Hope everyone is having a good morning.
SHALLOW
https://suno.com/song/c139d07a-de42-46fe-8dc3-1589d84b3219
Submitted for Week 2 of the SSC5 Competition, written to convey my appreciation for a song with depth and meaning that provides more than just sustenance for the ear.
"They tell me to keep it simple, just a rhythm and a rhyme,
But what about the message, the thoughts that stand the test of time?
A beat can make you dance, but can it make you truly feel?
Or is it just a fleeting sound, a moment we crown with curb appeal?"
WHISPERS
https://suno.com/song/9f250fc3-2739-455c-a942-9a1022a9ae7e
A story told from the perspective of someone plagued with failed relationships but who holds onto the hope that the next one will be better.
"Raindrop free-falls from the heavens like a tear of God,
Collides against her cheek chorus of angels applaud.
Its wet finger traces her body like contours on a map,
Finding myself hopelessly snared within the trap."
Hope you enjoy and as always, I welcome any feedback.