I sounds good to me ngl ðŸ˜
#FIRST TIME MAKING COLOR BASS🌈 i please give some reviews and whether i should finish it or not!
potent cypress
I used water drop sound and designed it to make the intro
And i will very much appreciate some great mixing tips, like making it cleaner
quick field
The melody its not bad, but mixing is bad, it all feels like its playing in mono, this type of music is usually creating wider scene around the listener, try to pan some elements more, or use stereo separation and things like that to make it wider and more interesting itself
potent cypress
Any good yt tuto on how to make this super ear candy
arctic quail
I don't think it's mono. In fact I hear a lot of stereo, so I think you've got this right from that perspective.
My main issue is the bass and drums. There is a sub-bass line (at the start and throughout) which sounds good, but it is way too quiet. It needs to be 20-30% louder. I want to hear that punching into my ears throughout the tune.
The snare is too loud. reduce it down about 10-20%.
The kick is weak - it's too high, it sounds feeble. Maybe I am too much of a DnB head and not a color bass head. But I would change it for another kick with "kick with snare" that is lower pitch and slightly harder. I like the "bite" your current kick has - so I suggest going for a kick with snare, purely because that retains the energy.
I like the synths and melody over the top of it all - just feels like it needs better balance with your low-end.
kind bluff
color my bass unimpressed..
you've got a solid foundation but it seems like you put an EQ on master and turned up all the high frequencies
you're missing low end imo, and i agree with chris
at points the high end hurts my ears, so i would most certainly cut back on some of those frequencies
potent cypress
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sonic reef
Hey.
I like the vibe of this but as the others say - It sounds a little bit thin
I think it sounds like you've removed too many frequensies from your mix - sounds like you're missing in the area of 400 to 4k hz.
Overall, i dig it - I just think it could have a stronger mixdown!
visual sky
I love the guitar! This would work well as an intro that drives the entire track
I'm thinking of it like this
This Intro -> bass guitar focused verse with introspective lyrics -> the lead guitar part comes back as a chorus with some simple, sustained lyrics sung over it -> similar verse but maybe add a rock piano over it to up the emotional stakes -> chorus comes back -> bridge with a solo -> chorus -> stripped down chorus section -> final chorus that resolves the lyrical themes -> outro that fades out