first thing ive ever made, opinions/tips please

[foggy vine]

dude i thing you should extend it tbh

[frank gust]

how long

[trail heath]

I'd put a limiter and lower overall volume/slap on an eq since the high frequency is almost peaking throughout the entire song and makes it not the most pleasant experience. Volume normalization aside, the beat and tune itself aren't bad at all, although I would encourage more variation in your melody (extending it and having multiple sections which vary the main melody and add/subtract additional instruments). Finally, I'd have the kick in the background bass boosted a tad since it currently sounds weak, and somewhat fails to liven up the song.

[frank gust]

thankyou i’ll try it o it

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[tall marten]

I like this you should add bass

[frank gust]

had it before but i couldnt get it how i wanted it to sound so i removed it for now