lapis totem
Hey, I just joined so I hope this goes through... I have been working on a DnD class for the past few months and have reached a point of finishing up. Would it be possible to get some review and feedback for it? All feedback is welcome!
Here is the link to the class:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1goksp6SB6yXF7c6h8ZQHNrgvLsN7Wc861FywscicYnQ/edit?usp=drivesdk
Thanks!
neat vine
Question, what is vibe supposed of the class supposed to be? Like, what is the feel or theme of it just so I can wrap by head around it?
lapis totem
Question, what is vibe supposed of the class supposed to be? Like, what is the f...
Oh ya, sorry... it is kinds of based around mental health and the straining of oneself to assert their will on the world. Each subclasses is based on a different element and way that they can cope with pain - the type of emotional pain is for the player to make in their backstory. Spell casting does damage and abilities play a large roll in action economy.
Sorry that I didn't say anything at the top
neat vine
Ah okay then, thanks.
Honestly my current readthrough advice would be try to find a way to format the document better? It is a bit of a pain to read through the class as it currently stands.
lapis totem
How should I do that?
neat vine
Personally I'd suggest looking at homebrewery or gmbinder? I have my issues with the sites but they can put out good looking documents.
Also it isn't unusable or anything, just not as good as it could be, but definitely workable.
lapis totem
Ok, thanks for looking at this! I'll look into homebrewery, but I think you need pictures or something, so I'll look for some that could fit aswell.
neat vine
Happy to help, glad more people are getting into homerewing in general.
hollow arch
I lvoe it
velvet topaz
what?
also, this should help
38 is too many pages for a class. xD
Just tweaking the font, size, page and columns knocks it down to 13, and I reckon you could knock off another 2 with some more tweaking.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1kxkeSP8UKX5qGqkZ18JcnyLGYLoNZgS4UDxr33irdx4/edit?usp=sharing
velvet topaz
Hey, I just joined so I hope this goes through... I have been working on a DnD c...
OK, so whats you're thinking with the caster progression?
lapis totem
OK, so whats you're thinking with the caster progression?
I dont remember, thanks for fixing the sizing! What is different with this compared to a normal half-caster?
Oh! its shifted up one
velvet topaz
This is halfcaster yours is...
you can see here.
You've got slots earlier, and more slots.
1st should be 2, 2, 3, 3, 4
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velvet topaz
You can also apply the rest of this at some point, which'll help.
lapis totem
You can also apply the rest of this at some point, which'll help.
Cool! Thanks for the tips!
