#Little side angle
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Thank you! But yeah she is literally crazy as hell and being a goofball at the same time
Is this a TCM reference
Can't be a coincidence that her name is the butcher (nick name for one of bubbas outfits) she's from Texas and is a cannibal
I'm gonna regret asking for a hug aren't I?
how did she get the scars and bullet holes
oh
She, doen't have super strength right?
YEEEE THATS RIGHT I was obsessed with the films
Yes bc she would crash your bones on purpose
Mostly I thought that since most heroes had strength even if their powers are not centred on it, then it would be normal for her to have strength BUT in case was not I would have another good reason to justify her muscles (sure not super strength but the strength of a soldier!)
Wow she's buff
Buff and stupid
Well to make it short, she joined the army and it was the first time she discovered her power, from now then she never showed others scars but bc it was the first time and she was really in bad shape (like bad bad) would be interest in her backstory?
Yes I would
Very much so
We are in the 1988, Theodore (18 years) joined in the military, She didnāt even know why she did that but if that had could had make her escape from āthemā then at least was worth it. Back in the present, she met a scaring looking guy who preferred to leave him alone and it was like this until he would help her by scolding her for any mistakes, long enough they started to enjoy each other company until Kohl finally had the courage to ask her to leave the military with him after what was supposed to be their last mission. But boy it didnāt ended up well, to be short the mission was in The Inside and everything went wrong. They were supposed to take down a society of villains but they failed and decided to turn back. Kohl couldn't find Theodore, he screamed her name in the decays but all useless, then he found her. Her. Her smashed head with all body parts detached. In his head there was so many feelings but he couldn't move for that traumatic view, one of his squad members drag him away from there to the base.
After two days that the war over, Maria found on what was remained from Theodore, she decided to take her back to life in unknown ways. With a miracle she did come back from the dead land and was a completely new person, Maria demanded her that from then she would had been hers and she would had done everything she said without doubts; and Maria would had teach her the art of Combat. But one thing that Maria didn't knew is that now Theodore was a completely new person, like she was reborn, her new body never let her die. She was unstoppable. Maria couldn't care much as long she would obey her. So Theodore was doing whatever she wanted under Maria rules and after 20 years she had the permission to explore the world. She did had enemies after her freedom and challenged everyone minds to just find someone that could had make her feel alive again,
she would find pleasure on torturing mentally and physically her victims and eat them as her reward, but she would hide this side of her perfectly in public. Just after her release. As Mariaās pet she would had done any dirty jobs for her but also being a model and an icon of her Agency, this was great to hide her crimes from the world, even if someone could had reached the true Theodore could had just use the sad little story explaining her scars and telling that she was OBLIGATED to kill when she was in the war but could never kill again, and better yet, her fans believe every word she said. But soon or later, her fame would had gone against her and punished with life imprisonment. While she was imprisoned she lost contacts with Maria (or this is what the SDN believes) until the SDN reached out to her and after knowing the abilities gave her a second chance
I was about to theorize that she was a cannibal because there were times she would be in situations where she nar nothing to eat but the corpses of the fallen
And then when she returned to America she kept up the cannibalism because she was used to it
Well I mean yeah she kept being a cannibal for the whole time until she got imprisoned surely
I think I forgot to write that part lol
But one thing sure she was always had been a cannibal, even when she was little
Damn
Indeed this was before the brain damage
Manifest it is not worth it bro
What is she like after?
Boy Iām dumb I meant this was the after brain damage š
Before was wayyy worse
I got a video about it
So just to summarize because I have a hard time processing large amounts of text
Dw this is short
Ooo
Do you like it 
Does she need love?
Like
A positive relationship
Where she's not being treated like shit
Yeah loved how f'd up she looks as a child XD
Well this was just a part bc after she meet Kohl (the guy I mentioned in the backstory) where they became friends but Kohl tells Theo that soon heās leaving Texas with his parents and asks Theo to see one last time and she says yes, after Theo overhearing that her parents wants to eat their children she finally takes the courage to kill them and burn the house, finally she catch up with Kohl begging him to take her with them and so they do
Thanzzz
But I'm guessing she lost contact with Kohl when she, you know, died
Yup
She did and she didnāt remember him
But she wants revenge
Bc she knows that someone did that to her
Does she age slower due to her powers, because she looks 20 despite being in her 40's
I mean, I didnāt think about it but since her reborn she found out her powers she was 18, we could say that she heals slower but it always depends
Like Deadpool just putting two seconds to heal a tiny wound or one or two days to regenerate the body
Let me just summarize rq
Born in a abusive and poor home in the middle of nowhere. When she finally gets old enough she kills her family and joins the military with the only positive relationship she has ever had Kohl.
Then during a mission she was mutilated and killed
Been a woman called maria body parts and different generation Powers reviving her without any memorys
Then made her into a war machine Frankenstein monster
And kept her as a personal hitman and Fashion model in order to aleviate suspicious and build her a reputation so she can get away with murders
She also enjoys torturing and eating her victims.
Then she got giga caught. "Maybe like a mass murderer in a ball room deal"and imprisoned
Did I get all that right?
Kinda wrong here bc she was a still a child when she killed her parents and so Theo and kohl grew together, THEN they join the military together
Bc at that rate Kohl became her stepbrother
Since it was literally adoption (and yeah later they did all the documentation staff to make it legal)
Yup
Boyo, one thing that sheās not is straight
But you better have money to spend or she wonāt look at you
Little sketchy
Operator team
āWhy are you like this?ā āšā
I was gonna say I kept imagining her like his
I mean Reference to Hannibal lecter
Don't let Manifest know, the moment he stops simping for you is the moment he is able to take your life

(His abilities function on his will)
DAMN
Unless her regeneration is good enough to do this then she kinda cooked
I mean until the brain is intact
So something about my guy is that he is basically a green lantern
But then I was like okay what if he was a green lantern that had an actual imagination
And also made it so his "ring" was embedded in his body so he could just think about and create something
And then I realized wait minute that means he could also just slash something instantly with his powers
And then I realized "ah crap I just made him sukuna"
I tend to make my guys overpowered by complete accident
(I don't get to talk about him much)
So does she still kill people or?
Cause id imagine she'd still be on the loose
Itās ok I love the idea!
Well she is allowed to beat up bad guys and sometimes she gets a little excited and yk
Still eat people?
Yup, until she will get caught
Everyone except babies, she hates them so much she would listen to a man than eat them
Justifiable Daddy issues?
Wait no, no memories
Uhhh daddy issues ingrained into her soul?
Kinda, she just feels the thought of having a child and taking care of because sheās scared of them being a cannibal like her
Mostly she see them āstupid who would trust anything for just some loveā
"This woman needs a hug"
And probably a Christmas present
And probably therapy
And a vacation
And a kiss on the head
And tuck into a bed for a good night's sleep
Hmmmm Nahhh let her suffer
"That's not what heros do"
Any idea where you are taking her character narratively?
After her current events
Well my idea is to make a new team where Kohl is in there two and recognise Theo but noticing how she doesnāt he will keep it his secret for now
More accurately, I am attempting to narratively weave together the majority of Oc' creations in this server into a some kind of story
I have already started with the A-team since they were basically ground zero for this whole thing
And I feel this character has some potential
Technically you are since you brought the initial team together
Because I haven't had a motivation or opportunity to work on a creative project
Much less with other competent individuals
My honest reaction
I tell ya, Theo would bring so much chaos that no one would work with her
Heh
That's kinda the point, I feel she would work well as antagonist, I even have a break out buddy in mind
Interesting
His name is Punch Out his abilities are being almost impossible to damage and he has the ability to break through anything. (This is the only stuff if him I made)
He tends to just chill in prison for the services and break out when he is bored
Like he's not super strong, he just has the ability to break though anything
He's one of Manifests Biggest pain in the asses
Love this
Scare to ask but whatās in prison for?
Destruction of property
Stealing from banks to buy stuff
Being annoying
He's chill, he hasn't killed anyone
Manifest though...
He gets pretty close
If he gets close Theo will cross the line
I already have that scenario planed out
I assume she bites people
Yes and sometimes rip the skin
id imagine all of this would be gone
Exactly
so if her brain is destroyed again will does she loose her memories and personality?
She will die š
this is a bit petty, but manslaughter is accidental murder btw!! ^_^
Honestly I thought it felt wrong but the fact was that I didnāt know if the Americans felony had accidental murder too (and yeah my ignorance thought it was bigger than first murder degree)
Dang Like permantly?
what if there is some brain left over
Also feel free to Give Theo her own post, id say she'd be popular
Like I donāt wanna buff her too much but the only way to kill is to completely destroy her brain, no crumbs left but that tiny piece of brain should be looked after bc I mean, itās all organs and could get infected easily in the outside
Also sorry I took so much to respond I just had a test today and studied like crazy š
Did you pass?
I hope, I mean usually we donāt get the results until the day we meet the teacher during class
Dang
Well at least you gave it your damn all
Also what do I call you?
I'm. Not sure I can audibly say your name
Call me Rian!
I slept just two hoursā¦
Thatās where my mental health goesā¦.
Probably a good idea to get the full 8 hours tonight if you can
Welll I already showed you the operator which sheās a witch heh
.
This one
Sheās always tired and has the most chaotic team but until they make a good job sheās happy
And I wanted to introduce the stepbrother
Which he can control tornadoes
Then a Mexican girl which her design is based on the pantera
The band?
No literally the animal
And A metal rock girl who can control metallic elements
A panther?
For now this is what the team is supposed to be
Yeah mb
Yeah she always do
Gochya
YAY
Since she's like this for a while
Alias: Feedback
Name: Estaban
Ability: Feedback (IG)
He is able to copy abilities of someone if there is a matching tattoo on both them and him. In return the receipt has their powers greatly enhanced and tied to their body mitigating their original source of their abilitys.
Love him already
Why thank you
I know that I haven't done nearly enough with your character to warrant your trust. But can I use Theo?
Can I make her have a decently strong role in Comics for with Manifest and Team-A's final arc?
- She looks cool as hell
- Her abilities when used right are terrifying.
- I feel she is a shockinly good antagonist and or partner of Manifest
- I'll clear narrative decisions with you
Yes sir! But first I need you to give more information
Like her personality and Iām going to show you a text of roleplay so you can understand the character
Perfect
Her personality changes so much depending on the situation or the person, what she likes to do is tease people making them uncomfortable or fear her or, she seduces her victim to take them where she wants, if that doesnāt work then she poke them about their personal problems that she knows from her own research, but it always rare that she let go of them, talking about victims, she doesnāt just eat her victim but likes also to play with their minds and when she kidnapped them she also tortured them to fill that emptiness, BUT she can also be nice if you will accept her weirdness and let yourself get humiliated, after a few days of suffering she will let go of the jokes and will always be touchy with with you (of course depends the relationship), at least every time you meet her she will always run to you and give all her attention to you then thatās when her āfavoursā will starts: she will kill someone who pissed off them and maybe to the birthday give the beheaded head of that person and if they donāt accept she can understand but the reaction doesnāt have to be dramatic. Now talking if she doesnāt like you/them, (Iām writing so much that I donāt even know what pronoun use HELP) after the first chat you had said something that didnāt roll her way so every time you will see her by distance she will be looking at you intensely but as she will understand that you notice her then she will just smile and go away, one day or another sheāll find yourself all alone and will knock you out to take you to her place, so never stay alone! She doesnāt talk about much of her past because she either knows much of it. After her awake she got dionasticed for Amnesia so the memories of before got lost but she trust what her boss (Maria Mantovani) tells her.
Also knows that she is cannibal.
Can I get her dispatch stats so I can better understand when reading this?
She watched Homura leave waving at her with her big smile, oh sure What could had ever happened being alone just her and him.
the next moment Homura was out of sight her neck turning in his direction along with her head almost like she snapped it, and that weird looking smile with dilated pupils like a predator looking at the prey were already suggesting what could had happened next.
āSo. Itās just you and me hm?⦠Oh you donāt got to worry vampire boyā¦. As I said before⦠I will guide you to the right way~ā¦ā
she said with all her muscled right arm grabbing his neck and almost dragging him along with her strong embrace, well vampire boy. It was good of knowing you⦠I donāt see any other way out of it⦠if you play nice she will too, if you donāt she will be the one sucking the life out of you.
āBesides!⦠itās almost like we are friends by now!⦠We joked, we laughedā¦. and friends always help out each other⦠right?ā
that right almost sounded threatening for how her face was getting more creepy and the embrace of her arm was getting tighter for his cheek touching her chest (Iām sorry)
This is an example of rp
Welll let me cook
Combat: 4
Vigor: 3
Charisma: 3
Intelligence: 1
Mobility: 2
Ahh okay
6
HELP
Manifest
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Absolutely accepts the flaws of an individual when they aren't actively self-destructive.
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Actively destroyed his pride as teenager when he realized what his type was.
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Loves attention
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Craves physical contact.
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Cooks.
Id say they at the very least can be friends
Also there are a few directions I would like to add if that's alright with you.
- That tattoo guy boosts her regeneration abilities to the point she can regrow her entire body in under a minute. (Because it's the coolest ability to have)
- Manifest knows a guy who can manipulate any metal into technology. gets her a helmet made out of an Impenetrable metal from a massive robot A-Team destroyed
Gets it for her as a gift, maybe even a parting one.
- This may fit the step brother more but maybe taking down Maria if she tries to get theo back
The stepbrother can control tornadoes not the metalā¦
- I have this robot in game villain called crate and I have an idea that he wants to capture manifest and turn to a weapon so he mind controls Theo gives her an exo skeleton and makes her hunt down him with a add ons that absorb Manifests constructs
These are 4 separate events
Ok so one thing she can get the helmet but Iām not sure if she will use it bc if itās doesnāt fit the outfit
In the 4 event that robot can even just takes out some cash and she will do whatever he wants
Bc Theo is witch
What that mean?
Witch instead of bitch
Ohhhhhhhhhhh
I think it works, the inside of her mouth is covered and it opens so she can use her signature move of biting
Ok honestly now looking at it it kinda fitting
Could you make it a little bit lighter the colour?
Like a dark grey?
Ok perfect
Yay!
Did I mention your rendered art is insanely good
since I have to re trace alot im shocked at how well you used lines to suggest anatomy
Done
Since she has a long history in fashion I figured she would want to look her best at all times and also would recreate her outfit since id imagine she would be mad if got taken.
Right but we also got remember that jail doesnāt allow freedom as much as destroying the property of the jail like the bed or towel BUT neither she would care so
And based on this image and that sheās a cannibal she is more took under vision than normal inmates
But your design is accurate too!
š all I can say is she is in good hands
Also for the prison I'm gonna go for an Orlando City Prison. It's a lower Super security prison. It allows a bit more freedom to keep their imamates getting from restless and breaking out. (A guard did get mad at her for destroying her bed sheets. She replied something like "Don't worry I'm still using thing them. šSo don't you worry anyone else! šš Alright?")
Also they have special procedure for when Punch Out breaks out. It mainly consists of, redirect him to do the least amount of damage while he escapes, and ensure no one else escapes with him.
Basically let him go and only him go
They do have Big robots Called Iron Wardens as for when riots or break outs happen.
Peak
That's insane
Give me a sec I need to compose my self
Also did you notice where I got the color from?
I THOUGHT IT WAS A LITTLE TOO SIMILAR
:)
Peak
Also its pretty cool to see her mouth open
Finally
How long have you been drawing for
Heh
Since from elementary school
I also start early drawing on tablet
Damn
Then pass to iPad
You on desktop now or still on I pad?
Still iPad
Neet
By tablet I meant the tablet which you connected to the desktop btw
I mean not really, yeah thereās a long difference between the program like Alpaca or Clipstudio and app like Procreate but you just need to learn how does it works
And after you do it for years you get the habit
Oh yeah do you even know who manifest is?
I think you already told and I presume is the operator of the team or a hero of the team
Oke
Made the entirety of this on Monday for one of Mr Caputo's characters so I could characterize Manifest after A-Team when he has begun to lose his mind
Still need to rotoscope him doing this
YESSS PLEASE
The guy on the left
Oh yeah you did mention making a manga
Somewhere
Ngl I thought this was baki for a second
wait is he actually that jacked?
Well no itās sure a fan-manga about Kengan Ashura/Omega!
What that
A manga where company makes fights one fighter to win some more and becomes the CEO of the agency
There was a collab with Kengan and Baki as a film
Yeah I was gonna say, no wonder it felt similar
Does the step brother have blue eyes
Nope
I keep imagining the page where he takes Theo home
Yep thatās him
Tf is in the water over at Texas
And he has wind powers?
Yes
I pray for anyone who has to deal with this mf from street fighter
HELP
A crazy fan of Theo
Theo's Ex?
Yes
Real
Well I didnāt thought of adding them to the teamā they are ocs from Kengan
Ohhhhhh
Expect Kohl obviously
Would you want them brought over or want a fresh cast?
Well I just recycled my ocs so maybe
Well let's think here
Theo was a fashion model under Maria right?
So I imagine a crazed fan would like hunting her down. And taking out any relationships she has.
Id imagine she had something similar if not exactly in the manga.
And then with that woman, she looks like she could be her agent who Paid Theo to be her "Girlfriend" In a relationship where she gets, idk something, untill Theo being Theo, idk rips off her arm or something. Maybe it was her being fed up with Agent's pride
And now she is out to get her
Wanna know something funny? Theo ate one of her legs
Wait
She already didnāt had one
XD
And then Theo ate the other
Maybe from the pic is not noticeable bc sheās wearing pants but she has Prosthesis
I literally went back to check to confirm
We can talk Character stuff with Theo tomorrow to flesh out her character and plan out her development
But was there a reason she did that?
Did she want to even out the cut?
Well Venelope (the ex) worked with Theo but as assassins from different gangs, Venelope was more delusional and nerdy and so she felt in love with Theo, Surely Theo would have never said no so they have been together until Theo thought Venelope was actually working with the police and in fact Maria was the telling her that and she ordered to kill her, but When Theo Kidnapped Venelope to slowly chop her off the police came and Theo run away
And after Venelope Joined the police to track Theo down making her pay for what she had done
Ngl I thought one night Theo just took the other one while she was sleeping and woke up to no legs
Nah it had to be slow and painful.
Ahhhhh
Himmm
Hmm
Kinda like the idea the relationship only happened because she was paid
Or is that not accurate to Theo
Well it was all a misunderstanding
Venelope was just offered to work in the police but she refused
Didnt make it in time to explain Theo
But Theo really just saw her as another doll to play with so yeah she fucked up more the situation by telling Venelope that
Also is she a cannibal because that's all her parents would let her eat from the tourists they killed and is her eating the parts basically eating the ring of a cake you cut instead of throwing it away?
She had it in her genes since ever
Like she came from a generation of cannibals
Her father never let have some
And neither she could eat something else because there was literally nothing around
Neither animals or vegetables
So she grew out of hunger
She would sneak out to steal what was in the left overs but she would get beat up if her father found out
Well I was gonna say I would maybe like to rewrite it into her only having that to eat human meat for another family trauma for her to overcome.
But I feel like your take is better because it's something that's built in weather she likes it or not. Or at least something she believes is built in
To be honest I lived with Theodore for Two years since people appreciated too and behind Theodore thereās a whole thought that goes around what is Theodore
What would Theodore do and say
For me Theodore is what still connects me to not give up on what I stand for so I fight for her when people wants to correct her or add things Theo would never do
So thatās why I am strict when I say she has to stuck with the idea
Funny, a main theme about Manifest is how long can a man do his best in the world before the world tears him down
The only thing keeping him going is the built in Drive to survive and make sure as many others also do.
If he didn't have that he would have ripped out his powers along time ago
But he's open to change. To change for the better, while never compromising who he is
He wouldn't change her. Just make her into something more
You don't change who you are, just what you do
Holy crap the regeneration powers make so much sense now
Honestly yeah, Theo always make her way to get remembered even if she dies, she never will because she lives inside me as the people she encountered
Honestly a Pairing of a characters about never Giving up and Never Compromising sounds lit.
YEAHHH thatās what Iām talking about
we making peak with this one
Alright I we can talk character stuff till 4:00
so like 3 hours
I got a rough google doc i can dm you for when you are ready
@white cosmos
Rn Iām free
ight