#Sushi Ben Feedback! (Nvm! It’s still up in the air apparently!)

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fair jetty
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psst I don't have time to review and give feedback at the current moment, but they just said like two days ago (12/25) that given their pace, Mid-Late December is no longer the time to expect to hear back, Mid January at the earliest, just so ya know, your chances aren't done yet

dawn scroll
fair jetty
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@stable bane @dawn scroll I didn’t see that!! As I imagine for a lot of other people I’ve been quite busy and scattered the last couple weeks, I just had the realization last night!

fair jetty
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Also for any new msgs, I would still like feedback or to hear what y’all think!

fair jetty
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Sushi Ben Feedback! (Nvm! It’s still up in the air apparently!)

fair jetty
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Bumping this cause I do want feedback!

fair jetty
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I hate being the bearer of bumps, but BUMP!! I'd love thoughts and feedback!

vocal bough
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Ask and you shall receive. First thing I made note of was this lack of emotion. You read your lines and focus on the voice, but people are nautrally lively and messy. Like with Masamune, he is painted with drama, flair, and flamboyancy, but all you did was highlight a few words here and there rather than putting your whole voice into it. If you're afraid of peaking your mic with the volume and drama you can move it away from you for better reception. Second was some varietal issues, where you'd read the lines but not show off too much of your range. In Haruse's case I can see several attempts of changes in style, but for some reason it muddles the message with how you pulled the words. And then outside of that most characters were a little similar to one another. To end on a positive note, you have a good voice, that much is certain. It can be used for clear dictation and reading in its base tone. It would be a fantastic voice for narration or voice over work. Just needs to develop in the theatre side of emotional connections to one's character. Keep up the good work!

fair jetty
# vocal bough Ask and you shall receive. First thing I made note of was this lack of emotion. ...

Thank you! Honestly I had the opposite issue for a really long time, and I was told my diction and reading was super unclear! So hearing that its good makes me very happy! You are right that I didn't give much variation, for most of the characters I had sorta settled on what I imagined the character would sound like and tried to not move too much outside that, though you are probably right and move outside that mind set. and then for lacking the emotional and theatrical part, I don't really have anything to add there besides I already have a number of classes and workshop lined up and paid for to work on the acting side!