【English Translation】Opinions Collection

[fiery igloo]

maybe something like "for each point of Realm Mastery that Celeste, her WoDs, and Covenants have..."

[woeful glade]

CON instead of Constitution (to be consistent)

[novel sedge]

2-7 formatting error

[winter tiger]

Rai Town should be Rye Town

[shrewd arrow]

In the boss of D-tide W3, in the 3th intention it say "wild" card, when the name is Unrestrained, like he say in the second intention

Plus, he say "hand deck", is just in the draw pile

[shrewd arrow]

The wording is a bit strange, maybe it could be something like:
The Shield Generated by Sanga is increased by 10%, and each time she generates a Shield, Tentacle DMG +

[lapis shore]

still formating error

[woeful glade]

There's an extra fullstop here (after 0) that could've been omitted

[ashen plinth]

Other awakeners if plural or a random awakener if just one? Arc2 3-10

[vestal iron]

Error on Kathigu-Ra's Psyche Deepdive
<Big:Death

[eternal snow]

Small grammatical error

[ashen plinth]

Current D effect zone text formatting: Mind Strangulation instead of the word all stuck together?

(Dont judge my team pls)

[vestal iron]

Ryker Enlighten 2,
the amoun

[safe bluff]

Hey the English option isn’t working for me everything is in another language

[blissful briar]

Should not be "is 10%" i believe?

[novel sedge]

?

[shrewd arrow]

@velvet thunder Please, can the tooltip for the Chaos Symbiosis be updated? the tentacle damage is 1% of the team max hp, not 0.01%

[cloud bolt]

might be a nitpick but the description is inconsistent, there's both "healing from crimson furnace" and "restoration from crimson furnace"

[weak raven]

chapter 6-10 before the exploration part begins, i assume the /n is supposed to be something to do with text formatting that didn't work?

[blissful briar]

This appears a few times throughout chapter 6 cutscenes I’ve noticed

[raven meadow]

Found "Porses" in the tutorial section, which I assume should be "Posses"

[raven meadow]

From Lily's Archive under the "story" section; following should be follows

[shrewd arrow]

Should maybe be curiosity

[raven meadow]

"Embarassing" should be "Embarrassing"

[raven meadow]

"them" should be "it":

[bitter lake]

I think this is supposed to say "To win against your luck, he must be an expert"

[raven meadow]

Syntax correction: floating quotation mark at the end of the sentence.
Cohesion correction: "illusion" isn't the wrong word, but "impression" would better imply the intended feeling. Also, "immediately go crazy and explode and destroy the world" seems a bit over-the-top... maybe something closer to "if you didn't answer the ringing would persist, increasing in volume until it left your ears bleeding... or you picked up the phone."

[clever oxide]

Alva's Image Relic

• Both instances of "2th" should be "2nd"

In Chapter 6, multiple instances of the literal string "/n" appearing in the dialogue instead of a line break ("\n")

Ch 7-2 map event "Venomspinner"

The creature step back
→ The creature steps back

Ch 7-14(?)

Whenever a girl try to act
→ Whenever a girl tries to act

I forgot where this was, but one of the boss names contains a typo

Dimentional Rendclaw
→ Dimensional

[blissful briar]

In karen's exalt:
Should be "Marvelous" instead of "Marveous"

[weak raven]

should be "3rd"

[shrewd arrow]

Should be either "Pleasant Fantasy" or "Beautiful Illusion" in both

[clever oxide]

Lineup (one 'i')
For the error message when trying to paste a lineup with an empty or invalid clipboard

[raven meadow]

"trphase" should be "Traphase"

[velvet thunder]

I reported this issue to our combat designer, they're aware, but they said their hands are tied atm, if we don't fix it next Monday we'll be sure to fix it in a later hotfix, i've been nagging them about it

[shrewd arrow]

I mean, is a text change, I would have thought that it was mostly tied whit translation, because there isn't a mechanical change.
But ok, the important thing is that it will at least be fixed sooner or later, tnx.

[velvet thunder]

ah yeah because it's wrong in CN too

if it was just English I'd changed it

[ashen plinth]

Lily special ops ch1
Kum should be Koum?

Missing full stop after “imitations”

“You little rascal!” should be sufficient, right now it doesn't quite flow

Ch2
Is Nymphaea meant to be Daffodil?

[raven meadow]

Missing period:

[plush basin]

Untranslated text for character tier rewards

[clever oxide]

Vortice's Reload description for being usable 3 times isn't rendering the tag for that properly

[storm quarry]

untranslated text in the handbook

[shrewd arrow]

In Arachne Talent this is called Dimension Shuttle, here the card desc has Singularity Shuttle, that's an error.
Keywords with Singularity are only Singularity Beacon and Singularity Prism.

[blissful briar]

Every single mention of the word "moment" in "See you, neverland" is replaced with "Mamaent"

[fathom fiber]

Looks like you have "Guiding Strings" in most places, but then in this derived card description you have "Guiding Threads"?

[azure monolith]

xu yao not translated to english

[opaque pivot]

(this is from the V2.5.0.1 update)

[magic carbon]

whatever this button is in new followers is untranslated

[regal swan]

Guardian string miss detail how many hp you lose

[fathom fiber]

Erm, I'm pretty sure DescArg1 isn't meant to be here haha...

[brisk remnant]

typo, should be "aramites"

[stuck canyon]

Homophones

also

[clever oxide]

Pop-up text when unlocking Astral Reign Chapter 2:
shouldn't it be "||blond||" in this case? since it's referring to ||"William" (male character)||

[undone cedar]

I think in Britain people tend to use blonde for both men and women while in the US people tend to use blond. I’ve seen a mix of both

Should be blond since the game mostly writes in American English

[clever oxide]

IIRC they used "blond" at the end of Arc 2, Chapter 1 - so mainly for consistency

[undone cedar]

Yeah

[clever oxide]

so long as it's standardized/consistent everywhere

"I, Goliath, never treat those ..."

[runic sonnet]

I don't know if this counts as a translation error, but not sure where else to put it. The L'Heure du The event is listed as ending April 20th instead of May 20th.

[red nacelle]

double plus signs "++16%"

[ashen plinth]

Double + on brpken visage, p-dive

[runic sonnet]

Erica's Psyche Deepdive. The second part, Thus Spoke the Voice. Uses Her a lot when it means she. Also just a lot of random capitalization in it.

[runic sonnet]

In part 3 this also seems like translation causing the text to be scaled incorrectly

[velvet thunder]

We're fixing this in a hotfix happening on the 27th

[velvet thunder]

Thank you. We'll human translate this story and fix these ASAP.

[magic carbon]

code when previewing Tulu's Next soulforge level

[runic sonnet]

Agrippa's Psyche Deepdive, Pale Descendant, has the same error of using Her instead of she in the first part, Gate. It also has random capitalization through each part.

[gusty valley]

Arachne pursuit doesn't read correct here, it gives 10 S Prism stacks and does not deal 0 Final Verdict stacks

Not sure if it's TL thing but numbers I guess...

[gusty valley]

(specifically e3 arachne gets 10 stacks)

[runic sonnet]

Helot: Catena's Special Ops, Elworth's Returnee. Second act, Ally or Foe. Another instance of using Her instead of she, and lots of random capitalized words. Then it should be "making a simple confession sound like a threat."

[runic sonnet]

In Reunion of the same Special Ops. Using his instead of her for Helot, and Her instead of she for Lily.

[clever oxide]

Daffodil's Thousand Mirage effects:
Catalyst:

• "Other Awakeners gain 5 Aliemus." (capital case)

[velvet thunder]

Hi! Could you please specify what you did up until this point? We are trying to replicate this bug; It would help us a lot!

[gusty valley]

Hi, I used my Arachne (which is e3) and hovered her tooltip. Her e3 doubles S. Prism stacks from pursuit, so it should read 10 stacks of S. Prism when it reads 5.

I found this in D-tide Wave 3 if it matters.

[runic sonnet]

From Call of the Summit in Elwroth's Returnee.
First one the answer is just "Fate" but the next line says "Those two words" despite it just being one.
Then another instance of using Her instead of She.

[soft field]

Not sure if this belongs here or in a different suggestions section, but an "unequip all" button in the team selection menu that works for the entire team, for both WoDs and Covenant at once, would be a really nice quality of life addition

[bitter lake]

Not sure if this counts, but just noticed on the EN Morimens Steam page that this says "array of awaker" when it should probably say "array of Awakeners"

[runic sonnet]

Helot: Catena conversation after Elwroth's Returnee. Missing the beginning quotation mark on Thank You, and would make more sense as "What a weak phrase."

Doubt's Specter in the Resonance of Elwroth's Returnee. In the Story part, Stacks should be capitalized

[clever oxide]

Hymn of the Sovereign wheel effect description:

• "Each time another Awakeners releases Exalt" (singular)

[brisk remnant]

looks like it should be "as long as I'm not busy with my classes or missions"

[clever oxide]

Astral Reign rules description, Archive Mark

• Is it supposed to say "by 1.1% up to 50%"? or just "by 1% up to 50%"?

[red nacelle]

expired text is overlapping

[fleet glacier]

In Sanga's story, node called "Death of ms coral" there is a bizzare sentence. It probably meant "her body had shed all color..." but body is not mentioned

what?

[digital maple]

There are only 12 inches in a foot 😉 (Vortice's info page)

[magic carbon]

5-8 boss has code in one of the status descriptions

[fleet glacier]

Tulu's story. it says Yu instead of You in the second episode while the first has several pronouns wrong

[clever oxide]

which reminds me... Horla has the same issue w/ her height (5' 42"?! )

[lapis shore]

I wonder if that implies she is 8 feet long

[raven meadow]

Selecting the dithered "confirm" option without having a card selected on the Orison engraving screen displays untranslated text.

[velvet thunder]

Hi, translators can't change this as this is exactly what it says in CN, but I'll let our writer know!

[clever oxide]

In the L'Heure du Thé event, one of the missions is to:

• Complete any Seasonal Mission
  Meanwhile, those same missions appear to be referred to as Taboo Quests in the Handbook

I was initially confused by what the former was asking of me, since I didn't see the term "Seasonal Mission" used in the Handbook

Any chance of clarifying that in-game somewhere and/or standardizing the terminology for these missions?

[velvet thunder]

Hi, we will update the currently machine translated story chapters with human translation ASAP.
You can turn on the translation progress marker in Settings - Language to see which chapters have been translated.

[fleet glacier]

very nice

[wide coral]

it appears Aigis' Absolute Axiom, Crystalized Tear has a very minor misspelling.

"Agis" instead of "Aigis"

[clever oxide]

Arc 2, Chapter 2: ||Hive Predation|| state card
Is this supposed to say...

• "At turn end, if still in the hand or deck, ..."
  ?

[merry birch]

Not sure if this has been reported yet, but found a line in Arachne's frenzy that's a bit strange. I presume the intent is along the lines of:

"Ah, actually... I just remembered that I haven't finished that assignment from Professor Doll yet... I think I'd better-"

[thin igloo]

doubled line in 5-15 cocoon, this line plays twice when the background shifts

[elfin nova]

Not sure if this is intentional, but the proper Lovecraft reference would be ||Blind Idiot God, not Idiot Blind God||

[thin igloo]

5-16 Nefraea's name is misspelled "Nephrea"

[magic carbon]

5-16, not sure if this line is intentionally duplicated

[copper lake]

theres typo in naming part 11 instead of part 12

[runic sonnet]

Sorel's Special Op Part 2, Rosefuneral. An extra : after Sorel.

[fathom fiber]

P sure "Sinful" has been renamed / standardized to "Cursed"? This is in Salvador sidestory.

(Ah, disregard, I see there is a mechanic whereby you can have Sinful relics purified)

"OhLightbearer", lacks a space. Sentence probably should be "Oh, Lightbearer, forged of pure Silver, please forgive me."

The "a being" should be implied.

[cloud bolt]

"when the wielder fist", should be "first"

[shrewd arrow]

During Tulu's Character Story "Coronation Day" in Chapter 1 "Childhood", is called "her"

[opaque pivot]

this is supposed to say Affinity Level 3, isn't it? 👀
Since well.. it doesn't actually unlock at awakener level 3!

[clever oxide]

Aigis Communicator Message:

• I'm guessing that's supposed to parse the player's Keeper name

[copper wyvern]

On the first Salvador mission, should say "What on earth"

[novel sedge]

[arachne frenzy] Professor Dor

[unkempt marlin]

I think it would be better to phrase the poison application as "apply 10% of the amount as Poison" instead, as it doesn't actually depend on how much damage the enemy has dealt to the health bar

Arc 2 Chapter 3 final stage, encounter #3

[opaque pivot]

Xu's Posse Manor Echoes (SS1),
Vortice Posse Drowned Innocence (as comparison) (SS2)

I believe there has been a mistake in the translation/string for Manor Echoe's "Source" field!

[opaque pivot]

Chrysalis of the Maiden is sold as a coffer named Cocoon of the Maiden, and Photosynthesis Rite as Photosynthesis Ritual.

[runic sonnet]

24's Special Ops, Serene Fission, part 5 Awaiting Comedy. Refers to Jenkin as male for this line. Also in All-Knowing Cat it uses male pronouns a few times for Jenkins.

[velvet thunder]

Hi! Double checked with writers and we'll correct these on 05/08. We'll also fix every issue here reacted with the ok emote.

[clever oxide]

• Arc2, 2-7
  • "he crumples +to the ground"

• Arc2, 2-8
  • "Your hand skims past the Silver Key,"

• Arc2, 2-16
  • It seems like this '@' in the middle is supposed to be those strange unreadable symbols(?)

[clever oxide]

Arc2, 3-7

• This line should be narration, not spoken by Doresain

[thin igloo]

he speaketh in 3rd person

[slender onyx]

small bug on tulu's soulforge "next" tab, appears to happen in every level as it also happened when clicking next from 5 to 6.

[shrewd arrow]

@velvet thunder
In the current Arachne boss, the description of the String Tremor say that she will use "Spinning wheel of Fate" after she immediately act, but in reality she uses "Moira, As I Decree"

the name should be changed in one or the other

Plus, in the Phase change intention it say that she will inflict "Moira as I decree" to the cards, but in reality is the Sabotage status

[wide coral]

Seems there may have been a minor oversight with the Extra Curriculum WoD box.

The item on level 40 lists "Spring in Yakutsk" as "Spring in Acushnet." It's listed as Yakutsk everywhere else, so it seems to just be this one location

I've only started recently, but it seems that Acushnet was the original name and was changed to Yakutsk everywhere except here

[weak raven]

goliath psyche deepdive, 3rd stage
both instances of "her" should be "she"

[cloud bolt]

"Inflicts poison at x%"
Doesn't really make sense. 44% of what?

[shrewd arrow]

it should be triggers, not inflict, i think

[agile salmon]

This description doesn't make any sense

[dusk meadow]

"Lost sync, returning to login screen later" sounds a little odd, since the return is immediate. I think "later" should either be removed, or replaced with "now"

[dusk meadow]

I agree, this could be reworded to sound like Arita's skill 2

[agile salmon]

This is much better yeah

[feral kelp]

Missing a G in Training in the new combat training interlude

Also, I don't know if this an english only issue, but a bunch of the soulforge aptitude skills have messed up descriptions

I think it's specifically the ones that got buffed recently

Here's Aurita's both listing the stat buff twice, and having Faint's skill description

In the same manner:
Faint has Agrippa's description
Agrippa has DHelot's
DHelot has Lotan's
Lotan has Ogier's
Lily has Karen's
Faros has Aurita's
Sanga has Faros'
Karen has Sanga's
Ryker has Lily's
Daffodil has Ryker's

Ogier and Tinct seems to have the right skill description, but they also have the stat buff listed twice like all of the others.

[blissful briar]

How the hell did this happen

https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/1170692781216378960/1505900988689682472/image.png?ex=6a0c4f15&is=6a0afd95&hm=30ce7d232520710cc71f885319c7329cf1c91404d795003ecd66768da2dd3bed&

someone posted this earlier too, seems tinct has daffs

[shrewd arrow]

not for me, is so strange

[blissful briar]

I checked on mine, but tinct has daffs for me... how the hell did it get messed up differently for each player???????????????????

[shrewd arrow]

I did notice tho that the real Aurita talent say 1% of her Aliemus regen give 1% of her ATK as Tentale Damge, but in the patch notes is say that it should be 2%: #1505167541818101862 message
■ Talent "Happy Little Fairy": Overall Effect enhanced — for every 1 point of Aurita's Aliemus Regen Level, gain Tentacle DMG equal to 2% of Aurita's ATK at the Start of battle; for every 1% Crit. Rate, gain Tentacle DMG equal to 1% of Aurita's ATK at the Start of battle.

[opaque pivot]

(i should read above)

[agile salmon]

Healing tile text has also become nonsense, instead of Pose it should be "heal your team's hp" or whatever the original text is

[slender onyx]

Xu's card says "inflict % poison" when it should be "trigger" (seen here, the 117% poison trigger as proof)

[wise pollen]

The soulforge text for Karen is Sanga's effect.

[velvet thunder]

Sorry!! will be fixed soon, we're shipping a hotfix for all the bugs

[runic sonnet]

This conversation with Tinct has the spacing wrong on the top line causing it to go over the text box

[agile salmon]

"<AwakerCard_24"

[opaque pivot]

Eternal Reqiuem references a "Silver Key Radiance" card, but the generated card is actually named "Silver Key Dawn".

[velvet thunder]

This one involves a coding display issue, we'll rewrite the codes so it displays better before May 30th. Thank you for your patience!!

[agile salmon]

Someone pointed out that it could be reworded to sound like Arita's skill #1350058928020656178 message

[velvet thunder]

Yes, will do! Thank you guys so much!

Currently the description is strung together from 2 individual bits. it would make sense in chinese but not in english. we'll hopefully make it so it's one whole sentence.

[agile salmon]

oki, looking forward to it

[novel sedge]

the cn text uses 弥萨格 in both lines, but the first instance is mistranslated as Miskatonic instead of Mythag

[oblique shadow]

guarantee spelt incorrectly as "gurantee"

[hoary canyon]

Sangas story "death of miss coral"

[dry scarab]

Also from Sanga's Story. The whole Psyche Deepdive "Melodic Sculpting" could use a proofread

[agile salmon]

.

one uses the -ing form and the other not, even though it should be the same

[opaque pivot]

There are bonus rewards if you purchase the preorders before a certain date

[agile salmon]

Oh, that's confusing since they share the same name, thanks for telling me

[opaque pivot]

Yeah, they always come with a little bonus for "preordering" the preorder, like an exclusive avatar, which would be the "Limited Exclusive" offer that expires earlier.
If you know this pattern its pretty obvious, but I can see how its confusing if you don't lol

[shrewd arrow]

there is a number error in the Lily wheel

[cloud bolt]

Her e1 is weird. In the 2nd sentence it says you get 50 RM after exalt, and in the last it says you get 0.5 after exalt. So which one is it?

[shrewd arrow]

it should specify that they moltiply the RM by 150% insted to say +0.5

[cloud bolt]

There's nothing in this description that reads remotely close to that

Just that you get 0.5 rm after exalt

[azure monolith]

can we just replace the period with "and"

[azure monolith]

cant be multiply cause that would be wrong after the 2nd exalt

[shrewd arrow]

multiply the original RM

[azure monolith]

its kinda janky i feel

or unintuitive

cuz the RM u gain is flat no matter how many exalts u do

[shrewd arrow]

then it could say:
For each point of RM, gain an extra 0.5

[azure monolith]

yep that one also works

[runic sonnet]

6-3 Tragic Embarkation. Should be "woke up" not "wake up"

[agile salmon]

Salvador's exalt
"Vulnerable all enemies", doesn't make much sense
It should be instead
"Apply 1 stack of Vulnerable to all enemies" like Caecus'

[regal swan]

e0 vortice. Why text here from e3?

[agile salmon]

Murphy says "That it" instead of "That**'s** it"
I don't think this is intended

[agile salmon]

weird lineskips in chapter 6-8 (many many more than those 2)

You guys really need to hire an english proofreader...

[dry scarab]

minor spelling mistake, it should say "hostilely" not "hostily" in G Murphy's Story

[runic sonnet]

7-1 Oasis. Should be Key Bestowal Ceremony I'm pretty sure

[dry scarab]

Corposant E2 should be
"For each Tentacle present, "Pilot"'s Shield, Strength and Tentacle damage [gain] increase by 5%, up to 50%"

[copper wyvern]

Ryker's E3 desc has 'defenseense' rather than defense

[steep ether]

the boss name should be Aphoom-Zhah

[red nacelle]

Typo ++

[fathom fiber]

This relic is especially mistranslated.

After playing a command card, discard all other command cards that have an arithmetic cost equal or higher than the played card, is the way I think this wants to be written.

[dusk meadow]

Having paid more attention to Aurita's lines lately, I'm now no longer sure if this was translated correctly

• Is she actually going out to play after what I assume is tiring combat? I can't tell whether that "yahoo" is an expression of excitement that it's all over, or if it's like a sigh of relief ("phew")
• On the second half of the sentence, is she expressing an eagerness to move on or? If she's actually excited I'd replace the "!" with a "!?" or a "?" if she's exhausted and just wants to get back to playing with her aquarium

[shrewd arrow]

In the Elite Measures fight, the first intention say "1 Stack" after the damage... but there is no stack of anything

Plus, this mob have code in plae of numbers in the passive

And last thing, this mob have the same name as the one above, but the passive specify that it can spawn a "Leng Spider" or an "Abyssal Spider", so I think there have been an error and both have the same name even if they are different

@night merlin ^

[torpid wadi]

Found in 1-9 I think? Unless this is meant to highlight Aigis' race, the "White girl" should be changed to "girl in white"

[novel sable]

Chapter 9-2, missing a space on the "Brain in a Vat" description

[novel sable]

in 9-3, this line is a bit awkward, "none stand by your side" would work a lot better

[unkempt marlin]

ya, either "none stand ..." or "nothing stands ...". i agree with your preference

[novel sable]

I'm noticing this a lot in the translations for unique buffs, where it will say "you" to reference the monster gainin the buff, maybe worth changing to "this creature" to stuff that targets itself (this was chapter 9-8, but it appears a lot throughout the game)

[lapis shore]

no space after weakness

[steep ether]

“Empathy” here should be “Symbiosis”

[torpid wadi]

"Finish with Life not below 50%" sounds pretty awkward, i feel like "finish with Life above 50%" would be a better phrasing

[harsh fractal]

Second stage of "Happy Hunting!". Should be 'his' not 'her'

[novel sable]

in a lot of the memory fragments (screenshot is from tulu's), there's a lot of random capitalization like shown here. Random words that shouldn't be capitalized are, and it feels very jarring

like this

[novel sable]

Soulblight's description wasn't updated to reflect the change from End to Finale

[novel sable]

"arrives" should be "arrive"

[unkempt marlin]

"causalit", missing a "y" at the end

[lapis shore]

double "+"

[unkempt marlin]

should be

Save "Kindness"

[harsh fractal]

One of the sentences in Ryker's Soulforge Aptitude is duplicated

[torpid wadi]

found in 2-11, I dunno if it's nitpicky of me but "Do we comprehend eachother" just sounds... off? I think "do we have an understanding" or something like that would sounds better

2-12, "Remove yourself" feels a bit unnatural, "Out of my way" or smth would be better

[shrewd arrow]

@night merlin @velvet thunder Just to be sure, is correct that all the mentions of "Frenzy" are not called "Fiesta"?

[ashen plinth]

Saya's dimension image shows “N/A”

This is from arcade train but i assume it would be the same for all relevant game modes

[gusty valley]

Aliemus Fantasy is probably Fantasia?

[woeful glade]

I'm doing Goliath story ch1. There are plenty of unnecessary caps.

1: "new Boss", Impact
2: EXP -> experience
3: Hard
4: Hair
5: Discover, Precipice
6: This body of mine ... Malady
7: Hair
8: Severe Injury, Path, Only

[novel sable]

it should be "they must grow, understand, and transcend.", not "growth, understand..."

(arc 2 2-3)

[wintry vale]

Arc 2, chapter 5-11; I believe this should say, ||"... watch over the place I once [lived] loved, I wouldn't..."||

[warped gull]

Should say: "Your team already has Awakeners from two other Realms" instead

[weak raven]

i'm assuming this is supposed to say "Dimensional Image: Saya" like for other awakeners?

[velvet thunder]

None stands by your side is the traditionally grammartically correct choice, as "None" is derived from "no one."
But treating it as a plural is indeed more common in everyday modern English: "None stand by your side."
We decided to go with the traditional option for a more archaic, solemn vibe; we can adjust it so it fits most people's preference.

[velvet thunder]

Sorry! We will fix these once we get to human translate his story ASAP.

[velvet thunder]

Yes, "Propagation Fiesta" is just "Propagation Frenzy" renamed. It has been renamed in CN and other languages, because it looked like "Reproduction Frenzy" and might have been confusing.

[velvet thunder]

Yes, it would definitely fit Pandia's personality better. Thank you! Pandia's way of talking was a bit off in that chapter. We'll adjust the translation to make sure she doesn't sound out of character.

[novel sable]

a happy middle ground might be making it "No one stands by your side"? that is pretty solemn

[shrewd arrow]

Text anomaly in castor, node 3, sand and honey

[woeful glade]

No issues! I'm just bringing it to awareness but since it's not already done, I'll wait 🙏 I mistook and thought it was already translated

[languid creek]

just dropping by to offer a zesty little suggestion, since Saya's wheel banner name already has the Greek 'agape' in it, maybe Hieros Gamos could be considered since it's very related to the themes of the text
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hieros_gamos

i often thought of this in relation to Thais' lore with the Keeper as well back then

[burnt bough]

Hello, I am very glad to see there's actual attention being given to translation issues. That said this is 1-8. Is this meant to be the same nickname in both tooltips?

[burnt bough]

Also this is more of a suggestion but the Realm Legacy section could use some line breaks. Chaos, Aequor and Caro don't have any, Ultra does have them, and in fact one excess one after the first paragraph.

[weak raven]

in Uvhash Psyche Deepdive 2nd stage
should be "his" when referring to the old man

[dry scarab]

that's MTL still, even though it has rerun already ....

[viscid raptor]

this mission on chapter 2 has a different title between normal and hard

[novel sable]

this feels a little awkward, it feels like there should be a word after spineless

like spineless coward

[agile salmon]

2 times Retain

[novel sable]

I'm not sure if "stringy" species is right unless if it's a pun, wouldn't it be "stingy species"? (arc 2 3-4)

[bitter lake]

Two errors here in arc 2 5-7

• talk with them should probably be "talk with her"
• I think this is supposed to be "Cygnus dance troupe" instead of "Cycnus"

[novel sable]

(arc 2 chapter 3-5) It should be myriad, not Miryad

[arctic narwhal]

Just noticed that "betryal" should be fixed to "betrayal"

Dreamscape - Culinary Dominion - Slave and Master
". . hand presses a hand. . ." Maybe change it to ". . pressing a hand to the throbbing spot and grimacing at her. . ."

[novel sable]

"deranged stuff at the point" should be "deranged stuff at this point"

[gaunt crown]

effect is unclear at first read. I thought I'd need to play both cards to gain the effect, and that all of the awakener's cards' cost is increased.

recommended description:
"After playing "Strike" or "Defense", the corresponding Awakener gains 35 Aliemus. Arithmetica cost of "Strike" and "Defense" +1."

[steep ether]

“Fingol” should be “Fingal”

“Misty Agreement” should be “Mystia Agreement”

“Committe in Misty” is kinda weird?

[long pilot]

imo it should be either just
"saying deranged stuff"
or
"saying various deranged things"
stuff is singular so it sounds weird in combination with "various", and "stuffs" isn't really used often

but ye should still be "at this point'

[agile salmon]

this needs a rewording, i wasn't the only one today in the chat who had to ask what that meant

an example would go a long way too

[long pilot]

this is probably meant to be "you overlooked", doesn't really make sense otherwise

[clever oxide]

Beyond the Skies, Part I

• 3rd story node: Incorrect syntax on the <small:>(?) tag causing it to appear literally, rather than altering the text size
• 5th story node: "They" at the start of the sentence should be capitalized

Horla's Story

• (1st node??) The highlighted line looks like it should be spoken by Hannah instead

[long pilot]

should be "those It marks"

[agile salmon]

It's not clear that the received card gets Exhaust and Retain
I'd reword it like this "The copy has Exhaust and Retain."

[viscid raptor]

that's not an error - Divine Progeny exhausts, and it gives the copy exhaust

[agile salmon]

Oh its the received card that gets exhaust and retain?

The commas are confusing

[viscid raptor]

yeah...

[agile salmon]

edited my message thanks

[harsh fractal]

9-7. Status says it applies "Temporary Dissolve" yet cards say "Temporary Melt"

The status description in 9-6 is worded like it'll restore the hp of awakeners, while it's healing the enemy instead

[elfin nova]

has never

[velvet thunder]

Hi Se7en, this is indeed Nymphaea's line, but it's worded in a confusing way indeed. we'll paraphrase it so it's no longer a word-for-word translation.

original translation:
A: Do you have her poems? Your poetry club must have collected many of her works, right?!
B: If you have it, I'd be willing to pay a high price for it.

new translation:
A: Do you have her poems? Your poetry club must have collected many of her works, right?!
B: Unfortunately, I don't have any... I would pay a lot to acquire a copy, though.

🙇‍♂️

Thank you so much, Keepers, for helping us improve the translation! We'll react with the OK emote to reports we've noted and resolved, and we're also making an effort to reply to and engage with reports here more actively.

[blissful briar]

I think this one is correct. Said world has seen its population decline due to dissolution, and you indeed have never seen a scene this alive in this world

[harsh fractal]

There's an unnecessary "on" in the dates of comments

[shrewd arrow]

not sure if it is also a gameplay bug, but the symptom in not present in 5-15 story

[novel sable]

quotation missing in this message, although it might be still MTL

should be "Thank you?" What a weak word.

(it has MTL vibes though so disregard if it is mtl)

[bitter lake]

This should be "if I were the author" (with an -or)

[novel sable]

this should be "I don't think that's necessary", not "I don't think that's necessary" (arc 2 chapter 4)

it should be randomly "rouse" one awakener, not randomly awaken one awakener

[novel sedge]

the hard mode of Saya's story still uses the MTL text instead of the localised one (2nd image)

[novel sable]

this should be "goliath is busy orchestrating his rebellion", not "his rebel" (arc 2 4-10 or 4-9, i forgot which)

[red nacelle]

double wording for overexalt

[shrewd arrow]

Ghelot talent has repeated text

[agile salmon]

still not fixed

[long pilot]

ghelot's exalt says it removes shield and prevents shield for next turn (her e3 effect) even if you have her e0
(only in the description when you "hold" on the exalt during battle. it's correct in the "skills" tab)

[undone oak]

the text formatting in this intro dialogue for C2-16 (act 2) isn't displayed correctly

[clever oxide]

GDoll's Rouse:

• "instead, trigger"

[burnt bough]

2-3 unit description. Should end in "next one."

[burnt bough]

Also I'm not actually sure if this is wrong and maybe I'm just misunderstanding the intent, but is "cyborg" the right term here? The visuals of the enemy don't really evoke that in me.

[novel sable]

missing space in "be used upto 3 times", should be "be used up to 3 times"

[clever oxide]

• Any chance of consistently having the term "Seasonal Mission" clarified as being associated with Taboo Quests? (common new player question)

  • Although I could've sworn I saw y'all make this adjustment already at some point recently. Was that for a different event...?

• Ditto with the "Refined Active Ions" mission being tied to Weekly Mission completion

[shrewd arrow]

I made a suggestion post about that

[agile salmon]

Currently Owned instead of Own

[regal portal]

8-13, 'bewteen' instead of 'between'

[agile salmon]

in the survey, question 11

[gaunt crown]

"obtains the Innate" -> "gains Innate"

[shrewd arrow]

again, missing symptom, possible code error

[sand cedar]

I forgot to screenshot this but when the cutscene exclusive to returning players happened Ogier is referred to with female pronouns

[lapis shore]

in the survey
"Awaker"

[burnt bough]

Would probably sound more natural as "It really is a mess." or "It's a real mess."

Same here. Could be reworded in several ways such as "Perhaps we'll meet another day."

[shrewd arrow]

Erica OE has a problem, based on the resultant values it should be 100% like in cn. Sentence is also missing a verb like "increases".

[shrewd arrow]

The OE description of Faint is worded strangely, apart from the strange Y, is from her DEF not their.

[long pilot]

presumably the first occurence is meant to be "Priestess"

[dry scarab]

Chapter 7 resonance upgrade, should say "The chosen command card gains innate"

[weak zenith]

❓

[long pilot]

it's called a "cupcake" the first time and a "little cake" the second time
(first occurrence not in screenshot)

[burnt bough]

I believe this should be "Help Me!" to match the card.

[burnt bough]

"Hysterical" should probably not be capitalized.

[burnt bough]

Also this should be two sentences in my opinion. "Gain X Shield. For each Tentacle, [...]"

[burnt bough]

"Dissolution" should be capitalized for consistency.

[arctic narwhal]

"Keeper" gets misspelled as "Kiiper" when talking to Jenkins on the Communicator in one of their chats.

[velvet thunder]

Hi Kiiper! It's Jenkin is making a typo because's she's a little illiterate; she typed 守咪人 in Chinese, which literally translates into "Kee-meow-per", and it's a homophone of Keeper in Chinese. but we had to improvise a little so it looks like a typo.
The typo thing may not be obvious enough at the moment. Perhaps we should make it more obvious by adding more typos, and make her use simpler expressions throughout her messages?

[ashen plinth]

I think more typos on the longer words for all texts would make it more obvious! I actually deleted my comment about Jenkin not being good at spelling because i went into the game to double check, and most of the texts were perfect spelling

(Except for the chat you get after completing Lily's psyche deepdive, but I saw it after i deleted my comment...)

[arctic narwhal]

Ahh alright! I got a bit confused if it was supposed to be misspelled on purpose or not because she spells "Keeper" in the other chats I've seen from her, but I wanted to put it down just in case. Thanks for clearing up the confusion!

[long pilot]

yeah it doesn't really feel intentional imo, misspelling something she would presumably by typing quite often and in a way that doesn't really feel like a way you'd actually misspell a word imo, it looks more like mtl than a mistake an english-speaker would make to me. in the first place, the "e" character is the "default" text representation of the "ii" sound

on another note, should Brown be referred to as an "it"? sounds a bit strange to me considering he? is jenkin's long-time partner

[viscid raptor]

maybe Keyper would work better as an intentional typo?

[gaunt crown]

in 7-12, the 50%+ shield achievement needs to be done in the final battle, otherwise the reward doesn't trigger. I'm not sure if the original chinese does mention the final battle condition, but it's not there in english

[blissful briar]

Brown is referred to as a "her" in Jenkin's voicelines

[lapis shore]

"Other" should be capitalized

[lapis shore]

should be Faros

[novel sable]

should be "does not" not "do not", unless if it's multiple deities

[novel sable]

"makes a glass of cocktail" is a bit clunky, maybe something like "pours a cocktail"? or even "makes a cocktail"

[buoyant lodge]

There's instances in Goliath's psyche deep-dive where he refers to Miryam as "her" when it should be "she".

[clever oxide]

Erica's AA:

• "additionally"

[novel sable]

it's still machine translated for now

[buoyant tide]

I found errors in Salvador's Special Ops
In Hunger Sated, one of the sentences are "tearing Caro from bones" instead of "tearing flesh from bones"
In Purge the Sin, there's a missing t for heart

[half forge]

typo in event tile in faded legacy 7-1 should be "you wave to her" not "you waves to her"

[novel sable]

should be "whenever a card" not "whenever card"

[novel sable]

last mission of arc 2 chap 5, there's some tense issues here. it should be "snipped", not "snip"

[novel sable]

should be "each time you release Exalt" not "each time you releases"

[winter tiger]

An inconsistency in the team lineup description for DMG Amplification: I believe it's usually "Fixed Poison," "Fixed Counter" instead of "Fixed Value Poison"/"Counter"

[undone oak]

(A2C5-13)

the wording for this intention (specifically the 2nd sentence) seems a bit awkward and could be reworded to something like ||"Restore 10% HP and an additional 5% of lost HP for each summon with the "Whisper" intention."||

[undone oak]

(sanga's side story, don't remember the name of it)

awkward phrasing, could be more natural as something like ||"i see... i thought this would be a wonderful discovery of my own"||

[arctic narwhal]

Tribute to the Rose - Maid's Wish

The "dodge" part sounds a bit weird and out of place. Maybe something like "please move," "please vacate the area," or something similar? Also, "Crowd" is unnecessarily capitalized.

[undone oak]

(sanga side story cont.)

grammatical error, corrected dialogue: ||"It was Sanga. She had shed all colour and emotion, transformed into a pure white sculpture."|| (changes marked in bold)

[novel sedge]

All instances of "Hameln" in the skin description are mispelled as "Hamlin"

what are Mason prime numbers?

[long pilot]

from aurita's memories part2 pre-boss battle dialogue, this doesn't really make sense and I'm not sure what it's actually trying to say

[shrewd arrow]

Are we sure they have been both human translated? or is it an error?

[long pilot]

aurita archives story 2 has "drams" instead of grams
nevermind apparently that is indeed a real unit
maybe using the alternate spelling of drahm would make it clearer it's not a typo? tho i've been told it's used in other places in the game so in that case it'd hve to be changed there too so maybe not...

[arctic narwhal]

Tribute to the Rose - Fallen Verdict (after boss fight)

I don't know what word was supposed to be here, but I doubt Rent was it. Bent, maybe? Also, "As" and "Wind" in the second line have an unnecessary capitalization.

[arctic narwhal]

Tribute to the Rose - For Sorel

Could "dodge" be replaced with "escape?" The latter feels like it'd fit better. "Dodge" doesn't seem too out of place so this can be ignored, but it does stand out just a little. If it won't be replaced, it's unnecessary capitalization could be fixed instead?

[novel sable]

in hard mode, "gala" is not capitalized

[buoyant tide]

Wrong pronouns for Ryker here

Also Flander Mansion is written inconsistently

[buoyant tide]

Once again in "Haunted Mansion", the translation can't decide on Flandre vs Farlander

"Coffin Wall" given us Frandle Mansion, lmao

Since when was N a Lady?

"First Meeting" also has Frandle

[buoyant tide]

His Sun temple...?

[ashen plinth]

Ough a direct translation error, there is no direct terminology in english but it would be like, the side of the head

Also wardrobe door instead of gate?

[buoyant tide]

Isn't it the Church of Light?

[ashen plinth]

No, the church of lightbearers is a different organization from salvador's church

[buoyant tide]

No I mean
In Part 1, when you check the name of the organizations, the church Salvador is in was called Church of Light
They're different from the Lightbearers but still called Church of Light

[ashen plinth]

Oh, i always thought it was called church of redemption XD i wonder which is the error

[halcyon flame]

''Coronation Day'' (tulu story)
ch1 ''Childhood''
Tulu's and Noah's pronouns are inconsistent
in all cases should be he/him/his

[halcyon flame]

''Coronation Day'' (tulu story)
ch2 ''Calamity''
''yu'' instead of ''you''

this one also sound very off, would be better translated as ''expression'' maybe

[jaunty echo]

missing a translation

[novel sedge]

nah the actual word is Chantry of Life

[ashen plinth]

OHHH

Okay that does ring a bell

[buoyant tide]

So is it Church of Redemption or Chantry of Life?

[novel sedge]

Based on the in-game factions archive, its Chantry of Life

[hushed agate]

Ignatiss' side story is extremely rough on the English version

I don't know if AI did that one or it is just dated, but all the dialogue from that section is at a noticably lower quality from the rest of the game

This is one of the more obvious examples

But I also noticed some other sections missing punctuation in other areas

[hushed agate]

Reread it, here are all my thoughts. Every character spoke way too much in contrast with the rest of the dialogue in the game, several instances of punctuation were missing, random words were capitalized, Ramona kept speaking to me with my name instead of "you", I feel like the keeper was way out of character, and conjunction words were missing occasionally

[shrewd arrow]

In the last part of the Erica deep dive, the text is cut top and bottom

[regal swan]

Miss color and wording about "Vulnerable and Weakness"

[junior raptor]

mistake in translation
instea -> instead

[unreal crag]

This, along with the especially stilted presentation of the beginning of Aurita's first psyche mission, reads pretty strangely. The weird capitalization is more prevalent here thus far, but earlier it just seemed very strange.

[regal swan]

'

[long pilot]

murphy bio sounds awkward, should probably be "accepting invitations for afternoon tea" or just "accepting afternoon tea invitations" or something

[forest bane]

I think ramona should’ve said “if you’ve got nothing urgent”

[long pilot]

both are grammatically correct
the in-game version is more formal, which imo matches the tone better

[agile salmon]

"if you've nothing urgent" sounds and looks very weird to me, it doesn't really matter that it's grammatically correct imo

[harsh fractal]

In 24's Defense card the manic persona description includes the last word of the first persona description and there's an uneccessary '>' character

[azure lichen]

"Her" being used. Blood and sand psyche deepdive solar expedition stage

[south grotto]

Sorry! We will human translate Aurita's Psyche Deepdive along with 5 other side story chapters in the upcoming update next week!

[south grotto]

will fix in a week, Erica's Psyche Deepdive will get human translation too!

As for other currently machine translated side stories, we're recording all your feedback and will fix them when they're human translated. We expect to be able to human translate all of them in a couple months!

[south grotto]

Sorry! We're giving these chapters a second pass to eliminate the issues

[unreal crag]

It's actually a common twist on the phrase when it's portrayed in a more formal or sophisticated manner, leaning on you've being a contraction of you have.

It's also a little archaic -- one example of its usage is from Marilyn Monroe in a 1953 production.

[shrewd arrow]

There is also a small correction that could be made to the 24 exalt description in aqueor, as said in this post https://discord.com/channels/1131791637933199470/1517136834461831358

[dry scarab]

might as well streamline the two kekw

[lapis shore]

also "this" in strike's description shouldn't be capitalised I think

but yeah would be good to standartise

iirc a lot of cards have different ways of saying the same thing (gain Arithmetica / recover Arithmetica, for example)

[dry scarab]

Yeah which reminds me, I gotta post Core Meltdown still using the old strength/power split rather than temporary strength/strength

[lapis shore]

oh, did the temporary X mechanic have a predecessor

interesting

[dry scarab]

just a weird translation thing. It used to be that perm strength was called "power" and temp strength was called "strength"... but only on cards, they still affected the same "strength" value, so it was just kinda weird to deal with

[shrewd arrow]

@south grotto
There are some long standing text issues for the Pickman and Clementine SSR wheels.
Clem wheel, Veiled Anguish, say 30 extra keyflare, but in reality is 30%, not a flat amount.
Pickman wheel, Paradoxical Realism, say that, after the wielder exalt, other exalts during the turn will be boosted, but in reality is only the next exalt used in the turn, then is removed.
Could they be fixed?

[atomic heath]

Fire not capitalized

6-11

[neon vapor]

Chapter 5-4 event, spelling mistake

[lucid bay]

Heatwave alert, Tulu's name just became Turu..

[lucid bay]

See you in Neverland once again beach duel description missing the capital I for "f"

[long pilot]

i suspect this should be "Dream in a Vat", same as astral realm ch1?

[loud plaza]

Small typo in Pontos' OE voiceline.

[long pilot]

in astral realm 1-4, jenkin refers to 24 as "a kind big sister", which sounds like she's just some random older girl. should prolly just be "my sister" or something similar

[clever oxide]

Lotan communicator message:

• She still refers to my keeper as "young man" even though I chose Leonora (female keeper)

[spark canyon]

"waves" should be "wave"

Here, the tense of Tulu's sentences are weird.
Lemuria already fell in the past, so the changes should be
"The end of Lemuria was inevitable."
"From the very beginning, Lemuria had been living in lies."

[spark canyon]

"vital" is technically correct, but it's a fairly rare meaning being used.
"lively", "energetic", or "vigorous" would be better.

[harsh fractal]

The description of The Living Cage card in Traphase is broken

[shrewd arrow]

Problems with Realm Mastery descriptions.
How to access:
When entering any Awakener's information screen, click the "Details" button next to their Attributes section. In the new window that pops up, click the little information icon for Realm Mastery.

Issue #1 - Mistranslation:

It currently states, "When switching to 'Still Sea', the shield gained..."

"Still Sea" should be changed to "Tranquil Sea".

Issue #2 - Missing or Incorrect Information

It currently states: "...the shield gained +0.01% of Max HP..."

The problem is that this doesn't explain how Realm Mastery is involved in this calculation for the value of the shield gained. I understand that the preceding statement introduces the concept of "...for every 1 point of Realm Mastery...", so should this instead read as follows: "...for every 1 point of Realm Mastery, the shield gained increases by 0.01% of Max HP..." ?

Issue #3 - Missing or Incorrect Information

It currently states: "...and Tentacle attacks triggered by Active DMG in 'Raging Waves' increase Tentacle DMG by 0.02%"

Similar to Issue #2 previously, should this instead read as follows: "... for every 1 point of Realm Mastery, increase DMG by 0.02% for the Tentacle attacks triggered by Active DMG in 'Raging Waves' "

[spark canyon]

Under "Functional Sensing", "uses" should just be "use".

[unborn elbow]

A phrase is omitted, is it "is drawn" or "is played"?

[spark canyon]

Misleading Description
Tail Sting actually kills the bird outright on use, so "Upon self-death" should be "Kills self"

[spark canyon]

"When an Command Card" should be "When a Command Card"

[spark canyon]

"Determined to prevent the disaster, Ward reached an agreement with Tawil, linking with him"
"him" is wrong because the subject is Tawil
so it should be changed to "linking with Them"

[spark canyon]

"you" should be "I"

[long pilot]

start of gdoll exalt description is not capitalized
(but "Gain" is,?)

[burnt bough]

When using Hameln's exalt, it should say "Rondino" at the top.

[dusty arch]

Typo repeating

[pseudo osprey]

The Ignatiss event needs polished. Weird capitalization and very clunky English everywhere and I just started it. Probably won't be finishing it for now.

[shrewd arrow]

Ignatiss?

[pseudo osprey]

The My Turn event

[fallow lagoon]

"Murphy adjusted his sunglasses" should be "Murphy adjusted her sunglasses".

Second line under Beach Duel, should be "If you want", the first letter is missing.

[burnt bough]

6-4, I think this should either be "the currents are pushing us" or "the current is pushing us"

[spark canyon]

Arc 2 1-14
The POV switches after Doll finishes speaking, making the grammar a bit off. Doll is no longer present when the Keeper speaks, so it should be
"She looks like the Doll I know...
No, still somewhat different."
"She is driven by the same obsession, despite appearing entirely different on the surface."

Also this is more of an abstract opinion, but the dialogue in the second half of 1-14 is kind of stilted? Everyone speaks fairly choppily.

[burnt bough]

I believe the title of the tooltip should also be "Scion of Purity" like on the card itself. Additionally, I think the wording would be smoother if the tooltip said "can be Devoured to trigger [...]" instead of "can be Devoured and trigger [...]".

[buoyant tide]

In Beneath Reality from Ryker's story- this should be Dissolution, no?

From Next Monday, Sir

What's a Mareel Cord? In Tragedy Show

[muted lion]

When fighting “An Eye for An Eye” (photo from Frenzied Wax Museum Covenant Interlude, but this also applies to the boss of 2-13), “Timid Doll” says that the boss will gain “Alertness” each time it receives active damage, but the effect gained when active damage is taken is instead named “Vigilance”.

[deft mantle]

Good afternoon! I was just doing the Special Ops for Helot: Catena and the dialogue and translation seemed very, very off and awkward. It caused me to stop playing more of the Special Op after finishing "Ally or Foe". I am not sure if this Special Op has not been translated by a human being yet, but it is extremely rough to try and go through.

[ancient bolt]

In Arc 1 6-5, there should be a space between "seem" and "to" for the Faros event

[ancient bolt]

In 6-11, for the cats event, the "Follow them" choice should be capitalized as "Follow Them" to be consistent.
In the text after choosing the "Follow them" choice, a period is missing after "even if the dark traps lie ahead"
Also, I think "the" in "even if the dark traps lie ahead" should be removed, since "the" implies specific traps that are known of (and there don't seem to be any in this case).
"even if the dark traps lie ahead" -> "even if dark traps lie ahead."

[novel sedge]

the entire story for 24's WoD "Aberrant Devour" is not localised yet, so Albino's name is misspelled, and the date is listed inconsistently

[deft mantle]

Small issue regarding a missing space in between "seem" and "to" for this event in Arc 1 Chapter 6

[hushed agate]

GHelot's deepdive just needs to be retranslated

The dialogue is rough and there are obvious typos or grammar flaws throughout

One of the most frequent is using "Her" where "she" should be used

[long pilot]

astral realm final boss in doresain arc should be "putrescence"

[burnt bough]

Stage description. "merel" -> "merely"

[burnt bough]

The text of one the events in 7-12 feels a little stilted to me. At the very least both instances of "Nubia" should be "the Nubia" since it refers to a singular entity in this event.

[burnt bough]

7-13. "The beasts come before the Envoy."

[burnt bough]

7-16. At this point the Keeper is alone, so it should be "Don't let him/her harm the envoy."
And in general, "envoy" vs "Envoy" should be consistent throughout.

[jovial merlin]

ghelot event chap 4

[long pilot]

not sure if this is human tl, but this entire convo just has a bunch of awkward phrasing and really unnatural conversation flow, can go one by one if needed but it'd be a lot

[solemn aurora]

I'm not sure if this was intentional or not, but during the play in 24's domain dream, Jenkin is referred to as male. I'm not sure if it is meant to refer to the character that Jenkin is playing in the performance, or if it was an error, but it's not quite clear either way.

Actually this whole section has a fair few typos. A few words capitalized incorrectly as well.

Snow doesn't need to be in this sentence

More mention of Jenkin as male. Seems a bit inconsistent.

This reads very awkwardly. Should probably just give this entire section another pass.

[zenith condor]

When played, drawed, or..?

[clever oxide]

I coudn't figure out how to fold it
→ cou__l__dn't

[burnt bough]

Chapter 8 resonances have an inconsistent ×x character used for the Keygrave Ceremony node cost. Possibly others too, but I just noticed it now.

[burnt bough]

Should probably be "discard all cards other than this Awakener__'s__."

Follow-up. "discard all cards in hand that do not belong to this awakener."

[fair plume]

See you in neverland: heatwave alert

[mint thistle]

outdated description for both selectors

[clever oxide]

Localization adjacent(?)

• Ebwynnos Evermore: the "First Clear" label for some of the rewards in Pontos's Deepdive is empty/missing in English, both in Normal mode (first screenshot)

and also for Hard Mode:

that "First Clear" text does appear correctly for all items on the rewards screen though, in both modes

[clever oxide]

(minor) Caecus Communicator, lowercase "is" mid-sentence (or missing something like an ellipsis after "So")

[ashen plinth]

P-Dive Foreign stamp album description is confusing, is the intended meaning “When a x,y, or z card is drawn, the awakener .....”?

[burnt bough]

9-2 hint tooltip should say "his/him" like the other tooltips that reference him in the context of that fight.

[buoyant tide]

Ryler side story, the Truth

Same chapter of the above side story

From "Inverse Deduction"

[buoyant tide]

From "Good Luck"

[mint thistle]

Enlighten desciption does not match card effects, 10% instead of 20%.