Im more of a simple guy, and i like simple stuff, but I have a feeling that this may be too simple? not sure, feedback would be appreciated
#Need some feedback, trying to expand on this
primal pebble
desert echo
Eh, I wouldn't say it is too simple, it still is catchy, but kinda too repetitive.
Not sure what I specifically would change, lol, but from about 3:12 it sounds about the same, and that's where I'd try another direction.
primal pebble
ah right, thanks for the feedback, ill see what i can change up, kind of lost myself hahaha but should i maybe go for another chord change or counter? or should i maybe make the track shorter? try get it into less than 4 or 3 minutes?
primal pebble
made it a shorter, doesnt feel nowhere near as repetitive, however now i am woried about it being simple, lmk ifyou have any other suggestion though
odd spruce
you could try adding a lead