Re-post to avoid confussion of WIP Visi early foot steps as a hero | AdHoc Studio | Page 1

jovial knot Dec 23, 2025, 5:17 AM

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blazer is the correct route

nocturne bluff Dec 23, 2025, 5:43 AM

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jovial knot blazer is the correct route

There isnt any correct option bud, its about preferance.

jovial knot Dec 23, 2025, 6:01 AM

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nocturne bluff There isnt any correct option bud, its about preferance.

chill i’m ragebaiting

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also you misspelled golem

nocturne bluff Dec 23, 2025, 6:02 AM

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Nuh uh

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Say golum

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It sounds right

nocturne bluff Dec 23, 2025, 6:02 AM

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jovial knot chill i’m ragebaiting

Lmao good luck sur

jovial knot Dec 23, 2025, 6:03 AM

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nocturne bluff It sounds right

you’re pronouncing it like gollum, every instance of his name is pronounced go-lem

nocturne bluff Dec 23, 2025, 6:04 AM

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Nuh uh

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I say golum

jovial knot Dec 23, 2025, 6:04 AM

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lowk the only one in the wrong here is the english language

nocturne bluff Dec 23, 2025, 6:04 AM

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I no care what everyone else says

jovial knot Dec 23, 2025, 6:04 AM

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ainokea

nocturne bluff Dec 23, 2025, 6:04 AM

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Yea

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Anokia

tall shell Dec 23, 2025, 6:04 AM

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Yes

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Nokia

nocturne bluff Dec 23, 2025, 6:05 AM

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A nokia

jovial knot Dec 23, 2025, 6:06 AM

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homeless in heathrow is a better song than radio

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both in and out of context

nocturne bluff Dec 23, 2025, 6:09 AM

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⁉️

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Ive fell for ragebait oh noes

jovial knot Dec 23, 2025, 3:09 PM

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nocturne bluff Ive fell for ragebait oh noes

this isn’t ragebait twin

tall shell Dec 24, 2025, 3:31 AM

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ayeee

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lets go

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imma read that in a minute and ill give feedback

quaint patio Dec 24, 2025, 5:14 AM

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Holy peak

tall shell Dec 25, 2025, 6:22 PM

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Yo

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Now this is a Christmas gift

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Btw I read chapters 11 - 12

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Ill go more in depth later, but they are really good

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Also, again your writing has been exceptionally good since the first few chapters

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I mean really

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I still firmly believe that you should pitch this stuff to AdHoc for potential ideas for season 2

tall shell Dec 25, 2025, 6:49 PM

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Lol, Im just talking. What im basically trying to say is that your writing is on a pretty high level imo

tall shell Dec 26, 2025, 3:30 AM

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Btw when are the next pages coming out?

quaint patio Dec 26, 2025, 7:33 PM

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Let's go

quaint patio Dec 27, 2025, 2:05 AM

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Alright

quaint patio Dec 27, 2025, 7:03 AM

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Thanks for making this man Its been keeping me busy after dispatch ended s1

tall shell Dec 27, 2025, 7:16 AM

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quaint patio Thanks for making this man Its been keeping me busy after dispatch ended s1

Bro this is so real

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Seriously dude, absolute cinema

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Genuinely had me going through emotions reading that shi

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And the suspense

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Im talking about the whole story so far btw

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Like

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Damn

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You should be very proud of yourself

quaint patio Dec 27, 2025, 7:18 AM

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Yeah you should be proud of yourself

tall shell Dec 27, 2025, 5:19 PM

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are you going to be writing more?

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yea, writing like this takes time and concentration

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very nice

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btw i left kudos on Archive of Our Own

tall shell Dec 27, 2025, 5:21 PM

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tall shell btw i left kudos on Archive of Our Own

(ofc)

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i would be happy to, give me a little bit tho

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ah oki

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