#Character 1st person roleplay Template
jagged fulcrum
Put improvements here
There's no improvements to discuss because there's no problems identified.
It's like, items on a menu. They can all be made differently but that doesn't necessarily mean it's a better meal. Different people will want different things. I might like the character with easy mayo and extra tomatos and you might want no mayo, no tomatoes, and well toasted.
The model can give us whatever within allowed content, but without a 'I want this, but am not getting this, instead I'm getting that. I am asking with my template here' - there's really nothing to discuss.
I have no idea if you're getting pancakes when you want a BLT. If you are, some of us can give advice how to order a BLT and not get pancakes.
Otherwise these seem like fine pancakes, enjoy, nothing to discuss that I see.