feedback please

[regal sigil]

it is quite repetitive, this is easily fixed by new sections more often, I can see that you did have a new section however it is too dragged on

I would recommend changing for wearable things like the melody

and also it is not affective to remove the drums unless you are building tension or suspense

as it feels as though sometimes it is building tension but it is never released

and way to release it is of course new sections, new melodies