale
deep hatch
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using this fanmade timeline by a couple of folks from the rwby reddit

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crwby really did treat rwby like bethesda treats their games

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regardless, should still be doable

fiery jungle
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"Don't worry, you hang at my place."

hard furnace
fiery jungle
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This really makes me wish I can program just to make Labrynth-style Metroidvania

knotty ibex
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Some Commissions of the Earthbound Gijinkas

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primal crag
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primal crag
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Well, that didn't take long.

clever linden
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Man, I hope we get Panik support one day. Looks so good.

hard furnace
warm vale
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I succeeded today

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In finally finished out a chapter that has plagued me for months now

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And can finally connect it to the rest of the story

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I also successfully fought off the brain worms telling me to use the term "brave new world" at least once before it's applicable in the actual story

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I just realised I never shared it here

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but I wrote like 2 years ago my favourite paragraph I've honestly ever written

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Because it's just so stupid

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Also I'll say it first because I know someone would but the entire first sentence is basically just ripped straight from the logic of the salaryman from Tanya the Evil. but to be fair bro had a point.

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about dire straits and that.

viscid bobcat
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i feel like this needs more commas

warm vale
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Probably.

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But this version got revised anyway

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This is just the funnier version

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It's up there with Remy from Heritage saying "not to get ahead of myself or stroke my own ego" with the dialogue tag 'she lied'

clever pecan
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Yeah this needs some punctuation

warm vale
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I chopped it down to this for the "passable" version

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I do miss the line about willing to turn to prayer for a cigarette.

warm vale
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The forbidden hero

fringe fable
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Evil HERO Forbidden Miasma. yethink

knotty ibex
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Evil Hero Mockingbird

tropic brook
cosmic shell
fiery jungle
warm vale
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I have a dilema

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And I need input

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In multiverse bullshittery there's space settlement and I'm yet to decide on how I want it to be.

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Do I do it halo style where its one massive surface on the interior all looking inwards/upwards or go full universal century and just make it a colony

fiery jungle
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It went from magical to multiverse? owo

warm vale
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I'm working on this one before doing the second

fiery jungle
warm vale
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Because I'm having a bit of a crisis with 2

fiery jungle
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Am not familiar with Halo style

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So naturally I would pick Colony

warm vale
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Like the land is on the inside of the exterior

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Idk how to word it properly

fiery jungle
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Oh the ring thing

warm vale
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Imagine how a colony looks

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But a sphere

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O R B

fiery jungle
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It's pretty interesting idea owo

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Using centrifugal force to create gravity that way

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Hence it being inside

warm vale
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Both work enough in theory to be used but I'm like. "Do I want it to look like the Dalek crucible since its the big bads main base or like a colony cause I'm a Gundam fanboy

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I'm leaning towards the sphere cause I think the blank exterior has a lot of aura to it just ominously hanging in the sky

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Like death star in the ending of Rogue One

fiery jungle
golden summit
warm vale
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I know but the visual of the world on the inside against the exterior

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Is what i was tryna put into visual

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Where it looks into eachother at either end

golden summit
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Those are artificial planets essentially. You build them from scratch to your taste, any size and continent shape you like. They require a much more advanced civilization.

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You can have them be an entire solar system worth of colonies

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It really depends what kind of civilization you want to portray. Full-on ringworld around a black hole generator to show a hyper advanced civilization with mastery of space, or a more traditional planet colonization

warm vale
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It's not gonna be like a whole solar system or around a black hole or something they're literally just built themselves a moon sized station.

fiery jungle
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Generally mine would be closer to Colony from Gundam
As my sci-fi is leaning a bit closer to realistic vibes (with spice of space magic)

tribal thicket
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Career worldbuilders who do no actual writing will tell you how to make realistic solar systems or the like. But here's the neat thing you can do, you can just write whatever you want. Want a cube in space surrounded by cylinders, you can just do it.

fiery jungle
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True

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What matters is it believable and the in-universe rules are consistent

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There's reason why we frustates when dumb horror protagonists making stupid mistake over questioning the logic of supernatural horror itself

clever linden
fiery jungle
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One is unrealistic but believable, the others can be insulting for anyone with functioning braincell

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Hence, the best horror is the one where smart pepol can't get out (and why Carpenter's The Thing is great)

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Granted we're talking about Sci-fi here, not horror, but same rules applies in any writing

warm vale
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Although I don't want realistic space physics I want a mad supervillains vanity project

clever pecan
warm vale
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I think the only bit that kind of abuses the idea of physics is said supervillains wish to harness 'the power of god' AKA the big bang

clever linden
tropic brook
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i felt like that was obvious

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What i like to do is write (excerpts of) muliple in-universe books from different perspectives

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I.e, have a history of a kingdom from one author with one style and then a revord of the local fauna from a different one with a different style

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It makes good practice too

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If you want to be real fancy, you can even storytell using this

tribal thicket
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The Lord of the Rings were a byproduct of Tolkein doing this.

clever pecan
tropic brook
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Intersperse newspaper articles, military reports, personal correspondece like letters (or if youre in a modern setting, chatrooms)

tribal thicket
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All the man wanted was to create random encyclopedia and multiple languages.

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like the dragonology book the post mentioned

clever pecan
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Huh

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🤔

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I guess thats an option, even if I have something Im already writing right now

viscid bobcat
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if you're interested in that kind of thing i recommend checking out fire on the velvet horizon

clever pecan
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Noted

warm vale
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Someone in a chat just told me the UC colonies are based on a real design. So I think it might be a better idea to use a colony-like design

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Now comes the fun part.

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Figuring out how much it'd cost to forge their logo in 200ft high letters on the side of the bastard in gold and silver

golden summit
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Depends on the economy

warm vale
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Last time I did this I used the current bank of england price for a bar of gold

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Although that was only like 20ft tall building logo

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For a space station it might be a bit more than adding one comma

golden summit
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It depends on factory sizes. If they can make space stations affordably then upscaling the letters should actually be easier and cheaper

warm vale
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Plus since they have different universes available to them

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They can just straight tear an uninhabited earth apart for gold

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All about that presentation. Gotta flex on MFers

golden summit
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Why do that when asteroids are so easy to mine and rich in gold?

tropic brook
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For the lols, i reckon

warm vale
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I mean they could. I was just thinking since they have a magic door to any universe why go asteroid hunting when there's a perfectly dead earth next door.

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That absolutely nobody could possibly miss

golden summit
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Because asteroid hunting is so easy

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But at that point that earth is the same as a big asteroid

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If accessing it takes zero effort

warm vale
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Tbh how they get it isn't really important. Nor is the fact it's even there. I just like the idea.

fiery jungle
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They gotta get metal to build giant mech somewhere

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If not on earth then on random space rock

warm vale
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I'm already fighting the gremlins in my brain to not reference a colony drop

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I'm doing well at beating the gremlins with this

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The only one it's gotten away with is giving every variant of the MC a different bird surname

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They're Starling. The first version they meet is Mallard. And the third version of MC is currently 'woodcock' but I know there's definitely a better one I could use.

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But I think this was a leftover from Mk I

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Or 0.5 as I call it

golden summit
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It's ok that's what editors are for

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Many (maybe all) writers have mind goblins, and its the editors job to undo the mess they make all over the paper

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There's a famous writer, idr who, who always staged events in his book on fridays. Even if it made no chronological sense. So the editor smoothed that out.

warm vale
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Having different versions of the same character reminds me of that tumblr(?) post. About characters being just hot vessels for personality defects.

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Or however it went

golden summit
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A good character is more than that

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You want layers

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ONE layer is flaws

warm vale
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Like onions

golden summit
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Ye

warm vale
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Although the main one I think of when I think of "just a vessel for flaws"

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Is literally just a weirdo

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That I wanted to not really give a redeeming quality too

warm vale
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I remembered another brain gremlin I defeated

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The "Nazi won WW2" trope of multiverses

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It gets one throw away line and doesn't even get specified on. Just that it was found as one of the "usual suspects" and basically not even bothered with.

hearty meteor
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I've... Never encountered that, I think

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Not specifically Nazis at least

hard furnace
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Did*

warm vale
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CW flash did a whole crossover thing on it didn't it

warm vale
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Squish the blue

warm vale
warm vale
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I remembered another

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Where the brain gremlins won

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There's one parallel world where it got smashed into by an asteroid.

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And the data on it refers to that incident as "Second Impact of K–T-like asteroid."

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Which is true

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But I specifically gunned for using the term 'second impact'

clever linden
fiery jungle
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Sisters

weak patrol
fringe fable
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When the Kitt GETS YOU-

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⚡ 🧥 ⚡

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I hope we get all of Kitt's quirks in the Branded animation later this year. Anko_Pray

warm vale
#

"Quirks" but it just calling the Sprights 'Sparkies' like its a slur

warm vale
clever linden
warm vale
knotty ibex
warm vale
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I was gonna share this

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but I second guessed it because of the artists uuuh

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other works

clever linden
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you can share sfw art from nsfw artists

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just give the people a warning

warm vale
#

Final form Diabelle my beloved

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I love evil looking women

tribal thicket
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Konami telling the artist that the abs are integral for the Dragonic SS4 Diabelle art.

fiery jungle
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Yugioh carcinization is seeing everyone slowly turning into dragon

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Almost every final form of pivotal character of respective lore has draconic appearance even if they're not dragon-type

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Zefraath, Master Peace, Albaz (obviously), now Diabelle

golden summit
#

Albaz was always a dragon

fiery jungle
#

Yeah, I think more fitting example in Albazlore is Maximus

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Dis Pater is dragon

knotty ibex
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Yeah Beastials were the Final Boss in that whole thing I guess

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Kinda Lame
The Eldrich God stuff was way cooler

warm vale
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TBF Peace was a dragon from the start

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[Luster Pendulum, the dracoslayer]

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# warm vale [Luster Pendulum, the dracoslayer]
Luster Pendulum, the Dracoslayer

light LIGHT • level Level: 4 | pendscale ****: 5
[ Dragon / Pendulum / Tuner / Effect ]

ATK 1850 / DEF 0

Pendulum Effect

Once per turn, if you have a card in your other Pendulum Zone: You can destroy that card, and if you do, add 1 card from your Deck to your hand, with the same name as that card.

Effect

Cannot Special Summon Fusion, Synchro, or Xyz Monsters using this card as material, except "Dracoslayer" monsters.

F/L Status: Unlimited (TCG/OCG/MD)
fringe fable
warm vale
#

I'm hedging my bets a bit with this

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I decided to mark in my calendar when I want to have the first "completed" version of Multiverse Bullshittery done by

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By 31st of May I should have a completed, readable version of it.

cosmic shell
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Meet the Artist

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golden summit
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Owo

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Magolor

hearty meteor
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Yuuri and Trey is a fascinating combo lol

opaque robin
#

New Diabellstar form got me drawing again.

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golden summit
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V nice

primal crag
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Whoever made that card took a leaf out of Zentreya's avatar.

warm vale
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Me asking Ray for more waifu art of monster girls

warm vale
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I think this is another of my favourite things I've ever typed.

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Merry-go-round of nonsense makes me laugh everytime

warm vale
fiery jungle
cedar socket
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I made another drawing. Tried to make it less static.

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Well, I finished writing a draft.

warm vale
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Apparently the "a whole new world" goblins had won at some point

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But I had no choice in this one really cause I wouldn't know how to describe the scenario properly of someone being showed what the world was like before big rock go splat and suddenly they're seeing skyscrapers for the first time and more people than ever before.

clever linden
clever pecan
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This feels accurate

clever linden
clever pecan
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Oh absolutely

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Kitt has that "big sister figure who likes to poke fun at her little sister figure's crush" energy

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And Ecclesia feels like she'd blush at even so much as holding hands with Albaz at first

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I still want a high quality version of Kitts jacket

golden summit
warm vale
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Everytime I see ecclesia ferrijit art

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I think of halfmiss' post still

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It just lives in my head rent free

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warm vale
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Albaz lore alternative ending

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Ecclesia chokes a bitch

clever linden
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I can't tell if this is fetish art or if it's just a case of "this artist draws nsfw and it shows"

knotty ibex
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Probably both

clever linden
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Well yeah if it's the former it's both by default

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I more mean that some NSFW artists even in their sfw art still have the vibes™️

radiant orchid
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warm vale
cedar socket
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Where do y'all find beta readers?

clever linden
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I just ask friends.

golden summit
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^

clever linden
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I've legit been beta reading ovven's story for a while

golden summit
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It's really good fluff

clever linden
leaden ibex
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Oh right, I should get people to read my newesr pilot

clever linden
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I mean if I have the time I'll read it. You've already been dm-ing me your stuff for like 2 years I tihnk lmao

leaden ibex
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True, I'll send it your way then

golden summit
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I did that to mine on purpose

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Also I thought you knew owo

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P sure we talked about it briefly

clever pecan
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I wanted to also have the view of someone who isnt a big toku nerd nyaruhodo

clever linden
golden summit
clever pecan
radiant orchid
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the amount of detail or harshness you need prob depends on what ur writing

warm vale
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I gave my story to someone I "trusted" once.

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Within 5 minutes he called it a fairy tail fanfic

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and I crashed out so hard I wasn't able to post something I'd worked on publicly in full for the better part of a decade

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Even these days I'm still hesitant even somewhere like here.

golden summit
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That's shitty of them

warm vale
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In hindsight it was so close I cannot blame him.

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FT did/does have a massive place in my heart and effect how I view Magical Bullshittery.

golden summit
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Every artwork is influenced by previous works

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You can't create something entirely creative. What you can do is retell certain aspects in a different combination and in a new way.

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And that's how it's been for a long time. And that's fine.

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I worry my book is temu-brand berserk sometimes

warm vale
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I think everyone gets that feeling.

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MB Mk I and Mk II were definetely wal-mart own brand FT. Once in how I thought of it the second in how I wrote it.

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Shattered I'm having more luck with because I started that out of pure nonsense one day in old fanfic.

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So there isn't really anything I've been comparing it too in my head or based it off of.

golden summit
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That's good

warm vale
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But then a new problem takes its place.

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Like wondering if the way I'm taking one of the MCs variants is veering into "did the author write this with one hand"/"the author's barely disguised fetish" territory.

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Just cause they're a weirdo

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clever linden
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Then make some.

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Just find an appropriate place to talk about your story online, talk to others about their story if they got any - then if people find themselves interested, ask them to proof read

warm vale
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I did the opposite

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I just yapped about MB in Fanfic chat until I was the only person using the channel

cedar socket
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Haha.

warm vale
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Question. You're an evil genius who lives in an massive fuck off cylinder like so. except it's mostly cityscape.

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Where you put your evil genius tower

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Cause I was thinking towards like. the base of it.

fallen sundial
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do you own the whole thing
or do you just live in it

warm vale
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Own

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The idea is said mad genius built the entire massive fuck off cylinder. and IDK where to put their tower.

fallen sundial
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the base of the cylinder is cooler
but in the center might be more practical

fringe fable
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Maybe the tower is just a long cylinder in the middle of all of that lol.

warm vale
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Base I was thinking too because then from the top of it you can see upwards through the entire thing. But I think gravity is kinda not a friend to that location

fringe fable
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Just to make sure everyone who lives on the cyclinder's outer edges know your presence lmao.

warm vale
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or cuts across it sideways edge to edge

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I just realised swapping from the sphere to the cylinder idea means I have to redo my stupid planets parapgraph

fringe fable
warm vale
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I have a feeling the artificial gravity generated in that tower would be beyond tolerable

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NGL the branding on the side of the entire thing does enough for their ego.

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Imagine you look up at a fucking space colony in orbit.

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and you see a giant windows logo on the side of it

golden summit
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As well as access to the engine rooms in the hull of the thing

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The whole station is my evil genius tower.

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If you want to destroy my evil genius tower, you have to destroy the whole cylinder

warm vale
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Yeah the entire thing is the whole evil genius tower.

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But they gotta have like.

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their main hub.

golden summit
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Near the engine room

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So I can control the whole thing from the comfort of my home

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If you want a main reception desk for the masses to worship the genius

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Center, most accessible spot in the whole cylinder. And make sure there is plenty of efficient and free public transport to get there from anywhere.

warm vale
warm vale
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You know what I need to actually think about the design of properly.

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One of the other weirdos in this cast. is a fan of the black plague. and to mask their identity does wear a mask like the plague doctors with the beak and shit.

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And I've not actually put thought into like. how the beak actually looks and its size/length

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cause I want it to give it Empty Child vibes from Doctor Who.

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This creepy little thing

fiery jungle
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Feels like kid Psycho Mantis was inspired by Empty Child. Both has similar vibe

warm vale
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The power of three braincells combined

fossil notch
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custom scrapped duel disk

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fossil notch
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it was kinda

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too messy or more or less

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to me it didn't feel like a genuine duel disk

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you can have fun with it though i don't mind

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make a character with it or smth