Honestly the MMMM's in the intro are kinda rough, I think some agressive vocoding would sound good during this section (I'd honestly do another take of those because...)
#What do you think of this song
jovial fable
WOW the chorus is good
(I was gonna shift enter but I guess you'll get all of this in real time)
Honestly can see some serious potential with you as a singer, you clearly know how to write for a song even if you didn't make the beat. Who made this beat by the way? It sounds really good! Your vocals might need a little more compression (they sound way quieter at points during some sections), but the actual processing is really good!
What's the main plugin you used for this? I'm looking for a good vocal plugin to help me mix other people's songs better and whatever you used clearly works very well