Ryu Han-Bin

[dusk shale]

To anyone who has any good ideas on how to improve this, feel free to share them. ❤️

[tropic minnow]

yap yap yap#

[dusk shale]

Mf

[muted rock]

https://tenor.com/view/shut-up-gif-1390475333626596332

[dusk shale]

Bro writing a whole ahh essay 🙏

[forest stream]

Things i like:
the semi new debuff in his 2nd passive
I like the general concept of his manual ability

Things that i dislike and stuff to improve on

Most of the passives seem pretty boring and uninspired, especially the specific buffs he gets from his manual ability

You fail to provide proper references for each of his attacks making it hard to visual what the unit would look like, and especially harder for people who don’t even know who this person is

You also forget to mention many other things such as his element, placement amount etc

Overall the whole concept is very bland and boring besides very few “interesting” new mechanics. I would rework passives 1 and 3 and provide more refrences and info

[dusk shale]

Ight, thanks for the feedback, i shall improve that, tomorrow

[scarlet sun]

reading this made me feel smart w criticisms

[dusk shale]

Nvm i cant even edit it

[forest stream]

there are alot of words blocked by the server so you gotta be careful of what you put, otherwise it would be blocked

[muted rock]

thats what happened to the boss event portion of my suggestion, just gotta put it in a doc

[dusk shale]

Ryu Han-Bin from the manhwa Latna Saga and my take on his attacks and such.

Copyright name: Sword King
Element: Unknown
Placement: 2
Cost: 1900¥

Upgrade 0-3
Upgrade 0 → 1: ¥2,608
Upgrade 1 → 2: ¥4,108
Upgrade 2 → 3: ¥5,608

1st attack(circle aoe): Stone Shotgun - Ryu Han-Bin picks up a bunch of stones, leaps into the air and throws them at an immense speed towards the enemy.

Upgrade 4-6
Upgrade 3 → 4: ¥6,108
Upgrade 4 → 5: ¥6,608
Upgrade 5 → 6: ¥7,108

2nd attack(line aoe): Side Slash -Ryu Han-Bin performs a swift and strong horizontal slash dealing immense damage to all enemies in its path and pushing back those who didnt die.

Upgrade 7-9
Upgrade 6 → 7: ¥8,108
Upgrade 7 → 8: ¥8,608
Upgrade 8 → 9: ¥9,108

3rd attack(big cone aoe) Cross Impact - Ryu Han-Bin performs a combo of sword strikes, forming a cross which deals a lot of damage with 2 hits, first one coming from the strikes themselves and the second one from the explosion that happens afterwards.

Evolution

Upgrade 10-12
Upgrade 9 → 10: ¥9,608
Upgrade 10 → 11: ¥10,108
Upgrade 11 → 12: ¥10,608

4th attack(huge circle aoe) Aura Slam- Ryu Han-Bin leaps into the air with immense speed and catapults himself back down towards the enemies, hitting the ground cracks the floor from where aura spikes emerge, soon after an aura explosion occurs dealing immense damage.

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Upgrade 13-14
Upgrade 12 → 13: ¥12,300
Upgrade 13 → 14: ¥14,650

5.attack(huge cone aoe(like cha-in’s)) Gigantes Wrath - Ryu Han-Bin finally uses an upgraded version of the Legendary sword Gigantes which was given to him by the previous Sword King Barolt. He splits the sword in half forming 2 swords which he then coats in his aura and performs a double cross impact.

1st Passive: System Defect - Any enemy that afflicts him with a debuff or status ailment finds their attack instantly reflected back at them.

2nd Passive: Crystalized Aura - Every strike from Han-Bin infects his enemies with Crystallized Blood, a cursed affliction that seeps into their essence. Enemies tainted by this take increased damage, take damage over time, and get their movements slowed by 30%, as if them themselves have turned to crystal.

3rd Passive(Active ability): Corrupted Guideline - Ryu Han-Bin taps into the broken system, causing devastating effects.
Duration: 60 seconds
Cooldown: 6 minutes
Effects: Han-Bin ignores all limitations, causing his stats to scale exponentially based on his current strength;
Each attack becomes glitched, which bypasses all forma of resistance: armor, damage reduction,… taking true damage;
The instability of his power distorts space, pulling all enemies within range closer to him while slowing them down by 50%, attacks have 30% to trigger a spatial rupture, dealing additional explosion damage;
Every attack has a randomized multiplier (1.5x -3x damage), mimicking a “bug” of an unstable system.

Drawbacks: after the ability ends, Han-Bin suffers a 50% damage reduction and 30% spa increase for 30 seconds.

Evolution Requirement: Gigante sword: to obtain the actual evo item you would need to complete a quest.

@forest stream yo, i have “upgraded” my concept. I was thinking of adding stuff like damage, spa and range, but im terrible at that and balancing so i decided not to. Also I have changed 3 moves to something different fyi.

Would appreciate a feedback on the new version.

[dusk shale]

bump

[dusk shale]

bump

[forest stream]

This is some solid stuff, I can’t really speak any further on the suggestion since I haven’t seen the source material but overall this is a big improvement
I would recommend reposting this and putting the upgraded version higher in the thread

[dusk shale]

so deleting this and absically eposting everything?

[wraith haven]

Sure

[wraith haven]

You can do a google doc, it'll be neater too, but there's not a lot of information here, so you know what you're doing

[forest stream]

Yeah just ping me when you create it ill upvote