#Art and Writing

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next cradle
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Gate guardian really tickles some weird nostalgia braincells in me because it reminds me so much of Iron Drill from Wataru

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Mostly the leg part and Suijin

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And the whole stacking on top of each other

fringe fable
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Jesus, Suijin's got that Laughing Flower syndrome.

royal delta
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another one, kinda like my last one

dawn bay
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ill post it later.
anyway the eensy teensy

tribal thicket
eager sundial
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doodled something for the first time in 2 years

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on my phone no less

knotty ibex
next cradle
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"Thief"

thick wigeon
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^

hearty meteor
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lmfao the reference

knotty ibex
tropic brook
hearty meteor
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Nasu would be proud

open bridge
eager sundial
thick wigeon
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Wheres the blue shell

weak patrol
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zoomin

tribal thicket
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RUSH artworks.

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It's only up to update 1.0.1 in Saikyo Battle, it seems, sadly.

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@vivid coyote Do you know if Finalize Phoenix is before or after this cut off. If before could you tell me where to look for it. The cards are in release order or smthg, it seems.

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@charred flare Could you pin this.

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Not my request post, just the link at top.

tribal thicket
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Ok, I found all the card arts to current version.

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It's in a mega file, tho. Not sure if I can post it here. Think it should be fine, right?

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Also has the renders from when the mons are summoned in it.

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Oh ye, I found the Finalize Phoenix artwork, Gooey.

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No need to search for it.

tribal thicket
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For all the effort it took to find the HQ art for Finalize, I didn't even end up using it. Picked another Phoenix card that fit better.

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Also, here's the HQ render for Skull Servant as thanks, Spooks.

tribal thicket
knotty ibex
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Made a Emoji for one of my OCs

cursive lake
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Hey everyone!

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I'm Serenity and I love Yu-Gi-Oh!

clever linden
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Hey

cursive lake
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Hi

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Do people talk about Yu-Gi-Oh! here?

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I just followed anyway! XD

clever linden
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This channel is for any form of art and writing, not strictly ygo related

cursive lake
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Thanks!

elfin nova
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So bit of a long shot-

Does anyone know any demons of loneliness? Need that specific feeling for a character I'm working on.

fiery jungle
clever linden
# elfin nova So bit of a long shot- Does anyone know any demons of loneliness? Need that sp...

In Greek mythology, Oizys (; Ancient Greek: Ὀϊζύς, romanized: Oïzýs) is the goddess of misery, anxiety, grief, depression, and misfortune. Her Roman name is Miseria, from which the English word misery is derived. Oizys is a minor goddess without a great cult following, but a primordial goddess of misery and depression with a certain amount of my...

elfin nova
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hmmm, actually is really close to being what I need thanks ^^

knotty ibex
next cradle
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asdgfklujh

knotty ibex
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Armored Insect Combination Zekstagger?

next cradle
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The new sentai robot SlowpokeWheeze

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Which yes Zekstagger I can also see may have been inspired SlowpokeWheeze

knotty ibex
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Oh wow that one looks really coolEZ

fiery jungle
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This just dawn on me, why haven't we seen sentai zord of Signer Dragons?

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(Or they exist and I havent dig enough)

knotty ibex
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You mean as in the S Dragons as Zords or a Zord made out of S Dragons?

primal crag
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yes

knotty ibex
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I have some "lore" for my OCs

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Ania works as a Idol and acts as the Caretaker for the Soul-Absorbing Bone Tower. They have a somewhat symbiotic relationship with eachother. Her singing attracts the Souls, that the Tower rips out of unwanted Tourists and other "Pests", transforming them in to Willow Wisps in the process (though if they stay with her unwillingly is unclear). The Tower can act as a Stage for her Performances wich she gives for the Residents of the Underworld. During these the Tower will burry itself in to the ground and form a small Stadium while the Wisps act as Stage Lights. Her Hair Accessoire is named Agni. Some Fans of her say she talks with it as if it were alive but write it off as a cute Gag.

knotty ibex
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Hanna is the Bouncer of the Club "Resting Spirits" in a rather obscure part of the Underworld. It's not uncommon for the Store owners to hire Bodyguards and Secruity because the Crimerate is expectedly high and the Stygian Police will not take action in those parts of the Underworld. Hannah is one of the most expensive and well known Bouncers/Bodyguards around. Most are thrown off by the fact that she works in such a average Club that can baerly substain itself. What they don't know is that she works for a quarter of her usual Price because she is in the owners debt for his help from a long time ago.
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Topper is the owner and Bartender of "Resting Spirits"

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(Yes, I just Photoshopped smth together for him and yes he will get his own Art too at some pointMeh
I also couldn't find Bartender Clothes for him so it's just the Servant Blanky for nowpeeposkull )

inner hemlock
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Ah blos

knotty ibex
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Lovely that the Doggo gets some Art too

golden summit
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Dog owner picking up the shit instead of leaving it on the street

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You love to see it

fiery jungle
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And he's damn proud of it

charred flare
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Yeeee

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[Doomdog Ochtos]

dusk parcelBOT
# charred flare [Doomdog Ochtos]

level Level: 3
[ Fiend / Effect ]

ATK 800 / DEF 800

Effect

If this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard: Add 1 Level 8 Fiend-Type monster from your Deck to your hand. You can only use this effect of "Doomdog Octhros" once per turn.

charred flare
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A shame it can't actually add a Summoned Skull from your deck to your hand

eager sundial
golden summit
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After months of being too stressed and burned out to write, I've finally managed to start writing something again.

weak patrol
golden summit
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No plot or direction or anything

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Just... writing.

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It's set in the universe of my book, and I have a vague idea of a plot, but for now it's mostly just... writing for the sake of writing. Venting, perhaps.

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I still want to edit my book and finish a story I started, but I'm so tired

open bridge
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having side stories can be fun

weak patrol
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finally we will learn about lilla's musical career PogYu

open bridge
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what slurs will she use

knotty ibex
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Ni||biru||

viscid bobcat
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oh whoops my bad

golden summit
zenith kayak
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scrapped DMG i draweded

knotty ibex
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Edited the Bocchibo a bit

viscid bobcat
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what deck would she play

knotty ibex
tribal thicket
modest oar
knotty ibex
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Trying to give my OC a new Outfit based on these things
Gonna try and sketch it tommorrow

tired crystal
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Do we have high res scans of the Branded related concept art from the latest EX Book and also translations of the lore?

open bridge
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Not yet on the former and mostly for the latter

tired crystal
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In the mean time I’ll MORE than happily enjoy the translations if you got em

open bridge
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Check #1023276437081444423

tired crystal
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Uhhhh

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Which is that 😂

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Also I just saw this EX book, do you know if there’s any Despia concept art in it?

next cradle
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There was some in VBEX2

thick wigeon
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SunShark

tired crystal
clever linden
junior smelt
hearty meteor
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Ah, Yuri, the Vector that Vector always wanted to be

hearty meteor
charred flare
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I wonder: what would be neat things to name chapters in a YGO Fic?

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I was guessing like, set names for one but that would be too hard when I get enough chapters yeah?

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So, stuff like “Return of the Duelist”, “Flaming Eternity”, “Shining Victories” and so on

knotty ibex
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Like how Jojo calls it's stuff Parts

tribal thicket
modest oar
thick wigeon
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Think I like the sky view and sunset one best

sharp wolf
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or name them after your current hyperfixation

open bridge
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I can't believe iris plays splatoon

fiery jungle
hearty meteor
tired crystal
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My comrades in arts, I come to you again asking for any potential Branded Concept art updates

next cradle
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Elis... why are you lying down?
Come, hurry
Please, get on top of me like we're performing an Xyz Summon. You can just sit on my face-
I am NOT doing that

hearty meteor
next cradle
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"What happened?!"
"They touched the GY!"
"C... cowards!"
"Unforgivable"

knotty ibex
fringe fable
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Ooh, very nice art for Ms. Guide. 👀

weak patrol
clever pecan
elfin nova
viscid bobcat
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didn't this get caught in a scandal recently

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like a big portion of the code was plaigerized from some other thing

elfin nova
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Maybe but frankly I'd be all over anything I could to ruin ai art thieves day.

viscid bobcat
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okay but wouldn't this also be stealing

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like you're using code that was taken without permission

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and with this it's directly copied rather than just trained on something

next cradle
viscid bobcat
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i don't think it would be reasonable to claim the moral highground against people who use ai if you use software that was unambiguously plaigerized like this

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if ai is stealling then this absolutely is

next cradle
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I already pirate photoshop so it's fine

open bridge
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I mean with adobe it’s just morally correct anyways

tribal thicket
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The copying code was addressed in the post above.

tribal thicket
next cradle
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Even better

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I didn't care either way I was going to use it anyway but neat

clever pecan
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Bigger issue is that it sounds too good to be true

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Introducing noise is an old trick

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But AI already gets trained to deal with that

thick wigeon
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Friend

tropic brook
knotty ibex
fiery jungle
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Am still waiting on Ritual that can be treated as Hungry Burger 👀

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Something like Japanese Hamburg Steak

knotty ibex
tropic brook
tropic brook
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jinzo as some kind of doomslayer for trap decks sounds p funny

clever linden
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For sure

knotty ibex
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Wish his whole Archetype was better and more expanded

modest oar
weak patrol
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malicevorous support

fiery jungle
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They malign, they're vore, they're us

tired crystal
tropic brook
clever linden
clever pecan
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Damn, Jinzo is homophobic

clever linden
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Nah he's just a hater

knotty ibex
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I commissioned smth from him btw

open bridge
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But Lady Lab has more attack than jinzo…

knotty ibex
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No she doesn't
[Limiter Removal]

dusk parcelBOT
knotty ibex
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Big Boy goes out with a Bang

clever linden
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Isn't that also

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[Jinzo lord]

dusk parcelBOT
# clever linden [Jinzo lord]

level Level: 8
[ Machine / Effect ]

ATK 2600 / DEF 1600

Effect

Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. Must be Special Summoned (from your hand) by sending 1 face-up "Jinzo" you control to the GY. Trap Cards, and their effects on the field, cannot be activated. Negate all Trap effects on the field. Once per turn: You can destroy as many face-up Traps on the field as possible, and if you do, inflict 300 damage to your opponent for each card destroyed.

clever linden
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Huh swore he had 3k attack

tropic brook
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it looks more like jinzo layered, if anything

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lord is missing the spikes

open bridge
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[jinzo - layered]

dusk parcelBOT
# open bridge [jinzo - layered]

rank_star Rank: 6
[ Machine / Xyz / Effect ]

ATK 2400 / DEF 1500

Effect

2 Level 6 monsters
You can detach 1 material from this card, then target 1 face-up monster your opponent controls; take control of it until the End Phase, but it cannot activate its effects or declare an attack. If a Trap is on the field: You can Tribute 1 monster, and if you do, destroy 1 face-up card on the field. You can only use each effect of "Jinzo - Layered" once per turn.

open bridge
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He still loses in battle

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I guess she could be paralyzed by the detach effect (or just her swords suck)

clever pecan
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Sure, but he can take control then tribute nyaruhodo

tropic brook
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he probably just used cyber energy shock or whatever to destroy some traps

knotty ibex
knotty ibex
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Got some new Emojisemoji_18

zinc yacht
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Here’s a drawing I did of if Kaiba kept with the prototype duel disk design

modest oar
open bridge
clever linden
fringe fable
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Now that's a classic. Especially when she said "uiasdfiasbk!".

golden summit
fiery jungle
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As someone who tried to play lyric game, can relate

round citrus
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god she's so cringe i love her

tribal thicket
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She's saying swears not gibberish at the end.

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And the person tling it (in universe) censored it.

clever linden
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So do you think she said something like motherfucker or just an actual slur

nocturne karma
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why would she say a slur

clever linden
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I mean yeah, fair

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But was more trying to make fun of something that in hindsight isn't very funny

nocturne karma
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understandable

fringe fable
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My oshis would never yell swears or slurs. 😭

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But I seriously love that Sunny is in the comments trying to spam that she's cuter.

tribal thicket
tribal thicket
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Why is Bandit Keith's name in the files Gesse Howard?

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Hudo Yusei

tropic brook
knotty ibex
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Thank Hyperion for this!
These Icons should be reused for MD and Duel Links NPC Sprites.
Way too much of a waste

fringe fable
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Ikr. 😭

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That and the lore text for effect monsters were the most intriguing part of the game for me.

knotty ibex
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The Normal monster Text really caughtme off Guard at first ngl

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It's really funny

knotty ibex
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Oh yeah btw my Commission is done nowSmuGuide

tribal thicket
clever linden
fiery jungle
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Damn Jinzo hates the Twinklord

tribal thicket
fiery jungle
elfin nova
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Okay not gonna lie for half a second there I thought this was Drakenguard fan art lol

fiery jungle
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Iris do be fitting with Drakengard/Nier aesthetic

open bridge
open bridge
tribal thicket
fringe fable
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God damn, Cross Duel even had Live Twin cosplayers? SweatCat

clever linden
fiery jungle
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OwO

golden summit
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Here comes the boy

modest oar
clever linden
golden summit
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I did

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||undead blob monsters are an amazing aesthetic||

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||also doggo||

clever linden
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As a reward have enby wedding outfit Franklin

golden summit
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||after reading the story, I noticed how similar franklin is to one of the main characters in my book||

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||A mage with necromancy powers who keeps their decaying body together using magic fueled by taking the lives of others||

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||Albeit in my case she can only absorb the souls of those who consent and know the full consequences of consenting, and necromancy is her least used magic||

clever linden
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Of note the opponent's audition was a music video, with the story being about ||someone believing he killed his mom, but really he found some eldritch monster and got locked up for knowing too much||

clever pecan
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Its a really nice OCT from what Ive seen yeah

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Like, lots of very talented peeps

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One of my other personal favourites is a space bee

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Their round 1 was structured like an anime episode, with all the little flair that comes with it

clever linden
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https://youtu.be/kdRc3QiKfOQ the opp's audition, but no vs Franklin vid yet

Bunch of content warnings, please read that before watching, mainly blood and violence and some disturbing imagery

Special shoutout to hung and alto for being my lighthouse, my rocks, my anchor-this video won't be here without them (and my other lovely beta watchers too)

Cameos shoutout to:
starr, raku, brandini, feesh, copper, saria, lewinu...

▶ Play video
clever pecan
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Eyecatch?

clever pecan
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Ah

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That too, but it had like, an ED, the little middle of the episode ad break transition

clever linden
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Neat, might check eventually then

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But ye, absolutely gonna tell Primal my full breakdown tomorrow

clever pecan
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I do recommend the space bee

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I thought it was very well done

clever linden
cursive lake
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Everyone is so awesome!

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Do you guys use a special site to draw?

clever linden
tribal thicket
sharp wolf
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what the hell happened to her eye

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[linkage]

dusk parcelBOT
# sharp wolf [linkage]
Effect

If you control no monsters in your Main Monster Zone: You cannot Special Summon monsters from the Extra Deck for the rest of this turn after this card resolves, except "Sky Striker Ace" monsters, also send 1 other card you control to the GY, and if you do, Special Summon 1 "Sky Striker Ace" monster from your Extra Deck to the Extra Monster Zone, and if you have at least 1 LIGHT and 1 DARK "Sky Striker Ace" monsters on your field and/or in your GY, the Summoned monster gains 1000 ATK.

sharp wolf
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i still don't understnad

tribal thicket
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She has Red Eyes in Alt Kagari (Kagari with the limiter removed).

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The one Red Eye is thus presumably an aftereffect of that.

modest oar
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Plot Twist... Raye is an Android...

clever linden
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... isn't the point of the story though that she's one of the few actual humans left

clever pecan
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The only one actually

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Until clones get involved

hearty meteor
real oracle
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hello

warm frigate
golden summit
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Dragons

tribal thicket
clever linden
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@golden summit @fiery jungle she finished enby wedding outfit Franklin btw

fiery jungle
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OwO

golden summit
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owo it's primarily black

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I expected full white

clever linden
tropic brook
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@misty ocean

weak patrol
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inshallah

tired crystal
rose knoll
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done for a client, for a speed duel league mat, hope you like it!!

next cradle
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That's mega cool holy shit

warm frigate
thick wigeon
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9.5/10

golden summit
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Owo did you make this?

tropic brook
hearty meteor
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the cycle of creation

formal igloo
clever linden
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Because of the filename

clever linden
round citrus
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isnt there already an AI thread :/ why do ppl have to bring it here

warm frigate
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Also how do you check a file name?

clever linden
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Just open the file?

warm frigate
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Oh

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K

clever linden
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Since I googled and the autosuggestion said AI

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So I jumped to conclusions

warm frigate
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Its on Google somewhere, I tried to recreate it

tropic brook
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check up on overlord fanfic that i read some time ago
it has more than doubled in size
2.5 million words
Seems about right

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Mfw theres another 200 chapters of agriculture and the impact of the seasons on supply/demand pogofgreed

fringe fable
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They're cooking hard?

fringe fable
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Though not really into Overlord tbh

golden summit
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Let's goooo

fiery jungle
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Owo Overlord with Spice and Wolf element

tropic brook
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so overlord

eager sundial
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I found my old art sketchbook from when I was still in school

golden summit
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still at school
Amogus

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My age just hit me so fucking hard

eager sundial
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I'VE LITERALLY MENTIONED MY AGE BEFORE

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WDYM

golden summit
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No no I know

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That's not what I meant

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It's like... I just realized that I'm old

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It just hit me, you know? Made me suddenly realize the passage of time and my inevitable demise, kind of thing

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Amogus feels like only yesterday to me, yet people who drew it during their school days now show said drawings as if they were from a long time ago

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Because they are. It's been, what, 3 years?

fiery jungle
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tbh 2020 to 2023 happen so fast

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I blame the virus for the time skip

weak patrol
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we're living out the premise of spy kids 4

fiery jungle
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In a way, Ant-Man Quantumania is Spy Kids movie hmm

hearty meteor
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I feel like Endgame came out only 2 years ago

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But in reality it's been like 4

vivid coyote
cursive lake
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Hey guys!

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I wanted to start drawing on a computer and was wondering if any of you had any suggestions which site I should (Could for free) use

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Thanks for your help!

radiant orchid
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If you're okay with downloading a program

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Krita is okay for beginning digital art

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(And is free)

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I used it to draw a few of my dnd chars

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Also random unfinished nightmare fuel

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Well it was going to be

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I just never finished drawing the table or the scary faces in the ink

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But the program was nice to use if you want smth free because you are either starting or don't want to invest in buying smth

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@cursive lake

modest oar
golden summit
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Is that a wand?

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Fish fins for decoration, bone-patterned shaft, and a gemstone at the top. Would be very light.

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Shaft's a little thin for how big the gem is, but if it's a wand you aren't swinging it around, so it's less of an issue

golden summit
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Or is this referencing something I am unfamiliar with?

velvet lotus
modest oar
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And yah it's just a wand that shoots water

golden summit
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Love sea serpents

modest oar
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that's a cyberse
cheems

knotty ibex
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Seaberse

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Btw I got in the mood of looking up some Character Designs from Tsunako and thought about a Redesign of Tour Guide

deep hatch
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i think i might just not write volume 9 threads at all for rwby lol

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i have 0 space to put any kind of downtime at all, which means the only possible threads i could do would just be writing stuff thats already been shown

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n i aint into retreading the same ground

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might write some drabbles but that'll be about it

knotty ibex
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Made a few changes

fallen sundial
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I'm going to make some indie-level wrestlers for my simulator
I am soliciting ideas for gimmicks

clever pecan
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A giant chicken nyaruhodo

knotty ibex
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Gimmicks you say?
How about a giant Meat Grinder?
Or a Lion?

golden summit
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A funny wrestler

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How about a giant face with scrawny arms and legs?

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Literally a Face

knotty ibex
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Ojama King as a Luchadore(is that how you say that?)

golden summit
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Oh shit true

fallen sundial
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Definitely using the giant chicken if the game has the appropriate costume

cursive lake
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Something online works better for me 😦

knotty ibex
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🅱️immick 🅱️uppet 🅱️iant 🅱️rinder

tired crystal
cursive lake
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Love it!

hearty meteor
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Always wonderful when you get random spam comments that have no coherent thoughts and consist of random letters

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Thankfully, the block button exists on AO3

knotty ibex
fiery jungle
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OwO

knotty ibex
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I will try and re draw this with Sartorius and the Arcana Force Cards

open bridge
viscid bobcat
clever linden
clever linden
fiery jungle
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Owo

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He got his own MV

golden summit
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Owo

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Beste boi

night moss
real oracle
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Kopī
Age: 16
Dimension: Fusion
Deck: Any Deck he copied.
A Duelist from the Fusion Dimension who believed that building original decks is a waste of time, so he's doing deck netting and cookie cutting, believe he can win duels, this way and hated those who used original decks, and only love those who used his methods, going as far to make counterfeit cards in order to copy the deck, which result in him being banned from the tournaments in the Fusion Dimension when he duel against the person in the tournament whose Deck that he copied in an attempt to win money.

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sounds familiar?

golden summit
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Mmm yes netdecking bad cheems

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I never got this

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Humans have the ability to share information and learn from one another. It's probably our greatest strength. Netdecking is just doing that but in a game, what's wrong with that?

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Also, didn't many peeps in the fusion dimension have identical standard issue decks

real oracle
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counterfeiting cards is illegal in a tournaments, which will likely get you banned in the Yugioh Universe. I mean Seeker have the counterfeits of Exodia, and have many copies of them in his deck.

golden summit
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Counterfeits sure

real oracle
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Nisemono
Age: 40
Dimension: Fusion
Deck: Predaplant (fake)
A pro duelist who seemly have recent won duels with an unbeatable deck, allowing him to become a success, with great wealth that he obtained. The real truth however that he got from some source that there is an unbeatable deck in the Fusion Dimension, and made counterfeit of Yuri's cards, including his Fusion Dragon, which Nisemono hasn't summoned yet, as the leader has warned him not to summon that card.

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speaking of counterfeit cards, I wonder if the one of the Four Dimension Dragons reacted when someone summoned them with a counterfeit card?

tribal thicket
clever linden
velvet lotus
shut mason
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I'm looking to commission some art for a playmat. Anyone have suggestions?

knotty ibex
knotty ibex
velvet lotus
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Need more Appliancer Laundry Dragonmaid fanart

shut mason
knotty ibex
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He is pretty good
Works currently on a Katakuri one though so you probably need to wait a bit

knotty ibex
knotty ibex
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He has Feet?

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I allways thought he just got 2 Arms and a Snake Tail

thick wigeon
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Boy too long to show legs before maybe?

fiery jungle
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He always had them

elfin nova
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^

modest oar
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slifer was more hard-looking in the anime

fiery jungle
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I don't know how the anime done it but as someone who have actual copies of the manga, you can observe the hind legs in some of the panels

knotty ibex
#

The Anime never showed them I think

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It was only his top or his body around the Zeppelin

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He was just reeeeeeaaaaaaly long

real oracle
#

It is difficult for me to make archetypes for fanfiction with gimmicks

clever linden
fiery jungle
hearty meteor
#

I love the pose but part of me Def thought Stardust was about to do a Rider Kick lol

knotty ibex
#

Looks a bit weird cause the other Leg is nowhere to be seen

fiery jungle
#

Shooting Star Kick OgreThink

knotty ibex
#

He said:

woeful cobalt
#

i am finally getting to draw after a very very long time and i am so darn happy about it! i downloaded a drawing program on my laptop and drew yugi as my first thing!!

woeful cobalt
#

Done!

nocturne karma
#

looks great, good job

vivid coyote
modest oar
modest oar
tropic brook
cedar socket
#

Other than just repeatedly writing, is there no real way to improve it?

fiery jungle
#

Never thought i get to see delinquent girl somewhat related to extinction-inducing meteor but here we are

cedar socket
#

Where should I go to get my writing reviewed?

modest oar
cedar socket
#

Looks nice,

tropic brook
knotty ibex
#

Destroys your backrow before summoning the 10th Monster like everyone who saw that card being released

fringe fable
#

It was Waking the Dragon

weak patrol
knotty ibex
#

[Underworld Goddes]

dusk parcelBOT
# knotty ibex [Underworld Goddes]

Rating: Link-5 (⬆↗➡⬇↘)
[ Fiend / Link / Effect ]

ATK 3000

Effect

4+ Effect Monsters
You can also use 1 monster your opponent controls as material to Link Summon this card. If this card is Link Summoned: You can negate the effects of all face-up monsters your opponent currently controls. This Link Summoned card is unaffected by your opponent's activated effects, unless they target this card. Once per turn, when your opponent activates a card or effect that Special Summons a monster(s) from the GY (Quick Effect): You can negate the activation.

knotty ibex
#

So anyway as I was saying

cedar socket
#

Can I promote my writing here?

clever pecan
#

That is essentially what the channel is for

cedar socket
#

oh. Thanks.

knotty ibex
#

I found the New Frog Support
Toadly Ronin

cedar socket
#

huh.

tired crystal
#

Been playing Battle Network Legacy and I hate Magicman so damn much

#

I keep returning to him and spending so long trying to defeat him

#

Ended up inspiring me to make this lol

weak patrol
clever pecan
#

Are those Generaiders?

weak patrol
#

yea

tropic brook
clever linden
#

Honestly the design is good, but I kinda wished they added a few less character details to the card

#

I'd probably remove the yellow sclera maybe a different hairstyle, the spikes feel taped in almost

#

Still like a solid banger character design tho

knotty ibex
fiery jungle
#

Are they gonna do the same for other Dimension girls?

#

:risuthonk:

knotty ibex
#

I rather want a Aki Rosedragonmaid

open bridge
#

let the bracelet girls have their day, they already have to be in a far worse shown than Akiza

knotty ibex
#

No

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That's exacgly why

#

I don't need a reminder that their Show sucked

open bridge
knotty ibex
tropic brook
tropic brook
knotty ibex
#

I love Abyss Actors

fringe fable
#

@cedar socket As in, it's pretty provocative with the language in killing someone used as a human shield, particularly, when they said to have drawn their last breath, like they were a main character or something lol.

#

Ah...I guess the Genin term would also bring Naruto Ninja vibes.

clever pecan
#

I mean

#

Thats just an actual ninja thing

#

The three ranks did legitimately exist and did legitimately see use in feudal japan

cedar socket
#

Yeah.

#

the genin are mooks.

fringe fable
#

True, but the average person wouldn't really know that, so I would understand why the friend or whoever they were would think it's from Naruto or something.

cedar socket
#

That Genin wasn’t the MC, but I guess it still had a life.

clever pecan
#

Oh that part is true, ninja knowledge in the popular conscious is limited and largely wrong

cedar socket
#

I tried doing the bare minimum of research.

clever pecan
#

Also strictly speaking the ninja ranks in Naruto are also kinda incorrect

fringe fable
cedar socket
#

really?

clever pecan
#

If my memory doesnt fail me, yes

hearty meteor
#

Um Ovven

#

Why are you tohou

clever pecan
#

... who did that

#

Also I dont know when that happened

#

There we go

hearty meteor
#

Just logged on with my phone, glanced through channels, and did a double take when I saw your name here

#

It's fixed now though

clever pecan
#

Yes because I fixed it

cedar socket
clever pecan
#

Anyway, if memory serves me right, the way it works is that Jonin were the representatives, mostly doing administrative work, Chunin were their assistants and did limited field work, mostly doing management, and Genin were the bulk of the actual field agents

cedar socket
#

hm. Noted.

clever pecan
#

I do recommend trying to do actual research though

#

This is all second-hand knowledge relying on my unreliable memory

#

... actually thats not good advice

#

Most people dont even know any of this

#

Unless you want to be historically accurate, you can do whatever you want, but do remember that unless you go historically accurate overall (Which removes the glamour of ninjas in the first place), people will make the Naruto comparison

cedar socket
#

For my story, it was:
Genin- the goons,
Chunin- slightly stronger (MOTW),
Jonin- the vanguard

clever pecan
#

Yeah thats basically Naruto

#

People will make the comparison

#

Youll have to deal with it if you dont want to change it

cedar socket
#

huh. Well… any ideas?

clever pecan
#

Figure out what you want your story to be

#

There is no point in me telling you what to write

#

It defeats the purpose of the creative exercise

cedar socket
#

Personally, I’m just adapting something else, and adding stuff to it.

clever pecan
#

Well, if its adapting an existing story that is being derivative

cedar socket
#

yeah.

cedar socket
#

A side story I’ve been writing.

cedar socket
#

I tried writing fanfiction once. It's bad, but I hope it's laughably so.

leaden ibex
#

@analog stone got a good line of dialogue out of this whole event

scenic cargo
#

Practicing art again and uhhh

#

Here's a thing I drew ig

cedar socket
#

Gokai Silver!

#

I think he has more personality than Orion, or maybe that’s just me.

leaden ibex
#

Fuck. Do I get really creative with the writing of this scene? It's way cooler than what I had planned, but the issue is that it leans into directing from the writer's room

#

And I'm not supposed to be doing that

#

This is already pushing it

cedar socket
#

try looking at it from a new perspective.

leaden ibex
#

The thing is, I like the way this comes off

#

The issue is, I'm not the one to make the call

#

The director is

cedar socket
#

Sorry for late reply, but you a screenwriter?

cedar socket
#

Like, I once wrote my own screenplay too.

clever linden
# leaden ibex

Ya know with the MTG scandal, bringing up the Pinkertons rn is kinda weird

clever pecan
#

That is the reference Im pretty sure

clever linden
#

Oh in that case, fair enough

#

Though if the script got actually picked up, now that I think about it

Wouldn't the reference be outdated

knotty ibex
#

What is that Script even for?

leaden ibex
#

But I think it vaguely works as a standalone line

clever linden
#

Oh true

#

I think the only part that could sound off here is the "bruh"

Because it gives me Netflix Faye Valentine vibes in this sentence 💀

leaden ibex
#

I think it fits the character, but I'll play with it

clever linden
#

I'm sure it does, but I am literally only basing my opinion off of random lines I have

leaden ibex
#

I think it fits the character, but I'll play with it

leaden ibex
#

Woops time to break another convention

#

Close ups are the director's call but it looks good here

knotty ibex
#

One of my OCs got a 3D Model now
LanternThumbsUp

cedar socket
#

Buff? Nice.

knotty ibex
#

She is a Bouncer

cedar socket
#

Well, I wouldn’t get on her bad side…

knotty ibex
#

As long as you pay for the Drinks and behave she is a Teddy

cedar socket
#

I can’t even drink.

knotty ibex
#

That's on you then

#

Sorry

#

Just order a Juice

thick wigeon
cedar socket
#

I've heard alcohol tastes terrible so...

thick wigeon
#

It depends I think

#

Tho I’m kinda on that side

cedar socket
#

Maybe I'll ask my mom to buy soju?

tropic brook
#

Out of boredom, i just counted the amount of tabs i have open on my phone for shut im reading

#

....at this point im willing to admit that i might have a problem

cedar socket
#

Yee...

#

💀

#

Don't worry.

#

I know what that's like.

cursive lake
cursive lake
#

Lol

knotty ibex
leaden ibex
#

I love this character

#

He's turning out to be this weird-ass conspiracy theorist and he's super fun to write

real oracle
knotty ibex
#

I commissioned it

real oracle
#

I'm impressed

cursive lake
real oracle
knotty ibex
cursive lake
#

Nice!

#

You drew this one?

knotty ibex
#

No...my stuff is more like this
I just repost a lot of cool Art I see on Twitter or Pixiv cause I have not much time to draw myself

cursive lake
#

The bear looks adorable!

#

And the tour guide is pretty!

#

Can I post pics from online too?

#

There are a bunch of cute and cool pics that I myself loved and I would love to share them with you all!!

primal crag
cedar socket
#

But I forgot the password... 💀

real oracle
#

good morning

real oracle
#

I should introduct the first villain before the protagonist.

cedar socket
#

Why?

#

It isn't mandated JSYK.

real oracle
#

I have already found my settling for my story in the Fusion Dimension.

real oracle
#

I have been wasting too much time on the fanfic channels where I'm suppose to write

leaden ibex
#

After naming him Glass, I had to

knotty ibex
#

Can I share a cool Cosplay I found or does that not count as Art?

clever linden
#

I'm gonna say it probably shouldn't

leaden ibex
#

I love writing Danny

#

He's the worst

#

Fixed up the dialogue

clever linden
# leaden ibex

I love him already.

I don't care if he's right or wrong

leaden ibex
#

||Although he's also got the wrong victim, but so does Hazel. That's a reveal for later in the season tho||

clever linden
#

Ah lmao

leaden ibex
#

He also had a cheesy porn parody style fantasy sequence explaining to hazel how he thinks it happened

#

Danny is the best

cursive lake
#

Rei Akaba from Yu-Gi-Oh! Arc V!

#

Someone posted this creating her a full body using Anzu from Duel Masters

cedar socket
#

You mean she doesn’t have a full body?

real oracle
open bridge
hearty meteor
#

Oh wow

#

Another failing on ARC-V's part

cedar socket
#

Oh dang.

#

That’s… awkward.

open bridge
#

this is one of the few full body shots we get of her

viscid bobcat
#

tbf she was only in like two episodes

open bridge
#

yeah

#

and for most of her screentime she was possessing Declan's little adopted sister(?)

cedar socket
#

I... am totally out of my depth.

knotty ibex
leaden ibex
#

@clever linden Danny continue to be an idiot

knotty ibex
#

What is this even for?

leaden ibex
#

TV show

clever linden
#

Lmao

leaden ibex
#

Do the math on the deal btw

clever linden
#

Yeah that's what I realised immediately

rose knoll
#

redid my red eyes drakuriboh design, hope you like it!

knotty ibex
#

Looks awesomeLanternThumbsUp

rose knoll
#

thank you!

cursive lake
cursive lake
#

Arc V should have shown her more

cursive lake
#

Nice!

open bridge
#

arc-v had a big enough cast to begin with
they didn't need another major character

cursive lake
#

That is true

#

But they have shown Zarc so much

#

Why not the good guy, Rei?

open bridge
#

they showed yuya zarc a lot
original form zarc got as much if not less screentime

cursive lake
#

I didn't think of that

#

But Yuya Zarc is still Zarc if you know what I mean

#

Like, Zarc is totally there

#

But Rei only gets a little more attention because of Layra

#

And I KNOW Arc V was already filled up with too many other main characters

#

But if they made an artwork for Zarc, why not Rei?

#

If you can see where I'm coming from now

#

I love this pic! ❤️

rose knoll
#

My contribution to the Zarc conversation, did a couple of arts for a store's custom zarc deck haha

knotty ibex
fringe fable
#

Isn't Sera just grass?

jade rivet
fringe fable
#

Or...whatever those bubbly plants are.

weak patrol
jade rivet
#

Eldlich just not wanting to get involved

open bridge
#

the little "dewdrops" on her are digestive fluids

#

sticky ones

jade rivet
#

[predaplant sundew]

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# jade rivet [predaplant sundew]

level Level: 2
[ Plant / Effect ]

ATK 600 / DEF 200

Effect

Monsters with a Predator Counter that you use as Fusion Materials are treated as DARK. During your Main Phase: You can Fusion Summon 1 DARK Fusion Monster from your Extra Deck, using this card on the field and monsters from your hand, field, and/or monsters with a Predator Counter your opponent controls as Fusion Material. You can only use this effect of "Predaplant Chlamydosundew" once per turn.

fringe fable
#

KekW

jade rivet
#

I meant just the art oop

open bridge
#

Sera's name comes from the Drosera, which is also just the sundew

jade rivet
#

But i always wondered what those things on chlamydosundew were

weak patrol
#

funnily enough predap has 3 sundew-related mons

#

the drosophyllum and byblis are close relatives

jade rivet
#

Squid drosera?

#

A[squid drosera]

dusk parcelBOT
jade rivet
#

I don't even know what im looking at

weak patrol
#

i honestly forgot this existed

jade rivet
#

Also what plant is bufo based on

#

The frog

weak patrol
#

so that's 4 sundew-related ones

#

bufo is a pitcher plant

#

follicularis or smth

jade rivet
#

Bufo is a victreebel........

fiery jungle
#

Sometimes I forgor that Predaplant & Traptrix cover the same niche

knotty ibex
#

Kind of

fiery jungle
#

It just that one is also include insect, others went with dragon

knotty ibex
#

Predas are Animals mixed with Plants the other are Girls

#

And one of them has a out of place Dragon in it lmao

fiery jungle
#

I do like Planimal aesthetic, we need more of them
And not just normal animal with green fur

jade rivet
#

Isn't rikka just traptrix after robbing lovely and lady of their clothes?

#

And like growing up a bit

knotty ibex
#

That's a funny way to look at it

jade rivet
#

And then sunavalon just exists

#

The true plant type deck

#

Do we have any plant archetypes besides rikka, traptrix, sunavalon and predaplant?

#

I guess rose maybe

open bridge
#

Rikka is more like snow fairies

#

sylvan

#

is mostly plants

#

oh it's entirely plants

fiery jungle
#

That said, can we retrain Flower Wolf Komoney?
I know issa beast but I want it to support plant as well just because I want to put it on my Predaplant

#

Name it Flowerewolf for extra Palindrome

#

Ah but they can only use Warwolf

jade rivet
#

Whats a warwolf

#

Lol

#

Like seriously

#

Ive seen the cards

#

But whats a warwolf

fiery jungle
#

Komoney has this weird unwritten rule not to type Werewolf for some reason

knotty ibex
weak patrol
#

yea the princesses

#

[tytanniel]

dusk parcelBOT
# weak patrol [tytanniel]

level Level: 8
[ Plant / Effect ]

ATK 2800 / DEF 2600

Effect

When a card or effect is activated that targets a card(s) on the field (Quick Effect): You can Tribute 1 face-up Plant monster; negate the activation, and if you do, destroy it.

fiery jungle
#

I remember them

knotty ibex
#

Yeah those

#

They have a Number Xyz and a Synchro too

fiery jungle
#

[sunflower marina]

dusk parcelBOT
fiery jungle
#

[Marina, Princess of Sunflowers]

dusk parcelBOT
# fiery jungle [Marina, Princess of Sunflowers]

level Level: 8
[ Plant / Effect ]

ATK 2800 / DEF 1600

Effect

If exactly 1 other Plant monster you control (and no other cards) is destroyed by battle or card effect and sent to the GY: You can target 1 card your opponent controls; destroy that target. This card must be face-up on the field to activate and to resolve this effect.

jade rivet
#

Queen of the night is the xyz

fiery jungle
#

This is the one I had owo

knotty ibex
#

[Periallis]

dusk parcelBOT
# knotty ibex [Periallis]

level Level: 7
[ Plant / Synchro / Effect ]

ATK 1600 / DEF 2400

Effect

1 Tuner + 1+ non-Tuner monsters
Gains 400 ATK for each Plant monster you control, except this card. During your Main Phase: You can Special Summon 1 Level 5 or higher Plant monster from your hand or GY in Defense Position, except "Periallis, Empress of Blossoms". You can only use this effect of "Periallis, Empress of Blossoms" once per turn.

jade rivet
#

Oh this

knotty ibex
#

[Number 87]

dusk parcelBOT
# knotty ibex [Number 87]

rank_star Rank: 8
[ Plant / Xyz / Effect ]

ATK 3200 / DEF 2800

Effect

3 Level 8 monsters
Once per turn (Quick Effect): You can detach 1 material from this card, then activate 1 of these effects.
●Target 1 Set Spell/Trap your opponent controls; while this card is face-up on the field, that Set card cannot be activated.
●Target 1 Plant monster on the field; change that target to face-down Defense Position.
●Target 1 face-up monster on the field; that target gains 300 ATK.

jade rivet
knotty ibex
#

Damn that one is kinda trash...

#

Thought it had better effects

#

For a 3 Monster Rank 8

#

300 ATK Boost ConcernedFroge

fiery jungle
#

Is Half flower half girl aesthetic started from Castlevania?

knotty ibex
#

Idk

fiery jungle
#

Havent seen this aesthetic outside Komoney media

knotty ibex
#

Zelda had it

#

In BotW atleast

fiery jungle
#

:risuthonk:

#

So the earliest I can think of is still from Castlevania

knotty ibex
#

The Great Fairys

clever linden
#

World Yokai Picture Book

knotty ibex
rose knoll
#

done for a client a bit ago, for a custom Joey deck, hope you like it!

fiery jungle
next cradle
cedar socket
#

Cool.

elfin nova
#

Nice

rose knoll
#

windwitch Rin from ArcV done for a client, hope you like it!

hearty meteor
#

That's SO COOL!

#

I love the idea of fusing her with her monster

#

the outfit is a little iffy, but I vibe with the concept

rose knoll
#

Yep, all the windwitch's outfits are like that, so there wasn't much I could do lol, Still tried to keep it classy and cover what I could with the ribbons haha

clever linden
#

seeing it was a commission you probably should pay ' em if you want it

knotty ibex
#

I commissioned him for smth too
You really should
Worth every Cent

rose knoll
rose knoll
# real oracle Do Ruri next!

I'm open for suggestions, just (luckily enough) i don't really have much time to work on stuff that isn't commissions, all my personal projects are frozen rn lol

fiery jungle
knotty ibex
#

That was it btw

next cradle
knotty ibex
#

That's a weird looking Super Quantum Layer

next cradle
#

You mean an Inzektor

knotty ibex
#

Yes a Deskbot

thick wigeon
#

Well, the show itself

tropic brook
#

I think its time to admit to myself that i may have a problem.
Aside from having read a coffeeshop au of all things, the amount of reading tabs i have open just went up a digit, which is a worrying trend

cedar socket
#

Oh dear.

hearty meteor
#

Guy, do you know how many coffee shop AUs I've ingested in my time

#

And I'm perfectly fine!

cedar socket
#

Are coffee shop AUs AUs that take place in a coffeeshop?

#

Or is this some obscure terminology I'm not aware of?

clever pecan
hearty meteor
tropic brook
#

ik, i just wanted to make a joke

#

just with the amount of fafiction i read, its suprising that this was the first coffeeshop au

fringe fable
#

A what?

#

Is it where all the characters just hang out at a coffee shop in the modern era all day long?

hearty meteor
fringe fable
#

Lmao, are they all just sitting down talking about their urban lives converted from the source material?

tropic brook
#

from what i gather, usually one or more of the characters are the emloyees/employers and other ones are customers

hearty meteor
#

Like there was one I read where a barista observed several characters of a polycyle but thought they were involved in a soon-to-be-violent love triangle

#

Most of them are just "character a is a coffee store worker and falls for/is fallen for by a non-worker character b" tho

#

Lmfao, there was a REALLY funny one where the protagonists of DM through VRAINS were employed as the staff of a single chaotic restaurant that only got by because of Yusei and luck

fringe fable
#

His Milk specialty got all the sales going.

cedar socket
#

I wonder if I can write a coffee shop AU that’s actually a form of Purgatory?

clever linden
#

Just slice of life it

#

they're just kinda same-y

round citrus
#

coffee shop AU is like another word for "they're adults" but it's not like a university AU even though all of them are always around that age

#

my theory for their popularity is that like. a lot of ppl who wrote coffee shop AUs I've observed were not adults yet and they knew Adults Get Coffee but didn't fully know how university worked or jobs

fringe fable
#

Office worker AU pls. UwU

cursive lake
#

She looks pretty! And it looks so much like the real thing!!

#

Btw, do any of you write fanfic by any chance?

round citrus
#

the world is sorely lacking in office workers enemies to lovers au. i think it's got potential

primal crag
#

I've seen high school, coffeeshop AUs, trampoline park AUs … I don't get it.

round citrus
#

TRAMPOLINE PARK AUS?

#

what if we drowned in the foam pit together 🤍

primal crag
#

That sound you just heard was a pop culture reference going right over my head.

round citrus
#

oh there's no pop culture reference I'm not in tune like that

primal crag
#

FWIW, I might've been exaggerating on the last one. But AO3 has a few fics that take place in them for whatever reason.

round citrus
#

i just see news abt kids drowning in the big foam pits at trampoline parks more frequently than I expect

#

now that I think abt it google news might have an algorithm

primal crag
#

Who knows. My GF's dead terrified of them, though. Even air bags—she's worried they won't hold her weight, or that she won't be able to get out.

#

Not a lot of upper body strength, by her own admission.

#

Closest I ever came to an AU like that was when I created an Action Field built to take place in one such park.

#

But since the action kinda negates the point of an AU … well, it turned more into a big bit of worldbuilding instead.

cedar socket
#

Have you guys read The Outsiders?

#

By S.E. Hinton?

open bridge
#

back in like middle school yeah

cedar socket
#

My sister has read it. So have I. She likes Dally, but I like Sodapop.

fringe fable
#

I heard my name.

#

But yes, I do like The Outsiders. kek

viscid bobcat
#

i knew a guy named ponyboy when i was in elementary school

#

he really did not like that name

fringe fable
#

Why's that?

viscid bobcat
#

because people would make fun of him for it

fringe fable
#

Does he wear a ponytail or something?

viscid bobcat
#

no his name was literally ponyboy

#

after ponyboy from the outsiders

fringe fable
#

Oh. Now I see.

#

Especially the origins of the name.

tropic brook
viscid bobcat
#

idk

#

i have two great uncles who are named after greek philosophers and then my great grandparents realized that it wasn't a good idea to give their kids names that sound like wizards so they gave my grandpa a really normal name

#

which sounded extra silly next to a name like "xenophon"

next cradle
weak patrol
#

getting called "great-uncle xenophon" by children sounds like it could be mildly funny

rose knoll
#

As expected I even have my own summon mechanic with custom template and everything lol.

cedar socket
#

I’d be an author if it weren’t for the fact I’m not.

rose knoll
cedar socket
#

Eh? I was just dropping an offhand comment.

rose knoll
#

Odd timing I guess

cedar socket
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Sorry.

rose knoll
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np

cedar socket
red sail
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hip hip horray for a mid bored out of my mind moment sketch of earthbound immortal ccapac apu the goat of 5ds

knotty ibex
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A round of Applause for probably the best Earthbound

red sail
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FINALLY SOMEONE GETS IT

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in a perfect reality, him having the master duel summon animation instead of rasca would of domino'd into world peace

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tis a shame

knotty ibex
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It's honestly sad that they will most likely never get more Support with the Arc-V Synchro Fusion Clusterfuck

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It looked neat

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Why would they not print it?

red sail
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LITERALLY

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suprised they didn't get anything in duelist nexus

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speaking of which, you just gave me a idea

red sail
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behold the idea in question, i also gave it a effect and all in the custom card channel, I present Earthbound Patriarch Psunaame Kapur

rose knoll
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nice

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Based it on one of the nazca lines like the rest?

real oracle
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this is nice as well

knotty ibex
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I got one of my Commissioned Pics of 1 of my OCs today

clever pecan
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Oooh, nice

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Is it a Transformer, or just a robot in general?

clever linden
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It absolutely does look like it could be from cybertron lmao

rose knoll
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Silver fang's favorite weapon: Raigeki sword

knotty ibex
next cradle
red sail
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colored version using whatever i have on me

real oracle
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Hello

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I could have finish the first chaper of yugioh arc v by now, but its difficult without boring the readers, not to mention the grammar and the past tense that I'm more concerned about.

rose knoll
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landstar ruler! Hope you like it!

modest oar
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holy

open bridge
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A friend drew a thing for me

clever pecan
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Oh, nice

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Did you put that story on hold btw, or are you still working on it?

open bridge
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I’m still kinda working on/off on it but progress is slow between it and all my other writing projects

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But i am indeed still working on a chapter for it centered around Tania (big bulky quarterback of a girl with the personality of a stuffed bear)

clever pecan
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Oooh, neat

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Also how do you handle multiple writing projects

open bridge
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by ignoring all of them and focusing on school, and when that’s not an option I struggle my way through one until I hit a chapter/checkpoint of sorts or finish them for one offs

real oracle
rose knoll
real oracle
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how can I make character description less boring?

rose knoll
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If it's within a story, give the description a purpose.

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Like, if it's important enough to spend time reading about it, then make it relevant to the current situation

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if the character has to enter a place and the size/height is the reason why they can/can't, that probably is the moment to describe it

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You don't really need to throw the entire description on a single text wall.

real oracle
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In the center of the meet and greet, a violet haired man was waving at the crowd with an enigmatic smile due to being in the center of attention from the crowd. He wrote purple and light blue waistcoat, blue shirt, and light blue pants. A man was kissing the black shoes that man was wearing, who doesn't seem fazed at all, and enjoyed the admiration from the people of the City.

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this is the first character description of the paragrapth.

rose knoll
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Well, it gets the idea across but you could tweak it a bit. Would like me to try?

real oracle
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sure

rose knoll
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you're trying to write it in past tense right?

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just to be sure lol

real oracle
rose knoll
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Maybe my version makes the crowd a bit too wild, but it's just an example of what I mean.

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wait a second, just noticed something lol

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At the center of the meet and greet, a man was kissing the pristine black shoes of who apparently was the focus of the crowd. Everyone was trying to reach out to the main guest, excited to touch his purple waistcoat with light blue decors. Some even managed to get past under the blue shirt to touch his skin.

Luckily for him, his belt was well tight so he knew his light blue pants were safe from the savage love of the city people.

The roof lamps were pointing directly at the huge crowd, accentuating the joyful yet awkward smile of the violet haired man who didn’t seem fazed at all, enjoying the admiration.

rose knoll
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Again, was trying to give a purpose on why you would be describing each thing. Although imo it's not necessary . Like you can describe the pants or shirt way later.

rose knoll
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but it serves a purpose to set not only the description, but also the whole situation

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a purpose:*

cedar socket
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Ok…

rose knoll
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Again, imo you don't need to describe everything, so would take out like more than half of the text and just focus on the most important details and keep progressing the situation around it.

rose knoll
cedar socket
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What do you guys think of this excerpt from my writing?
The youthful man opened his eyes and found himself in a strange forest. The trees pulsed like blood vessels and bore round fruits that came in white or black. The luminous white fruits were like pearls, numerous but small. The black fruits, dark and lustrous, were few in number but large in size, like bowling balls.

knotty ibex
round citrus
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omg vanripper style

hearty meteor
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Yeah I was gonna say, looks very Helltaker-y

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Very nice