#Little side angle

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white cosmos
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Little side angle

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So uhm, I did my dispatch oc,… what possibly could go wrong right?…

solid oak
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cannibalism we’re so cooked

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naw but ts Tuff as hell twin

white cosmos
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Thank you! But yeah she is literally crazy as hell and being a goofball at the same time

analog latch
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Can't be a coincidence that her name is the butcher (nick name for one of bubbas outfits) she's from Texas and is a cannibal

still berry
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how did she get the scars and bullet holes

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oh

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She, doen't have super strength right?

white cosmos
white cosmos
white cosmos
# still berry She, doen't have super strength right?

Mostly I thought that since most heroes had strength even if their powers are not centred on it, then it would be normal for her to have strength BUT in case was not I would have another good reason to justify her muscles (sure not super strength but the strength of a soldier!)

white cosmos
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Buff and stupid

white cosmos
# still berry how did she get the scars and bullet holes

Well to make it short, she joined the army and it was the first time she discovered her power, from now then she never showed others scars but bc it was the first time and she was really in bad shape (like bad bad) would be interest in her backstory?

still berry
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Very much so

white cosmos
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We are in the 1988, Theodore (18 years) joined in the military, She didn’t even know why she did that but if that had could had make her escape from ā€œthemā€ then at least was worth it. Back in the present, she met a scaring looking guy who preferred to leave him alone and it was like this until he would help her by scolding her for any mistakes, long enough they started to enjoy each other company until Kohl finally had the courage to ask her to leave the military with him after what was supposed to be their last mission. But boy it didn’t ended up well, to be short the mission was in The Inside and everything went wrong. They were supposed to take down a society of villains but they failed and decided to turn back. Kohl couldn't find Theodore, he screamed her name in the decays but all useless, then he found her. Her. Her smashed head with all body parts detached. In his head there was so many feelings but he couldn't move for that traumatic view, one of his squad members drag him away from there to the base.
After two days that the war over, Maria found on what was remained from Theodore, she decided to take her back to life in unknown ways. With a miracle she did come back from the dead land and was a completely new person, Maria demanded her that from then she would had been hers and she would had done everything she said without doubts; and Maria would had teach her the art of Combat. But one thing that Maria didn't knew is that now Theodore was a completely new person, like she was reborn, her new body never let her die. She was unstoppable. Maria couldn't care much as long she would obey her. So Theodore was doing whatever she wanted under Maria rules and after 20 years she had the permission to explore the world. She did had enemies after her freedom and challenged everyone minds to just find someone that could had make her feel alive again,

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she would find pleasure on torturing mentally and physically her victims and eat them as her reward, but she would hide this side of her perfectly in public. Just after her release. As Maria’s pet she would had done any dirty jobs for her but also being a model and an icon of her Agency, this was great to hide her crimes from the world, even if someone could had reached the true Theodore could had just use the sad little story explaining her scars and telling that she was OBLIGATED to kill when she was in the war but could never kill again, and better yet, her fans believe every word she said. But soon or later, her fame would had gone against her and punished with life imprisonment. While she was imprisoned she lost contacts with Maria (or this is what the SDN believes) until the SDN reached out to her and after knowing the abilities gave her a second chance

still berry
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I was about to theorize that she was a cannibal because there were times she would be in situations where she nar nothing to eat but the corpses of the fallen

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And then when she returned to America she kept up the cannibalism because she was used to it

white cosmos
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Well I mean yeah she kept being a cannibal for the whole time until she got imprisoned surely

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I think I forgot to write that part lol

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But one thing sure she was always had been a cannibal, even when she was little

still berry
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Damn

white cosmos
still berry
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Manifest it is not worth it bro

still berry
white cosmos
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Before was wayyy worse

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I got a video about it

still berry
white cosmos
still berry
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So just to summarize because I have a hard time processing large amounts of text

white cosmos
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Dw this is short

still berry
white cosmos
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Do you like it PunchUpRizz

still berry
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Like

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A positive relationship

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Where she's not being treated like shit

still berry
white cosmos
# still berry Where she's not being treated like shit

Well this was just a part bc after she meet Kohl (the guy I mentioned in the backstory) where they became friends but Kohl tells Theo that soon he’s leaving Texas with his parents and asks Theo to see one last time and she says yes, after Theo overhearing that her parents wants to eat their children she finally takes the courage to kill them and burn the house, finally she catch up with Kohl begging him to take her with them and so they do

white cosmos
still berry
white cosmos
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Yup

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She did and she didn’t remember him

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But she wants revenge

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Bc she knows that someone did that to her

still berry
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Does she age slower due to her powers, because she looks 20 despite being in her 40's

white cosmos
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I mean, I didn’t think about it but since her reborn she found out her powers she was 18, we could say that she heals slower but it always depends

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Like Deadpool just putting two seconds to heal a tiny wound or one or two days to regenerate the body

still berry
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Let me just summarize rq

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Born in a abusive and poor home in the middle of nowhere. When she finally gets old enough she kills her family and joins the military with the only positive relationship she has ever had Kohl.

Then during a mission she was mutilated and killed

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Been a woman called maria body parts and different generation Powers reviving her without any memorys

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Then made her into a war machine Frankenstein monster

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And kept her as a personal hitman and Fashion model in order to aleviate suspicious and build her a reputation so she can get away with murders
She also enjoys torturing and eating her victims.

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Then she got giga caught. "Maybe like a mass murderer in a ball room deal"and imprisoned

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Did I get all that right?

white cosmos
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Bc at that rate Kohl became her stepbrother

still berry
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OHHHHHHHHHH

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Sibling's

white cosmos
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Since it was literally adoption (and yeah later they did all the documentation staff to make it legal)

white cosmos
still berry
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Gochya

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Is she single?

white cosmos
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Boyo, one thing that she’s not is straight

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But you better have money to spend or she won’t look at you

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Little sketchy

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Operator team

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ā€œWhy are you like this?ā€ ā€œšŸ˜—ā€

still berry
white cosmos
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I mean Reference to Hannibal lecter

still berry
white cosmos
still berry
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(His abilities function on his will)

white cosmos
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DAMN

still berry
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Unless her regeneration is good enough to do this then she kinda cooked

white cosmos
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I mean until the brain is intact

still berry
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So something about my guy is that he is basically a green lantern

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But then I was like okay what if he was a green lantern that had an actual imagination

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And also made it so his "ring" was embedded in his body so he could just think about and create something

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And then I realized wait minute that means he could also just slash something instantly with his powers

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And then I realized "ah crap I just made him sukuna"

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I tend to make my guys overpowered by complete accident

(I don't get to talk about him much)

still berry
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Cause id imagine she'd still be on the loose

white cosmos
white cosmos
still berry
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Still eat people?

white cosmos
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Yup, until she will get caught

still berry
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Who does she tend to eat?

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Like people she fights right?

white cosmos
still berry
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Wait no, no memories

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Uhhh daddy issues ingrained into her soul?

white cosmos
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Kinda, she just feels the thought of having a child and taking care of because she’s scared of them being a cannibal like her

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Mostly she see them ā€œstupid who would trust anything for just some loveā€

still berry
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"This woman needs a hug"

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And probably a Christmas present

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And probably therapy

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And a vacation

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And a kiss on the head

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And tuck into a bed for a good night's sleep

white cosmos
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Hmmmm Nahhh let her suffer

still berry
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"That's not what heros do"

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Any idea where you are taking her character narratively?

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After her current events

white cosmos
still berry
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More accurately, I am attempting to narratively weave together the majority of Oc' creations in this server into a some kind of story

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I have already started with the A-team since they were basically ground zero for this whole thing

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And I feel this character has some potential

still berry
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Technically you are since you brought the initial team together

still berry
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Much less with other competent individuals

white cosmos
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I tell ya, Theo would bring so much chaos that no one would work with her

still berry
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And evil

white cosmos
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Heh

still berry
still berry
white cosmos
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Interesting

still berry
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His name is Punch Out his abilities are being almost impossible to damage and he has the ability to break through anything. (This is the only stuff if him I made)

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He tends to just chill in prison for the services and break out when he is bored

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Like he's not super strong, he just has the ability to break though anything

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He's one of Manifests Biggest pain in the asses

white cosmos
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Scare to ask but what’s in prison for?

still berry
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Destruction of property

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Stealing from banks to buy stuff

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Being annoying

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He's chill, he hasn't killed anyone

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Manifest though...
He gets pretty close

white cosmos
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If he gets close Theo will cross the line

still berry
still berry
white cosmos
still berry
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id imagine all of this would be gone

white cosmos
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Exactly

still berry
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so if her brain is destroyed again will does she loose her memories and personality?

white cosmos
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She will die 😭

chilly blaze
white cosmos
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Honestly I thought it felt wrong but the fact was that I didn’t know if the Americans felony had accidental murder too (and yeah my ignorance thought it was bigger than first murder degree)

still berry
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what if there is some brain left over

still berry
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Also feel free to Give Theo her own post, id say she'd be popular

white cosmos
# still berry what if there is some brain left over

Like I don’t wanna buff her too much but the only way to kill is to completely destroy her brain, no crumbs left but that tiny piece of brain should be looked after bc I mean, it’s all organs and could get infected easily in the outside

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Also sorry I took so much to respond I just had a test today and studied like crazy 😭

still berry
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Did you pass?

white cosmos
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I hope, I mean usually we don’t get the results until the day we meet the teacher during class

still berry
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Dang

still berry
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Also what do I call you?
I'm. Not sure I can audibly say your name

white cosmos
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That’s where my mental health goes….

still berry
white cosmos
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Exactly

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I even slept some more hours today

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After the test

still berry
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That's good

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You got anymore characters btw?

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Or mainly just her

white cosmos
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Welll I already showed you the operator which she’s a witch heh

white cosmos
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This one

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She’s always tired and has the most chaotic team but until they make a good job she’s happy

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And I wanted to introduce the stepbrother

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Which he can control tornadoes

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Then a Mexican girl which her design is based on the pantera

still berry
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The band?

white cosmos
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And A metal rock girl who can control metallic elements

still berry
white cosmos
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For now this is what the team is supposed to be

white cosmos
still berry
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Gochya

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Does she still have the mouth scar? Or is it covered by her hair

white cosmos
still berry
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Gochya

still berry
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Making prison mates for you girl

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Got one down

white cosmos
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YAY

still berry
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Since she's like this for a while

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Alias: Feedback
Name: Estaban
Ability: Feedback (IG)
He is able to copy abilities of someone if there is a matching tattoo on both them and him. In return the receipt has their powers greatly enhanced and tied to their body mitigating their original source of their abilitys.

white cosmos
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Love him already

still berry
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Why thank you

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I know that I haven't done nearly enough with your character to warrant your trust. But can I use Theo?

white cosmos
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I mean depends on what

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Like just nothing weird but I appreciate fan arts!

still berry
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Can I make her have a decently strong role in Comics for with Manifest and Team-A's final arc?

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  1. She looks cool as hell
  2. Her abilities when used right are terrifying.
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  1. I feel she is a shockinly good antagonist and or partner of Manifest
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  1. I'll clear narrative decisions with you
white cosmos
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Yes sir! But first I need you to give more information

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Like her personality and I’m going to show you a text of roleplay so you can understand the character

still berry
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Perfect

white cosmos
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Her personality changes so much depending on the situation or the person, what she likes to do is tease people making them uncomfortable or fear her or, she seduces her victim to take them where she wants, if that doesn’t work then she poke them about their personal problems that she knows from her own research, but it always rare that she let go of them, talking about victims, she doesn’t just eat her victim but likes also to play with their minds and when she kidnapped them she also tortured them to fill that emptiness, BUT she can also be nice if you will accept her weirdness and let yourself get humiliated, after a few days of suffering she will let go of the jokes and will always be touchy with with you (of course depends the relationship), at least every time you meet her she will always run to you and give all her attention to you then that’s when her ā€œfavoursā€ will starts: she will kill someone who pissed off them and maybe to the birthday give the beheaded head of that person and if they don’t accept she can understand but the reaction doesn’t have to be dramatic. Now talking if she doesn’t like you/them, (I’m writing so much that I don’t even know what pronoun use HELP) after the first chat you had said something that didn’t roll her way so every time you will see her by distance she will be looking at you intensely but as she will understand that you notice her then she will just smile and go away, one day or another she’ll find yourself all alone and will knock you out to take you to her place, so never stay alone! She doesn’t talk about much of her past because she either knows much of it. After her awake she got dionasticed for Amnesia so the memories of before got lost but she trust what her boss (Maria Mantovani) tells her.
Also knows that she is cannibal.

still berry
white cosmos
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She watched Homura leave waving at her with her big smile, oh sure What could had ever happened being alone just her and him.
the next moment Homura was out of sight her neck turning in his direction along with her head almost like she snapped it, and that weird looking smile with dilated pupils like a predator looking at the prey were already suggesting what could had happened next.

ā€œSo. It’s just you and me hm?… Oh you don’t got to worry vampire boy…. As I said before… I will guide you to the right way~ā€¦ā€

she said with all her muscled right arm grabbing his neck and almost dragging him along with her strong embrace, well vampire boy. It was good of knowing you… I don’t see any other way out of it… if you play nice she will too, if you don’t she will be the one sucking the life out of you.

ā€œBesides!… it’s almost like we are friends by now!… We joked, we laughed…. and friends always help out each other… right?ā€

that right almost sounded threatening for how her face was getting more creepy and the embrace of her arm was getting tighter for his cheek touching her chest (I’m sorry)

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This is an example of rp

still berry
white cosmos
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Combat: 4
Vigor: 3
Charisma: 3
Intelligence: 1
Mobility: 2

still berry
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Ahh okay

white cosmos
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HELP

still berry
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Manifest

  1. Absolutely accepts the flaws of an individual when they aren't actively self-destructive.

  2. Actively destroyed his pride as teenager when he realized what his type was.

  3. Loves attention

  4. Craves physical contact.

  5. Cooks.

Id say they at the very least can be friends

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Also there are a few directions I would like to add if that's alright with you.

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  1. That tattoo guy boosts her regeneration abilities to the point she can regrow her entire body in under a minute. (Because it's the coolest ability to have)
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  1. Manifest knows a guy who can manipulate any metal into technology. gets her a helmet made out of an Impenetrable metal from a massive robot A-Team destroyed
    Gets it for her as a gift, maybe even a parting one.
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  1. This may fit the step brother more but maybe taking down Maria if she tries to get theo back
white cosmos
still berry
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  1. I have this robot in game villain called crate and I have an idea that he wants to capture manifest and turn to a weapon so he mind controls Theo gives her an exo skeleton and makes her hunt down him with a add ons that absorb Manifests constructs
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These are 4 separate events

white cosmos
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Ok so one thing she can get the helmet but I’m not sure if she will use it bc if it’s doesn’t fit the outfit

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In the 4 event that robot can even just takes out some cash and she will do whatever he wants

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Bc Theo is witch

still berry
white cosmos
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Witch instead of bitch

still berry
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Ohhhhhhhhhhh

still berry
still berry
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There are specifialy designed slots for her hair

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that automaticly adjust

still berry
white cosmos
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Ok honestly now looking at it it kinda fitting

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Could you make it a little bit lighter the colour?

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Like a dark grey?

still berry
white cosmos
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Ok perfect

still berry
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Nice

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working on her prison outfit

white cosmos
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Yay!

still berry
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Did I mention your rendered art is insanely good

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since I have to re trace alot im shocked at how well you used lines to suggest anatomy

still berry
still berry
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Since she has a long history in fashion I figured she would want to look her best at all times and also would recreate her outfit since id imagine she would be mad if got taken.

white cosmos
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Might draw it myself too

white cosmos
white cosmos
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But your design is accurate too!

lost summit
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Malevola told them what’s happened down there

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(It’s not pretty)

still berry
still berry
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Also for the prison I'm gonna go for an Orlando City Prison. It's a lower Super security prison. It allows a bit more freedom to keep their imamates getting from restless and breaking out. (A guard did get mad at her for destroying her bed sheets. She replied something like "Don't worry I'm still using thing them. 😊So don't you worry anyone else! šŸ˜‘šŸ˜ Alright?")

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Also they have special procedure for when Punch Out breaks out. It mainly consists of, redirect him to do the least amount of damage while he escapes, and ensure no one else escapes with him.

Basically let him go and only him go

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They do have Big robots Called Iron Wardens as for when riots or break outs happen.

white cosmos
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Peak

white cosmos
still berry
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How long did this take?

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That felt really fast

white cosmos
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straitjacket version

still berry
white cosmos
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Heh…

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Guess better than listen to the lesson PunchUpRizz

still berry
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Give me a sec I need to compose my self

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Also did you notice where I got the color from?

white cosmos
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Uhhhh

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No idea

still berry
white cosmos
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OHHHH

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NO WAY

still berry
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Yep

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Indeed way

white cosmos
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I THOUGHT IT WAS A LITTLE TOO SIMILAR

still berry
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:)

white cosmos
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Peak

still berry
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Also its pretty cool to see her mouth open

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Finally

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How long have you been drawing for

white cosmos
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Heh

white cosmos
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I also start early drawing on tablet

still berry
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Damn

white cosmos
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Then pass to iPad

still berry
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You on desktop now or still on I pad?

white cosmos
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Still iPad

still berry
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Neet

white cosmos
still berry
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Ahhhh

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That's a pretty damn nuts starting point

white cosmos
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I mean not really, yeah there’s a long difference between the program like Alpaca or Clipstudio and app like Procreate but you just need to learn how does it works

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And after you do it for years you get the habit

still berry
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Oh yeah do you even know who manifest is?

white cosmos
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I think you already told and I presume is the operator of the team or a hero of the team

still berry
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HA

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No

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Gimme a sec

white cosmos
white cosmos
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Oke

still berry
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Made the entirety of this on Monday for one of Mr Caputo's characters so I could characterize Manifest after A-Team when he has begun to lose his mind

white cosmos
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Ate this

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Also in love with this image

still berry
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Still need to rotoscope him doing this

white cosmos
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YESSS PLEASE

still berry
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You invested?

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Wait what does the step brother look like?

white cosmos
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The guy on the left

still berry
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Oh yeah you did mention making a manga

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Somewhere

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Ngl I thought this was baki for a second

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wait is he actually that jacked?

white cosmos
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Well no it’s sure a fan-manga about Kengan Ashura/Omega!

still berry
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What that

white cosmos
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A manga where company makes fights one fighter to win some more and becomes the CEO of the agency

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There was a collab with Kengan and Baki as a film

still berry
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Yeah I was gonna say, no wonder it felt similar

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Does the step brother have blue eyes

white cosmos
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Nope

still berry
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I keep imagining the page where he takes Theo home

white cosmos
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Green eyes and pink hair

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Wait let me find something

still berry
white cosmos
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Yep that’s him

still berry
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Tf is in the water over at Texas

white cosmos
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Oh but he’s not Texan, he’s was just in vacation there

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He’s from California

still berry
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Is his family name just blessed with insane genes

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i thought Thea was a Giant

white cosmos
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😭

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Kohl is 190 cm lol

still berry
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And he has wind powers?

white cosmos
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Yes

still berry
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I pray for anyone who has to deal with this mf from street fighter

white cosmos
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HELP

still berry
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Exactly

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Who's the school girl?

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I remember seeing

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Uhhh

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Woman

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But not her

white cosmos
white cosmos
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She’s the ex who wants to kill her

still berry
white cosmos
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Yes

still berry
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Manifest

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Do yo thing

still berry
white cosmos
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Real

still berry
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Oh yeah

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Do they have any powers

white cosmos
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Well I didn’t thought of adding them to the team— they are ocs from Kengan

still berry
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Ohhhhhh

white cosmos
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Expect Kohl obviously

still berry
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Would you want them brought over or want a fresh cast?

white cosmos
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Well I just recycled my ocs so maybe

still berry
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Kinda same

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Manifest is a repackage of a repackage of a repackage

still berry
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Theo was a fashion model under Maria right?

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So I imagine a crazed fan would like hunting her down. And taking out any relationships she has.

Id imagine she had something similar if not exactly in the manga.

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And then with that woman, she looks like she could be her agent who Paid Theo to be her "Girlfriend" In a relationship where she gets, idk something, untill Theo being Theo, idk rips off her arm or something. Maybe it was her being fed up with Agent's pride

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And now she is out to get her

white cosmos
still berry
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Wait

white cosmos
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She already didn’t had one

still berry
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XD

white cosmos
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And then Theo ate the other

still berry
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Okay that's actually funny as hell

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No wonder she is mad

white cosmos
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Maybe from the pic is not noticeable bc she’s wearing pants but she has Prosthesis

still berry
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We can talk Character stuff with Theo tomorrow to flesh out her character and plan out her development

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But was there a reason she did that?

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Did she want to even out the cut?

white cosmos
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Well Venelope (the ex) worked with Theo but as assassins from different gangs, Venelope was more delusional and nerdy and so she felt in love with Theo, Surely Theo would have never said no so they have been together until Theo thought Venelope was actually working with the police and in fact Maria was the telling her that and she ordered to kill her, but When Theo Kidnapped Venelope to slowly chop her off the police came and Theo run away

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And after Venelope Joined the police to track Theo down making her pay for what she had done

still berry
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Ngl I thought one night Theo just took the other one while she was sleeping and woke up to no legs

white cosmos
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Nah it had to be slow and painful.

still berry
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Ahhhhh

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Himmm

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Hmm

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Kinda like the idea the relationship only happened because she was paid

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Or is that not accurate to Theo

white cosmos
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Well it was all a misunderstanding

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Venelope was just offered to work in the police but she refused

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Didnt make it in time to explain Theo

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But Theo really just saw her as another doll to play with so yeah she fucked up more the situation by telling Venelope that

still berry
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Gochya

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So you wanna carry them over to dispatch/Manifest

white cosmos
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Hmmm well idk

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I never planned to add them

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So

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Let me think about it

still berry
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Will do

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I can always come up with someone new In Like

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5 seconds

white cosmos
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I made my list

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I already knew who to add

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And I did shared here so

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Give me time

still berry
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No rush

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I can wait

still berry
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Also is she a cannibal because that's all her parents would let her eat from the tourists they killed and is her eating the parts basically eating the ring of a cake you cut instead of throwing it away?

white cosmos
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She had it in her genes since ever

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Like she came from a generation of cannibals

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Her father never let have some

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And neither she could eat something else because there was literally nothing around

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Neither animals or vegetables

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So she grew out of hunger

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She would sneak out to steal what was in the left overs but she would get beat up if her father found out

still berry
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Well I was gonna say I would maybe like to rewrite it into her only having that to eat human meat for another family trauma for her to overcome.

But I feel like your take is better because it's something that's built in weather she likes it or not. Or at least something she believes is built in

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To be honest I lived with Theodore for Two years since people appreciated too and behind Theodore there’s a whole thought that goes around what is Theodore

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What would Theodore do and say

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For me Theodore is what still connects me to not give up on what I stand for so I fight for her when people wants to correct her or add things Theo would never do

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So that’s why I am strict when I say she has to stuck with the idea

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The only thing keeping him going is the built in Drive to survive and make sure as many others also do.

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If he didn't have that he would have ripped out his powers along time ago

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But he's open to change. To change for the better, while never compromising who he is

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He wouldn't change her. Just make her into something more

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You don't change who you are, just what you do

still berry
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Honestly yeah, Theo always make her way to get remembered even if she dies, she never will because she lives inside me as the people she encountered

still berry
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Honestly a Pairing of a characters about never Giving up and Never Compromising sounds lit.

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YEAHHH that’s what I’m talking about

still berry
white cosmos
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Alright I we can talk character stuff till 4:00

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so like 3 hours

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I got a rough google doc i can dm you for when you are ready

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@white cosmos

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Rn I’m free

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ight