i feel like im doing something wrong

[lofty bluff]

i hate being a beginner at things but i have 0 clue what to do and im jst doing random shi, need feedback on how to improve for tmrw

[flat spade]

this is mostly something you just have to train your ear for, the notes you chose and the intervals. but a good place to start is to have a longer root note an octave down to set the mood and then plink in lighter keys on top of that.