Lunamancer - Tamer Subclass

[next pike]

I would be tremendously grateful to any who may give feedback on my Lunamancer subclass for the Tamer class by Loot Tavern, which also involves the Elementara book from +3 Press.

I need feedback on areas such as the following...

• Use of Language.
• Features.
• Balance.
• Document Stylizing.
• Lore recommendations.
• e.t.c. (All feedback is welcome and appreciated!)

"Please don't ask for copies or access to the paid books I bought, as I can't do that for people. It'd be disrespectful to the content creators of these creative works!" - Ive/Ivy

Personal Homebrew Creation:
https://homebrewery.naturalcrit.com/share/nVwSQt8i1um_

Referenced Paid Content: (I don't reprint any of these documents' contents in my homebrew created in this post!)
https://loottavern.com/product/helianas-guide-to-monster-hunting/
https://plusthreepress.com/#elementara

[fervent plume]

Unfortunately its pretty difficult to review balance of a subclass for a paid class that not everyone has access for.

Luckily for you, that guide is pretty popular so you might get lucky. And in that vein, good luck!

[next pike]

Got some good feedback on the Loot Tavern server. Will make some notes based on the questions asked about the class sometime in the future. As well as update the main post with more details!

[sharp dust]

Here is the free Tamer reference guide that Loot Tavern put out.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/13limYPkMKHQ4UzBPrLfBSfhQqiAaz_ls/view

[fervent plume]

Not to say this is a bad class, but holy moly the frickin bloat on this

the kinda thing that if I saw someone designing it I would say "You need to lay off on the features"

4 stuff at 1st, taking me 5 pages to get to the 2nd level feature, and the seeming complexity of taming and still having to spellcast on top of it